Michelle
she saw herself going through a tunnel it was dark inside the tunnel but after a while she was outside and she came to a garden which she thought was the garden of Eden Because it was beautiful it was adorned with gold and beautiful flowers as she was looking around a man in white came to her and they conversed for a while before they concluded that it was not her time yet to die and that her God given purpose in life hadn't been fulfilled so the man told her to turn back which she did and.....
she opened her eyes immediately she looked at the ceiling and wondered where she was she looked around and saw no one she tried to remember what brought her here but she couldn't just then the door opened and her mother walked in she was still beautiful despite the fact that she was getting old she walked closer and was surprised when she saw my eyes wide open it was evident In how she opened her mouth wide as she couldn't hide her shock she dropped her bag on the chair and rushed out she was definitely going to call the doctor she was surprised she didn't see Micheal she wondered where he was perhaps he had gone home to freshen up and come back
after some minutes the doctor came in and began to do his check-up as my mom stood there very excited

"so doctor how is she ?"

"well I must say this is a miracle but we will have to watch her for a while and see any changes "

"what do you mean ?"

"normally people who have been in a coma for a long time tend to have amnesia "

"what is that ?"

"temporary memory loss and some it is permanent in her case I can't really say but we will have to watch and.carry out some tests just to be sure "

"alright "she saw her face fell again as the doctor downloaded everything to her she tried to talk but she couldn't as she was too weak she wanted to assure her that she was alright and ask her about Micheal but she was too weak to even move her hands not to talk of talking .....

Micheal
slowly he began to open his eyes but closed it back he tried to remember what had happened to him but his headache would not allow him to think he tried to sit up but the pain in his abdomen wouldn't allow just then everything that happened flooded back to his mind he remembered how he was stabbed as he tried to defend Michelle who an assassin tried to ....he tried to sit up again but failed before the voice of the nurse told him to stop

"my name is patience sir am the nurse assigned to you .

he looked at the lady and tried to access her she was fair and slim he noticed she was smiling he nodded that he heard all what she said

"please sir don't try to sit up because that can be disastrous I would advise you to lay low and relax "

"Please how is Michelle doing is she alright?"

"who is Michelle?

"the lady whom I brought here that is in coma "

"ohh that lady that I heard an assassin tried to attack yesterday what about her ?"

"please I hope she is alright"

"yes she is okay thanks for God and you she would have been dead "
he heaved a sigh of relief as he heard that she was okay
he closed his eyes for a while and said prayers of appreciation to God for keeping her alive if something had happened to her he was not sure how he was going to live his life without her his life would be empty without her
the nurse gave him some injections before she went out... TBC

good morning to you all I should have typed this yesterday but something came up and I couldn't my apologies

NURSE
she began to rush and put everything she was gonna need into the tray she should have done this sooner but she had lost track of time if the doctor knew of this he would be very pissed
her other partner was busy typing something on the system it was hard to tell what it was she ignored her and quickly rushed out on her other nurses told her to take things easy or at that rate she was surely going to trip and fall and that would mean her going back and taking another round of meds after coming down the stairs she finally got to the ward she was she was in a placed in a private room which was very expensive and the oxygen was even more expensive she got to the door and found it ajar she stood to their to catch her breath before she pushed the door gently opened and what she saw was very shocking there was Mr Micheal on the floor in the pool of his own blood and a man holding a knife with blood immediately the tray on her hands dropped on the floor and the man turned back he was wearing a black mask but she could see his eyes their were cold as anything she gasped for breath and covered her mouth with her two hands just then the man began to charge towards her she quickly stepped back and she almost stumbled but she didn't allow herself to do so before the man could get to her she took to her heels and ran outside
he stood in the hallway and looked at her as she ran he needed to get out of this place or else he would be arrested and caught and that would be a disaster he looked around to see if there is anything that could implicate him and. serve as evidence to the police but he found none he looked out through the Hallway and still saw no one he began to run slowly and took the way which was a sewer unknown to others .... TBC

