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dj5naira:
We pop stars & vets' seed/ think u a flop a.rse than rare breed/
Prove to us you're so sick dude, drop bars n let's read/

you a dumb a.rse that flex sh1t/
#5, a poor cash ah spend quick/
even kids 'handle #5' more than this vets did/
doubting that is impossible like toy cars on jet's speed/

If ibime is not taking part, me too no do be that o. ...
So coogar is out too? Smh.. You mean to tell me that you can't spit ur bars of hand after a long time of penning them? ... Out of 800 you should still have at least a hundred in ur head.
I know you're joking, you will post ur verse

coogar:
it's not your fault....
i have completely forgotten you exist until the last few hours. you shall feel my wrath in the coming days, most definitely!



i lost 800 bars on my phone...
the loss is irredeemable. i have not completely recovered from the hangover. as of this time, i have nothing for the cypher. maybe i will let lagunna or pein take my place.

joker.

I here say vacancy dey LAWMA for lag...
They need someone to recycle the wastes collected....

Justsayingtho.

Instead of some niggas wasting off talents here that's an opportunity to get real doe by using that 'recycling' ability.

Hehehe.
Coogar, give us a preview of what to expect na.
I know ur verse will be bloody! No time for flexing

ZachHugo:
Zach...

It Goes,

To Every Nigga I see/ You Don't Go around and ChaLenge A Nigga Like Me/ Am Sweetened Like Some Sugar Ice Tea/But If I Get Bitter, I'd Cut an Arm Off Like The Francis Butcher ....Mikey!!/

I'm The Hiphop's Maintenance/Rhymes Finisher, But I ReFuse To Display My Cadence/ A Nigga Does the Impossible. . . Like Rhyme 1 Syllable. . . And Says He's showing Greatness/ I'd Beat Him TiLL He Shows Remorse For His Wrong Doings Like CathoLic Boys, I Mean Penance!!!/

Join Minds With Minds, And Thoughts BareLy merged/ I Scare The Bleep Outta Them Like A DeadLy Scourge/ Your Bit.ch Too Fine, I'm Getting That Sex.uaL Urge/ Her Pu.ssy Too Dope And Bushy, Like The Northern Weed. . .Hairy Spurge/

I've Come With Macks/ Thirty-eights and Cannons, To Leave Niggas With Marks/But I Won't use These Weapons on These Wacks/My "Bitches" Do The Smack/Cos Like a Farmer. . I'd Use My "Hoes" To Attack/

Speak the Truth. Like Drake and Chainz No Lies/Every Nigga Wants a Piece Of Me!! But ItS No Slice/aLways Getting the Digits When ah Throw Dice/ Choke A Nigga To Death With a Bowtie/ Then Cut Their "Veins", And Stop Their Heart"Beat", Thats How Their Flow Dies/

Let Me Flow a Sixth/ A Magician With My "Hatricks" and No Assists/ am Good At This/ Am always on PatroL. . .Like PoLice/ Looking For Criminals To Be-head, Like Travis/

doooope!... Staaart practicing multis.

Uhm, is ibime taking part in this cypher?

Limerick:
Darkrebel, i've sent my verse to mykoolswag@yahoo.com. Check it

opener

teddybiyasi:
I hope we ain't aiming gun at the same nigga

haaa. It's a big problem if we aiming the same animal...
I'm greedy, i don't share my prey.
Find food somewhere else, biko.

teddybiyasi:
warming up

...I'm so hot even the sun bow.......

hw far
give us a preview of what to expect na.
i see you're already displaying...

As for me, this is an opportunity for me to end someone's career in front of everyone.

Geoxpress:
Lmao, that was sharp sharp somethin,btw wats ur name on fb?

elymax cray!... Tho i aint that active...

I don't have time for all this social sites for now...
Na only this rapbattles dey make me come on NL..

coogar:
what happened to your former moniker? did kim ban you too?

he behaves like a 6years old little girl...
His mates are giving out sack letters in high positions in real life. He is here banning accounts. Lol.

