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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 10:10pm On Dec 05, 2016
Please the characters of this story are on production break . Kindly bear with me, I've been having emotion swings lately- I feel depressd and I'm afraid it will affect the plot

and you , the reader. Please bear with me.
#sad
RomanceRe: Will This Continue In Marriage? by Creeza(m): 8:58pm On Dec 05, 2016
Prayers .. OVEN baked is not enuf, she needs Iya Basira firewood to cast the demon out. grin

Jagugu88li, get me the holy cane grin
ILE L'EYI gidi gan

Ebota ! ! I said com out!
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 12:18am On Dec 05, 2016
Yoyostic:
Issokay.Bike,pls drop me here...
glad you stopped by smiley
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 5:20pm On Dec 04, 2016
Please o when is uniben going for xmas break, Cox the way I'm seeing it its like Freshers are not going anywhere.
Cc Venus007, dharay99
robinhez kslib
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 4:39pm On Dec 04, 2016
PamelB:
I think I'm late o. But lemme start from the beginning
welcome
LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 3:21pm On Dec 04, 2016
My eyes are vigilant.
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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 3:18pm On Dec 04, 2016
Lol! This gets even more interesting as the day breaks... Life is a mystery in a sand glass time.

Nice ,bibijay I didnt expect this one.
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LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 2:43pm On Dec 04, 2016
Lleigh nice update. You are still the queen of description- wish I had that skill too. *winks
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LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 2:41pm On Dec 04, 2016
Jagugu88li, lets drink to that one #team mercy, and please I hope you stll got good blood towards me.

DummyLOLA shouldnt come in between us , except you want her to tempt me too. grin
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LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 2:38pm On Dec 04, 2016
So Ibukun is Remi's daughter to be.

If am correct. Sam's state is not Amnesia as the doctor diagnosed. She cant see things that has not happened yet or even talk about them to begin with. Well time will tell.

Its no surprise she wont have babies : Mercy already did her the favour grin
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 2:24pm On Dec 04, 2016
MhizSuccess:
Nyc job creeza. A very narrow escape for Dami
you read it perfectly. Thanks bae kiss
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 2:21pm On Dec 04, 2016
virtuedagirl:
Wow! Thanks for the dedication
you are welcome, sweetheart kiss
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 2:19pm On Dec 04, 2016
yorhmienerd:
Why would she want him crawling back... some girls are desperate sha

Happy Sunday to you too
thank you, boss mi. *wink*
LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 12:15pm On Dec 04, 2016
Waiting
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 11:01am On Dec 04, 2016
Udochee:
yes boss.morning mass as usual. how far with your clearance, through?


if u ain't careful jagugu88li will break dami's head.
ok....

Im almost through, remains medicals.

Jagugu88li is a sweetheart, grin she says how she feels : real and plain. If she breaks Dami's head then we'll just have to poison another character's mind. grin
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 10:26am On Dec 04, 2016
Udochee:
not again. make dis woman free Gabriel na.if only Gabriel had known, if only.....
happy sunday creeza et al...
happy sunday my dear. Hope u went to church, morning mass?
LiteratureRe: "365": A Novelette by Creeza(m): 9:58am On Dec 04, 2016
I just reserve my comment until things get hazy and complicated. Nice work swann am following on a '' 365'' basis *winks*
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:40am On Dec 04, 2016
Uhm? Block my imagination? Guide my hands? grin thank you so much , baesky but I think I can manage,,

Andy? He got paged for emergency grin

thanks for the Ftc , and '' Happy sunday '' Atleast nobody died...yet ... (smile)
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:17am On Dec 04, 2016
Continues dedicated ROYH mhizsuccess sunshine46 Udochee lankyannie virtuedagirl(our new friend)



Gabriel


When I regained consciousness, I felt a sting of acute pain on my head. I touched the back of it and my palms brushed briskly against the gauze and bandages used to patch it up.

I couldn't see very clearly as my vision was still AWOL. I opened my eyes and saw my entire family with me in a small room. I was shockedand I tried to get up but a force brought me down . I looked at my arm and it was Kate's grip- Soft and gentle, urging me to stay down.


" Rest , Love. Don't move yet"


" Where am I? I asked after seeing things that were strange.


Kate explained everything to me and told me how Tayo had been bleeding severely. And how the doctors requested for a police report before treatment.
"....and Right now" She said " Tayo's in a deep Coma.Chances of him pulling it through is a 50-50 bargain. I'm sorry".

