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SmartestPopQUEEN:
well, for all our sake's, he had better be kidding....... Tomorrow is our's ßoss. [size=30] Refiner all tha Way[/size]

You just too correct. .

Rukkydelta:
Boss I meant this promise

Vote tomorrow den send me your email.

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"Here's it sir," the barman finally returned with a beer bottle and a glass.

Slimmy nodded at the barman as he placed the bottle of beer and the glass cup on the table, the barman opened the bottle of beer and went back to his position. Slimmy filled the glass cup with beer and then gulped it all at once, he did the same thing the second time and the bottle was empty, he beckoned the barman to bring another bottle of beer. He finished the beer in no time and ordered for another bottle again, the process continued until he began to feel tipsy.

"Now is the time" Slimmy said to himself and called on the barman, settled his bill and then proceeded outside after replying some guys hailing him in the bar. He got inside his car still feeling tipsy, he switched on the engine and waited for few minutes without moving the car, he killed the engine and still stayed fixed in the car, after thinking for a while he kick started the car again and then drove off.

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"Don't tell me Hadijat still hasn't opened the door since she locked herself up" Rofiat asked Halimat who was busy preparing something in the kitchen.

"Open keh? Noo, she isn't even replying me anymore" Halimat replied. Rofiat didn't bother replying before she walked out of the kitchen and proceeded to Hadijat's room.

"Hadijat open this door right now" Rofiat ordered as she kept on banging the door to Hadijat's room, she waited still at the door as she got no response from Hadijat. 

"If you don't open this door right this minute, I will break down this f**king door" Rofiat barked. Hadijat opened the door immediately and then ran back to her bed sinking her face in a pillow, Rofiat followed after her.

"Now what's wrong with my favourite cousin?" Rofiat asked in a much calmer tone as she forced the pillow from beneath Hadijat's face "Talk to me dear"

"I fell in love with the wrong person" Hadijat sobbing.

"Awwwn, that's really bad my dear but how can you be so sure that the person you are in love with is the wrong person"

"I don't think he loves me back, I don't think he is even capable of loving a lady the right way"

"Wait,  who is this person you are talking about" Rofiat asked.

"Promise me you won't get angry if I tell you"

"I cross my heart" Rofiat made the crucifix sign.

"It's Slimmy"

"Slimmy? " Rofiat and Halimat who had been eavesdropping at the door exclaimed.

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Oj stayed put in his car after parking his car right beside Da Royalz Supermarket, he decided to stay inside the car in order to drink more from the bottle of whiskey he was holding onto, after taking some few more gulps he exited the car and walked into the supermarket half staggering. He surveyed the supermarket and spotted the Gifts and Cards section, he then walked towards the gifts and card section, just as he was about searching for the card to buy he sighted someone that looked familiar. He was a bit shocked when turned around and saw the person's face

"Slimmy... How far" Oj hailed.

"I dey, how far na" Slimmy extended his hands and they exchanged handshake.

"I dey okay"

"Correct, stay safe"

"Safe" Oj walked away and picked a flower and a card while Slimmy walked towards the cashier and paid for the card and flower he bought.

"Thanks" the cashier greeted Slimmy for the tip he gave her "Next person please" she announced after Slimmy walked out of the supermarket.

"Woow, what a coincidence" The cashier expressed her surprise as Oj placed the items he purchased on the table. 

"Excuse me," said Oj.

"Ohh am sorry, it's just that the guy that just left bought the same card" the cashier explained.

"You mean he bought an 'I'm sorry' card also?"

"Yes he did" The cashier stretched the receipt and balance to Oj.

"I see" Oj said as he received the receipt from the cashier "Keep the change". 

"Ohh thanks" the cashier said as Oj walked out of the supermarket.

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"How on earth will you fall in love with Slimmy?" Rofiat asked as she jerked on to her feet.

"You promised not to be mad remember" Hadijat spoke calmly.

"I did but this is just not right my dear, Slimmy is not the right one for you"

"I know right and that's why I told you am in love with the wrong person," Hadijat now crying again.

"Halimat don't just stand there, come and talk your cousin out of this crazy love she is having for the leader of a fraternity." 

"How can I do that when am in love with Oj who is also the leader of a fraternity?" Halimat replied as she ran to the living room and started crying.

"Ohhh Jeez, just what I needed" Rofiat followed Halimat to the living room, Hadijat also followed suit.

