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Sexy Sapphire: Wat's dis? Why do u av to curse the writer? Dis is such an xpensive silly joke to play. The guy wasn't paid to write the story and readin it is a matter of choice nt force. So wat is ur problem? Instead of u to appreciate the write-up, u're hia cursing. Ok fine, if u wanna point out ur view bout the way it ended, u cud av said so in a more matured way. If u're are hia ranting bout dis lovely story, wat do u wanna say bout uncompleted stories?Thanks sis. Dnt mind that guy he wants to gain attention. |
--continuation-- A neighbouring building to Farouk's hideout was on fire. It seemed like the bomb blast was from there. "Get the fire service." Buycks shouted. The L.A.TU agents all retreated in their movements for the fear of another bomb. "Backup team, move in." Buycks said through their communication gadget. "Copy that." Richard replied. The backup team that was gaurding the back exit moved into the house and got divided, each moving into a room. Suddenly, there were sounds of gunshots from within the house. At once Buycks knew, a gunbattle is going on. "Tactical team move in." he ordered as he led the way, while ten armed men followed suit. There was continuos gunshots for the next ten minutes, about eight L.A.T.U agents were killed, four injured. Three members of F.Lan were killed, one injure. "Comb the entire building for any sign of Farouk." Buycks ordered the surviving agents after the battle had died down. The agents all climbed the stairs, checked the rooms, searched every possible area Farouk could have hide but all was clear. Afterall, the attack was fruitless. "Medical team, transport all dead bodies to the motuary, while the only surviving terrorist be taken to L.A.T.U for questioning." Buyck ordered. The other surviving agents of L.A.T.U were outside the building when a call came in reporting that Farouk Lan was seen driving to the airport. Immediately, Buycks and his men all got into their car and went after him at a very high speed. Venue: Pretora International airport. "I am Agent Buycks from L.A.T.U. It was reported that a man named Farouk Lan would be travelling on the next flight to Russia. He is a terrorist and we want him arrested right away." Buyck introduced himself to the security man. "So what can i do for you?" The security man asked. "I want to speak with the captain in the cabin." Buycks requested. The security man gave him the number. "This is Agent Buycks from L.A.T.U, one Farouk Lan is expected to be on the next flight to Russia. We need to stop him now." Buycks said. "But the flight to Russia is expected to take off in five minutes time. Moreso, the last routine check has been done. What we are waiting for now is take off. The best thing you can do is to contact the Airport authority in Russia." The Cabin Captain advised. "No way am i gonna let this man slip from my hands. Move into the field." Buyck ordered as every agent of L.A.T.U ran toward the field where boarding takes place. The pushed all restrictions out of the way and ran towards the Plane. Venue: L.A.T.U "Anderson, i guess you should seize this opportunity and attack the Minister for defence. Everyone seems to be concerned about Farouk. So all attention seems to have diverted away from your angle. Now is the best time to strike." Oriol said leaving a voice message. Oriol came out of the restroom to see a feminine figure running out of his view. He went after the person to know who it was. --to be continued-- |
Let me start typing the next update jawe. Celebration galore# |
Thanks for the update sis. |
boogiejay: @Op. may sango strike you....how can u end such an intresting story lyk dat.... i hereby curse you for allowing me use my mb frm d beginning to d very end.... may u wander aimlessly till death! #slams phone against d wall#You must be out of ur senses. Why must you curse me because i ended my story where i deemed fit to be the end. Its not like you are an active reader who always comment. Not like, i am being paid to write a story, why dnt you pick up ur pen and write yours and let us see how you're gonna end it. I wonder maybe if you buy a novel and it ended where you dnt expect it to end, are you gonna curse the author? How are you going to do that? Dumbhead# |
PrinceAdepoju: You're welcome sir.Thank you Sire adegwurulez: we are on front page!! congrats sir..Yeah, i thank you for supporting your aprentice. |
stefikal: Good stories lyk urs alwz make it oooooYour story iz gonna hit fp veri soon. |
