Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:56am On Jan 18, 2013 |
ItsModella: How can? I was telling him to piss off. Really? You sure about this? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:54am On Jan 18, 2013 |
ItsModella: ikekings wants a one night stand with you... Yeah...you recommended me to him like a tablet. Arrrghhhh! |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:42am On Jan 18, 2013 |
binger: hehe! Its 'itiboribo' not 'ntiboroibo'...igbo word  Smh... Goodnight y'all. I still dey vex sha. Seriously! |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:28am On Jan 18, 2013 |
Sijo01: CARATA!!!  I dey vex...but i haven't forgotten my manners. Good evening ma'am. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:14am On Jan 18, 2013 |
Eze Promoe: [color=olive]Caracta, is that how you sit and watch your bobby being jeered by okoporos [/color] Oh...i see. I'm disappointed. Thank you. *bounces out of thread* |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:02am On Jan 18, 2013 |
binger: its 'ogini' not oginni... same thing jor |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 11:56pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
ItsModella: Caracta no.. Errrmm...oginni? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 10:28pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
spikes C: nooo baby, its a movie Of course, i've seen the movie. You don't have to compare me with that 'abused' woman. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 10:21pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
spikes C: Diary of a mad black woman  You call me mad? Arrrrrghhhh. @caseless, yeah it's a nice place. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 10:18pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
spikes C: Chai, my enemies are at work oooo  My sweet potato, omalicha m. Obi di ya Anya m ji ahu uzo My Lagosian queen Adorable baby m
oya forgive ooo  Forgiven. *smiles* |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 10:16pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
Oahray: @caracta, em... hi Pardon my manners, good evening. @acidosis, pls accept my sympathy. I heard you were maltreated by mere mortals. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 10:02pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
@spikes, oginni? Lemme go and meet the person that calls me Nwanyi-onye-eze, since you rejected my greetings. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 9:58pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
spikes C: you want antelopes people to start fighting me again abi  Ok, i withdraw my greetings |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 9:51pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
binger: No it did not...u made me smile instead  Awww...i'm touched! *smiling* |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 9:46pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
@dont8 and spikes, how art thou? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 9:38pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
binger: lol...but seriously,what's with the f.p thingy? And why the congrats? Its not like there is an award for it nah...abeg help me understand lol...abeg shift. It made you smile at least. xynerise: @caracta. She is back Yaaaaay. Now you're talking. Thank God for journey mercies. I'm glad. Eze Promoe: [color=olive]Caracta baby, i see ya[/color] I see you too...lol |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 9:01pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
binger: lol...do u always have to say you're staying outta trouble?? Am great btw... Don't know what else to say. I say it in real life too. Congrats on the front page thingy. I'm proud of you. *winks* |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 8:52pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
binger: hello, what's popping?  I'm good. Staying out of trouble. You? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 8:21pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
binger: Naughty nun,say 'hi'...  Hi...lol @ikekings, i see you |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 4:09pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
Xynerise why? why? why? |
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Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 1:12pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
annawhite: seun needs a driver? It depends on what the applicant will be drivin! Is it a car driver? Or a waist driver? I can recommend the waist driver! ermmm...i think it's a car driver, but if you can offer additional services, no wahala.  |
Romance › Re: What Would Make You Quit A Relationship? by Caracta(f): 12:52pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
I N S A N I T Y |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:47pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
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Romance › Re: What Would Make You Quit A Relationship? by Caracta(f): 12:43pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
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Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:42pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
xynerise: You are my kid  Oh...that's true  |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:42pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
binger: You think she's gullible? nah,look for another 'sheep'  |
Literature › Re: Collection Of Amazing Stories Of Our Time: By EMYO by Caracta(f): 12:39pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
Nice story but these are my observations: 1. I personally didn't like the use of Pastor Ibem and Mrs Ibem every now and then. Why not replace the names with something simple, e.g Jack and Rose. We know they are married.
2. The use of "Pastor Ibem gave" "Pastor Ibem said" "Pastor Ibem took" etc. at the beginning of certain paragraphs turned me off. You can replace them with pronouns and be careful with your choice of paragraph.
3. I enjoyed the latter part of the story because it flowed well with the use of appropriate pronouns. I had to skim through all the previous paragraphs.
4. I really can't judge the story because this is just an extract. The extract didn't really get to me though.
5. There is a writer in you. Don't bury this talent. Just keep improving. Nobody gets it right in a day. Keep developing yourself. I can't wait to read your novels. Keep it up. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:25pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
[quote author=~vicky~] thanks am nt interested [/quote]  Not fair |
Romance › Re: What Would Make You Quit A Relationship? by Caracta(f): 12:24pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
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Romance › Re: Man Stays In Tree For 9-months After Wife Refuses To Apologize by Caracta(f): 12:23pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
Awww. So romantic |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: Romance Section's Off Topic Chat Room + Derailers Paradise. by Caracta(f): 12:19pm On Jan 17, 2013 |
xynerise: Good day kids  I'm not a kid! |