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| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by jullyrosy(f): 10:37am On Mar 03, 2023 |
This story can't end like dis oooooo |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Kiddogarcia(m): 11:39am On Mar 03, 2023 |
Thanks so much tho. I don't know how to feel concerning the ending of the story. I think the sting of the criticism made you lose whatever steam in adding more plot, twist and turns to the story. Anyways, thank you so much for giving us a very brilliant read. Now you can go back to your short stories. I really did missed that 2 Likes |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by metalgear11(m): 12:34pm On Mar 03, 2023 |
Kiddogarcia: What sting of criticism, if I may ask? If you're talking about the earlier dude, then I beg to differ. As I mentioned then, everyone has their right to their opinions and some might hate things others see as masterclass. My belief from your response is the way the main couple ended wasnt what you hoped for. I know others too believe the same. That's why I ended it with both twists in Avery and Athena. Each girl has a valid reason to have Richard by her side as well as keeping the readers guessing as to what next. Thanks for the patience and being a loyal reader. Yes, I have a couple of short stories in the bag. 3 Likes |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by AmaPaulOma(m): 1:50pm On Mar 03, 2023 |
Nice one here OP but to be honest, I really wanted them to get back together. More ink 🔏 to your pen 🖋️ 1 Like |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Dybala11(m): 10:46pm On Mar 03, 2023 |
metalgear11:Thanks for the story OP, stay blessed. 🙏🙏🙏🙏 |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Maka91(m): 9:19am On Mar 04, 2023 |
Sir Meatalgear!! Pls you must continue this story ooooo.... i nearly cry when i saw the word "THE END" pls its end like that |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Kiddogarcia(m): 10:43am On Mar 04, 2023 |
metalgear11: Ok boss |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by aprilwise(m): 3:46pm On Mar 05, 2023 |
Ah this story has come to an end. Thanks for the masterpiece |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Damilgodwin(m): 5:40pm On Mar 07, 2023 |
Omo for mr Richie good time always present itself ooo😂😂 |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Nobodysboo(m): 11:03pm On Mar 19, 2023 |
The story is a banger. Weldone sir 1 Like |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Kawo9ze(m): 8:45pm On Nov 23, 2023 |
Nice read |
| Re: The Divorced Housemates (Erotic, 18+) by Thazard(m): 1:18am On Dec 05, 2023 |
Metalgear11 nice Story! |
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