Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 8:50am On Dec 24, 2018 |
[quote author=FrankAkowe I stopped and briefly looked at her. ‘Are you sure you’re not angry with me?’ she asked. ‘No, no, ma’m. I can’t be angry with you.’ She sat up on the bed and stood up. ‘If you’re not, then come and give me a hug.’ I looked startled. ‘Don’t look like that,’ she said, almost in a plaintive tone. ‘What is the crime in giving someone a hug?’ I tried to look indifferent but it wasn’t easy. A hug for a woman clad only in under-wears? It would be like hugging electric current. But, maybe it would be a desirable current. Alright, if she wanted a hug, Ola, give her a hug, my mind said. For complete reading: https://m.okadabooks.com/book/about/lost_in_lust/24333(Dear esteemed friends and Nairalanders, the next updating will be Thursday, December 27th,2018. Thank you all for your interest and comments. Wishing you all Merry Christmas in advance).[/quote]That kind of hug can send a man to planet Venus. 2 Likes |
Literature › Re: The Godmother by FairCritic(m): 9:38am On Dec 23, 2018 |
SeyiDominion: Thank you. I am currently working on another story.
But I can recommend 'Lost in Lust' and 'A Fatal Love.' When will your next work be out? |
Literature › Re: The Godmother by FairCritic(m): 2:08pm On Dec 22, 2018 |
This story is a mixture of mystery, romance, suspense and saucy love scenes. Great work, OP. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 10:48am On Dec 22, 2018 |
Vulcanheph: Yeah I've noticed the little similarities between this story(lost in lust) and another story on NL called the sugar mum(which I'm also following)... But so far the similarities are small and this story is just beginning, but I was still waiting for it to becomes too obvious before I let the writer know. But so far I'm thrilled and I'm enjoying it. I have read the two stories from the beginning to the end. The similarity is just the next episode (I don't want to pre empt the story). After that episode , all other events are totally different from what happened in The Sugar Mum. Lost in Lust is a great story on its own. 3 Likes |
Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 9:16am On Dec 22, 2018 |
Nice story OP. Keep it up. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Godmother by FairCritic(m): 11:26am On Dec 21, 2018 |
Nice update.
Well balanced story.
Good diction and articulation.
Keep it up. |
Literature › Re: The Taboo by FairCritic(m): 1:34pm On Dec 19, 2018 |
ToyinOlorunsola: Ayo was in a very delighted mood. After leaving his office, he went to his office cubicle to get some papers. He whistled to himself. If what he had been told jelled, then he would soon be saying farewell to the office and the present job, at least for now. The prospects of the new task thrilled him.
Many journalists angled to get a better or a political job. Although working for I-News was very rewarding, compared with the working conditions of other print media outfits, Ayo would not mind moving up the ladder to a much higher level. In Nigeria, the competition was really stiff and better opportunities came sparingly. Now that he had the opportunity - a case which could be once in a life time - he would not allow the opportunity to slip by, even if Idowu wanted him to swear before a shrine!
He decided he would not tell any colleague or associate yet about the new job that awaited him. He soon left his office. As he drove home, his mind refused to stop ruminating over his conversation with Idowu. The new job meant he would relocate from Lagos to the Nigeria's capital city, Abuja. While Abuja was the administrative capital, Lagos remained the commercial nerve center of the nation. Congrats, Uncle Ayo. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Taboo by FairCritic(m): 4:51pm On Dec 18, 2018 |
Nice update. Keep it up. |
Literature › Re: The Taboo by FairCritic(m): 7:28am On Dec 17, 2018 |
Thanks for the update. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Taboo by FairCritic(m): 2:34pm On Dec 16, 2018 |
Nice story. Keep it coming. |
Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 8:30am On Dec 14, 2018 |
FrankAkowe: The morning, She still looked ruffled but stood up. I left here there and returned to work. Now, that wasn’t my fault, was it? I had pleaded with her, but she was recalcitrant. Now, it was late for any reconciliation.
