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AudreyTimms: Tanx dear. Dt rily got 2me. My agent's beef is cos dis is one of my strongest. My fear of taking it 2 nollywood is lyk u said, hvin it watered down bt I've heard he who owns d money 4d production gets 2 cal d shot and my hubby said he's ready 2 sponsor it. I'l tink abt it sha. Tanx again

Nollywood!? No way! U will hate urself 4 doing it,they will not only water it down they will kill d suspense. Yes ur story is great hv it properly reviewed n put in hard copy,take it anywhere except 2 Nollywood.

I love ur creativeness in writing. U can go places with this. Keep it up

Okinjay: Looool....I don wake since sef although I no go mind another update to clear my eyes sha. And I be HE oo,not SHE

ooo abeg no vex o. But u knw say ladies make sense die,i wan ask o, u no go like 2 b woman? Lol

Okinjay! Okinjay! U don wake? Abi this update 2 short 2 wake u?
Audrey love, she don open eye small am sure more will get her on her feet. So mooooooooore!

Okinjay: Na correct update fii revive me like this ooo..*goes back to faint mode*

ahhhhhhh! Sis Audrey we r talking abt a life here, Okinjay just fainted wont u do smthing abt it now now now8-). Na only update fit wake n i don dey pour am water since. D people wey dey sell d water sef com say na only u fit wake am. Oya update fast fast.:*

Raaaaaayyyyyymmooooonnnddd!!! Hope he'll hear this8-)

Auuuuuuddreeeeeeyyyyy!!?

[/color]Mr rapmike ur story isn't bad but u hv 2 improve ur grammar and make sure 2 mark off a particular scene from another by a line may be like:
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It will make ur work easier 2 read.. Don't get discouraged,only accept d criticisms and work harder

Mr rapmike ur story isn't bad but u hv 2 improve ur grammar and make sure 2 mark off a particular scene from another by a line may be like:
######################.
It will make ur work easier 2 read.. Don't get discouraged,only accept d criticisms and work harder

Poor Oleng,if she loses Aunt Vien and Dave had given up on her,she will find little strenght to carry on except Zinny will look at her.Dave is a nice guy but u know times change.

Eeyaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Dave if I catch that ur wide mouth u go hear! Eeekwa,c his head mtchwwwwww!

PrinceAdepoju: Hmmm.

Drama from Oleng's mother(who knows maybe it's her house Dave bought sef....or somewhere close)

Drama from Eri's family....and Eric himself

*tightens my belt*
zkisszkisszkiss, gaalaaa
abeg give me 5gala and one lacasera and two purewater.

Oya, AudreyTimms, let's go to Portharcourt

Prince 5gala?!! U wan cultivate am? Hahahaha i don already reach ph

Hmmmmmmmmmm!(clears throat) Audrey,Oleng shud hv a change of name now, like Naomi changed hers 2 'Mara'. I dnt want 2 hv a dead Oleng,I want a strong one,a living Oleng who braved life. I will be here when u bring on part2 but even if I travel 'Keep it up'.

Oleng dear u shud hv heard his own side of the story. To me your decision remains a revenge

@ thepatroit, vote where??

TemiD! Hw far? Can u please write ur English well because sometimes it chokes me,please mind d verb forms its making this ur nice story look like a child's play. Love ur story

PrettySpicey: Hello babysmart, I did take an excuse about my being indisposed on pg.12. I am yet to resolve personal issues and would return when I do so.

Thank you for following and do hope you can be patient.

What do we do when our patience run dry?

Audrey,what I really admire is the simplicity of ur grammar. Your descriptive power is still coming up( I really look out for that). You have a story that easily gets to your audience,that's great but don't be too carried away to explore other areas. Wonderful one and by the way,keep it coming...... How do the posts come? Daily?