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LiteratureRe: INCOGNITO (a Story) by LarrySun(m): 1:45am On Jul 30, 2014
leonard509: i'm leonard509 a newbie to story writing.This is actually my first story,i hope you guys'll enjoy it. N.BPlease correct me if i'm wrong in anyway.








WHAT TH FVCK ? (As a new writer, try not to use crude obscenities yet: 'What the hell?' is appropriate) GET DOWN!!!


It was too late, mike is (Mike was) Dead, just like josh, shot in the head.

Who is this guy, what does he want?

3 (Three) blocks away.


The bullet is 12 (came from twelve) blocks away. Elevator door opens (opened), a lady walks (walked) out with her suitcase.

Sexy! Is'nt she? (Remember your quotation marks: "Sexy, isn't she?")Tunde asked George.

When are you going to finally settle down?? Stop flirting dawg. (Insert the quotation marks. You should know that each conversation carries a paragraph)

Hey George I'm looking for the right one.

The right one indeed! Said george. ("The right one indeed." Replied George.


MUM I'm home, deji whatsup where's mum? She's asleep, said deji. How was work today? As usual ,temi answered on entering her room. She walks to her bathroom, inputs the code to her secret safe, brings out her dairy,in it was a sheet of paper, she then draws two parallel lines on the name "mike adebayo". Two down ..... Her phone rings, she puts her stuffs in place and heads for her for her cell phone. (I'm sure you can do better than this)
Rough review.
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LiteratureRe: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 1:13am On Jul 30, 2014
tolufaithO: @ OP, ds is d best ve eva read on NL, sowie am nt exageratin, u r indeed a grt writer, where on earth ve i been all ds while, i startd jst ds marwin nd am done nau, GOD BLESS U ND I BELIEVE DS IS JST UR STARTIN-POINT BRO, KUDOS!!!!!!
Thank you, ma'am.
LiteratureRe: How Do I Become A Good Writer?help PLEASE by LarrySun(m): 1:11am On Jul 30, 2014
rapmike: Mr Larrysun, no forget me oh! I still dey wait.
I've sent the reviewed prologue to your mail. Check it.
LiteratureRe: The Coffin Of Errors (Short Story) by LarrySun(op): 1:03am On Jul 30, 2014
OMA4U: Of course, front page things.

Larry is just so good. And you too, ma'am. You both are wonderful writers.

Mod frontpage oooo
Thank you, bro, for the support all the way. I can't wait to read your masterpiece too.
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 10:06pm On Jul 29, 2014
Now what's going on here? Why are the women suddenly talking pornn? Who took my cucumber?!!!
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 9:32pm On Jul 29, 2014
maputohq: wow...tnx man...I've been following one of your thread with keen interest...maybe I'm your new fan...
Really? Wow! I'm pleased cheesy Try to read the short story I posted. I'm sure you'll like it grin
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 8:14pm On Jul 29, 2014
Rainstorms: paranoia
Okay. Thanks.
LiteratureRe: Please Drop A Vocabulary by LarrySun(op): 8:04pm On Jul 29, 2014
Pulchritudinous: Relating to beauty.
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LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 8:01pm On Jul 29, 2014
Rainstorms: what's wrong
What's the title of the story?
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 7:55pm On Jul 29, 2014
Rainstorms: The aftermath of solitude is either a blessing or otherwise ,depending on the individuals involved. For some it's an harbinger of depression while it catalyzes inspiration in others. These were the thoughts that ran across my mind as I sat down in the solitude of my room.
embarassed
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 7:53pm On Jul 29, 2014
maputohq: Ade couldn't believe it. He had just escaped from hell. He kept on running as fast as his feeble legs could carry him. It was getting dark but the forest seems to be getting longer. After running for two hours, he decided to rest. The kidnapper's den should be far behind now, he thought to himself. He fell on the ground and slept off, snoring heavily. He was awakened by a loud noise, only to see a scary figure with a torch light. A startled Ade let out a violent kick straight to its groin. He ran for an hour before seeing the main road. Alas! Ade has rendered his father impotent
Lol! That's abso-freaking-lutely hilarious. cheesy
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 7:19pm On Jul 29, 2014
princesa: oh come off it, the sky is big enough for a million and one starswink
But you're that one star in a million.
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 5:29pm On Jul 29, 2014
princesa: funny you. What's with the Macbeth title? cheesy
A part of you sometimes scares me; maybe it's the literary part. My post is now being threatened by yours. embarassed
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 5:19pm On Jul 29, 2014
princesa: It was the last day in camp, the rebels and government had made a pact, Another assignment and a job offer from BBC awaits, so I had to go.