For full reading: https://m.okadabooks.com/book/about/lost_in_lust/24333 Oga Ola forgive Bisola now |
Literature › Re: The Sugar Mum (Revised Edition) by FairCritic(m): 9:51am On Dec 11, 2018 |
Good story 1 Like |
Literature › Re: A Fatal Love {Sequel to 'The Sugar Mum'} by FairCritic(m): 9:43am On Dec 11, 2018 |
CaZmir:

Madam B to Steph "He's already thinking of marrying you" Very funny. |
Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 7:38am On Dec 10, 2018 |
Ola be careful. What a man eats can bring his fall 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Sugar Mum (Revised Edition) by FairCritic(m): 4:05pm On Dec 09, 2018 |
Great work. Ride on. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Sugar Mum (Revised Edition) by FairCritic(m): 12:33pm On Dec 08, 2018 |
1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Last Temptation by FairCritic(m): 12:28pm On Dec 08, 2018 |
Damibiz: Martin,Damibiz is ever ready to help....jst contact me nd ur family will be happy again..na joke oh...it is very sad,that i y i said that i can never go on a no Sex before marriage,we go do first na woh.. The thing about pre-marital sex is that The Bible is against it. |
Literature › Re: A Fatal Love {Sequel to 'The Sugar Mum'} by FairCritic(m): 12:24pm On Dec 08, 2018 |
I don't understand why Alex is stalling. The earlier he tells his wife, the better for everyone. Good work, op. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 9:15am On Dec 08, 2018 |
Thanks for the update 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Sugar Mum (Revised Edition) by FairCritic(m): 7:27pm On Dec 07, 2018 |
1 Like |
Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 12:14pm On Dec 07, 2018 |
LightQueen: I thought she is a semi witch for her to tell Ola not to ever sleep with another lady for it has consequences, and I also know maybe Joyce would be the be belle between them. Semi witch? That is serious. I still believe she has good intentions. |
Literature › Re: A Fatal Love {Sequel to 'The Sugar Mum'} by FairCritic(m): 10:02am On Dec 07, 2018 |
Enny is a good lady who doesn't deserve the treatment Alex is giving her.. 2 Likes |
Literature › Re: Lost in Lust [A story by Toyin Olorunsola] by FairCritic(m): 6:44pm On Dec 06, 2018 |
To me Naomi is a good lady 1 Like |
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Literature › Re: The Godmother by FairCritic(m): 3:25pm On Dec 06, 2018 |
SeyiDominion: He nodded avidly. ‘I hereby totally agree.’
‘So, what can you offer me?’
He held the money he had seen in his pocket dearly. ‘Anything you want my princess. Then, what about this money? Let’s share it 50-50.’
She smiled warmly. ‘No. there’s no need for that. But you can buy anything you desire for me.’
‘Oh, I’ll surely do that. What about food? What will you eat?’
‘Anything you offer me.’
‘Okay.’ He decided to go to a small eatery not far from where he lived to buy a take-away pack of fried rice, salad and chicken. She was all smiles when he served her the food. Rita had no doubt that the relationship would be a ‘fruitful one.’
In the semi-dark room, he could clearly see her outline. She was no doubt beautiful, like a goddess. She must be a goddess, he thought. To compound his situation, her breasts were very firm; very firm and enticing. He felt like grabbing them and running his mouth on the nipples. It was such a big effort for him to restrain himself Nothing good comes easy. Well done op 1 Like |
Politics › Re: Three Good Reasons Why Saraki Wil Fail by FairCritic(op): 2:35pm On Oct 07, 2018 |
FairCritic: That Senator Bukola Saraki, the Senate President has Presidential ambition is not in doubt. It is also glarring that he is behind the emergence of rAPC. Despite all his manoevrings, Saraki would probably have to wait for another 13 yerars (2031) before he could achieve his dream, if he will ever achieve it. Right now, the following factors are working against him:
1. He is from Kwara state, not from a core Northern state. 2. Despite his pretences, he is a Yoruba man from Ilorin, not a core Northerner. 3. Majority of the people are not fooled by his antics.
Mark my word, Saraki is not going to smell the position of President of Nigeria. When this writer first wrote this piece on July 7, many people descended on him. Ths is a reminder that Saraki will go nowhere, having lost the PDP presidential ticket to Atiku Abubakar. Congratulations to Atiku. |
Literature › Re: The Wretched Billionaire by FairCritic(op): 8:11am On Sep 03, 2018 |
Owoblow's brow went up in concentration. Kano? Was he living in Kano? He shook his head. He could not tell. The problem was he could not even say anything about where he lived.
'I don't know where I live,' he admitted in perplexity. 'But I know I'm from the south west part of this country.'
