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ezeigbo194:
for what nw dnt even tink about it

I'm thinking about it. Lol!

Frankenstein:
Yea. You certainly need to cut that part off. Couldn't believe my eyes when I read it.

Okay, thanks a lot, bro.

rapmike:
Hmn...... its depends on you. Since there are no strings attached, I see no reason for it to remain. However, Like in a stories of a perfect man there must be a flaw, and this should serve as Lot's flaw.

Therefore leave it alone

Okay, thanks for the insightful comments.

Double .

DzTzl:
Yea I fnk I hv an idea of d person wu did d killing, Jamal Malik's first Son wv Cain's wife

Wrong. Lol!

Flakeey:
Holy mother of Jesus
az in, ehen
iyen Detective Lot...u mean he actually erm erm...
Why am I even surprised? he patronises brothels naaa

and Ruth, her libido ehnnn na die, she's not even sober about her newly discovered secrets. Not sure she's even ready to look for her real parent.

Mr. Larry, the boss...come let me give u a bear hug for your wild sense of imagination and creativity. I envy you walahi

Thanks for the hug, dear.

elpiroski:
Ahha
Hope Ruth is not trying to sire a detective
anyway, still following

Lol! Thanks.

Iaz93:
20 man shall for that day if dem try compete oh eh..

Lol! We have many literary giants here. I'm just a midget.

Scapashini3:
Them say dem bad pass LARRY but i swear them no reach o . The don-doro-bucci-writer LARRYSUN

Lol! Thank you, sir. I'm pleased and honoured.

veave:
Chai!

Lol! You spooked me.

rapmike:
Larry, are you trying to elongate this story? Cus Ruth will not have s*x for nothing and I can't believe Lot will think with his d*ck than his head.

Mind you, it can happen.

Ruth slept with Lot because she wanted to sleep with him; no string attached. So, should it remain there or be scratched?

Flakeey:
Larry pls dont cut that part..shits like this are bound to happen even in real life situation
tnx boss

waiting for next update

Now two against two.

uchebest2006:
I finally catch up with you guys....
Larrysun u are good oooooo
Larrysun,are u a mathematician?
Should i call u a historian
or a dectective?
or a doctor?

But ds story.....i wonder their state of mind after each of them re been questioned in that house.
But finally,have unveil the secret.....
Lot sleeping with Ruth....is this for good or another terror wanna pour like sweat?

Thank you, sir. Ruth slept with Lot because of her high libido. And doing the man who didn't like her was a conquest on her part.

krispee:
I luv dis!it shows dat detective Lot is human afteral .

Ruth is definitely sometin else
Weldone Larry n pls dnt cut it off,its an added spice

Okay, one point against two.

Adinije:
@Larry, I don't like the idea of Lot mating with Ruth. I was thinking u could have find a means to reconcile her with her husband. this act also drastically reduce Lot's integrity and the respect I have for him.

Thanks for this comment. That part would be cut off. Ruth couldn't reconcile with her husband. There is a reason behind that.

OMA4U:
Why did you make Detective Lot do this? If it does not add to the story, you can remove it. It will make us trust him less as he can easily be manipulated by s3x.

Okay, thanks. I'll cut off that part.

Flakeey:
Love in d air

singing:
Love ehhhh
love mooo
love wantintin
love moooo

Oga Larry, I go love ooooo

Lol! Isn't a sweet but mysterious thing, that love?

Scapashini3:
Pitiable,dismal and lugubrious@end part of chapter. . . I dae mad to no tok say'I LOVE YOU'. . . For Godsakes daniel that shawdy is a millionaire mehn!. . . Boyz gats chop rubbers o. . .!

He was scared. I understand his dilemma. If you'd had a confrontation with Cain, you'd be scared too.

Thanks for the mention, Ad3ola, but I'm not a poet. I can't review it.

I'm thinking of cutting the next post out of the story. Please, what do you think? Should it remain or leave?

pricelesslove:
Oga Larry good morning ooo

Good morning, ma'am. How was your night?

kingphilip:
Chai Daniel na wow to u o u no fit even do the needful as u love ha self

Tnx LarrySun u r just too gud
awaiting the nxt update

The next update shall come soon. Thank you, sir.

Toeyean1507:
Stories like dis always keep me rumminating and edgy. U ve done so well for urself,Mr Larry dat it's even difficult for we readers to predict correctly. The turn of events' got me meditating and relating d story to whoever cares to listen. All in all, d work is SUPERB. I ask for more HIKMAH frm d most HIGH for u.

Thank you, ma'am.

pricelesslove:
Nawa ooo. Tory don change

Lol! Nothing is ever as it seems.