kr0ne:
ElymaxCray, mehn, I like the simple yet effective method u used in that delivery. Everything was on point. Am I the only one who thinks you got the best rhymes? Kudos, man!

hehe... The least i did was 5syllables.. The highest was 9syllables.....
I wanted that verse to be on a theme of this festive period all through...
But chai, i just dey busy like mad since monday(when i thought i'd start scripting for this)...
Though i started with the theme, but i had to branch n rush it in one hour n made sure its D0PE...
You'll notice that my verse is just like six bars...

Even some crazy ideas i had,, i couldnt use them cos of time....
I be wan end kim career before.

btw.... I don laugh tire when i read ur verse...

You said something like
"i'm like giyazz, i refuse to smile"... Hahahahaha

nd "i snatched the belt from bis, reason why he's been sagging"
lololol

i don die!

Reyginus:
I shocked! Make we enjoy am finish for here before them carry the remnant go frontpage.. Lol.

lolololol

Emaprince:
I think both verses are the same now

thnx.... It looks good now....

Reyginus:
Yeah. You are right. The verse looks different and longer now. I wanted to dismiss it for a joke when I first saw it but I don't want any trouble..

i couldnt have written something that short. Haba.
Hopefully emaprince will make all the verses much more better thus easing comprehention of the bars(rhymes, mets, punches nd so on).....



Mukina2 never see that thread?
She used to be interested in this section

Emaprince:
Darkrebel,if you haven't changed your password,I can help you with the editing of verses..e.g,elymaxcray's verse..what you think?

hmm... Nice. Thnks.

Reyginus:
Lol. You don see am na. Make I start to dey send you small small incase you blow.

you said i was'nt rhyming?...
Go check again, maybe you read the verse when it wasnt complete...
Check it out again...


Darkrebel, i know u're stressed, but pls kindly help me arrange n straighten those lines breaking away.... Thanks..

Darkrebel:


do what with a computer? am on mobile now

abeg my verse is very scattered.. More like the lines were breaking...
Regenius even thought i was'nt rhyming....
Please help me straighten them like this:

MAX!
I bring y'all my bars-n-Verse with-the- flavour/ of this festive seas'n/ this vet's delivery/ marks-the-birth-of-a-major/ i came in the 'rapworld', acted-first-with-a-favour/ to resque hip/ so best believe/ niggas call me their lord and-they-personal-saviour/
ah dey feel like Bros J/ but i no need 'fore runner'! My marque-made speeds on broadway/ i no dey die for 'sin', ah take leads in tough 'plays'/
actor! Ah slay gees with blunt blades/ ah draw swords/ ta draw blood/ ...... 'hudsons' had paid me for portraits/
i'm on a nuking spree, with bombs i fire freaks/ i screw these gees with stunts n power kicks/
i could blind a whole family tree n make a 'new tree see'... It's not a Powder drink/
cos i'm good n evil/ with motives that are huge n little/
i'm the bad devil/ who hacked heaven/ n spanked seven/ arch angels/
nd God had that viewed as legal/
i jail gods when i create d0pe writtens within a sec/ poisedon lives in ma pen/ So it's easy to flow when i'm scripting ma text/
Now, hos want my kid, hoping to be in ma bed/ but you asexual, you hope to birth your own/ i get your chick laid with my scopes n flirts at home/ while you 'self servicing' like a pope in church alone/
you hating cos i broke n scourged your bone/ yeah i've handled many men/ mostly haters, n gathered several
friend/ but when they betray, stab me nd pretend/ i'm nice, max is caring, mhen/ i drown them in a bore hole.... So it shall be WELL with them/
i've battled ill blokes/ strangled sick folks/ yet y'all argue to know who's cracking with coke?/
you know who's bars bring the smoke/ cos when i'm done writing, you like, damn! 'Man you script' d0pe//


#elymax-cray


thanks...

Darkrebel:
Elymaxcray your full verse has been posted ...

okay cool, thanks....

Darkrebel:


dude don't command me... if you had posted on time, you would have known since...am correcting and arranging now..plus I checked my mail and found nothing

so i should start crying before you'd correct the mistake?
Hav'nt i pleaded with you before?

I have sent it upto ten times to your email...
However if you cant see the complete verse. Delete the one you posted in that thread....

But i implore you check ur mail one last time... Thanks...

Darkrebel:
who's moving that stuff to frontpage before it gets derailed ...

guy complete my verse na... Smh...
Nd i thought i posted last

Darkrebel:



I have checked my mail now..you haven't sent it yet

smh... I have sent it again, just now...

Darkrebel:


you are just giving me stress....

sorry man... But how could i send something that short delibrately?

pls check ur mail n modify it... Thanks..

Lmfao... Darkrebel, pls my verse aint complete at all...

Maybe i made the mistake while rushing to send it...

Pls check your mail i'm sending it again...

Descent verse from both..

MVGT = jigsaw!

