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Kusibe77.. what is happening.. where are thou...

Hazardous u are great.. Am the first to comment so my reward at hand abi?

https://www.nairaland.com/2167202/main-story-thread-checkmate-competition-group click this link to see the collaboration work by some of the upcoming writers.

A collaboration work is on. we are inviting you to read d upcoming writer's works. you can do that by clicking this link https://www.nairaland.com/2167202/main-story-thread-checkmate-competition-group we are inviting you. pls come and you won't regret

We are calling/inviting you to this thread to read the collaboration work by some group of people.. this is the link https://www.nairaland.com/2167202/main-story-thread-checkmate-competition-group we need your like and share please we are inviting you

Kusibe77 you doing great.. bt kusi guy we are expecting your update for d collaboration stuff.. my friend here we need you in dis thread to read d collaboration so goin on https://www.nairaland.com/2167202/main-story-thread-checkmate-competition-group

Good evening hazardous.. i dey gbadun you please come continue...

Fembleez1:
Lol,. Na you be boss na!

For where

thronekid:
Just saying though

Oh is not just a saying but also compulsory because am still a learner.. thanks for the advice

thronekid:
I just dey read d last part of chapter 1 by Cybershow and though I'm not supposed to do this, I will.
Firstl, it seems you're yet to completely comprehend and assimilate this project. From the way you penned everything, its more like a yoruba movie with just one part boasting gigantly of a humilating duration of 10 minutes, you completed the story already, there's no way the preceeding writers would pen something on that same storyline. It would have been better if you had stopped the chapter at the point they married and end with something like this, "but as fate would have it, after the marraiage, the blissful union took a worse turn, people change, things get altered and yes, the union changed.", you know something like that would have granted the other writers athe chance to write on the story, shey u get?
Also, the grammar no be here o, work on it.
Just my 2 cents like boss D9ty7 would say!

oh thanks i will abide to that

Fembleez1:
ok bro.

i hear you o.. My boss

Fembleez1:
Nice job bro, patiently waiting for your next work.



More ink

oh thanks my great boss..... More story will be out soon... Check my profile for more

Kusibe77:
am here o. you have to edit, especially the last chapter. But wait is like you don end the story.
Anyway make I think about.

kusi guy, you know what come to our group on fb.. So u culd get some hint on the story.. I may give some hint there okay?

Evangelio:
Nairalanders, click https://www.nairaland.com/2167202 /main-story-thread-checkmate- competition-group to read our story.
Hit like if you like it, share it but comments are not allowed.

Cybershow thanks for kicking it off, Kusibe77 ur turn.

it my pleasure.. But why is kusibe77 not showing..... The link you edited modify it by putting -1 after the group

thronekid:
whao, go check iy out. Also, dont forget bout chinweblinkz and princesssusan, could hav given u their names on FB but as u know na, u too handsome pass make guy dey trust u

lolz who tell you that.. Chinweblinkz and princesssussan never give me anything jor.. See am not handsome.. Dont let overwhelm with your statement o