I asked them to take me to him, but no one granted my request. I got up and this time , everybody held me down.

" Please take it easy" Maxwell grabbed my arms firmly.

I felt pain and I saw as my little boy - David - He cried bitterly. His jaws were open and tears flooded down his cheeks. Suddenly, I became weak in my bones.
"Let me see him... Please let me see him. I want to see my friend..."

Mother called on the nurses and even the janitors that were outside cleaning the corrider. Before I could say jack, a whole medical team rushed into the room.
They held me down . They brought out a big syring-very big and monsterous. I struggled . The doctor gave out orders to hold me tight. Then , the ceiling started to spin round in my eyes, that was when I noticed the syringe which stabbed deep into my veins. The pain travelled up to my elbow.........

**********************



Damilola



" Please , how do I get to the ward for gunshot victims? I asked the nurse at the reception counter.

The counter was made of marble stone, and it glittered in the reflection of the energy lights that were above the hall. Behind the nurse, were posters of disease management techniques , like diabetes and co. On the wall to the right was a fire extinguisher. I sparingly looked across the hall and saw people who sat down on plastic benches and looked very depressed. The stench of drugs intensified as my nostrils surffered severely.


" Hello... Excuse me " I continued " Please where can I find the ward for gunshot victims?

She looked at me with suspicion and fondled her pen , then said. " What is your mission? You want to finish someone off?..."

I smiled " Negative . I'm just a concerned relative'

She furrowed her eyebrows then gave me directions accordingly.
*********---------------

The door to Gabriel's room was heavily guarded by two hefty men. I couldn't get in easily , not even with my lady charms. Even if I lied to them.

*What the... you can't be serious* I thought .
I moved past them with fear to the other end of the corridor , hoping to catch a glimpse of their weapons. Each man had a short pistol ( 9millimeters) attached to his waistline.

Just then a lady came out of a locker room to my left, while I thought of how to conquer my bloody hiderance . I pushed the door open and saw clothing of nurses and lab coats for doctors arranged properly with each cabinet having a name on it . Each contained bags with personal belongings kept safely inside.
I took a coat and a stethoscope. I walked out of the room and went back toward the men with some audacity that screamed " Demon" as I moved.

" Let me pass , please"

The men spread out and allowed me gain a superb entrance.
Finally! I thought out loudly.

Fortunately for me, He was all alone. Perfect timing! He was sleeping peacefully like a sacrificial lamb.
********


I drew the chair near his bed side and called out his name as I sat down comfortably.


" Gabriel?? ---- G-A-B-R-I-E- L??

His eyes opened religiously and he gazed upon me with shock. I wondered what he was thinking , I could see agony in his brown eyes. I grabbed his arms gently and gave him a big cheerful smile.

" What are you doing here? He said, as he withdrew his arms.

" Is that what they usually say? I thought its the other way round... Like '" What am I doing here?
I chuckled another smile.

" What's so fucking funny?


I stroked his forehead and he jerked as I touched his bandage.

" Easy now . You don't want to tear up your stitches. " I began" But tell me... Why would someone want you dead? I need you alive. I want you.... All of you... Not your corpse, but your body , soul and mind."


He smirked his lips. " How long have you been there? Where is Kate, my son ? Where is my family?

" Its just a few minutes , probably five. I tried to get in earlier, but hey- those guys out there: they are scary as scary can be" I joked about it.


" Why do you have a coat on you?

" Really? ... Is that.. Is that all you 'll ask me? ... What about me? --us? About Funmi? Are we not your family too?


" There is no 'us'. There is just 'me' and there is 'you." He replied without emotions.

Tears clouded my eyes as those words bloodbathed my heart.
My lips engaged with his pale lips. He didn't hesitate at first, he kissed me back. I could feel passion and mindblowing tension as my tears trickled down upon his cheeks.

Then, he pushed me slightly and looked away. I felt disappointed.

I whispered into his right ear." Very good. Show less emotions and you'll live longer"
***

" Excuse me..." a voice came from behind as the door creaked open.

" Mrs...Mrs... Ege...Egdege?.

I was shocked .

" Sorry to intrude " she replied.


Smiling , I moved a little bit away from the bed but she was suspicious of me- I wondered what she was thinking.

