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LiteratureRe: Untitled Fiction by dramaticspeak(m): 12:27pm On Jul 13, 2012
Enoquin: Hmm...you've got an okay story but you need to flesh it out. I am sorry to say that the suspense is too light, the only surprise I had was that Michael was still alive.
When writing on scenes that have to with specialty, it will do if you research a bit so that you don't use common words...for example, memory loss could easily have been 'temporary amnesia'; a gun should be given a name...a glock, a smith...there are many kinds of guns so we should know which one.
I also noticed your switch with tenses in the first few installments...glad you worked on them. Please no short codes abeg as Efe said write your story offline so that you can write correctly. 'I type with my phone' is no excuse....I have typed more than 5 short stories with my phone...typed 3 'ghost written' articles for publication on my phone when my laptop went brain dead...so your's is not an excuse.
Join other sites that encourage and constructively criticize writers...you will be glad you did.
Finally, the road of a writer is often a lonely one and has no vacation. Every experience is needed...your observatory skills should be upped...that is be aware of your environment more...so that when you write, it seems more real.
Kudos!
she Is typIng tru her fone so she cant type in full
CelebritiesHappy 78th Birthday To A Great Icon, Prof Wole Soyinka by dramaticspeak(op): 11:23am On Jul 13, 2012
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The author, poet, playwright and Nobel Prize winner was born 13th July 1934. There's a lecture at the Muson Centre today to mark his 78th birthday. Wishing him many more happy years ahead!
CelebritiesLaugh Small Nairalanders by dramaticspeak(op): 12:09am On Jul 13, 2012
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When I first saw this funny NYSC girl's picture on the internet, I almost killed myself with laugh!

See the funny questions that go with the picture below:
Is this skirt? Can dis be skirt? Who sew this skirt? Hmmm... Jehova Witness and Deeper Life worshippers will not kill person with laugh!!! Is this really skirt? Can dis be called skirt?
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Internet pranksters Planet Hiltron casting photoshop wand of The Kardashians & Kanye West piling on the pounds in frumpy portrait...relishing their ballooned bodies…
LiteratureRe: Untitled Fiction by dramaticspeak(m): 10:14pm On Jul 12, 2012
Gentiejag: We did it!!!....yes people!...we made the front page....For everyone who has encouraged me...God bless you.
Thank you
i promise not to disappoint you.
if it hadn't made d frontpage i would have been suprised.it would b a priviledge if i get to chat wit some1 lyk y.fb:hansel praise
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EducationRe: Uniben 2012/2013 Session Admission Thread by dramaticspeak(m): 6:02pm On Jul 12, 2012
chocofalls: good evening peeps
good evening
CelebritiesIllrymz Feat. Femi Kuti – Teacher Teacher (official Video). by dramaticspeak(op): 2:57pm On Jul 12, 2012
CelebritiesRita Dominic Turns 37 Today by dramaticspeak(op): 12:29pm On Jul 12, 2012
CelebritiesOlu Jacobs Turns 70 Today! by dramaticspeak(op): 2:52pm On Jul 11, 2012
Car TalkHow Do Pple Drive In Lagos Sef? by dramaticspeak(op): 9:27am On Jul 11, 2012
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The driver of this black Toyota Hilux van loaded with prepaid meters and cable was said to have lost control of the vehicle at about 9:30am while making a u-turn which resulted in this multiple crash on Tuesday on Obafemi Awolowo Way, Ikeja, Lagos.This is more like what you see in movies.... anyway, I hear no life was lost.
EducationRe: Uniben 2012/2013 Session Admission Thread by dramaticspeak(m): 9:25am On Jul 11, 2012
phyllix: ---lol..who re u any way?*raised eyebrow*
some1 you should look out 4
EducationRe: Uniben 2012/2013 Session Admission Thread by dramaticspeak(m): 10:48pm On Jul 10, 2012
phyllix: Gudnite peeps...dun let d bed bugs bite..
nyt.drm of me
EducationRe: Uniben 2012/2013 Session Admission Thread by dramaticspeak(m): 10:34pm On Jul 09, 2012
Gwekzy: No but 7TH batch is out
gy! grin
EducationRe: Uniben 2012/2013 Session Admission Thread by dramaticspeak(m): 10:23pm On Jul 09, 2012
Is The First Batch Out?
TV/MoviesNigeria Policemen Gets UN Medals For Good Conduct by dramaticspeak(op): 6:50pm On Jul 09, 2012
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The United Nations Mission in South Sudan has presented special United Nations, UN, medals to 34 Nigerian police officers for their exceptional performance in the discharge of their assigned roles in the troubled country.

