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Dat would be later in the night or early tomorrow morning ma'am, I av to rush to work now.

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Derek dragged his worn - out body slowly after Damon and his thugs. He still could not believe how he had gotten into this big mess. He wished he could travel back in time so as to change this moment of his life, but he himself wasn't even sure maybe such exist. All he knew is that it is all some craps he had watch back then in his room while sipping his favourite 'Smirnoff' drink and staring at his '32' inches television. He knew the chance of experiencing a 'time travel' is so thin. He didn't picture he would die anytime soon, not to even talk of being roasted alive while his flesh will later be distributed around like a birthday cake. That single thought made him really sick, and he vowed to do all within his power to make life miserable for these animals. No! He would never give them the chance of them sharing his flesh among themselves......

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Kane's only hope of surviving right now is for something to distract the thugs surrounding them as they trudged along the dark passage way. He didn't know what time of the day it is, but he was sure it should be something around or just before nightfall. He had succeeded in removing the rope tied around his hands but still had to pretend because he had no weapon on him, he was just praying for the right time to strike to be a perfect one. He had mastered the art of removing even the 'cops ' hand - cuffs without them even noticing. Now, still looking and walking as if his hands was still firmly tied on his back. He leaned forward at 'Derek' and muttered for them to get out of here which Derek acknowledged to immediately by slightly nodding his head. But the only problem now is that they need a distraction......
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"What stunt are you talking about? ". David asked Bob who still had his eyes fixed keenly on him.

"For once I thought you were hit by the bullet or arrow and you already lose consciousness or worse dead, but when I saw you standing up, I was having mixed feelings". Bob explained.

"Oh...that. I just faked it man, I thought it would be the wrong guys coming in but my mind calmed seeing it was our heroes here". David said with a mock bow towards the trio who just came in. They laughed at what he just said but deep inside, Bob was still hurt, so he pursued the issue further.

"What if it had been the bad guys coming in? Is that how you will leave me lying like a coward on the ground?". Bob was getting furious already.

"Hey, easy man. I'm not a coward, I'm a reasonable hero who use his senses so as to fight another day". David was getting angry now, he didn't understand why Bob was taking the matter so serious.

"You hero? "Bob scoffed. David was about to reply but Adams knew he had to step in.

"Hey guys, I need you both to come to your senses". Adams said and paused for his words to sink in. "The last thing we need now is an internal strife among us".

"We are spending too much time here already, if you guys still wanna cool it off with a fair fight, that would be when we reach home and you can take on yourselves at the local wrestling stadium". Maurice added, joking on some of his words, but he hoped they could see the truth and hidden sense in what he had said.

"Let's get out of here at once, we don't have all day". Adams said and he led the way out......
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They had been walking for quite a while now but still they couldn't point out any sign of Derek and the others. Jim knew he was taking the right decision but the others didn't think he was sane anymore. They had protested strongly against the idea of going after the thugs, because they are heading to the palace of the 'basil', because they feared that must be their stronghold, but Jim would have none of that and he calmed them, by explaining they don't have to reach the palace if they were fast enough. Jim knew and was sure they must have headed this way and just when he was beginning to get tired of the whole thing, he heard a sound like someone coughing just ahead of them.

"Do you hear that? ". Jim asked facing both Maxwell and Jessica who shook their head negatively. Just when Jim was about to say another word, they heard the cough coming louder not far ahead of them and they swung into immediate action........

Okay guys... I know I av not been consistent with my updates and all dat... And am really sorry about that... D day I promised to update, my phone fell down and it affected the touch... I just collected it from d engineer dix nite... I would update tomorrow morning

Nice story man!

Hadampson:
Hardeygbolar nice update... keep it coming bro

How's your health now??

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Fine bro, thank you. Updates coming soon..

Yewandequeen:
hardeygbolar

How are your doing? Hope ure hale now?

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Am quite fine now, updates coming up soon. Thanks for being concerned...

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Damon looked at Derek with disdain etched on his face. He hated being interrupted while speaking and if looks could kill, Derek would have been dead by now.

"You don't need my name? "Damon queried. He was beginning to lose his cool now and just if Derek had said another word, Damon would have ended his life right there without a second glance. He motioned for his men to go on while he picked the 4.m.m caliber pistol on the ground. He inspected it closely, taking his time to admire the metal while Derek and the others were forced out of the room. Kane wonder how he could escape from the men who have their faces strong as if they were compelled by some power to do so. However, he could not come up with a reasonable plan, his head was completely empty of ideas.....

