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hormobolanle:
Ghostwritter's comment got to me n made me laf hard

Some people get P sha
But make i dy observe...........

kayo80:
I just had to defend the great writers we have in the Literature section...it wasn't fair what he did.

kayo80:
You could say this if your criticism was constructive, but it definitely wasn't. It is obvious you have tunnel vision when it comes to literary works and expect every form of writing to be one-way. And it is also obvious you have never created anything before, that is why you are so quick to tear down people's works.

Now look at some parts of your initial post and tell me you didn't blatantly disrespect all the great writers in this section.

"I haven't been able to make it past a single paragraph of any story I have clicked on, DESPITE READING OVER 60 STORIES ON THIS BOARD."

"The writers who managed to utilize proper grammar in their first paragraphs were just terribly uncreative with words and the expositions and descriptions were like something you'd read from the transcript of AN UNEDUCATED 8 YEAR OLD NARRATING AN ORDEAL."

"The imagery I got from the ones I managed to read past a sentence were dull, ugly, uninspiring frames and shapes that EVOKED DISGUST AND ALMOST MADE ME GAG AS THEY AROSE IN MY MIND."

If you call the above CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, there must be something wrong with your brain. I have a background in Psychology, and it is very clear you have a case of superiority complex. It took you five paragraphs to get to your point in your initial post. You were too busy displaying your use of the English Language (which is great by the way), which was a sign that you were really trying to show off your skills than constructively criticize anyone.

You can come back with another response, and try to bamboozle me with your big grammar, but deep down you know what I have said above is the bitter truth. And please, I would love if you could (in your leisure time) 'try' and write a short story of about 2,000 words. You don't have to post it here, just attempt it, and when you are done, do a critique of it. Thank you.

queenitee:
Shey I did not come late sha? Oya shey we would not celebrate ni?

Divepen is right jare. You are one hell of a great writer mixing crime with romance and its all so real. I'm a fan!!!


Please share sobo for celebration

Deji124:
Creeza Baba U Are One Of My Biggest Rolemodel On Nairaland(apart From Bibijay) Continue To Flow Baba I Dey Your Back Always. And To Divepen When Are U Going To Cast Bibijay Am Very Sure she Has Alot Of Fans Around Here, Even She Is One Of The Biggest Writer On Nl(cos I Want To Know More About Her)

EvaJael:
Thank you very much. I'm also a huge fan. Hope to interact more with a hot brain like u

HORLADSTAR:
CREEZA baba i follow u come here o

Divepen1:
So Creeza is one writer that I see putting one foot on Larrysun's writing style and the other on Royver's yet still build his own unique writing style. You're a gifted man sir and can like to firmly defend what he believes in. It's a honour to have met you.

Adesina12:
Evajael !!!!!
I don't know you are wicked honestly until I read this write up
Well done dear more ink to your pen
I am preparing special sweet popcorn for you

Divepen1:
I think I started seeing Kayo80 after one kay really lashed at Whitemosquito because of a competition she organised. That was the first of its kind in a long time. Everyone told that kay to write blablabla, then I saw a story we read it. It was good.

This present day Kay is a very serious, official take no nonsense person. He must be very neat and would be a person that loves his things to himself because someone posts betnaija etc on his thread, I would get a report..

More over, he's skeptical sha.. He is always trying to test his foot in the water before dipping his legs.. But I've read most of his works, they are good but unlike some Nairalanders he's yet to learn to pull crowd. Can we say he's the introvert all through...

Nice meeting you baba...

Divepen1:
I think I started seeing Kayo80 after one kay really lashed at Whitemosquito because of a competition she organised. That was the first of its kind in a long time. Everyone told that kay to write blablabla, then I saw a story we read it. It was good.

This present day Kay is a very serious, official take no nonsense person. He must be very neat and would be a person that loves his things to himself because someone posts betnaija etc on his thread, I would get a report..

More over, he's skeptical sha.. He is always trying to test his foot in the water before dipping his legs.. But I've read most of his works, they are good but unlike some Nairalanders he's yet to learn to pull crowd. Can we say he's the introvert all through...

Nice meeting you baba...

Gloryejims:
This story was indeed touching... Creeza congrats

You actually gave the unexpected... I mean, I thought they'll live happily after the arrest of dami but then.... It brought tears to my eyes as Gabriel died ...It was fun all through

Kudos to you

jemmabond:
OK yourself.

chijioke17:
creeza abeg update na

KpagoGIN:
My head have catch you.....we now have to wait together for the train to arrive

EvaJael:
I respect those writers a lot. Okay, you got me there...lolz. I actually saw the 'ferry' word but I blamed auto correct for it. You know how to catch my attention sharpily abi. Don't worry I'm planning you.
Btw, this should be the first time I'm getting an 'awwn' from a guy

EvaJael:
It's perfectly normal to be curious sha but you donno how it feels when a wonderful writer like you is curious about the work of a learner like me.
About her 'name', if you're a Tinkerbell fan like me, you'll know that pixie dust is a magic powder and according to myth, a pixie is a playful elf-like or fairy-like creature. That's why she feels like a fairytale character.
Thanks for reading and commenting Creeza, I really appreciate it