The award recipients, who included three women and 31 men, are serving in the UN peace-keeping mission in the troubled South Sudan.

Decorating the officers with their medals, the Special Representatives of the Secretary General, SRSG, Mrs. Hilda Johnson, described the honour as hard earned, considering the enormous commitment and sacrifices the officers made in their efforts towards enthroning the rule of law in the newly independent state.

On his part, Nigeria's Inspector General of Police, Mohamed Abubakar, commended the officers for their good conduct, advising them not to deviate from the core values of discipline, professionalism, selflessness and dedication to duties.
TV/Movies3rd Mainland Bridge Repairs Update: Opeifa Gives Alternative Routes by dramaticspeak(op): 8:14pm On Jul 08, 2012
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Diversion Points;
1. University of Lagos Waterfront (towards Lagos)
2. Oworonshoki Interchange (towards Lagos)
3. Adeniji Adele Interchange (towards Oworonshoki/Toll Gate)
Daily Diversion Periods; Click to know the rest...
A. 12 Midnight to 12 noon
1. Vehicles approaching from Oworonshoki and Ikeja/Toll gate/Ikorodu Road end of the Bridge will have unhindered access to the bridge towards Lagos Island.

2. Vehicles from the Lagos end to the bridge (from Obalende, Ikoyi, Victoria Island, Lekki, etc.) will be diverted from the Third Mainland Bridge at Adeniji Adele Interchange towards Carter Bridge to link Iddo interchange.
From Iddo to connect Ikeja, Ojota, Ketu, Ikorodu, Agege, Lagos Ibadan Expressway, Agege, Alimosho, Oshodi, Abule Egba etc. via;

a. Herbert Macaulay Road to Jibowu to Ikorodu Road and on....

b. Herbert Macaulay Road to Jibowu to Agege Motor Road to Oshodi and on....

c. Eko Bridge to Funsho Williams Avenue to Ikorodu Road and on....

d. Eko Bridge to Funsho Williams Avenue to Agege Motor Road to Oshodi and on....

e. Ijora to Apapa to Apapa Oshodi Express Way to Oshodi and on....

B. 12 noon to 12 Midnight

1. Vehicles approaching from Oworonshoki and Ikeja/Toll gate/Ikorodu Road end of the Bridge will be diverted at Oworonshoki Interchange.

Through the Oworonshoki Expressway to

a. Ikorodu Road (via Anthony interchange) to Funsho Williams Avenue to Eko Bridge and on...

b. Agege Motor Road (via Oshodi Interchange) to Moshalasi to Jibowu to Muritala Mohamed's way to Iddo and on...

c. Agege Motor Road (via Oshodi Interchange) to Moshalasi to Funsho Williams Avenue to Eko Bridge and on....

d. Apapa Oshodi Express road to Mile 2 and on........

2. Vehicles approaching from the Lagos Island end to the bridge (from Obalende, Ikoyi, Victoria Island, Lekki, etc.) will have unhindered access to use the Third Mainland Bridge.
AdvertsNEED AN MC? 4 Any Event Or Party by dramaticspeak(op): 3:24pm On Jul 06, 2012
GOT AN EVENT?

Christianity EtcRe: Rev. Chris Okotie’s Love Child Expose? Woman Claims 3 Abortions For Him by dramaticspeak(m): 1:30pm On Jul 04, 2012
fat lie
CelebritiesRe: Beyonce Leaving Jayz For Dbanj by dramaticspeak(m): 1:14pm On Jul 04, 2012
gess d pblser wants to rn bank rpt
CelebritiesSee What Happens In Churches In Abuja by dramaticspeak(op): 11:23pm On Jul 03, 2012
FashionMakeup Artists Lets Meet Here by dramaticspeak(op): 7:59am On Jun 28, 2012
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BusinessRe: If You Need Someone To Setup Or Manage Your Blog by dramaticspeak(op): 10:56pm On Jun 27, 2012
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EducationRe: Uniben 2012/2013 Session Admission Thread by dramaticspeak(m): 10:53pm On Jun 27, 2012
any lawyer ere?

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