----continuation----

On saturday, Daniel was seen thinking about the issue of marriage in his place of work, when the daughter of Ashaju came for the cloth. They exchange greeting, he asked;
"Are you the daughter of Mrs Ashaju"
Rose replied;
"Yea, i came for the cloth"
Daniel smiled and said;
"Alright, you looking beautiful, so what your name?"
Rose giggles and replied him;
"Thanks, my name is Rose and you?"
"My name is Daniel" he said.
Daniel was busy starring at her beautiful and smooth face, he was already lost in love to the extent that the cloth he was packing, he exchange a black polythene bag to a white polythene bag.
He was sent back to consciousness when the girl asked;
"Why don't you put the cloth in a black polythene bag instead of white polythene bag"
He was embarrassed and he said;
"It was a slight mistake [he change the white polythene bag to a black polythene bag, he said], this is the cloth, you can have it".
She collected the cloth, about to leave, when Daniel called her back saying;
"Please! Can i have your number?"
She replied with a facial expression which is not that welcoming;
"Why do you need my number? What for?"
Daniel replied stammering;
"Is just th-at -m-m-m- we may not get in con-tact wi-th ea-ch other again, please just do me that favour please!"
She replied calmly;
"Is this how you ask for number from your costomer's daughter unh?"
He was shocked with the question, he open his mouth agape, he wanted to say something but words seem heavy in his mouth. After some second he speaks out;
"No, but for the first time we get to know each other please do me that favour by rendering your number to me please!".
She replied;
"Alright i will give you, my number is 0802433......."
"Oh thanks for the number, am grateful" he said.
She bade Daniel good bye.
Daniel was lost in thought after Rose has left his shop, he was falling for Rose has left his shop, he was falling for Rose and It seem the girl will be playing difficult to get.
When he got home, he dialed Rose number, she picked the call after the first beep;
"Hello Rose" Daniel said.
"Hi, please who am i speaking with" Rose said
Daniel replied;
"It is Daniel, so how you doing? Hope mum loved that designed"
She replied;
"Yes, she loves it, so what the reason for calling me".
Daniel said;
"Please, i want to ask you for a favour".
She replied;
"You are permitted to move on, i'm all ears".
He said;
"Can you be my girl lover".
She replied while laughing loudly;
"What is the meaning of that? Did i told you i need a lover"
He replied her, but praying inwardly to God so she could accept his proposal;
"Please accept my offer and you won't regret ever doing that, please do me another favour with this please!"
She replied;
"Hmmmmm......... I may try think about it then"
"Oh, thanks so i should be expecting a positive result" he said.
"Hmmmm.... Don't know for now. Good night". She said.
He replied;
"Okay good night, have a nice night and dream of me".
He hang up the call.

---

The next day he saw a text message on the screen of his phone, he checked it, it was from Rose, he opened the message and read the content, after reading it he smile, form in his face.

---

After many month, the love between Rose and Daniel grew stronger as the wind blows by every seconds. There was a day Daniel propose to her, saying;
"Will you marry me?"
She replied with tears flowing for joy;
"Yes i will marry you wholeheartedly".

---

After 1 years,
Daniel and Rose were unite together, there wedding was superb and there honeymoon was something to tells about.

After many days, Daniel impregenanted Rose. but as fate would have it, after the marraiage, the blissful union took a worse turn, people change, things get altered and yes, the union changed.

*END OF CHAPTER 1".....

thronekid:
Cool your mind! Btw, u don see Girltee1 pix?

hmm no

thronekid:
guy, just come first but a pity na only peep u go fit dey do, I wont allow come rob me!

hmmmm i no go rob them finish naw... Jst give me the page

thronekid:
Come group 2 for fb come see Damsels, u go look, u go tire. Seeing them in the group with the only male gets me relaxed, no competition and just by seeing their face, I get the assurance that a God exist somewhere high.
Just saying though!

hmmmm throne where do you get that one oooooooo

thronekid:
Nice start cybershow and group one in general, but I couldn't but notice that there are tons of grammatical blunder in the first chapter, try to ammend them.
Just saying though!
Waiting for the next chapter impatiently!

oh thanks..... I will ammend them thanks....

If you want to read the main story it here but don't comment there https://www.nairaland.com/2167202/main-story-thread-checkmate-competition-group you can comment only on this page