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Bob could see arrowheads in the men's body and he feared for the arrow to have hit David also. He didn't need to wonder for long as three people sprang into the room and he suddenly stood up, alarmed. But his mind later calmed when he saw that they were his friends and his happiness knew no bounds. Just then, he was surprised to see David also rising up.

"How did you find this place? ". Bob asked, after greeting the trio who just came in, he couldn't just contain his joy.

"Jim gave a description of this place and this also helped a lot". Adams replied, showing them the map.

"Are you okay?. Hope you are not hurt? ". Caroline asked Sarah who had been observing them for a while since they entered.

"Am fine, all I want right now is getting out of here". Sarah replied.

"You must be Sarah, I heard about what happened from Jim, how are you now? ". Adams asked with concern.

"Yea, she's Sarah and as you can see she's fine, so let's get out of here right in time". David replied for her and Bob attention was drawn to him.

"How did you manage to pull that stunt off? ". Bob asked David........
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Jim rushed into the room, with a gun in his hands, expecting to meet people there but he was disappointed in seeing the room empty. He scanned the room for any sign of harm but could not find any.

"No one is here man, so what are we still doing here? ". Maxwell queried disappointment etched in his voice.

"Are you sure this is where you saw Derek earlier? ". Jessica questioned.

"Of course I'm sure like hell. They must not have gone far let's go save our friends ". Jim said and led the way...........


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E don land oooo....

I'm currently down with fever guys... So dat automatically means update will now be tomorrow... Thanks

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Night don each na

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Sorry ma, I left work late cos I did afternoon shift today, but am on morning tomorrow so I would try to update before 6pm...

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Kane was shocked to his marrow seeing the short devil storming into the room while an evil smile appeared on his scary face. But that wasn't what shocked him, Mary and Angela being shoved violently into the room was the reason for his shock. He could recall he had warned them never to come out of where they had hidden no matter what they see or hear, but it seems they had paid deaf ears to what he had told them. Kane observed their faces and he could see the fear etched all over it. He knew immediately this wouldn't end well. All he had planned earlier was about to be in jeopardy because of these two. He looked at the short devil and he could see his lips moving but he didn't grasp a word in all he had said, his mind was far away in wonder of how to escape from this dangerous place. He focused more on him and he saw him advance slowly towards him, an evil smile on his face.

"Huh....huh. ". Short devil cleared his throat. He was now standing just a feet or two away from Kane who felt like bashing his skull on an asphalt.

"What do you want? ". Kane queried, observing him carefully just in case he tried attacking him.

"What I want....good question. But let me first introduce myself ". Damon said and waited for Kane's reply but he never got any so he continued.

"Am Damon, but folks around here also call me 'short.... ". He was yet to complete his statement when Derek who had been quite all the while interrupted him.

"We don't need your damn name man! Just leave us alone and we would not make you regret all you have done".......
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Bob closed his eyes after the man pulled the trigger and hearing a shot ring out. He waited for a while, expecting a bullet or two to hit him. But none of that seems to happen. Well, maybe the man had missed, he thought with his eyes still closed, expecting the second shot to hit him now, but still nothing happen, neither did hear any other shot. He gradually opened his eyes and was so shocked at seeing David and the other men all on the ground.....



Abeg make una help me manage dix one, I would try to update tomorrow evening....

I want to thank you guys for all ur comments so far. Sincerely, there was a time I felt like this story is not worth writing anymore. I felt like stopping because I wasn't getting the feedbacks I had expected. I was losing the vibe to continue but then you guys came along and ur comments was an energizer as it in one way or the other spun me on to continue this wonderful piece.....

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You guys are all great... Continue d gud work

Updates coming tonight....

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of course, it's worth reading. When you are coming please help get shawarma and chilled apple, pineapple and orange blend smoothie

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And don't forget to bring a box of pizza with a chilled hollandia youghurt.

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Is the worth reading cos i don't want to waste money � by buying reading glasses that i'm not gonna use

Reading glasses on....... yewandequeen and dtobs coman join me... 2 seats reserved for you guys..Lankyannie, food is ready

Samyfreshsmooth the romancelander, spare some time to read this story, okay?

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You won't be disappointed, that I promise u and for ur reading glasses, how about if I lend u my granny's own?

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If u don't want trouble please upload one light is restored. Better still come to my estate there is healthy light here.


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Started the story around pass 9pm yesterday now I am waiting for ur update oooo. Weldone, thumps up.

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Okay, ur estate issa goal! I will come there tonight... Lol. ... And thanks for reading and commenting...