Micheal
chapter two
he opened the door and what he saw really shocked him he was seeing someone trying to kill his fiancee he rubbed his face just so he would be sure the man who was wearing black mask noticed and turned back bringing out his pen knife from and Micheal could see that he was ready to fight and he was equally ready for this crazy man who was trying to murder his fiancee
suddenly he charged at the man and gave him an heavy punch which landed on his stomach the blow didn't seem to hurt the man the knife was still in his hand so he needed to get rid of it but his hold was very strong on it. so like that two of them struggled on for supremacy after a while the man gave him an heavy punch on his face and it sent it landed on his back on the floor it was like he was seeing stars in tue sky but he something told him he shouldn't lose consciousness or else he will lose her forever but before he could stand up the man was on top of him and In that moment the man stabbed him right in his stomach and he began to lose his consciousness.. TBC

Please where can I find this book

i will surely update when am chanced

izaray:
Marvel15 You are too much jare, have miss u like mad

thank you so much i have really missed you also hope you had a great day

thank you all for reading my first novel on nairaland it's been a joy having wonderful people like you read it and I promise you that medicine will be nothing short of exceptional

Michael
it had been three weeks already that she has been in coma and it seems it was taking forever for her to wake up he was sitting beside her and was already dozing off when the doctor entered into the room he was almost falling off the chair but he was woken by the presence of the doctor he stood immediately

"doctor what's happening why is she not awake yet?"

"that I can't explain either but it seems she went into coma already by the look on things "

"coma!!!"

"remember I told you it's very possible that she enters into coma "

"so what's are the chances of her waking up "

"it's 50-50 percent chance or she might not wake up forever "
he sank into the chair for the first he felt like crying but he held it in
how was he going to live without her the doctor came and comforted with words of encouragement he felt a little better after a hearing those words ....

**********
he jumped into the premises of the hospital without been noticed he was wearing a mask so as not to be recognized he looked around and saw no one before he advanced he looked from the window and two nurses on the counter one was dozing off while the other one was working on something he was not sure off he kept walking there has to be a back door in case of emergency after a while he located it and opened it gently and went inside
the hallway was dark since the place was not frequently visited and everywhere was dusty he put on his flashlight and it gave a little light to the place there he was able to find his way he continued walking until he came to a door which will lead into the hospital a security man on watch as he paraded he began to think of ways to get rid of the man then an idea struck in his mind he would lure him out and take him out slowly he saw a piece of stone opened the door slowly and threw it at the direction of the man he was at alert immediately he began to approach the door when he go there and opened the door gently and entered flashing his flashlight suddenly he came from behind and strangled him gently and he dropped dead slowly he removed his uniform and put it on which was the perfect disguise he took. searched the man and saw a bunch of keys and wondered what it was for he took it and put it inside his pocket and set out
once in the hospital he didn't have any problem walking around but he hoped he would not be recognized by the nurses he needed to move fast so he wouldn't be caught after a while he located the room which she was admitted and opened the door slowly and went inside he brought out the injection he was about to inject the content into the drip when the door opened.....********

am sorry for not updating all this while it's due to. some problems am currently facing at home from my dad it's really beyound me so it's a little hard for me to seat down and think of what to update my apologies and I promise to make it up to you guys for the delay once I have gotten the bearing of my life...

thanks so much and am sorry that the update was short but I will try and make it more long when I update good morning to you all

chief
he was very pissed as he was walking up and down in front of the boys there were three of them as they bowed there heads in total shame

"why can't you guys just do a job properly the job I have you was pretty simple kill someone who is in the way of my progress but you let the person slip through your fingers am highly dissappointed in you"

one of the guy who aparently was their leader spoke first

"sir even if we have a thousand tongue we have no excuse to give sir "

"of course I would have killed you guys but you have been with me through thick and thin I remember when you rigged the election results for me I felt happy because i have guys like you by my side so I will give you guys one more chance i want you to go inside and finish what you couldn't finish"