----continuation----
The next day, Daniel was at his place of work, when his costomer, Mrs Ashaju came in, to drop the cloth she want him to designed for her, Daniel and Mrs Ashaju exchange greetings after that she said;
"Hope your job is not that stressfull"
He replied;
"Yes ma, thanks for your concern"
She said;
"I brought the cloth i told you about, so i want a V-shape for the neck style, so please try to finish it before saturday. I may send my daughter here so she could get it for me".
As she was talking, she noticed that he was lost in thought but she ignore and bade Daniel good day, but he didn't notice that his costomer is about going, when she knew that seun is not that active, she tapped him and asked;
"Why are you so worried"
Daniel was send back to his normal sense after the woman jacked him. He replied amidst a swollen face;
"Nothing ma, thanks for your concern".
The woman was worried about his behaviour but she left the place when Daniel said that there is nothing wrong. So she repeated what she said the other time;
"I will send my daughter here so she could get it for me okay?".
Daniel replied;
"Okay, i will be expecting her".
Back to Mrs Ashaju's house.
Sitting down is a very elegant girl named Rose, she is a beautiful girl, 6 feet 8 inches tall with a nice golden hair, she possess a full lush pink lips, her eye balls colours look exactly like an ashes, somehow slender, curvy, a bit voluptous with an oval face, all in all she looks like an angel, she was seated watching a korean movie tittled
"Kachi gu family book".
Rose! Rose!! Rose!!! Her mother called, she paused the movie and attended to her mother, which is calling her, she answered from the sitting;
"Yes mum! Am on my way".
She ran into the kitchen to meet her mother who is preparing dinner, she asked;
"Mum why did you called me?".
Her mother replied her;
"I just want to inform you that you will assist me to get my cloth for me at the fashion designer place okay?"
Rose replied;
"Alright mum"
"So take this food to the dinning table your father will be expecting his dinner please be fast". Her mother said...
*To Be Continue*......

Chapter 1...
Time: 11:07
Written by: Cybershow
Against all odds, Daniel was pulling through life, sooner than later he was done with his secondary school level he was at home for a year, seeking admission.
FLASH BACK..
Mr and Mrs Adeboye belong to a medium class, neither rich nor poor. At times it is very difficult for them to afford three square meals a day. The life of the Adeboyes was very tough, Adeboye Daniel an indigene of Osun state couldn't finished his education so he was drop out of school because of his parents could not afford to sponsor his education. He was forced to go for a petty job, so he choose to be a fashion designer.
Daniel began his training immediately he was drop out of school and eventually became a famous designer in their village then.
After many years, Daniel's parents persuaded him to get married, of which he made his parents to understand that his schedule at his place of work won't allow him to have time for that.
One fateful day, when he got home, his father called him again on the issue of marriage, he said;
"Don't you know you are now old enough to be married? Don't you want us to see our grand children? Unh?"
Daniel replied him;
"I know am old enough to be married but my scheduled are so tight that i can't even think of such at the moment, is not that i don't want to bear grand children for you, i will think about it in my leisure time, father please! Understand me".
His father replied with an angry look;
"What! Is it because of your work that you don't want to consider the issue at all? If that is the case is better you quit the job!"
Daniel stood up with a troubledheart, about to take his leave from the sitting room, when his father called back by saying;
"You don't have anything to say to that unh? So now we are age mates that you are walking away from me? Unh?"
Daniel replied coldly;
"Am sorry sir, i didn't mean to do that, its just that am tired and i need to rest".
His father retorted;
"You want to rest when we are talking about the most important thing in your life? Is better you have time for your life now so it won't be to late, because you have your life to live not mine".
His father stormed out of the house angrily, leaving Daniel with a bunch of word......
*To Be Continue*........

We have jst 2 days interval in each chapter... if u wnt be around pls alert stuff46 or susrite.. tenx for your comply.. GROUP 1 Let show them we are great..

I wil lead the way for chapter 1
Stuff46 ->chapter 2
Kusibe77 ->chapter 3
Tattesco ->chapter 4
susrite ->chapter 5
pres01 ->chapter 6
bluestarry ->chapter 7
evangelio ->chapter 8
if the chapter continue we wil rotate it..

Nice update hazardous please come o..
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Chinweblinkz.. ahah i do read o.. and i dont sleep dat much.
About my short hand stuff.. don't mind me okay. i will adjust my self

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