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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:12pm On Nov 29, 2016
dominique:
Which kain wahala be this naa? Poor Kate sad
aunty dominique, dont worry. She wont suffer for long , Truth is that me sef I confuse for Gabriel, He own wahala dae scata my dada. cheesy
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RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 8:18pm On Nov 29, 2016
Its a free world. Seeing is believing, not hearing.
RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 8:04pm On Nov 29, 2016
datgoaldigger:
Young man these events did not occur I think its obvious you formulated a story to amuse yourself...you were smashing the twin sis in the living room and the oda one caught yhu I mean WTF....if your bored simply pick up a Brian Tracy book and read it will change your life....Udo #datgoaldigger
I had doubts too, and I had to fish out some evidence. It turned out that on the said night, He ( I mean Kay) didnt intend for such to happen.

In fact ,it was a freak of impulse that the act which brought his shame, even took place. I was with his bae on the D day( to be honest) and we are both course mates.... I WONT GO ANY FURTHER... security reasons.
RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 7:55pm On Nov 29, 2016
LePrezident:
I smell lies...
on a serious note its no joke. Nevertheless, your opinion is appreciated.

Just because I'm all frenzy about it, doesn't give you the platform to question its authenticity.

#i rest my pen.
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 7:37pm On Nov 29, 2016
YINKS89:
sewiously dis dami is becoming anoda fin.
Its all according to the plot bro. cheesy
RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 7:30pm On Nov 29, 2016
Chuknovski:
oya tell us who sweet pass taiye or kehinde,
..NA WHO i go ask?.... Oga bleeping have tie wrapper and be dancing shoki . Probably laffing at Kay right now! grin
RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 7:25pm On Nov 29, 2016
plumule:
You enjoyed yourself ontop women come dey tell us shit. You aint seen shit
Kaycee o, Your own aff finish be that! Just go and hang yourself grin
RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 7:15pm On Nov 29, 2016
Splinz:
Oga o... you are OYO... undecided
The matter strong wella, Thats why I brought it here! I'm convinced that nairaland can procure a suitable advice for him.
RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 7:09pm On Nov 29, 2016
Cc lalasticlala
RomanceRe: Help me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 7:08pm On Nov 29, 2016
Towncrier007:
my advice to u is that ehhhhhhh..... you should not think it twice, just kill yourself.
will killing himself, solve the problem? I DONT THINK SO grin
RomanceHelp me : I Bleeped My Bae's Twin Sis... by Creeza(op): 7:02pm On Nov 29, 2016
Please help a brother.

A friend of mine has been frantic and weary since last night.

Here is his plight.

'' Please I'm confused.
I need advice. My name is Kay (not my real name ) . I stay in Benin city of Nigeria.

I had a strong feeling for a certain girl. I tried asking her out for months. It was as if she would never accept my request.

With time we became friends, I enjoyed her company. We made love on several occasions.


Then, her twin sister started flirting with me.

I tried to resist her, but mr. Man is an illeterate nah. I eventually fell for her charm. And last night my bae caught me bleeping her sister in their living room... while she moaned and screamed at my mercy.
Now, I cant even think straight. My feelings for the senior one( that is my girlfriend) is projecting guilt into my soul and being.

In our society ,there are superstitious beliefs that when you bleep twin sisters, you end up with loads of troubles and curses. Please what should I do?''
***

WHAT is your candid advice for this brother?
LiteratureRe: {Nairaland's Closet Of Secrets}: #NlWriters. by Creeza(m): 6:08pm On Nov 29, 2016
Im here
LiteratureRe: Blood For Blood:a Tale Of Treachery by Creeza(m): 4:52pm On Nov 29, 2016
My guy blood , just feeling like a superstar grin

i have a feeling , that they are preserving him for the ultimate sacrifice. grin

lemme come and be going before jagugu88li catch me here. She dae para for me about something which I dont even knw how it began sef. grin

Nice 1 greg42. You're the bomb.
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 4:30pm On Nov 29, 2016
rachealfst:
I'm sure Lola will end up destroying Gabriel's beautiful home. Following...... well done bro.
Thanks dear
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 1:58pm On Nov 29, 2016
jagugu88li:
Message to the author: YOU ARE WICKED

Ehn! Everytime Kate tries to smoothen life, with Gabriel starting to realise his mistakes, you spoil it by bringing in that Dami girl.
Life is a bed of mysteries.. Funmi is the key to Gabriel's heart on the part of Damilola.