" Well don't be. At least not yet "
" And you must be David" I waved at the little boy beside her. He was so gullible but very cute , just like his dad.


" How is my husband doing, doctor?


" Oh!! He is fine. For now, we just have to keep an eye on him, observing his progress. He should be out of here in two or three days. I'll leave you now"

I walked towards the door.

" wait.."


My knee cap buckled as I turned and glanced at Katherine.

" You forgot your stethoscope" She gave it to me and smiled.

" Right. Thank you."


I opened the door and left through the back door. I was happy with my narrow escape and planned my next line of action. In no time, Gabriel would come crawling and begging me to let him back into my life. Surely he would....Definately....

TBC

have a lovely Sunday ,guys. wink

#comment , like and share ( encourage the ministry *smile)
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LiteratureRe: Love Really Is Strange by Creeza(m): 2:17am On Dec 04, 2016
Updates!!!
LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 2:15am On Dec 04, 2016
mhiz:
Lleigh you're so good, you write so well. I could see myself in the hospital, feel the grief and the tension, feel the excitement. This is reading in 9D. Thanks smiley
I felt absolutely the same way, when I read that part... It was so real in spectra and HD rendering
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 1:56am On Dec 04, 2016
bibijay123:
Poor Tayo.... I hope Gabriel's family will nt suffer for his mistakes but I know this isn't Dami's handwork, It myt even be that Kemi, Andrew or Mimi.
we' ll seeabout that nah. cheesy thank you for gracing my thread
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 1:55am On Dec 04, 2016
ROYH:
Creeza! Creeza!! Creeza!!

I wont Talk Oh
you have talked already lol...

I go update later today. No vexgrin
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LiteratureRe: The River by Creeza(m): 10:23pm On Dec 03, 2016
Lleigh are you an arsenal fan ? cheesy north lodon here, and arsenal jersey for Michael in '' the Club'' .

I pick it that you got love for the Gunners.

Prove me wrong?
grin

mali , what happens to You Tonight will be historic ( Waiting for updates) grin
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:04pm On Dec 03, 2016
virtuedagirl:
This piece is wow,Gab humm! patiently awaiting updates o
thanks alot . Its your first time dropping a comment, right?

Welcome dear *smile*
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:02pm On Dec 03, 2016
Sharafawizkidayo:
So sad! tragidy, suspense, and jealously, hmmm, i just dey observe sha. gud work my guy@creeza more wisdom to u
thank you sir
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:01pm On Dec 03, 2016
MhizSuccess:
Creeza where are you come and do d needful
I'm working tirelessly on it. *winks*
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 12:35pm On Dec 03, 2016
UncleIni:
I sight u bro! I dey feel ur story die! Thumbs up
thank you sir *smiles*
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 7:02pm On Dec 02, 2016
Geofavor:
LOl. You don do your own? How school na, any activity aside clearance?


Dharray88, dharray99, drei, shutthefuckup, grin, robinhez, venus007, ksslib etc,

Pls guys, I ignorantly used a middle name in jamb which differs from the one I used in waec. Like this:

jamb -- Geofavor VENUS carson

waec -- Geofavor EBAYRAY carson

can I get an affidavit for it? ( I don't want to fill correction form sad)
oga grin YOUR OWN BETTER, mine is that a letter is misplaced in jamb...

CREEZA drei King grin

waec- CREEZA drie King
But I want to do correction of name on jamb.
Dont know how feasible it will be *sad*
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 6:54pm On Dec 02, 2016
Lankyannie:
u beta add roasted chicken join 4am else na straight 2 #ghost nd killer mode#
*clears throat* waiter?!!
2 laps of chicken for this special lady !!

OYA just wait small make he put the thing for takeaway *smile nah* shuu?! cheesy
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 6:32pm On Dec 02, 2016
chijioke17:
Creeza thanks for the mention, I login these days cos of you ur story and nothing more
thanks bro, how's the weekend going nah?
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 6:30pm On Dec 02, 2016
sunshine46:
Hello Creeza,how've u been...wen are u dropping d next update...jst so u to knw i've been following ds story and still i'm,tho it's been a while I dropped a comment...I've had a really rough week,hardly even have time for me...tnx for d mention
I'm fine ,thank you.... Im still working on it..... Aww thanks for following *smile*

A rough week? School or work? Sorry about that ... Its going to be fine, and you welcome back anytime anyday *wink*

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