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Kane looked disappointed and angry at the same time as he glared at the four men now standing close to him. He scanned the weapons they had on them and he could only see battle axes and bow with each of them carrying about fifteen arrowhead in a rough looking sack. He smiled to himself as he carefully and bring out the pistol that was inside his belt. He pointed it to one of them and they all laughed out loud after hearing him saying they should all drop their weapons. He looked shocked and at the same time happy they did not know about guns and the damage it could do.

His eyes traveled down the legs of the man he was still pointing the pistol at and he smiled, a very evil one. Kane concluded he would start from him and he pulled the trigger which saw the man rolling on the floor in pain and something unexpected happens.....

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Bob could feel his head spinning in a thousand directions, he staggered backwards and he calculated his next move as the man who had headbutted him approach him slowly, brandishing his sharp - edge blade menacingly towards Bob who cautiously brought out his jack knife praying that the man should not have seen him. He had to do something that would distract the man so as to take him out. He didn't need to pray for long as they all heard a gunshot not too far away from the eastern part of the building. That distracted them all and he quickly took advantage of the situation and he leapt up like a hungry lion that found a wandering prey.

"Get him at once". The man Bob had stabbed roared as fresh blood oozed out from his lower abdomen. Bob was surprised to still see the man standing and he quickly brought out his gun and shot the man rushing at him in his head and he fell down, dead. Just then David rushed into the room and one of the remaining two men seized him, gripping his neck really hard.

"Uh... Oh.. You...are..hurting me". David managed to say and the man's grip on his neck tightened the more.

"Let him go". Bob said, as he carefully drop his pistol on the floor and the man running towards him paused in his tracks, walked slowly towards him and hit him really hard on his face which made him stagger like a drunk and Bob spat on the man cursing out loud. The man only smiled, he had other things in stock for Bob. He looked at Bob as he took the pistol Bob used earlier and pointed it at him.

"Please don't kill him, come kill me instead". David said feeling guilty that he was the cause of it all. He knew if he had not left wandering about, Bob would not have been in trouble.

"Bleep off, loser". Bob spat out confidently and the man pulled the trigger, a shot rang out.....
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Jim walked ahead of Maxwell and Jessica who were both walking as if they had all the time in the world. He wondered maybe they might be afraid of what lay ahead of them and his mind raced fast to that thought. They would not be doing him any good if they are afraid as he needed them to focus so that the mission ahead would be a success. As he looked back to ascertain what had made Maxwell and Jessica stop their chattering, a gunshot interrupted the quietness of the place which was immediately followed by stamping of feet that seemed to be coming their way. He quickly hid himself in a dark corner and Jessica and Maxwell also did same. Jessica was about speaking as three men jogged towards the direction Jim had led them earlier. He could recognize Damon - the short devil among them and for once he felt like jeopardizing the current mission and shooting him dead but he quickly controlled himself. Jessica sighed after the men were out of sight and asked.

"Can we find another way? "

"No, that is the direction Derek and Kane must be, we have to go now". Jim replied and he could spot fear immediately in the faces of his partners.......

Sorry guys, I can't update today due to the epileptic power supply in my area.. Update resumes tomorrow.... Thank you all......

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"Wait". Adams said just as Jim and the others begin to walk away. They halted in their tracks and face Adams awaiting him to say whatever it is he wants to say and Adams began at once.

"I want us all to be careful concerning this mission we are about to embark on. This map in my hands "..... Adams paused, allowing his words to sink into their head as he brought out the map and quickly explained the relevance of the map in their supposed journey.

"I want us to check out this map, it will guide us carefully to where we are going now. We are to meet at this particular spot either with the people we went to save or or else we might be trapped here forever ". They moved towards the map and they saw the spot Adams was taking about.

"Okay, guys let's move on".Jim said and they march away like drunk soldiers........
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"Yeah, any problem? ". Kane queried after seeing Derek's furrowed eyebrows.

"No.... Nothing ". Derek stuttered in reply.

"Are you sure about that? ". Kane asked observing Derek sudden change in demeanor.

"Yeah man! ".

The truth was that Derek was afraid, he was afraid of what could happen to them if they were to be attacked by at least five men. He sure knew they wouldn't stand a chance not even if they have grenades and powerful rifles with them, he had seen what those guys are capable of and he knew it would take more than four men to win them in combat. He knew it would take more than Mary and Angela to stop these men, unless of course they plan on dying.

"Let's get out of here". Derek said to kane

"Can you walk? ". Kane asked praying his reply should be affirmative.