Darkrebel, the match's ended.

obainojazz:
lol..I be one of d top for my dept..o..
.
.well I spring up awesome ideas always...I know most of una no reason reach dat side

lololol... For ya mind now you be albert einstein.

I second your idea though

LooNat11kk:
Where una cypher? I thought it was dropping today?

wey ur i.v?

Darkrebel:


seen

okay good. You see it's very brief ...
I for pull no show sef cos i just dey busy with very important stuffs...
But i just decided to put down a few of the things i had conjured.


I can't wait to see y'all verses though... ... This should be fun.

Darkrebel?

I've been really busy lately. I don't have time for all this time wasting...
You guys should always endeavour to stick to time abeg..
You can drop your verses.
KR0NE holla @ fyh..

Darkrebel:
elymaxcray I have not seen your message ...

you sure?
check your box again ...

Darkrebel:


mykoolswags@yahoo.com

whether its short or long, it doesn't matter..its not a battle

aiit....

Darkrebel:



nahhh .it won't be disjointed.. it would follow each other .. and its well arranged...
and no..likes don't mean anything... they would have to state their best three verses when they comment ...


lemme say.... all the verses are very funny ....

abeg your email again. My verse gon be shot though.

teddybiyasi:


barbiekills95

i like ur email I.D

Darkrebel:
Besides teddybiyasi, I never got any alert from my phone that you sent a message to my e-mail. You had better cross-check....once its 12am,its over

oboy see strictness!
Darkrebel, chill abeg...
The thread won't be out till about 8pm tomorrow, right?
Pls i will send mine by 4pm tomorrow..
I've been really busy, i thought i could squeeze out time yesterday n today, but i didnt get enough time for this...
Nd now, i just want to relax, i can't stress my brain.

Darkrebel:


Are you hearing yourself? Orange and door hinge are not perfect rhymes but near rhymes... People used to believe orange was the only English word that didnt rhyme with anything..Eminem said it In a radio interview that he wonders why people say so when there are many close rhymes... He mentioned door hinge foreign. E.t.c .....

Go figure

i never say what i don't know. The 'a' in ORaNGE is prounced 'e'!
Hence orange rhymes with door hinge.. Not even slanted

Darkrebel:


I use both...as long as my message is passed across... and slant rhymes gives you more room to rhyme... Eminem uses a lot of slant rhymes...
without slant rhymes--Orange won't rhyme with anything -- but near rhymes makes it possible to rhyme Orange with Door Hinge ...

uhm. orange n door hinge are perfect rhymes....

Orange = Or-rinj

you like assuming that eminem forces his rhymes...
He doesn't! He uses the actual pronunciation of the words which most people neglect.
Nd that makes him unique.

As for me, i quit slant rhyming a long time ago... It's actually easier for me being myself n rhyming the words as they should sound even though most people are not used to that sound...

****closed*****

both get no point for this tie.....

Oboy i just dey occupied since....

When is the deadline... Tomorrow right?
Cos my verse is rough.. I need to smoothen it like an electric iron!

IceDaNemesis:
Smh see teddy verse. I no go lie e pain me say I no Deγ this cypher and e go pain me more if anybody drop wack shiIt for the cypher. I go troll that person life. #justsaying

kim has told you to take his place.
Start writing.

Heywhizzy:
Warning shots at Mik

I don't care about ya ranking/ if not I would I've switched a long time ago to Jamaican/ bitches can't understand my format even if they ave PhD in accounting/ cos I leave u looking for d formula like members of mavin dynasty/ I'm example of alive nd "die na mik"/ I switch style at ease/ ur only achievement is balancing cup on your a$$/ so I can balance my cops on your a$$/ let them shoot d sh1t out of ya/ you need to be out of this world fast/ don't think you're special,you are an odd brat/ you are wack..call it data,cos that's d raw fact/ omo, u don suffer/ u've been fukked all your life even b4 you dey born/ lol,dat means u're flowerlesss like a moss/ na me dey run tinz from Warri,Benin to Lagos/ I no send u message,u no fit dey my mail box/ u wan be mod forever..u can never be fruitful/ except u born pikin wey abnormal..surely him brain go dudu/ no be say na mouth nd no be juju/ I gat talent pass Kim,niggaz be truthful/... errbody don see you finish sorta like your leaked se.x. tape/ so it's easy for anyone to disrespect,gay/ all your flows dey watery..you dey menstrute?/ it's clear for real men to see like an estate/ it's jes a freestyle/ get off me..imma leave your face with blisters/ u can't rate me high cos I don't do the b1tch style/ imma head to d future,punch u during your honeymoon, so all u see would be star/

quit wordplay for now, biko. Weytin be 'die na mik'?....
You have the ideas but you don't know how to execute them yet.
I suggest you read battle archives of d0pies who like toy use wordplays alot.

If i were you i'd play it like this...

"like . . . (compare it to something dynamic) I will make this diner meek when i place my mac in his mouth"

Mr man this thread aint ur photo album, you know?
Teddy, you too gree for this guy na... No let am flood here with all the pix he's ever taken!