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 Literature › Re: Theory X--- A Crime Thriller by Creeza(m): 11:02am On Sep 21, 2017 |
duch12:bros try o. Your life will never remain the same.  |
| Literature › Re: Theory X--- A Crime Thriller by Creeza(m): 11:02am On Sep 21, 2017 |
Matrycx:i dae tell you. |
| Literature › Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Creeza(m): 10:57am On Sep 21, 2017 |
Bros if you cant perform miracle, gv us a shocking twist., drop a bomb and dissapear. ALways DOES THE TRICK.BUT seriously o. Bring osi back, actor no dae die except e get pikin wey go take over. Like in one of my stories last year " when love dies' the main character just had to die o. Shikina! The guy cox too much wahala for everybody. In the end . I KILLED HIM ! but his son continued from where he stopped.Burial things sha! Black and black, adeculate hope you don buy material, Osi is gone so soon. |
| Literature › Re: Theory X--- A Crime Thriller by Creeza(m): 10:50am On Sep 21, 2017 |
Matrycx: OGA MI, trust me i have been there.Strong Man 4 that matter (according to my cousin) na cold akara and Bread wae dae slap for tongue, dae use baptise me. Is well sha. Life goes on, all na experience. |
| Literature › Re: Hidden Diamonds by Creeza(m): 10:46am On Sep 21, 2017 |
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| Literature › Re: Hidden Diamonds by Creeza(m): 10:46am On Sep 21, 2017 |
Nice. These days am trying to appreciate every work of art in its unique form. Mhen! Writing story no easy o. I JUST REALISD THAT recently.Even harder when you are writing it without sharing ,yet. Keep up evajael, i hope jathniel is doing the right thing. |
| Literature › Re: A Lonely Heart (A Story) by Creeza(m): 10:37am On Sep 21, 2017 |
Bibi where update na? |
| Literature › Re: Theory X--- A Crime Thriller by Creeza(m): 10:35am On Sep 21, 2017 |
Hahahaha Hilary sha. Doh. NA SO LIFE BE FOR NIJA CELL AND PRISON. Been there, seen there! Done there!! Like my cousin will say ' any nija boy wey neva enter cell after clocking 18 and above, no be Man e be' the beans part sha. Iswell duch12 oya weldone |
| Literature › Re: Last Gang Standing (Crime) by Creeza(m): 5:20pm On Sep 20, 2017 |
meneski:hahaha this is funny and super. Maneski oya let us watch the 'Dragon break dance' but oga too much killing will sound like 'killing for killing sake' Try build tension o. OYA ENTERTAINMENT BEGINS, freestyle away bro, i dae here. VIRTUALy, morally, undisputedly, intentionally , alongside every action lover |
| Literature › Re: Last Gang Standing (Crime) by Creeza(m): 5:14pm On Sep 20, 2017 |
meneski:oga am here |
| Literature › Re: Theory X--- A Crime Thriller by Creeza(m): 1:40pm On Sep 19, 2017 |
preciousuweh:happy birthday dear. Wish you all the best things your heart could ever want. Hv fun. Hope you made a cake ?  |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 11:02am On Sep 19, 2017*. Modified: 1:46pm On Sep 19, 2017 |
jagugu88li:sorry Ma... I PROMISE TO MAKE UP for the CRAZINESS.. I just Hope you understand? Im still working on something |
| Literature › Re: The Devil Wears Okrika by Creeza(m): 11:46pm On Sep 15, 2017 |
God will not forgive me if I read up to this point and not drop a comment... This is storytelling at its best. Mr Soul, great story. Am curious though, I want more and also its burning at the back of my mind, you can even smell the aroma of curiosity : Do you read Edgar Wallace's novels? One of my best mystery writers, and you are almost as perfect as him nice work bro. White Hats off.¤¤¤ how did the branch get there? Hmmm? Suspense though. |
| Literature › Re: October 50-Word Collaboration Registration by Creeza(m): 11:06pm On Sep 15, 2017 |
Am in captain |
| Literature › Re: A Hunt - A Military Thriller by Abraham Adekunle by Creeza(m): 10:44pm On Sep 15, 2017 |
Abra4real:you are welcome |
| Literature › Re: A Hunt - A Military Thriller by Abraham Adekunle by Creeza(m): 6:07pm On Sep 15, 2017 |
This last chapter, you succeeded in writing a very passive scene. At best you made me hungry, not for more (figuratively) but for Chin-chin. Now my question is this? IS THE CHIN Chin any way important to the plot? If yes, fine but if no, you just wrote your favorite 'pampered' scene that should have been 'CUT ' OFF.. . And the information that peter revealed, should have had a huge impact if a lot of suspense was created and maybe in the course of an action., now that my friend is a vitamin of ACTION thrillers... And at the end again, you showed how fustrated the characters were by saying 'lets get a proper meal' . Hell yea, Gv us a proper meal. in all it was a good read, but as a reader, a very honest one at that, and a Thriller genre writer, I only shared my criticism. DIFFERED OPINIONS from other readers are welcome. |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 2:49am On Sep 15, 2017 |
MichaelBlake40:i have a plot... Its hazy. More like a skeleton. Before the end of today, ill buzz you. Hopefully, you might be fascinated with it. Hopefully. |
| Literature › Re: A Lonely Heart (A Story) by Creeza(m): 12:20am On Sep 15, 2017 |