"Yeah! I would try"

"Okay, let's get going ". Kane said assisting him up.

"And where do you think you are going? ". A voice asked as the door was thrown ajar and four men came in.............
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"Can you walk on your own? ". Bob asked Sarah.

"Yeah I would manage ". Sarah replied smiling.

"Okay, David assist her up". Bob said but he noticed David didn't give him any reply so he looked around the room but he couldn't still find David. He was immediately alarmed as he quickly ran towards the door and an heavy blow landed on him just as he opened it. He staggered backwards, seeing David with his hands tied together in the midst of four heavily built men..............

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As long as the sun keep shining...My love for Yewande mi will forever be

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Hmmm.... Baba I love dat line.... Are u a poet?

Yewandequeen:
she is here

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Lol... Your royal majesty welcome ooo

I dey gbadun ur style my Manche...

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Yewandequeen my love, Let's honour this invitation.
I got us something nice for the show sweetie.

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� � � pray una love no go die sha....

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Update comes up tomorrow.


Pals how do you find the story? Please l need your comments and constructive criticism.

Thanks.

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You have a nice work here but u just need to work on your tenses and grammatical construction....

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Ok, ayam here.

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Hmmm... Welcome on board bro.....

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Thumbs up . Nice piece.

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Thanks man!

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The guard shouted and the voice was all too familiar as they looked eagerly to see the guard removing his helmet. It was the person they had expected to see and Jessica ran straight to him, enveloping him in a warm embrace. The others couldn't believe their eyes, they had never thought Jim could escape all on his own but he had proved them wrong.

"How did you get out all alone? ". Adams was the first to ask and the others also look up at Jim some for explanation. Jim sighed and he begin to tell them about all that had happened in their absence. He told them about Derek, about Sarah and about the cruel short devil.

"We have to save them, and we can't go like this". Adams explained.

"How then do we go? ". Jim asked

"We divide into two groups so as to find them quickly"

"Sounds like a plan, so I will try to find Derek, Kane, Angela and Mary. While you will try locating Bob, David and the other lady I told you about - Sarah ". Jim laid out.

"Okay, but let's be careful ". Adams said and the swung into immediate action.
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Derek was surprised to see Kane and at the same time was happy to the hope of leaving the cursed room. The little time he had spent here had been like hell and he had once contemplated taking his own life but they never game him the chance to do that. And now seeing Kane sacrificing all he had to try save him was a thing of joy for him. He looked at Kane who had been observing his lost finger on the ground with pity and he called him weakly.

"Kane, what are you doing here? ".

"I came to rescue you".

"Rescue me? "Derek asked and Kane nodded in reply. Although he Kane to be one of the most capable person for the task at hand but he still wondered if the short devil was to come back with two or three fully armed men to torture him once again, he wondered how they would be able to escape and he didn't hesitate to voice out his fears.

"You didn't come with a weapon, how did you plan on dealing with those guys if they come back? ".

Kane dragged up his shirt a bit to reveal a short caliber pistol and a jack knife to Derek. "And Mary and Angela are still outside with more weapons ".

"Mary and Angela? ". Derek queried.............
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Damon the short devil walked along the corridor with about ten other guards, he was boiling with rage as he marched his way towards the prison. He had with him the best guards in their town as he had specially selected them for this same purpose. He doesn't want the 'basil' to have his head rolling on the floor and he had concluded he would deal with the guards who are on duty when the prisoners are escaping. He had also been informed that a guard had been strangled to death and the prisoner that did that was no other person than that young, timid boy who was supposed to have a duel today. He stopped in his tracks suddenly and the others did same.

"I think we have to divide into three groups ". Damon said and the others nodded their heads.

"I want two people with me here, the other people here would be two groups making four person in each group, am sure you all know your way around here ". Damon said and added. "Good luck "..........

I need feedback from u guys... I'm about losing the vibe to write, I mean I need u guys to say wats on ur mind concerning dis piece

Please guys I need ur comments and critics... Don't read without commenting....

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"What have I done, I had just killed an human being ". David muttered regretting his actions.

"You do the right thing man, if you did not kill him we'd be dead by now". Bob replied reassuring him. He felt so weak now that he wondered maybe he could survive another blow. He remembered what brought them here the first place and he took a quick glance at the young beautiful woman who now has a cloth on her.

"Hello". Bob greeted with a smile.

"Hi". The lady replied with a smile, waving her hand. "I'm Sarah"

"I'm Bob and he's David ". Bob introduced himself and David who had been quite for a while observing the lady.

"How did you get in here? ". Sarah asked.