You thought i was joking?
he placed a ban on that account till christmas day just cos i exposed him of being the greatest recycler ever!
A line which i later brought a clear proof to with this moniker!

Emaprince:
how much am I getting upfront?...I'm feeling like cassidy right now!

you're getting VERY much whooping!

Call out emaprince!

Ksslib's photo nd this one are the best so far.
i like this obaino's concept.. The fire in the atmosphere makes sense.

Geoxpress, na for ur house you snap that pix?
Una dey try o.
I recommend pit latrine for u since water closets dont have the capacity to contain ur feaces.

ZachHugo:
Debuchy Not DeBucci

are you a kim wannabee?

teddybiyasi:
you & coogar too get mouth I swear

800bars got deleted lmao

coogar must be a joker

teddy, why would i lie to you?
Dark informed us about the cypher two weeks ago.
I started forming ideas in my head.10bars/day
then i put everything down today.

teddybiyasi:
just penning my 3rd bar

bro

i just finished penning my 99th bar. Once it's up to a hundred, i'll select the best twelve .
Need any help? I'm feeling generous .

teddybiyasi:
preview

the way i go about this beam..lord knows this gunner's brute..../...so much Mac loaded in all my bars & still not i know not who I'm gonna shot


wack

watsup

nd tha land hath fallen to wackdorm.



There bushy/debucci... Hahahahahaa

I'mma do something off the top with beat soon..
Y'all anticipate...

Lwkmd

Darkrebel:
finally done...


limerick ..Mikuz and all of you..--my freestyle rap--off the top ...the one I did yesterday got corrupted so I just did this one now..
download with this link-

http://www.datafilehost.com/d/516b2e6a

....
"I hold a sponge when i'm whatching a soap opera"... Hahaha

if this audio was truly of the cuff, you're good!

He said like turtles, i'm six legged n so dread/ This guy must be 'high', for letting out those mets/
so when i'm extending my blows, bet/ i'mma beat DJ low... Y'all gon think i hate jeniffer lopez/

Title = Karma!

Description = just make sure you're talking about karma...


Criteria = tourney rules!

Deadline is THURSDAY THE 18th OF DECEMBER. 4pm prompt!

kk.thnx

Creativity-- 2 points - rapacme

Flow- - 1 point - rapacme

Imagery- - 2 points - rapacme ("an invisible slap".. Hahaha .. This guy don too watch naija home videos)

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points - rapacme

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - sossiq

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- rapacme

Vocabulary-- 2points - sossiq

Emotion - - 2 points - sossiq

9- 8

MVGT = rapacme

Or better still, tag me there.

Pls i'm sorry for my incompetence in this tourney... Sossiq, no vex.
But you should blame kim, not me...
I ain't following those topics with this account. It's hard finding the threads with the little time i have.
Kr0ne pls post the link to the group stage's thread..

Lets have INKBLOOD VS SOSSIQDUDE....

Should i pop the thread?

Teddy got METS. Bruce got flow n vocab. Aoc tie!
Very nice from both!

Based on the crits,
MVGT : bruce

tho i dont like that VOCAB CRIt...
Music is a universal language.
So far as one is able to get the message across to one's audience, it's okay by me.
I don't believe in using uncommon words before producing a good written. Tho i'm speaking from the HIpHOP ANGLE...
If this was just a topical tourney, i wouldnt even bother about the vocab crit.
But since it's kyna hip n poetry combined(though what i've seen so far is mostly poetry), i guess the crit stands.
Cos i don't think one should speak anyhow when it comes to poetry. But then too much grammar takes away that hip flave! Aaarrgghh!
Thank God for the rhymes crit tho.

But for this match, you guys were able to balance the two(poetry n rap).
Bruce was very sick with the flow, damn!
I loved teddy's 'silver watch n golden time' line.
Tho you guys didnt write up to the specified bars expected, this is my best match in this tourney so far!