Yacoub, the bike rider decided that the man he was talking with was not insane. Maybe he was in this state as a result of being drugged, or something, he decided.
'Alright,' Yacoub said. 'Get on the bike. I will try to help you.'
* * * Two hours after she had woken up, Helen was yet to set her eyes on her husband. She had been up and down the one-storey bulding. She had opened and checked all the rooms in the edifice, including the guest rooms. She had checked all the toilets and bathrooms. She had also checked the garage. Still, there was no sign of him.
All his cars were in the compound. When the security man was asked if he had sighted him, the man replied in the negative. So, where was he? Together with the secity man and house maid, they searched the backyard and the whole compound.
Could he have been kidnapped? But how could that be? How would such abductors gain entrance into the house to carry out their nefarious activity? And without anybody being aware of it?
* * * Yacoub took Owoblow to his house in Gyadi-gyadi quarters of Kano. The first thing he was asked to was to have a bath. Yacoub then gave him a t shirt and brown trousers to wear. |
Politics › Re: Three Good Reasons Why Saraki Wil Fail by FairCritic(op): 11:46am On Aug 31, 2018 |
AroleOduduwa: Saraki has the backing of the West, expect more attack on the presidency from the west. This sounds contradictory. How can the West back him and attack him at the same time? |
Romance › Re: What Attribute Must Your Spouse Possess? by FairCritic(m): 11:00am On Aug 31, 2018 |
LoveToRead: Hello Nairalanders, I'm new here. I however want to ask something I am curious about. For guys, which of the following attributes will you want your spouse to have?
1. Beauty 2. Good character 3. Sex appeal 4. Rich Background.
As for me, I will go for good character. I will appreciate your response. Thanks. I want all the four attributes. |
Romance › Re: Costly Mistakes Women Make In Relationships by FairCritic(op): 10:52am On Aug 31, 2018 |
3. Some women are given to too much of talking. In this way, some reveal matters that are highly confidential, or should not be discussed with others. |
Politics › Re: Three Good Reasons Why Saraki Wil Fail by FairCritic(op): 10:44am On Aug 31, 2018*. Modified: 11:42am On Aug 31, 2018 |
FairCritic: That Senator Bukola Saraki, the Senate President has Presidential ambition is not in doubt. It is also glarring that he is behind the emergence of rAPC. Despite all his manoevrings, Saraki would probably have to wait for another 13 yerars (2031) before he could achieve his dream, if he will ever achieve it. Right now, the following factors are working against him:
1. He is from Kwara state, not from a core Northern state. 2. Despite his pretences, he is a Yoruba man from Ilorin, not a core Northerner. 3. Majority of the people are not fooled by his antics.
Mark my word, Saraki is not going to smell the position of President of Nigeria. Finally, Dr. Abubakar Bukola Saraki has publicly declared his intention to contest for Presidency. Under PDP. He has the right to contest. But this is a mission dead on arrival. |
Literature › Re: The Wretched Billionaire by FairCritic(op): 11:47pm On Aug 30, 2018*. Modified: 4:51am On Sep 07, 2018 |
Helen was nonplussed. So, where could he be? Could he have gone to the backyard? She went up back to the bedrrom, thinking that he would soon re-emerge from where he had gone.
It was dawn. Owoblow moved to his right on the bushpath. He sensed he could hear the sounds of moving vehicles not far away. He was right. After walking for about five minutes, the footpath led him to a broad tarred road. It looked like an expressway. He could not tell where the road led to. Then, he renenbered something, he remembered he was a Nigerian, but where came from or where he lived, he could not tell.
A motor bike was moving towards where he stood. He waved it down.
'Good morning,' he greeted the rider. 'Please, I'm kind of lost and I don't where I am. Please, which road is this place?'
The rider, a middle aged man, wearing kaftan looked at Owoblow curiously. He was trying to ascertain if the man dressed in pyjamas and standing by the roadside was sane or not.
'Please, just tell me, which place is this? This road, where does it lead to?' Owoblow's voice was plaintive.
The rider shook his head sadly and sympathetically. The man, from his English accent, was most likely a south westerner. Could he be a victim of kidnap, or ritualist or what?
'See, oga,' the rider said. 'This is Kano road. Where I'm coming from is Katsina. Not far from here is BUK, then Kabuga, then Kano. They kidnapped you from Kano?' |