"yes sir" they answered in unison

"and am sure you don't want to fail me because I will surely not forgive you guys regardless of what you have done for me"

"I assure you sir that we will not fail you"
they saluted before everyone dispersed he came out of the uncompleted building and looked around he went straight to where his car was parked which was hidden the driver on sighting him came down and opened the door for him the man waited until he entered before closing the door he entered into the driver seat started the ignition and drove off

Happy Sunday to you guys I would have updated but I was very busy please Pardon me update will come in the night when I will be chanced

Micheal
he was driving at a very fast speed he was very worried and at the same began to pray in his heart after Driving for about fifteen minutes he got to the hospital he got the call from earlier he came down and remove the key he didn't even remember to lock the door as he ran inside the pace he ran in almost scared the wits out of the nurse at the counter

"good evening nurse "

"good evening what can I do for you ?"

"please a lady with a gun shot wound was brought in some minutes ago please is she okay?"

"well am not in the position to answer that but I will tell you to relax and wait for the doctor to come out of the operating room I think he is in the best position to answer that "

"alright"
he couldn't seat down as he kept pacing up and down praying in his heart
after about an hour the doctor came out and he quickly rushed to meet him

"doctor how is she ?"

"thankful she is okay for now because we have managed to removed the bullet and she is on oxygen all we need to do is to pray for God's intervention" so how are you related to her ?"


"am her fiance "

"what about her family ?"

"have already informed them ? they would he here soon "


"alright while we wait for them come to my office and sign some documents "

"alright" he followed the doctor to his office


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he sat by her side on the bed and held her hand gently before he kissed it he couldn't believe the one he spoke with some minutes ago is lying on the bed fighting for her life he tried hard to fight the tears that were forming in his eyes as he sat crying gently the door opened and a woman entered he could see the striking resemblance between the two of them if he was meeting both of them for the first time he would have said they were twin
the woman of average height and despite her age she was still beautiful she moved closer to her side and bursted into tears he tried his possible best to console the woman after all the crying he told her everything and how he was related to her she thanked her and they went to see the doctor together for the full report of the surgery... TBC

Michelle
this week has been the greatest week for her as she got a present from Micheal that she would never forget in her life she wasn't expecting it at all everyone in her company could feel her mood she sat on her desk and she couldn't stop admiring the ring on her finger she had kissed it a million times she was so overwhelmed now the preparations for the wedding and other stuff will start she couldn't wait to get married to him and be addressed as his wife she checked her time it was almost 11pm she needed to start preparing his lunch and take it to his office by 12 she would be done and she will then take it to him she stood up took her car keys and headed out .....

************
she just finished from the office that day and she was very tired and she needed to rest she took her bag and headed to her car she entered started the engine and drove off now on the main road a call came in it was Micheal she parked by the roadside and picked his call

"hello Michael "

"hello Michelle where are you ?"

"am on my way back home "

"alright can you help me get something at the restaurant "

"what is that ?*

"help me buy pizza I will reimburse you when you are come back"

"alright "she dropped the call and started the engine back again after driving for a while she stopped at a restaurant and came down as she came down a black and tinted car parked slowly and the glass slided down she looked back and alas a gun was pointed at her a pistol before she could try to run the gun went off and it hit her on the chest immediately she went down and in the twinkle of an eye she was in the pool of her own blood her eyes began to close slowly until she lost consciousness... TBC

Thanks so much for the messages am very grateful i have been busy because of the election i was part of those recruited I will update either today or tomorrow....love you all

morning to you all

good morning to you and happy Sunday

Michelle
they both sat down in the compound on the couple's chair and each other arms as they cuddled up close to each other for her this was far the most romantic and beautiful proposal on Earth she looked at the diamond ring once again as it was even shining in the dark she was so happy that her wish finally came to pass.the only thing remaining for them is to start preparing for their wedding she was going to make sure her wedding goes down in history she looked at Micheal who his eyes were shut

"Michael are you sleeping?"
she tapped him gently and his eyes opened

"nope am not "