Evie wanted otherwise. Going to Liberia next week, he wanted us to build this love we'd found in Boma camp risking our lives.

But I couldn't stay. My career was all I lived for, I couldn't trade it for a chance at love.

'why are you always hard? Did you ever even liked me?' He said caressing my cheeks.

'I can't' I reiterated hoping he'd understand this time around.

But he never did.

'There's a limit to the rejection a man can take...I wish you the best in life'. He said finally, kissed my cheeks and left to join the others.

This memory would hunt me for the rest of my loveless career life.
And Lady Macbeth arrives! cheesy
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 5:02pm On Jul 29, 2014
texanomaly: *batts eyelashes*
I can kiss them all day long. kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss ... kiss
LiteratureRe: Please Drop A Vocabulary by LarrySun(op): 4:58pm On Jul 29, 2014
Queenxstar: Can my fellow writers please describe what an Italian hug is?
I think that should be hugging someone tightly and lifting him/her up in the process. I'm not sure though.
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 4:53pm On Jul 29, 2014
texanomaly: *rolls eyes*
Those beautiful, beautiful eyes. kiss
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 12:49pm On Jul 29, 2014
AudreyTimms: . Dude, dt ws deep!
Thanks man smiley
LiteratureRe: How Do I Become A Good Writer?help PLEASE by LarrySun(m):
Just continue writing; the more you write the better you become. And please, plot your stories well. I don't got for feeble plots.
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 9:23am On Jul 29, 2014
zyzxx: impressive
Thanks. smiley
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 9:08am On Jul 29, 2014
MaziOmenuko: Would have loved to do that story with you; but anything po'r.n scares you off!

I'm going to do the real story of what happened to the 5 unwise virgins in the bible and why they never got to see the bride-groom. The bible censored off a lot of things and I'm willing to write the uncensored version.

You and hbg are invited to participate. What say thee?
I'd write the epilogue. grin
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 9:07am On Jul 29, 2014
Tovot: fortunately I am incorruptable. I am doing great. Thank GOD.
grin Incorruptible indeed. End will never wonder.
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: Seun Osewa Likes Women A Lot by LarrySun(m): 9:02am On Jul 29, 2014
Seun likes women, so what? He follows a few ladies and people tag him promiscuous. Do you know the thousands of women who follow him? Like the Israelites behind Moses at the crossing of the Red Sea. And not all food set before him would he be able to finish grin Except if he'd rather be treated of various social diseases.
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m): 10:53pm On Jul 28, 2014
Ishilove: What a depressing story sad
It's a spur-of-the-moment short narrative. You know I do better than this grin
LiteratureRe: Writing Challenge: Write A Short Story In 100 Words by LarrySun(m):
DARKNESS SETS IN

The first bullet struck him in the shoulder and the second caught him in the neck; blood spewed from his neck like mount Vesuvius but he was still mobile. He felt weak as he ran now; his yellow shirt had been soaked wet with his own blood. He searched frantically for any escape route; he ran with all his might to the end of the street and cut across to the adjacent street; he yearned for the presence of someone, anyone.

The last bullet hit him on the back of the head and then darkness set in.
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LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 8:28pm On Jul 28, 2014
Tovot: *pukes* tell me another lie.
You're puking? You must have gotten a bun in the oven.
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 8:26pm On Jul 28, 2014
MaziOmenuko: Oga larry! I throw-way salute oh! May vir'gins never scarce for your kingdom!!!
Lol! See prayer! cheesy I don't even know if to say 'amen'.
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 8:25pm On Jul 28, 2014
MaziOmenuko: Yea, right! Will soon venture into soft christian p.o'rn. That would sell very well, won't it? grin
It'd be a blockbuster, coming from you. I can't wait to read it grin

#the most anticipated story of the year#
LiteratureRe: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by LarrySun(m): 8:22pm On Jul 28, 2014
HumbledbYGrace: Mazi? I will go fish for the latest gossip, who's dating who? Who's exposed who's nude pic on this forum? Has a Manfrommars finally converted to either christianity or is he celebrating selah?
Nothing's really changed, except the dating part though. So many people date on person today and jump on another tomorrow. Even some animals have more decency.

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