[b] FRONT PAGE LETTER. I never knew i could write an action story, when i wanted to start this story, some forces discouraged me with questions like, 'are you Kayemjay?' But i didn't allow those things to pull me down. I began the story after Adegwurulez started his and a day after Kingzpen introduced his new story 'THE SIM CARD' to us. I read through and discovered that the storylines are different. Now i made frontpage, its not by my powor, neither is it by my might. This will prompt me to first of all thank the Almighty God, the maker of heaven and earth and the creatures in them. Then my appreciation goes to Mr Oluwaseun Osewa(the ceo of this platform, nairaland). I saw him viewing this story a few minutes ago and was suprised to see the story on frontpage four minutes later. Also, i wish to thank the mods. I dnt know if they were the ones that moved this topic to the fp but all the same they deserve it. I wish to thank Temitope Danie(the first person to comment on this thread when i am yet to post the story), LogoDWhiz(the secretary and the second person to comment), Hameenat(the waitress and the third person to comment), Adegwurulez(my boss in this aspect of story writing and the fourth person to comment) and lastly Stefikal(also a writer and the fifth person to comment). My gratitude goes to my readers whom i can't mention all their names now but will try my best by starting from, Clemzy, Dchiefpriest, Prince Adepoju, Janeso, Esixlove, Walewunmi(the bouncer), Fonydear, Kingzpen, Ormolehwa, Donfamous, Kennybelle, Emzypaz, Tapout, Yemxy005, Pope shemoo, Dammygoody, Mikkyphaton, Almuhsin and Chinex. Others whose name were not mentiones are also appreciated. The Queen on this thread Queenxster, thank you. The talkertive on this thread.,lol.. Stefikal. She always has something to say. The staffs on the thread LogoDWhiz(sec. Gen), Walewunmi(bouncer)and Hameenat(waitress) Once again i thank you all for your support in making this story hit fp. Signed: d9ty7.[/b] |
stefikal: Congrats we are on FP...yesss!I still don't get o. How come we made fp so soon? |
U beta come and update now before...... Don't knw what to threaten you wit. |
stefikal: Could Anderson be d one using dz Farouk guy as a distractionI thought as much too but lets wait and see how the drama unfolds. |
I CAN SEE THE OLORI OKO OF THIS WEBSITE VIEWING THIS THREAD. Mr Oluwaseun Osewa, you're welcome here. |
This thread is dry, why? |
--continuation-- "Trace the video source." Dron ordered the computer analyst and computer operator in the room. "It's from an unknown source." Oriol said. "It can't be, it must have been sent from a specific source, even if its hidden, a multimedia port number must be visible." Richard added. "I got it. Its m.media 0124HSV-port21-can adrift media player." Mill read from his screen. "What media is used?" Bill asked. "Let me hack into the media player and get the address." Oriol volunteered. "Do that as fast as possible." Dron said impatiently. "Its from Olive grand development ground. House 28, development city north Pretora." Oriol said. "How many hours drive is it from here?" Bill asked. "Fourty-five minutes approximately." Oriol said. "Agent Richard assemble the field agents that will be going there. Agent Buycks will lead the team while you lead the backup team." Dron ordered. Every agent present began leaving one after the other till it remained Dron, Buyck, Bill and Richard. "I guess we should inform other agencies what we've got." Bill advised. "Oh yeah" Dron said handing the phone over to him. Bill called the SIU, the Police command, the millitary unit, and the Anti-bomb squad. "Hello sir, its Dron Spencer from L.A.T.U." he said to the reciever. "Yeah Dron, did you get the video?" Tony Ross, the minister of defence asked. "I got it, we're moving into the supposed location in the next ten minutes." Dron explained. "Oh! That's good. I'll inform the president about the new development." Ross said. Venue" Development city. "Agent Richard. The tactical team is in place, what do we have on the backup?" Buycks asked. "five minutes from point." Richard replied. "Cover the exit." buycks ordered. "Copy that." Richard replied. "What of the medical team, and the Anti-bomb squad?" Buycks asked. "Medical team is eight minutes away from point, while the Anti-bomb squad is ready in the extraction point." Richard replied. "Now move in." Buycks ordered. The tactical team being headed by Buyck moved towards the house in a slow but ready for action movement. Suddenly, there was a bomb blast. --to be continued-- |
Me am waiting for the next update o ur majesty. |
Still following like my life depended on it. |
Queen xstar: I hail o tough guy.Its not about toughness. But i dnt joke wid ma relationship. |
You all got it correct but Emzypaz was the first to answer it. Thanks for playing. |