He went because of her.

#I REST MY PEN grin
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 1:33pm On Nov 29, 2016
chijioke17:
Creez a,lets strike a deal, tell me your dept and faculty, if I can link you with someone to do your clearance for you and in return you give us uninterrupted episodes
sounds fair enough. Hmmm

Dept :EPCS (Edu. Phychology and Curr. Studies)
course: Mathematics
Faculty : EDU.

Email me your number.
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 1:24pm On Nov 29, 2016
alexblazzzer18:
Hunmm, hw tha hell, did i bloody miss this thread... Bro Creeza u shoulda called me nw
Sorry sir. BUT I told you abt it. Maybe you forgot.
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
Chapter 007. Dedicated yorhmienerd bibijay123 adetomdx mhiz nder sunshine46 spdazzy


* Mind game *

* The heart of man is a battle field. The raging war between good and bad. It never ends**** it never does**



Gabriel



" What will happen to the chicken? David asked.
I gave him a big smile and rubbed off the blood of the poor fowl on its feathers. I made sure it bled out properly and no blood missed the hole in the ground.


" You see" I began " I don't really know but I'm certain it will be in a better place after here"

He grinned and brushed his finger tips on the back of the bird's corpse.


"Daddy? " He said" Will it go to heaven? I want it to be happy in heaven"

I picked up the shining silver coated knife and we made for the kitchen through the back door. All the while , I thought of a perfect answer for his question.


" Maybe. Wouldn't want it to go to hell, now , would we ? I replied, pouring a hot kettle of water on the chicken which was now in a deep bowl.

I was once inquisitive and curious, just like him. My mother would always find hope in any thing possible. Even when it seemed impossible , she saw a bright spark in the dark.

" Daddy. Our teacher said that bad people always go to hell" He said , raising his eyebrows.

" Often times , they do " I said " but our friend here isn't bad . So we are hopeful, it ends up in heaven"

I smiled again and watched as he tried to pull off the feathers, in the steaming water.

I prepared a dish which I knew was Kathy's favourite. The stew pasta was delicious and alluring. We set the table for lunch and by some chance of coincidence, Kate arrived with my mother and Yvonne.

Everyone sat at the table and we had a really wonderful family time. I missed this.


" Gabriel' Mother said" Please , tell me . When do you plan to give me another grandchild ?


She was serious and smirked her lips.


" Hah!! Mummy " Yvonne scolded her " you are being too harsh on him. At least let them decide if its the right time for that-----"


"It is o! David is almost 7 now, and he needs a sibling" Mother cut in.

I blushed unexpectedly. A bone nearly went down my throat. I looked at Kate who was now red all over with blushes. It suddenly felt like we were kids. I could feel the tension in the air. I tried to remain calm.


" We are actually on it , mother" Kate replied. Her gaze locked up into mine.


" Another baby means more expenses". I said, looking shy and cooked up" Besides we need to raise money for mother's surgery"

" We can manage. A girl will do. Right Love? Kate uttered those words that kept me spinning in the atmosphere.

" Yeah!! " David exclaimed " Finally , I'll have a sister"



" Yes you will, soon. Now eat finish you food first. " Mother said, pointing to spoonfulls of rice grains on his plate.


We had not planned for another baby, not yet though. I felt uneasy about the idea. And the concept of a baby girl, brought Funmi to mind.

