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Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 9:24pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
*walks into class silently*...ride on partner |
Politics › Re: APC To Fayose: You’re Insensitive Not Paying Ekiti Workers For Yuletide by leki10(m): 9:15pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
betterabia: because its apc that left the salary, it will never get paid?
does the worker work for apc or pdp?
are the workers working for fayemi or fayoshe? is it not for the government they work for? so, whoever is in government should pay they workers. infact the governors should be the last to receive their salary after paying the least worker. I never said dat dey wnt get paid. Fayemi has sinked us in a pool of debt nd Fayose has promised to pay d workers has soon has possible. I believe he will do it.....its beta dan hoping on someone who he is nt paying 4 d monts in dere on tenure like aregbesola.....we know why we voted off APC in ekiti.....osun pple will suffer unda aregbesola for d next 4 yrs.... gudluck to dem
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Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 8:58pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
Sessyjee: *Following* Pls wat's the latest assignment and Please where do we submit assignments...? Nb: Dis is Olu on d whatsapp group.. Create ur thread , post d assignments and tag d teachers |
Politics › Re: APC To Fayose: You’re Insensitive Not Paying Ekiti Workers For Yuletide by leki10(m): 8:54pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
All you blabbing ur spits at fayose nd u ar nt staying in ekiti, jst shut ur shit 4 a moment. Apc govt left 2 months salary of teachers nd 1mont salary of other workers unpaid. Fayose has always paid b4 d 28th of d month since october. Dat APC spokeman is jst high on some cheap beer. As of dis moment, Fayose has paid workers as far as i know (including xmas bonus)... I kno pple who av received. SO FAYOSE HAS PAID SALARY OOO
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Poems For Review › Re: Hallo<>feisty<>veralaw by leki10(m): 12:39am On Dec 21, 2014 |
nice one dear....the aforementioned reviews are correct.... The 4th to the last line should be "dark depth" right? |
Poems For Review › Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by leki10(m): 12:32am On Dec 21, 2014 |
youngcrysta: Moi Free Verse assignment
MORE TO WHAT WE SEE
Told to watch and learn But kept repeating the mistake, Cos I didnt observe the errors. To fly high was in my imagination, In reality I am soaring high. The shoes I wear, Determines my steps to greatness. Have got to keep it shining. Just like the sharp pain in the heart, So also, Like a Stain that needs to be erased.
A smile can make you furious, Anger can led to death. Everything has a second phase, Even the Universe and Life has. To possess is our property, Also to lend is your possession.
The Sun is great, But still have to humble itself every night. The moon shines brightly, But still have to give way to the rain. Stars are breath taking, But will have to be mute, When the cloud pass by. Even High Mountain get scared, they can suddenly become plain. No matter the number of years I have, A day old Angel is to be respected.
CC: Texanomaly, Laykorn, Leki10, Everestdebliu Nice one dear...love d way u expressed dose objects. Work on ur punctuation... ..the sky is ur starting point 1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Should I Wait Or Move Forward by leki10(m): 12:28am On Dec 21, 2014 |
dre11: Nice one merit12
But make sure all your poems are in one place Also you forgot ur punctuation. You didn't give your poem a title.
It will always get better pretty i agree with him. the sky is ur starting point |
Poems For Review › Re: Nairaland Poetry Club Assignments Comments Thread by leki10(m): 11:52pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
WISHES OF HOPE
I wish my wishes could stop being wishes, But rather experiences. Which i live on, Which i learn from. *** I wish my dreams, Could be like streams, Flowing towards a destination, Heading towards my vision, As its sole mission. *** I wish you could give me one chance, To put me out of this trance, And actually hold your hands, So you can cuddle in my arms. To be your twin, And you, my queen, To breathe your breath, To cause no sweat. *** I wish I could see the future Of a nation, With a formidable measure Of protection. Neither ladened With missing lasses, Nor saddened With wailing masses. I refuse to see a fissured future, But rather hope for a sutured signature. 1 Like |
Politics › Re: APC Loses Again In Ekiti, Tribunal Upholds Fayose's Election As Governor by leki10(m): 6:39pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
barcanista: APC will reclaim Ekiti State in 2018 TUFIAKWA!!!! LAILAI!! IT WONT APEN |
Poems For Review › Re: Sweet Nothings: TheScrypt by leki10(m): 9:25am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Scrypt: Couldn't sleep decided to write this...
Somebody Lied
Somebody Lied, And we ate the words as feeds, Lies they told us as kids, Beautiful lies that tasted like sweets, An assurance of tomorrow.
A tomorrow which may not yield, And even if it did, In abundance a bounty of seeds, Seeds not from weeds, In large bags and not quids, Such viewed with raised eyebrows.
Eyebrows of the jealous with deeds, Deeds carried at heart like beads, Beads which has blinded them with greed, Asked they'd refute it, Refute it with words as shields, An offspring he is.
Somebody lied, When they said we'd reap, Reap a plethora of sweet smelling mint, Mint in multiple bundles the size of pints, Accrued for days longer than a stint.
We believed, We believed these lies, We swallowed them like tea They turned out to be expired pills, Pills causing discomfort not just to the teeth, Stomach rumbling to the scars from these seeds, Now nauseated we fall sick, And with regrets we should't have believed.
