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Get well soon tbm. May God bless ur health

This stubborn idiHOT call Darous too storeborn for my liking.
Just a big Coward. Thanx 4 d wonderfl upd8 Tbm.

Theblessedman, this one na bonus 4 u o.

TheBlessedMAN:
Next update will drop tomorrow. Thanks.

take ur time dear. We are behind you. Na we dey rush u. I heart you dear

Larrysun

This guy is damn too gud.

Evathyst:
I've been reading this story for more close to a week, and I must say it's a wonderful piece. If only our Nollywood script writers can be half as good as this. Perhaps, we would have been churning out good movies and the the usual 'Police & Thief' or 'King & Queen' which has dominated our screens.

As wonderful as the story seem, permit me to point out a few observations;

1- In terms of grammar, I'll say the writer still has a lot to improve on. For example he kept using the word 'Most' before a superlative form of adjective. e.g Most happiest, most loveliest. This shouldn't be.

Also, simple grammatical blunders like; 'Did not spoke' kept recurring. OP, please take note.


2- Whilst the story was originally meant to revolve around sex, violence and betrayal. The writer has done very little to strike a balance among the 3. On certain episodes, it's only sex. On the other, it's betrayal alone.

3- Although the writer has a unique style, but his use of imaginary soliloquy needs improvement.

4- The writer sometimes doesn't introduce characters properly before throwing them into his updates. This will make the story center on Darous alone, thereby robbing him of the ingredients necessary to spice the story.


5- The writer's manner of introducing surprises seems very predictable. For example, whenever he's doing or saying something secretive, you just know there will be someone behind listening.


These are a few of the observations I have noticed so far. Like a fine wine, I'm sure the OP will get better with time. Lest I forget, a very big congrats on the award for the month of June. Many better things to follow.

not taking anything away from your write up, but i think his (what he calls blunders) are what makes the story more natural. It makes it more enticing. And I can't help but marvel at how he uses those grammatical error to spice up the story. My opinion though.

Congrats tbm. U deserve it.

TheBlessedMAN:
Hmmm, Ladies and Gentle Gents, its with utmost sense of 'am too happy' that I write this Testimonial and Thankful Text (T.T.T) to you guys.

Just so you know, this moment is presently competing for the top post as one of the most 'I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS' moments of my life.

The reason for my happiness is not totally about the winning - since every name worth nominating definitely worths winning this humble award - its rather a result of the fact that I never envisage myself in this situation. Not before, not now and not ever.

I have been trying to figure out the reason why I won, but all I was able to conclude on is that, I know my ogas on this section let me win this award, because trying to trace the reason why I won back to my level of brilliancy will be the most futile thing ever done by man, especially when putting my level of education wey no pass Waec level into consideration.

Am grateful to you boss(es).

Abeg, make I no forget to thank the sponsors lurking behind this award. Thank you for the gift. Its importance surely superceed the gift itself.

May God continue to replenish your bank accounts.

Just incase you need thunder to fire someone, don't hesitate to contact me.

Thanks and God bless everyone that voted for me. I appreciate you guys for your efforts.

Regards....


TheBlessedMan

its a well deserved victory. Nothing less

lekkxydinho:
Month of June has gone. I thank evry1 of us that voted for Tbm. We still await the voting results o. Thanq all.

Boss Rohy, welcome back

are the results out? Who won?

Happy new month o. Update for new month

TheBlessedMAN:
[color=#660000]Happy birthday to you boss.

I woke up in this temperature-lowic morning wondering why the
birds were so party-ly dressed
and why the goats were bleating excitedly.

The flowers were also blossoming
like never before. The dogs were
barking out their lungs excitedly. The
chickens also couldn't hide their
excitements as they were
crowing loudly everywhere. Even
the snakes weren't left out, their
hissing sounds could be heard
from sambisa away. I thought
have heard it all until I heard the
roaring sound of a Lion from
forests away. I then began to
question myself, wondering with
my humanic brain, in a desperate attempt to
figure out what could have
provoked the unusual
excitements of this non-
homosapiens. But I later found
out that they were just
celebrating the birthday of a rare
gem in the name of Larrysun.

I then said to myself, if
animals could feel and celebrate
the birth of my boss-man like
this, then who am I, that I can't
borrow Megabite from Mtn and
send him a birthday wish on
here?

So here I come my
boss. Happy birthday to you once
again. May God grant u all the
alluring things ur heart ever
craved for.

Don't light a candle,( cos it can't produce enough smoke.)

but I want you to go to that filling station near your area, especially the one that doesn't sell fuel during scarcity of fuel.

Move closer to a fuel pump, light a cigarette, raise
it close to ur chest, close ur eyes and
take a silent breath, make a silent un-petrolic wish,
and trust in God to make it come to pass very
soon in abundance like the amount of smoke you see after lighting that cigarette.

Do have fun Boss.

Welcome to your birthday...
From your Shangoic bro, Theblessedman
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tbm uare somting else. Petrolic wish bawo

Suspense nooni, Tbm, no kil persin nau. *ayam not playing with you again o

Only God knws where dis story will end. Tbm with the suspense as usual

The greatest story i eva read here on Nl.

It made me join Nairaland. So after d registration, na vote ah go vote for tbm. You are indeed theblessedman.

Next update pls

I nominate Theblessed....man.

Its all about Countless. D storey that has kept me glued to my phone since year break.
It made me join nairaland.

And am glad I did.

I've learnt a lot from it.
All thanks to one man.

TheBlessed man, you have my vote. You deserve it.