They continued with their chat, while I slowly drifted off in thoughts. Yvonne queried Kate for updates on her latest beauty tips. Dave bragged about his prowess in the class room. Mother mesmerised them on how she was the prom queen back in her days.

I watched. Then my phone rang. It was Kemi on the calling end. I dared not pick this call in front of everyone. I excused myself and left through the back .


*****


" She wants to kill herself , please help me o." Her voice came hurriedly.

" who wants to commit suicide? I said " Why did you call? And why are you crying?


I could hear her snivell. She was crying. Her voice started to sink deep in whimpering.


" Gabriel, please I need you here o . Its a matter of life and death o..... Please "

" Why? I asked, confused.

" Dami tried to kill herself this morning..... I rushed her to the hospital and she has not been revived yet o. Please help me, I'm confused o. " She said.


A truckload of shivers swam upstream my nerves. Why would Dami have suicidal tendencies? And why did Kemi call me? Doesn't she have other relatives?.
******************


I stole back into the house . They were still on with their discussions. I grabbed my car keys. And made for the door like a sheep to the slaughter.
"where to ? " Mom asked.

I stopped abruptly at the door.


" I have to take care of something." I said.


" The something has no name? Mother continued.
" I'll be back soon " I said, and dashed out to the streets.

Why take painkillers to overdose ?. She had really lost her mind.

The traffic was meandering and cars honked left and right.



I finally got there and went straight to the reception. The nurse had a babyish look and from her facial features I assumed she was one of those newly certified graduates from nursing school. Probably undergoing internship.

" Damilola , Akehinde. Please? I enquired.


" Take a turn left, down the hallway. The third door by your......"

She was halfway when Kemi popped out from God knows where.

" This way...Thank God you are here." She said dragging me along.

I thanked the nurse and followed the frantic human being in form of Kemi. She pushed the door open and the sight of Lola woke feelings in me, that I thought were already dead.


" Daddy!!!!" Funmi exclaimed with joy and hugged me tightly, like her life depended on it.


"How are you doing, princess? " .


"Fine daddy. Please make mummy wake up." Her eyes were heavy. She had been weeping bitterly.

I had a soft spot for her . No doubt I came running as fast as I could. If not for Oluwafunmi, I wouldn't blink twice to kill Dami myself.

The doctors came later and it was almost evening. I had to leave and this time for good. Then , a voice in me kept on saying: don't leave the poor girl all by herself. Have pity on her. She is still a child.


I kissed Funmi on the head. She was now sound asleep in my arms. I passed her to Kemi on the opposite chair.

"I'll be on my way now. Call me when She wakes up.
Kemi nodded in approval.

" Gabriel...?." Dami called out in a weak tone.
" Gabe.. is that you? She continued" I'm sorry... I really am".

I turned and took her arms , folded them in mine. I wanted to stab her with a syringe. Yet, I couldn't help it but have pity on her.

She blinked. Her lips were now pale and dry. I could tell that she had really drugged herself to insanity.

" Why did you do it? You could have killed yourself." I said" And your daughter will grow up not only without a father but also a mother"

" Tell her o. She is stubborn" Kemi blurtted out from behind.

" Gabriel..Gabby.." Lola stammered as she squeezed my palms firmly.


" Shhhh..don't talk too much. You need to rest" I said and put my index finger on her lips.
" I will be on my way now. Please get well soon. For your daughter sake. She needs you."


I tried to move but again, Lola's palms hindered me. She drew me back and looked deep into my eyes.


" Please don't leave me . Don't leave again. Please , I need you. We need you. "


" Dami----"


She cut me short " I know. You are married. It doesn't matter to me. I won't force you to work for me anymore. Just stay... I love you ...Gabriel".