Somebody lied, Ruminating we wonder who did, The red coats who created the deed? The men in opulence wearing fine prints? Or the FEC sharing the seats? Expectant we wait we sit, We do not care whose head it fits, The axe of justice must make its hit, The liar or offspring must pay the fees.
-TheScrypt
Copy:
Texanomaly Laykorn Leki10
Great work dear, its really wordy. Check ur fourth to the last line. Punctuate it properly, keep it up. |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 9:20am On Dec 19, 2014 |
AfricanApple: whenever you are chanced. good night The RENGA is written by two poets. Its a collabo. The first poet writes a HAIKU has the 1st stanza while the second poet writes a couplet. A Couplet is two line of the same length that rhyme and complete one thought. After the couplet, the first poet write a HAIKU again and they both continue simultaneously until the end of the poem. Hope this helps. |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 9:11am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Infomizer: I get but since the acronym is usually a word, then the length of the poem will be equal to the number of letters in the acronym. I'm tryinna confirm if it can have more than 1 verse, say if I'm looking at a phrase as the title. of course you can use a phrase and it can contain more than a stanza |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 12:53am On Dec 19, 2014 |
AfricanApple: mr leki10, I know bits late but forgive me, I have a question: I don't understand renga poetry, its confusing  feeling sleepy ryt nw...*body no be firewood* lolz......i ll get back to you tomoro. Hope am released?...tnx |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 12:51am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Infomizer: Apparently, an acrostic poem contains just one stanza, yeah? Not necessarily. It depend on how long or short ur acronym is. |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 12:49am On Dec 19, 2014 |
AfricanApple: I just did that. what's the dead line to submit the assignment Amen. thanks, mr lecturer. lol next thursday |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 12:44am On Dec 19, 2014 |
AfricanApple: what do you mean by on your thread, does that mean we will all create different threads if not where are we to submit the assignment You are to create a thread, post ur poems there and ensure dat u tag ur teachers |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 11:44pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
AfricanApple: Jesus! I missed class today just make sure you meet up, you can start frm page 13, dont forget the assignment too. the sky is ur starting point. |
Poems For Review › Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:38pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Vibra: Like this? you have done well |
Poems For Review › Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:17pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Vibra: LOYALTY
Love is your brother Or should I call you loyal? Yearning for you Admist even imposture Lying is your foe Till death always truthful You seem difficult to find these days
Cc:laykorn,leki10 kudos dear, meanwile....work on ur punctuations. Endeavour to punctuate the end of each line. Then in line 4...it should be amidst....keep it up the sky is ur starting point |
Poems For Review › Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by leki10(m): 11:05pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
youngcrysta: HARSH
How can I keep enduring these pains! Always, the word patience lies on human lips, Ready to dish out advices. Seriously, words are mere and cannot soothe Helpless is the word.
CC: laykorn, leki10, taxanomly kudos dear..... since the first line is a question, you should punctuate wit a question mark. Line 4 was not punctuated at the end.....keep it up The sky is ur starting point 1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:49pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Ghostlady: I already did the acrostic type,I ll do a free verse tomao thats gud...welldone...remember to tag a teacher when you post it on ur thread. Thanks. |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:43pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
youngcrysta: My Observation: Mr Laykorn didnt introduce Mr Leki10 as one of our teachers, is he the same person as everestdebliu? No he mistook Leki10 for Lordi please take note |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:37pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Class, since there are suggestions that we should pic a specific type. I suggest that we all go for the FREEVERSE. THANKS
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Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:16pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
dre11: Leki10
You didn't answer my previous question sorry about dat....wich one? if its the one on syllables, i modified the example for u kindly chek page 14 |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:15pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Before we draw the curtains today....anymore question?
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Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:10pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Ghostlady: Mr leki10 I have a question Please anytime we write a poem,since we are just learners..can you let us know what type of poetry it is? Sometimes we just write without knowing the type,it should help us improve... Thank you.  Since we are just learning, any type we write will likely be a free verse till you know a particular type and how to write it. That is why i will suggest free verse. Meanwhile, no matter the type you write, makr sure you tag a teacher so that ur poem can be analysed. Thanks. |
Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:06pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Example of Renga
The final leaf falls, (5) The tree branches are so bare, (7) Autumn has arrived. (5) Remember Summer's warm kiss, (7) So gentle, it will be missed. (7) As the leaves rustle, And the feet also cracks them, As we surged forward, The tornado blew very strong, As we all scurried along.
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Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:04pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
FINALLY FOR TODAY
RENGA Renga, means 'linked poem'. Poets work in pairs or small groups, taking turns composing the alternating three-line and two-line stanzas. To create a Renga, one poet writes the first stanza , which is three lines long with a total of seventeen syllables – the same structure as a haiku. The next poet adds the second stanza, a couplet with seven syllables per line. The third stanza repeats the structure of the first (another haiku) and the fourth repeats the second, alternating in this pattern until the poem is completed.
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Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:02pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
I hope we are all gaining something in this class?
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Poems For Review › Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by leki10(m): 10:00pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Example of haiku
The fingers typing, The eyes clamouring to learn, The heart yearns for more.
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