"alright so since when have you been planning this that I didn't even know something like that was going to happen"

"it's been a while I deliberately didn't give you any clue because it's a surprise "

"well you really surprised me today because first I wasn't expecting a birthday party and the second part was totally out of my imagination I couldn't have imagined something like that was going to happen"

"yeah of course "

"am sure you must be very tired "

"been tired is an understatement am exhausted "

"how about somethingsweet to make you relax ?"

she moved from his side and was on top of him kissing and romancing him when he couldn't take it he responded and grabbed her by the waist ... TBC

emperorblog21:
interesring story OP comma continue o.

enjoy my ziggy

give me some time because am very busy with a lot stuff during the day

skubido:



Morning man, how u dey

am fine brother I would have updated yesterday but my phone was low I will do that unfailing today thanks for your understanding

famopompy:
Wow!!!! I am extremely happy for them. This is lovely

morning everyone

good morning everyone

MICHELLE
she left the building and located her car where she parked it she was just trying told that Micheal took the day off yesterday that he had already told them previously that he won't be showing up for work that day she was confused as to why he didn't mention anything to him this morning while he was in going out if he didn't come to work where could he possibly be she dialed his number but it was not reachable it was very odd she entered into the car started the ignition and drove off she didn't even know where to go the whole disoriented her and she didn't know what to do she concluded she was going home to relax for a while she tried his other number it wasn't reachable she was miles away from her house when her phone began to ring it was an unknown number she parked by the roadside and picked the call

"hello please who is this ?"

"hello Michelle it's me mark "

"mark what do you want from me again? I thought I made it clear to you that you should never call me again "

"of course you did but I called because I wanted to wish you a happy birthday and many more years in prosperity and good health and happiness in your relationship"

"thank you so much for the wishes"

"he seemed like a good man "

"what do you mean?"

"I mean your new boyfriend "

"have a you been spying on me ?"

"no I just kept close tabs with you and moreso that guy seemed like a good man to you I hope he is trying you right "

"thank you so much for the concern but I really have to go " she quickly hanged up and drove on
she pressed the horn before the gate man opened the gate and she drove in she came down and walked to the gate man

"musa did my fiancee come home when I went to work "

"you mean oga he hasn't come home since he left this morning is everything okay?"

"yeah don't worry yourself "
she walked briskly straight to the house she opened the door and found the whole place dark she wondered why the lights was off she left it on before she went to work this morning she looked for the switch and switched it on while she was struggling to remove her shoes she heard a sound she turned back to the direction of where the sound came from and she got the surprise of her life she couldn't believe it the whole room was full

"Happ birthday to you ...... Happy birthday to you Michelle....and so on " she just looked on as she saw Micheal singing and clapping as he sang the birthday song
she was totally striken she didn't know when tears began to roll down her cheeks she just stood there totally dumbfounded as Micheal came forward and presented her a bouquet of flowers

"happy birthday sweetie I wish you long life and prosperity"
she managed to collect the flowers but couldn't stop the tears

"oh come on baby "Micheal went close to her and hugged her
"if you keep crying your make up will be ruined "

"who cares about my makeup when I just witnessed the most wonderful birthday party ever " after she was okay she began to greet the guest one after the other she was even surprised to see her parents

"mom and dad thanks so much for coming "
as she hugged them she looked and saw how the whole place was decorated then she saw her friend Patricia

"Patricia don't tell me you knew about this "

"I just helped with the decorations and the food coupled with the drinks "

"that's not fair why didn't you tell me?"

