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AlamienDagash:
Okay I fit epp. Lemme invite my family cc. gabbyraze samysmoothfresh yungtemy
bibi294
spiritman99 xaviercasmir
dasilver20
Adesina12 hadampson
bibijay123 yusufibrahim musampa7
Saraphina
nanadeeva01
Kingofcasting
Chimzypinky
Ikombe
Chizzymaris
Fam4
Azeequeen
Dtobs
U re oll invited 2dis piece. #front_seat_reserved

AlamienDagash...I'm curious about this your name

Thanks for the invite,lemme sit majestically...I'll read first. Oga Adesina12,supply us popcorn

Hadampson:
I have away 4 a while now.. like where do i even start from, ur work is dope( when i said 'dope' i mean ur work is d dopest on nairaland) u r d best. i kept on reading diz story over nd over again buh cnt seem to get enuf of it. u rili deserve an award 4 diz. kudos to u nd more O.B.O to ur O.K.O
u r very talented
#stay blessed


Btw congrats on making fp. alamiendagash, spdazzy, wizsolzy, yewandequeen, xolocious, azeequeen, yusufibrahim, aminzy, ikombe, queenitee.. In DJ KHALID's voice.. Another one

Even before he started this,his comments always crack one up and now this...What can I say?
Just remain blessed.

I have been away for a while too n a lot of things has happened including your birthday.
Happy belated birthday bro,I wish you long life n prosperity in good health,may God bless your new age. So,wey the remaining cake??

Chumzypinky:
i wont na. Believe me

Better, because if you try it ehn...

Shiv,take five
Put him in his place,omo ti ori e pe

Temy,I got the mention
I'm honoured

Obimgbo:
Gbam!! So on point

It is getting hotter

Actually,Gozie is helping Lizzy because even if the tape comes out n Lizzy tells her story with hot tears,you know those Tiwa n Tonto style,she'll surely gain sympathy n that fool will be one to be humiliated in the end. Ode oshi

dasilver20:
ma I appreciate your positive criticism I will try and improve on my tenses but please be kind enough to point out my mistakes so in can modify it.

No problem

I'll try n read first

To Dasilver20

To be honest with you,this story is looking somehow. It's true that we improve everyday but you really need to improve more.

I've had many mentions on this story alone but whenever I get here,I have difficulties in comprehending the story.

The story is jumbled together. One cannot really differentiate between the characters. Normally,I can read stories on my phone without my glasses but this is an exception. Wrong paragraphing,no spacing etc.

Incorrect punctuation,wrong capitalisation,incorrect use of grammar,wrong spellings and so on

I hope you won't take this on the wrong side. There is always a room for improvement. Good luck.

With love,

From Azeequeen

I couldn't believe I got a mention from you,Obimgbo
Thanks all the same

Back to the story,there are many Lizzys out there but my dear,in Jennifer's voice 'if anybody a blackmail you,rejection the blackmail,brokage the phone because when the person a blackmailer you first,he blackmailer you again' So,it is better she faces it once n for all and get everything done.

Gozie is a fool,Amaka is foolish

Adesina12:
So you want a divorce
It won't happen.....carry ya cross

No be my cross,na their cross nah...How e go take be my cross?
Not rooting for anybody yet but I won't support Mia Even though her mother made her like that,she's too pathetic for my liking
Shiv is also a part-time fool,she ought to have noticed Mia's plans

Chumzypinky:
yeah, it deosnt happen again now. Things has changed. Civilisation has taken over everywhere

But then,cant they divorce him?

Johnsown1:
It can never, the women those time were obedient and will never argue with u but ladiez these takes it as an occupation and can send their men to early grave

True talk