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Just as Slimmy was about to get down from his car, he saw through the rear mirrors that another car just pulled over right behind him, he recognised the car to be one of White Tiger's. He exited his car and approached OJ's car.

"Oj are you following me around or what?" Slimmy asked.

"Hello again Slimmy" Oj replied after gulping down his whiskey "Am here to see someone I love menh" Oj offered Slimmy the bottle of whiskey.

"Ohh woow, that makes the two of us then". Slimmy gulped down the whiskey too. "Wait, I hope we are not here for the same lady"

"I don't know about that menh, I am here for Halimat"

"Ohh I am here for Hadijat"

"Ohh great, very great. Let's go in together then" Oj suggested.

"Cool, let me just get the stuffs I bought and then we go inside" Slimmy rushed to his car, fetched the flower and card he bought and then walked back to Oj who was already standing outside his car.

"Let's roll then" Slimmy.

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"Rofiat, I am sure you won't understand what we are going through right now, you won't know how it feels to love the wrong man." Halimat still sobbing.

"And how can you be so sure of that, it happened to me before?" Rofiat replied.

"And you never told us about it" Hadijat questioned but couldn't get a reply before someone started knocking at the door.

"You guys expecting anyone?" Rofiat asked.

"Nooo" Halimat and Hadijat chorused.

Rofiat stood up and walked to the door, she opened the door while Halimat and Hadijat stared at the entrance to see who was knocking. Rofiat opened the door and was faced with two guys covering their faces with a greeting card that has "I'm sorry" inscribed on them. Halimat and Hadijat both walked to the door to see what was happening only to see the 'i'm sorry' card too, Gradually the cards were lowered revealing the faces of the holders.

"Slimmy" "Oj" Hadijat and Halimat screamed simultaneously.
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Chapter 17B is available here http://www.youngicee.com/2016/06/a-new-creation-chapter-17b.html






Y'all should remember to help me vote Refiner as Miss Nairaland tomorrow as tomorrow is the grand finale. Those that voted the last time got their Pdf oo, so it's your turn to collect your own A NEW CREATION complete story Pdf.

SmartestPopQUEEN:
Geeeeez......,.. Hey nerd, pls what tha fvck is your problem? I really dnt know how to reply this height of insolence, ....did i offend yhu with my post? Pls help me to understand ur plight. Donkross, your attention is needed here.

Aeontk:
and please watch your tongue i dnt take such insults lightly

Queen and Aeontk you guys should slow down. Queen I guess the poor dude was just joking, right Aeontk? We good yeah?



SmartestPopQUEEN of life.... How we dey do tomorrow na?

Rukkydelta:
Sure and you'll send me the last episode of your story A NEW CREATION cos I'm a silent reader

Come to New creation thread, lets not disturb this fine thread


**Modified***


Na Sageez thread sef, let's disturb joor .

Which last episode you dey talk ooh

Rukkydelta:
Abandoned story ?

Abandoned kwaa. Noo.. My guy will come and continue soon. Rukkydelta long time fah. Kan help me vote for Refiner tomorrow ooh.

Flakkydagirl:
Na God be boss o
I no fit to banish una o
I no reach to do that sir.
I just didn't want the thread to turn to a campaign ground ni sir.
Respect.

Lool. Okay okay I won't turn it into a campaign ground . In fact reserve a seat for me in vip, I am coming to read dz story after elections



Buh u sef endeavour to vote for Refiner, I will mention you tomorrow so you can vote *WeavesHotSlap n RunsAway***

Flakkydagirl:
Cc:Sageez
Cc:Donkross...please don't derail this thread.Thanks.

Boss Boss. No vex for me abeg. Make I dey go as you don banish me from your thread

Sageez:
big bro, i didn't. i have written 2 episodes, i want to make it longer than the previous. but i go update this weekend. i think say you no observe. lol

I dey observe you with corner eye na



Baba which one na, I want make you help me vote for Refiner as Miss Nairaland tomorrow abeg. I go tag you for one thread tomorrow to tell you how to go about it. You in bro?

Olajhidey22:
You're good bro! Am in, though i have little knowledge about the subject matter, but i believe that shouldn't be a barrier.. Feel free to tag me

Gracias bruh.

Hawlahscho:
Oya OP. I don vote.


hawlahscho@gmail.com

Baba voting no dey today, you will help me vote tomorrow n den u get your reward.

tripletees1:
Pls... How can I vote??

