ayshow6102:
Thanks for the updates obehid my phone had spoilt since last month and I just got a New one dats why av not been commenting sibce& am glad to see that no one missed me or asked of me

Fazemood:
Sophian just reminds me of my ex boss, hardly does he trusts and is quick to call one a liar.

I am sorry Obehid if I hurt you by my straightforwardness it wasn't intensional. I have been and still remain a great fan of yours. I admire your talent and this has in some point in time made me attracted to you and I have in many times wished I could meet you in person to express my profound admiration for your skill.

I have carried you in my mind as a genius who has almost attained a level in literature where she ought to be recognized globally. Your finesse in literature is outstanding and I am sure that many here wish to be what you are and to reach the level you currently are yet can only wish.

I see your stories no longer as fictions but rather as a close to real life events that encompasses the true feelings derived from real life experiences. Obehid, I was in love with your other story it was truly magical and it was what I liked most about it. Magic.

Your tales cover beyond one aspect of life and that is majorly the reason most of us can't bear reading just one update. No matter how many words you post, they seem never enough.

I wish to see you maintain and even surpass this level of expertise in literature that is why I can't bear to see your characters especially the protagonists losing their values in anyway in your works.

Pardon me for being hard on Nebud. I was hurt when you said you almost shed tears after reading my comment. I never intended to down your spirit in any way( I hope I didn't at all) . All I wanted to do was point out my little frustration toward our Host Nebud for its incapability especially in times where it is needed most.

Nebud shouldn't and doesn't have any right to make any one loss interest in your our work that was why I had to vent. (laughing)

As for abandoning ship, I can never do that unless the captain (You) quits, only then shall I say farewell to my fellow crew members who are sailing alongside in this sea of literature.

I am with you for a long time. I am committed to my job ( that is reading, analyzing and commenting with questions on every updates)

I hope that we can push this work to a height where the world will summon Obehid to decorate her with an award for international recognition which she truly deserves.

This been said I still and will always admire you . So fret not as you still gat your able reader here.

Thank you for your tireless efforts and may God grant your more insights and strength. Amen

Yours sincerely fazemood

ayshow6102:
thanks for the update obehid hmm it's like musa has become spoiled now abi when I advised nehud to buy a good whip and he refused I knew this day will come. obehid tell musa that he should not come back because if he does eh I'll hire strong boys (osins) and after they catch musa and Tie him down, I'll distribute strong chiboga whip to all of them to use to flog him till he forgets how to use Panasophy.

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Nice story obehiD, please i need a favour from you, I will be glad if you can help.

Fazemood:
Nebud sure got me displeased in the course of this story and that left me in a 'no comment' state all this while.
Obehid I apologize if it displeasing to have taken that action, I know writers adores commentaries vet much as it helps in story building and organizing. I have quite a sensitive personality and I see literature as part of my being. So many characters especially the protagonists I see with difference, when any misbehaves I kind off take it personal and Nebud did that for quite a long period. Although things have been set right all thanks to Arexon, I never disliked that uspec much ever since the adventure into the Aurelion, I suspected there are more to it than meets the eyes immediately they stepped into the canoe. I like smartness and smart characters be they antagonists or otherwise just the sheer cleverness is attractive.

The story so far have been deep revealing many underlying secrets opening more understanding to the extreme politics of the Uspec world. It is quite similar to what happens in the umani world. The greed and lust over power is overwhelming. Abuse of power and many more. This I can say is the most interesting part of this story.

Now Nebud knows Arexon and its the intentions better than it did earlier. I am glad at the same time I am still worried. This story is filled with many mind games such that it is quite difficult to predict what happens next.

So Nebud been assigned to seek out the last brio leaves me to wonder, why Nebud? Arexon knows that the lit Okun does no harm to Nebud and that leaves a reason why it chose to send it. Are Arexon's intentions right? I can't say but I really hope it doesn't lead to another under toned plot to exploit Nebud. It is a mind game as I have stated earlier, so anything and many things can happen and may happen.

Just keeping tabs on Arexon, although I trust it a little. Nebud needs to become more smarter and trust its instinct than trust more words of another uspec. It being flexible this time is good at least it can move its plans with more pretense than it did before.

I am always with you Obehid. Thanks for your efforts to satisfy our deep cravings for a good story. 'More grease to your elbow' ( still wondering if this phrase is correct, but I am using it anyways ) Thanks

olite93:
What a wonderful read... I feel so much for master calam and calami such good hearts... Please wats d freq of update. How often does obehid update

Fazemood:
Hmmm, I find something off in this port
My mind is quite worried about what this port represents. Musa is my favorite so I definitely worry out his safety. I just hope they come out without much hurdle.

The uspec who interviewed Nebud is smart, I like it. Obehid add a loyal Uspec to Nebud's squad. Please

1daful update dear. Thanks

Fazemood:
A very heart touching scene, Nebud has gotten what it was demanded of, I hope in the future Marcinus will come to know the reason behind Nebud's supposed betrayal.

Didn't know when I finished today's update, be like I am the one acting Nebud.

Obehid, how powerful will Nebud become now it has taken the eye? I hope it is now strong enough to chlenge fajarhomo?

Peaceyw:
Wow, this musa has really tried a lot, been a slave for so long, maltreated and stuff. His mind is very strong.