I hope bianca gets through this, lost a friend once ,more like a brother. I have no idea what it feels like to loose a child. I hope i never have to, it will be heart wrenching. This makes me remember Mama Henry, the mother of my friend. It was a terrible sight to watch her cry on that day. Two years now and Leukemia is still a heart breaker . Adieu Henry.  continue pls bibijay |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 11:59pm On Sep 14, 2017 |
dimssy:id go for a ferry godmother wand to make a thrilling story that every one will enjoy. Too much? |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 5:01pm On Sep 14, 2017 |
dimssy:i am whats on the menu! |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 2:33pm On Sep 14, 2017 |
[quote author=Eyinimofeoluwa post=60447075][/quote]thank you ma ! |
| Family › Re: Sharing Responsibilities In A Marriage. by Creeza(m): 12:03pm On Sep 13, 2017 |
Lawlahdey:lol abi |
| Family › Re: Sharing Responsibilities In A Marriage. by Creeza(m): 10:07am On Sep 13, 2017 |
Lawlahdey:u think so? but he is still a man, at least that alone demands respect |
| Literature › Re: Slaves In The Soul : A Novelette by Creeza(op): 10:04am On Sep 13, 2017 |
oyionina:thank you... Next time i will |
| Family › Re: Sharing Responsibilities In A Marriage. by Creeza(m): 6:53pm On Sep 12, 2017 |
Lol... Lawlahdey you've killed me o! Chai I rolled on the floor to this. WAIT IM COMING FOR YOU.But before then, i experienced this not quite a long time ago. A lady i know ,more like a neighbour, their flat is next to mine. So it happened that this woman is sought of a bread winner and her husband tries too, you know, when opportunity bears a kind name and when the beer parlours are in recession (note he is a terrible drinker God forgive me ) and when his demons elude him.But, this very incident got me cracking : One night, I eavesdroped- put it midly- i was out in the balcony - at half past 9pm, and then the next thing I heard after an angry man stormed out into his own balcony was pitiful. The wife asked him if he had replaced the hot water which he used to bath, that is replace it in the bucket where a boiler was connected to an outlet. Crazy! I must say, so I stopped what i was doing and listened more. The man replied ' I no put any water o!' The furious wife yelled with impunity. The man groaned. Then began ' so if you put water for your husband to baff, you go expect am to replace the water. Okay wait for me' I heard the man's first son say '' but papa why u no replace the water? I laughed when the man said '' Your father there!! ' thank God i have only one' The boy replied. Then the woman stormed out, told her son to go replace the water giving that he and his younger siblings hadnt taken their evening bath. The man rambled on how he had turned into a boy boy in his own house. This and that, but the lady said something that broke my ankle literally. It was pitiful. 'which house? You get house? Your mate are building duplex, you are here waiting for me to 'boil hot water so you go baff, that skin go peel one day' she said scornfully. Chai. Now is this one part of 'sharing responsibilities? I DOUBT O. And this is a very true story. 1 Like |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 5:31pm On Sep 12, 2017 |
Honeydawealth:i will do just that , |
| Literature › Re: A Lonely Heart (A Story) by Creeza(m): 5:28pm On Sep 12, 2017*. Modified: 6:27pm On Sep 12, 2017 |
The greatest mentor one can ask for,  she is back with a banger!Bibijay123... I hope im going to pick one or two from this |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 3:20pm On Sep 10, 2017 |
Honeydawealth:sorry 4 the late mention, some updates were removed but you can get them straight in your email address. Thats if you are interestd, |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 3:18pm On Sep 10, 2017 |
Adesina12:thank you sir! Continuation in progress, but I do hope you had a bit of a ride with this teaser ,didnt you ? |
| Literature › Re: The brand Of 'X' by Creeza(op): 3:16pm On Sep 10, 2017 |
MichaelBlake40:would be glad to... When i begin it, i will email you. |
| Literature › Re: Navigation of October Collaboration Threads by Creeza(m): 3:56pm On Sep 09, 2017 |
Yea kind of romance filled section.. But there are good thrillers too A Mystery thriller by souloho19 .. The devil wears Okrika Crime thrillers by Duch12 ( Theory X ) And Maneski ( the last gang standing) There is Appollux ( memoirs of Blood and steel) And ah!! Black maria by Larrysun Even StephenGee12 and his Gee fantasy land ( sorry I forgot the tittle ) no bad blood abi?Just to mention but a few , forgive me for not adding links, the authors will get the mentions and do that... Also I don't know what might be off it but I may just have a story cooking at the back of my brain.. Its something to me though, even if it turns out not as big as I envisioned , but, maybe, just maybe I will play the tune as the piper and you get to do ' A dance Of Fury' Maybe!!! Kingrapha |
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