₦airaland Forum

Audreytimms how is ur eyes,wish u quick recovery, please take care of urself and sleep well

smileysmiley:
Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Service) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? As for me, I don't really care cause my "imagination filled brain" always gives me a clue of what the ending will be like but I think its pretty unprofessional to bring out an unfinished work unless its a review to get buyers interested in buying the finished work. Although Op you don't strike me as a professional writer cause your use of terms are bad and you have difficulty in making your readers relate with the story, the use of expression is zero and your manner of description is totally poor, I'm not trying to bad mouth you but if you have plans of being a writer, you have a long way to go. It is pretty embarrassing that you are a graduate and please stop using "I studied Physics" as an excuse cause I studied Physics too and my use of English might not be perfect but it will take someone who is into English language to dictate my error. A word of advice "stop using shorthand to write" , it is one of the reasons Nigerian youths are bad with their use of English, take your time to type out the full word cause shorthand will only affect you on the long run. I know I have written a really long epistle but I do hope you will take this as constructive criticism, please don't get defensive dear cause I didn't type all these in a bid to offend you. Cheers!

I agree with u
miss ade23ola,pls try and proof read ur work and dnt abbreviate, they are so many blunder,and i noticed u are rushing the story,its a very good story line,i know nobody is paying and u dnt owe anybody any explanation, bt whenever u know u wont make it,tell ur readers time to time,dnt keep them in the dark for too long,after u promised to update and we got no update, do u know hw disappointed we will be,please try and finish it

Good job by the way

Mattkent:
Sorry abt that. Some parts have been removed. You can drop ur email and I will send u d complete story.

Nice story u got here,pls i need the complete story,some part have been removed
this is my mail
kaysolo726@gmail.com

Omohjesu

Nice story,well done

bt i think this story will be better if the main role is a guy instead a lady,d girly vibe is nt there,d feeling is missing,i know u ar a guy bt try and put those girly stuffs, d female vibe is nt in the story,keep it up