Bros u r not eligible to vote .

Olajhidey22:
*Two Hands Raised Up* I guess you are right, can't really figure where i scrapped the list from. Probably you're right!....Sincere apologies for not seeking your permission before-hand

Lool no wahala baba na normal thing . Nice story you got going, I will make sure I settle down n read today. Please bruh, I will be needing you to help me vote for Refiner to be miss nairaland on Saturday. If you in den I will tag you in a post on saturday to let you know how to go about the voting. You in?

Olajhidey22:
Roaster Call

Heem..ah
DandyP..earl
Bello..vers
Sage..ez
Afz909..5
Y..sadiq
DVMtu..ppence
Calm..dove
Domi..do
Magg..ielovely
Rukkyde..lta
Damy..em
Mu..tdam
Olaxt..ra
Das.lad
M00..3
Ern..ie98
Kingp..hillip
Youngs..eraph
Eme..rald18 J..hybho
Fi..yah
Chinwezdas..ilva
Jsh..arp
Ada..jiboyy
Ideatopri..nce18
Deesqua..re01
Ni..daxj
Snowa..ngel
Gbe..ns2000
Sp..dazzy
Matt..kent
Dim..ssy
Hefelo..ve
I..yoha240

Bros na me create dz roaster, I go sue you cos u no tell me before you use am

Calmdove:
present.... hope am nt late?

Calmdove my former former girlfriend

SPDAZZY:
Présent

SPDAZZY oooh



Let me be brief so I won't derail the thread. Please friend I want you to help me vote for Refiner as Miss Nairaland Tomorrow, I will mention you in a thread tomorrow to tell you how to go about the voting. You cool with it yeah?

Sageez:
lol! but it is not yet a year. waiting for your update dear

you dey wait for person update. Why did you abandon our story

DandyPearl:
Dear AudreyTimms,

The fact that you're consistent, You don't get angry and you always keep we your readers in mind are those qualities I admire most in you. In less than six months you started a story and you finished it. Now, that's what we call writing. You're such a rare gem and I love and adore you for that.

Letting Go....Hmmmm! It's a story that fun-filled and with deep twisted lessons. Learnt so much from the piece and I pray that your source of inspiration never run dry!(Amen).

I can't wait to read the next story. Its also gonn be a promising story just like this.

Hope to meet you one day.
Love you like Ice-Cream.
Ciao!.

Weldone so you left me at home, you are now chasing after another guy abi. Issova between us.

heemah:
Omg!!! What happened?

Heemah ooooooooh

Bobolayefa:
Hmmm... great story... now let's see ummm... the two brothers will have an issue definitely because of Hadijat and I think it'll have an effect on the arch-angels... I also have this feeling that the next clash between the 2 groups will connect with one or both of those ladies.. inevitable though.. Hmmm... waiting.... woman sha

Women.. na problem dem be buh we no fit do without them

SmartestPopQUEEN:
alright boss. Saturday it is then. I will make sure i wake up as early as 12am, speak to Jah On this voting issue, sleep again, wake up again, and when it's 10'oclock, i will walk down to tha Voting centre with my Voter's card and Residence permit to Vote for tha REFINER. Hope my vote counts this time around.

Bring your readers along ooh.

SmartestPopQUEEN:
i voted yestday, around 12pm buh mha Post was'nt up to 300 by then, Refiner later P'm me that i need to get 15more posts before my Vote can be Valid. So...i did that, and i voted again, that was around 5,30pm upwards. Hope my vote was counted? Mr ßoss

Am not sure dearie but Saturday is the main focus now. *inFalzvoice* Plaiz j'ur Focuz

mofy1:
Lolly2020@yahooo.com. Donkross Oya fulfull ur part of the deal cos av done mine.

Which part, you voted this morning joor . Voting closed yesterday and moreover you have less than 300 posts. For your vote to be eligible you must have more than 300 posts.


Guys please epp me vote on Saturday, those people that voted yesterday are enjoying their reward now. If you help me vote on Saturday then you will get your PDF too ..........


N:B.. Remember you must have above 300 posts before your votes can be valid. So if your posts is less than 300 posts then you can boost your post between now and Saturday.


Thanks folkz

SmartestPopQUEEN:
Tara, please, am begging on behalf of the whole Nigerian's, dont kill our Senator in a hurry, kill him slowly and painfully. Thanks.

Ah see you my paddy.... Thanks for everything neh.