"We came with friends". David replied.

"Friends, where are they? ". Sarah asked further.

"It's a long story, let's get out of here". Bob answered.........

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"What are those sounds I have been hearing all about?". The 'Basil' asked after starting at the man standing in his front for a while. He was a handsome tall middle aged man who appeared to be gentle on the outside but only if you study him for a very long time you will figure it out that he is a 'handsome - dare - devil'. The man he had just shouted on was no other person than the 'short devil' himself.

"I don't know sire". Short devil replied his head bowed in fear.

"What?". The 'Basil' exclaimed. "Damon, you mean you don't know that the prisoners we intend to use for appealing to the god of rain had escaped? ".

Bram could not speak nor move from where he knelt, he wondered how the 'basil' came to know of what happened in the prison, he did not need to think that much before concluding that one of the guards must have spill it.

"Damon, so you have nothing to say, huh? ". The 'basil' asked, rising from his throne and walking towards the short devil - Damon.

"I'm sorry sire". Damon pleaded. The 'basil' was now standing in front of Damon who was obviously shaking in fear. He had his head bowed but he could still feel the 'basil' fierce gaze boring holes all over him. No warrior have ever defeated him, not even the great Zipporra who had been rumored to have single - handedly defeated twenty men in a space of fifteen minutes. He lowered his height till his face was directly facing Damon before speaking.

"I only spared you because of one thing". He paused and continued. "And that's because you are the only family I had left, if other people was to commit this error you know they would not live to tell the tale, not when I still rule here"

"Thank you, your majesty ". Damon replied

"Don't thank me yet, you still haven't gotten back the prisoners, you have just eight hours to do that".......

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"Let's get you out of here". Kane said to Derek after seeing how weak he was. He had not think it would be hard like it is to save his friends, and he felt pity for Derek as he saw his decapitated finger on the table. Derek himself had fainted maybe due to loss of too much blood.

"What are you doing here Kane? "........

Please bear with me guys I would not be able to post tonight, my ba3 is down and p.h.c.n ha on t bought power for over two days now...I would try to update tomorrow.

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The two men looked back and were surprised to see David standing at their back. They had totally forgotten about him and all their focus was on Bob who lay panting heavily on the floor. They two men glanced at each other and laughed. It was obvious they never knew what a gun could do.

"Don't come any closer ". David warned.

"What if I do, huh? ". The man replied taking another step towards David who kept moving backwards.

"I will blow off your head"

But the man was unloved by David words, he felt all he was saying was just empty threats and he scoffed when he recall David saying he would blow off his head. He moved a step closer and David warned once again.

"Let us go peacefully and I would not make life miserable for you "

But the man never followed David words, instead he moved swiftly towards David and sent him a punch in his jawline and David staggered backwards struggling to maintain his balance. The man rushed towards David once more and a shot rang out making the man drop lifelessly on the ground. The other man tried rushing towards David but Bob was quick to respond with a dagger that caught him right on his back and he fell like a heap on the floor..........

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"Shit, we have been discovered ". Adams muttered.

"Who the hell is there? ". One of the men thundered coming towards them.

"Jessica and Maxwell please step out gently just to distract them, Maurice and I will later come up with a plan ". Adams laid out his plan and the duo obeyed immediately.

"What are you two doing there? "

"I don't know, I guess we are looking for you ". Maxwell said the dumbest thing that came to his head with a wide grin.

"Looking for us? ". One of the men asked staring at his partners.

"These should be one of the prisoners we have been looking for, seize them at once ". The one who who appeared to be the leader thundered.

The other two men moved towards them immediately and Maxwell begin to step backwards while dragging Jessica also.

"Please don't harm us, we are friends ". Maxwell said trying to buy some time and just then a shot rang out distracting the guards who instantly looked back wondering what was happening.

Adams came out just then attacking one of the men with an axe which caught him on the neck and Maurice threw a knife at the other guard and he fell down groaning in pain. Another shot rang out just then and the third man was lifeless on the floor. Just then another guard appeared from the corner and Caroline who had shot the guard earlier was about to shoot once more but the guard shouted and the voice registered in all their heads.........

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A man in a guard's robe walked alone through the dark passage way of the underground prison, his every movements was suspicious as he kept looking backwards every seconds just to ascertain he was not being followed. He heard two gunshots earlier and he smiled knowingly. He walked towards a corridor and he heard familiar voices coming from there. Just then he heard the sound of a trigger and he shouted at once.

"Stop".........................



P. S.

Another update coming up later in the day..... Thank's y'all.....