What does Anderson escaping with a chopper potray? Predict correctly and win recharge card. |
Clemzy16: Can't wait for the next update.u'll have to wait na ni. |
Thanks for commenting. Mikkyphaton: D9ty7 u are really doing i gud job. This story is interesting like mad. First tin i do everymorning is to read dis. Kip up d gud work. Although commenting 4 d first tym. I think the video message is from Anderson's team. I'm sure of dat.The video message is from Farouk Lan. |
Next update in the two hours time. Signed: d9ty7. |
--continuation-- *INSIDE THE COMMON ROOM* "Hello." Eric said to gain Nancy's attention. Nancy looked at him but couldn't talk. "What's the matter? Why are you crying?" He asked. "Nothing." She lied. "What are you doing here? When did you arrive?" he asked. "You were sleeping when i came in." she replied. "Oh! I see." he replied. Nina came into the common room with a basket inside which were two plates and two bottles of orange juice. "Eric, you are awake?" Nina asked rhetorically. Eric just nodded his head and smiled. "You guys must have met. Eric this is Nancy. Nancy this is Eric." Nina made the introduction. "Nice meeting you Eric." Nancy said. "The pleasure is mine." Eric replied. Nina just smiled at them then dropped the food basket on the table. "This is your lunch." She said setting the plate for the both of them. She walked out a minutes later, leaving the both of them to their meal. "So what brought you here, since you said you don't know anybody here?" Eric asked. "You don't talk while eating." Nancy replied. "Oh! Don't mind my manners." Eric said playfully. *BACK IN THE AGENTS MEETING ROOM* The viedo began playing and the scene opened with a group of terrorists all masked, dressed in black overall, with black gloved adorning there fingers. A big black box was on the table before them. "Hello President Lujan. My name is Farouk, the Chief executive officer of the F.LAN group of companies. You might be wondering what i have for you, but i'll want you to have a glimpse of what i have for you. Gaby, open the box and let them see." Farouk ordered. A man in his early thirties, short with bald head and a potruding tommy came foward and opened the box. He removed the device inside the box, and set it to stand with the help of the tripod base attached to it. "This is a 243-rombic atomic bomb which if launched could have effect in at least 8,438,000sq/m area of land which is the total area of land in this country. It is capable of killing over 18,000,000 people at once which is the total population of this country. Mr president, if our demands are not met in a weeks time, this device will be launched in the capital city and this country will cease to exist." The suppose man called Gaby explained. "What is our demand?" Another man asked. "Thank you stevie, our demand is simple. We want our dear president to send a letter to the senate ordering them by veto to legalise the production of weapons and amunitions in conjuction with production of hard drugs in this country." Farouk explained. "Are we gonna wait till next week before we show them we are serious with our threats?" Gaby asked. "Not at all Gaby, we'll begin by attacking commercial centres, trading stores and malls, hotels and event centres right from this moment till next week when our threat will fully be executed." Farouk explained and left the room. "Package it back to its normal place." Stevie said to Gaby. "At your own interest, don't involve L.A.T.U in this at all, that is if you wanna try arresting us." Gaby said while bolting the black case then the screen went blank. --to be continued-- |
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Let us all join hands together in fighting against plagiarism. Support a brother whose story was plagiarised by endorsing this thread for fp https://www.nairaland.com/1555132/shola-ahmed-fraud-plagiarist#1555132.27 Signed: d9ty7. |
pope shemoo:Answer the questions first. Moreso, the next update will be in the next two hours. |
Hameenat94: Waitress needed pls.im sweatin seriously.d video will a mockery 4rm d terroristsWhich of the terrorists per say? |
dammygoody: *in mentor's voice*shut up joor ,which Rome are you going to............Full ke? We still av numerous empty spaces. Oya come sit down beside Stefikal. |
Let us all support ourselves as writers in fighting against plagiarism. I hereby endorse https://www.nairaland.com/1555132/shola-ahmed-fraud-plagiarist#20211654 to make fp. |
pope shemoo: Hmm nyc storyWelcome pope. |
Good morning Stef. How was your night? Hope y'all readers had a nice night rest? Don't tell me this update is all for today. |
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