I clap for you.
Una dey try.
Me I can't sing aloud for 2 minutes without coughing

Come let me teach you

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naijastusa:
Not too bad but trying wearing bullet and stone proof clothes when performing in public sha.

Also, too much pacing around. You can stay one place and still deliver cool music.

Take this advice seriously.

You tried your best.

LOVEGINO:
how much u pay d mod?

And what is your Business with that ,Does the Forum Belongs to U ,If you know the Amount What would You do with knowing it ? Kid...

I think you should try to switching to a different beat or something.
Take some lessons from Speed Darlington or portable.
For this one wey you do, 3/10.
If you are passionate about music, try to get better. I no sabi how you go do am oooo, but anyhow you run am finally, your music go tear locations.

OboOlora:
Baba, nice try but music nor be ur calling. The way wey u de use aggression de open mouth on top mic, be like say na bus conductor God wan make u be.

Trash


5.5/10

Kaido:

Trash

Baba Iya lo nso trash
Oloriburuku

Don't be deceived bro,l think u should channel ur energy to something more profitable,l don't think music is ur calling

Doing things that would further push you farther from God and near Satan, when God who created you expect you to use your talent to win souls into his eternal unending kingdom.

2 cor 4:4
Satan, who is the god of this world, has blinded the minds of those who don’t believe. They are unable to see the glorious light of the Good News. They don’t understand this message about the glory of Christ, who is the exact likeness of God.

Honestly, I just pray to God that the hateful comments you see here don't affect your energy...no one, absolutely no one made it big without trying days...they even call it 'days of little beginnings'.

My advice, ignore the heartless and thoughtless ratings you see here but work on yourself, you sincerely have a lot to do...but I also have enough sense to know that getting to where you are now was not easy.

I give a rating of 6.5/10. Small Doctor and Portable no do reach this. One more thing bro, pray for GRACE.

Peace.

DevilishMan:


You have too much veins to be a superstar.

You're not serious at all. You really merit your moniker

OboOlora:
Baba, nice try but music nor be ur calling. The way wey u de use aggression de open mouth on top mic, be like say na bus conductor God wan make u be.

😆 😆 😆 😆..... Nairaland!!!!!!!! Ehh!!! 😆 😆 😆. Your mouth no Good.

3/10

Na the song when dey play so,you dey perform abi another one.. Cux ur dance and the song dey opposite. And the song isn't that danceable. I will give you 2/10.. You tried for coming out ,but work more on yourself. The autotune is too much also.. Train your voice and look for a good producer...Your career is blessed my nigga

OboOlora:

Baba Iya lo nso trash
Oloriburuku

Guy man don vex

Keep your negative words & energy to yourself. He needs the ratings and probably advice to get better.

You can do better next time.

Music is not ur calling bro,u are just shouting,the stuff is not in u,try and channel ur energy into something else that can work for u,all l see is someone just jumping up and down with some kind of noise coming from his mouth

sol2022:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kiy2qAvUJ2k

keep trying but your sound is not that good, if you can come up with a good unique beat, it will be okay. I rate you 6/10

onomeabuja:

This guys go soon pregnant some loose holes
Na so them de start then him go fry him hair or put one thing called dada
I sabi them wella

you guys are being too harsh on him.
Before I open this thread in my mind I was like hope this guy don buy BP drugs keep one corner, he go hear word today.

With the "molue" you used to carry Bolanle, the extent of your wide mouth and prominent veins, you literally have all the requisite criteria for a bus conductor or "kabu kabu" driver in either of Lagos or Ibadan.

But if they give me a choice between a bullet to the head, listening to this your song and IamDBull's microphone embarrassment, I'll grudgingly listen to this your gabbage.. .

The video and the audio did not match.. Abi na my phone de lag behind.

The song is ok,

You tried but nxt time try add more composure to your lyrics.
You sing like someone who's picking words on scrabble

[quote author=sojisenai post=125015245]Honestly, I just pray to God that the hateful comments you see here don't affect your energy...no one, absolutely no one made it big without trying days...they even call it 'days of little beginnings'.

My advice, ignore the heartless and thoughtless ratings you see here but work on yourself, you sincerely have a lot to do...but I also have enough sense to know that getting to where you are now was not easy.

I give a rating of 6.5/10. Small Doctor and Portable to do reach this. One more thing bro, pray for GRACE.

Peace.[/quo

sojisenai:
Honestly, I just pray to God that the hateful comments you see here don't affect your energy...no one, absolutely no one made it big without trying days...they even call it 'days of little beginnings'.

My advice, ignore the heartless and thoughtless ratings you see here but work on yourself, you sincerely have a lot to do...but I also have enough sense to know that getting to where you are now was not easy.

I give a rating of 6.5/10. Small Doctor and Portable to do reach this. One more thing bro, pray for GRACE.

Peace.

l can See u are trying to encourage him but to those that actually knows the rudiment of music,u can simply see that there was no communication whatsoever in that music,the sound is horrible as the voice,despite all the studio help ,the voice still sounds like a common noise,come off it,tell the dude he is not gifted and stop deceiving him.As for u my guy ,what u wish to become is different from what u are destined to become,try someone else

Slightly off key

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sol2022:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kiy2qAvUJ2k

here nah headqrt of WICKEDN,JOYLESS soul.Learn from Burna boy/watch LL Cool J,Tupac etc performed

Good attempt.

You however need to work on your vocals. Hearing what you are singing is like 6/10

You need to work on your chorus/hook. If there's anything the listener will remember and go along with its the hook.

Work on the melody of your hook to make it attractive to the ear. You may have bad verses and people may your hear what you are singing

but not your hook. Its the heart of any song.

The music is not bad but you need a dominant keyboard or base guitar tune that will balance up with your vocals.

Keep it up. Nice attempt.