*****
She paused . maybe she saw the shock in my eyes.
***

" Yes I do.. " She continued " I' ve loved you from the first day we met. Please stay. Don't ever leave me. I might die if you do"

I was stoned into silence. I tried to refrain from emotions as they surged deep into my blood. I could see them again , in her eyes. Just like the night I nearly slept with her. The fire burned and this time she wasnt drunk, she was sober. She was in control and that alone scared me the more.
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LiteratureRe: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Creeza(m): 12:01am On Nov 29, 2016
Three minutes to Tuesday, (at the time of post)

this story made me realise things that seemed impossible. Rachel, I must confess: I read it halfway before jumping to the end. (the end too sweet me) grin

Thank you for bringing this beautiful piece, my. way.
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LiteratureRe: The Auction by Creeza(m): 11:32pm On Nov 28, 2016
Lleigh I got your e-mail.

Linda , your past is pitch black and thats an understatement.

Only God knows what horrible things , Charles knows abt her.

Nice update.
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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 11:11pm On Nov 28, 2016
Officially proclaimed.

Tell me there's a better twister on Nl, and I'll stop appreciating artworks, especially by bibi (teacher mi ) grin

more, more, more. And all those saying death do this and that, shuu person no go kpeme again :/ grin lol bibijay you would hv killed someone else. Dupe's the fav. Character now.
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LiteratureRe: Top 20 Nairaland Best Writer Of All Time by Creeza(m): 10:51pm On Nov 28, 2016
yorhmienerd:
No qualms, an update to soothe my soul would go a long way grin
no lele oga mi grin , a dedictn upfront for you.
LiteratureRe: Top 20 Nairaland Best Writer Of All Time by Creeza(m): 10:45pm On Nov 28, 2016
greg42:
I don't need you to tell me am good,i knew that before I joined nairaland........I am not in competition with your so called "hall of famers"........and like I said to the guy who tried to start a verbal exchange before you......This conversation is over
its ok, please stop the verbal war. Nairalanders are intelligent, greg42 I told you before.
If you are good , you're good. Art attracts appreciation not glory or some medal of literature. Yorhmienerd , Please bury the hatchet. I rest my pen.
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LiteratureRe: Nephilim by Creeza(m): 12:01pm On Nov 28, 2016
Jason is strong headed, only if he had listend to the caller. He might have nt torn the wall apart, enabling Durza to pass thru.

Nice work of art bro. This is entruiging. Reminds me of smallville
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 11:20am On Nov 28, 2016
MozB:
Let the poor woman be ooo...

Nice work Creez a.
Thanks MozB, I saw all the likes and shares. You completed the story, uptil the recent update.

I hope it was worthwhile your time ? grin
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LiteratureRe: He Priced Me. by Creeza(m): 9:40pm On Nov 27, 2016
DTOBS:
Rilly grin...are you a fish?
oga mi. I saw this one in 4D grin

OYA op , update asap. Dont fall my hands o angry
LiteratureRe: He Priced Me. by Creeza(m): 9:38pm On Nov 27, 2016
bibijay123:
Following, creeza is everywhr like Mtn grin thanks for d invite.
lol I'M glo - grandmaster of data. Its my personal text.

I JUST appreciate arts and creativity grin
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LiteratureRe: Love Really Is Strange by Creeza(m): 9:12pm On Nov 27, 2016
Funny and awesome. grin

I like extroverts. Nice style. More ink to your pen dear. *winks
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LiteratureRe: He Priced Me. by Creeza(m): 9:01pm On Nov 27, 2016
Jagugu88li
swann
mhiz
greg42
biafranbushboy
angelinasto
DTOBS
Bibijay123

Come and see o, this one got me hooked until the last word.
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LiteratureRe: He Priced Me. by Creeza(m): 8:59pm On Nov 27, 2016
Nice, Im captivated.
LiteratureRe: "The Sinister Defence" A Thriller Story. by Creeza(m): 6:21pm On Nov 27, 2016
jagugu88li:
Why are you accusing Whizzd0m huh? Susan was killed by Marcus tongue
just like you almost accused me of Gabriel's mishaps. You euen wantd ''the maggot'' dead grin
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