"it's a surprise birthday party for you how could I possibly tell you that "

she drew her closer as they both hugged
the m.c began his duty in earnest

*******
he was now getting anxious as the party was coming to an end they had cut the cake and after that it would be time for dancing he had to do something or else his whole plan will be ruined he stood and drew Michelle to the stage and whispered something to the m.c the man nodded and handed him the microphone the man stepped back

"I want to thank everyone that honored to my invitation am sure you all had a great time tonight and also thank all those who made this planning a success thank you so much and moreso I want to thank my heartrob for the impact she had so far in my life she had been a wonderful woman to me she was the only person who believed in me when others didn't she gave me her unprecedented support every night and day thats why my love for her will never dwindle she is a great woman who am lucky to have someone like her
she turned to her and looked at her straight in the eye

"since the day I met you my life has taken a new turn you have shown me love in another dimension you comforted me when I was in sorrow my love for you is for eternity "and in that moment he held her hand and knelt down as he brought out a small box which contained a ring

"will you do me the honor of been the queen of.my kingdom will you marry me.michelle?"
it was very hard to believe as she covered her hands with her mouth in astonishment she was blown off she shaken out of her reverie by chants of people around them she blinked twice just to be sure she wasn't dreaming he was still there with the ring in his hand waiting for her answer

"Michelle are you alright?"

"yessssss... I will marry you " he stood up and she embraced her he took the ring and slipped it into her fourth finger
at last she got what she had been waiting for. they both kissed each other passionately as they almost forgot people were around after the kissing well wishes began to come to congratulate them.. TBC

MICHAEL
after he left Patrick place he dialed a number it rang a fee times before the person answered


"hello musa it's me "
the man recognized his voice I'm definitely

"hello oga "

"I want to ask you if my fiancee has gone to work "

"you mean madam"

"yes "

"she just left some minutes ago hope all is well oga"

"of course don't worry yourself I just want you to do me a favour I have a friend named Patricia she is the best friend of my fiancee she will be coming over to the house to do some decorations and other necessary things allow her to enter when she comes it's possible she gets there before me that's why am telling you this"

"alright oga I will do as you have said "

"okay "he quickly dropped the call and dialed Patricia's number It rang a few times before she picked up

"hello Patricia "

"hello Michael"

"I was told now that she has gone to work so you are free to do whatever you need to do so make sure you decorate the inside very well don't forget the fact that it's a surprise birthday party"

"alright I will keep that in mind "

"thanks "

"alright so when will you join me "

"in thirty minutes time I have to go somewhere very important briefly I assure you I won't exceed more than thirty minutes make sure you do a perfect job"

"don't worry yourself that's my area of specialization "

"I trust you"he quickly hanged up and went into his car .. TBC

famopompy:
Marvel my guy. Thanks

how you dey now

MICHAEL
He had already told them in the office that he was not going to come that day because he had to prepare for michelles surprised birthday party he thought about where to go and decided to visit an old friend of his who they went to the same university he just me him recently when he wen to the store to buy groceries one evening they had both been so happy to see each other they ended the meeting with exchanging numbers he followed the description he gave and found himself in front of a house he wasnt sure was the one he looked hoping to see someone who can help him out but there was no one around he turned back to go when someone called his name he turned to see who it was and alas it was Patrick

"Micheal what are you doing in my neighborhood?"

"I came to visit you of course "

"Me ? You didnt inform me you were coming"

"Yeah i wanted to surprise you"

"Alright come in let's go inside " he usherd him and they both went inside.. TBC

chief
he had gotten an idea on what he was going to do but it was very risky because he risks even getting into more trouble it's better to let the bees stay at their hive than scatter it because the consequences will be disastrous in this life everything is a risk that if you don't take you can't succeed he had come a long way than to let one idiot run his plans he will do whatever it takes he gulped the remaining content in the cup and went out

***************
Michelle
today was her birthday March 15 to be precise she could remember her mom telling when she was a little older that she was a cry baby when she was a toddler
Michael had woken her up very early since he had to go to the office and prayed for her he prophesied into her life as she held her hand in prayers after the prayer session he gave her a good morning kiss as they hugged each other

"aren't you going to give me a gift ?"

"of course I will get on my way back from the office "

"Alright"

"I think I will be going to the office today I can't stay at home just because today is my birthday"

"that's a good idea go to the office and check out how things are going in the office you can use that opportunity to check the account "

"yeah of course"

"which time are you going?"

"perhaps 9am and in the afternoon I will bring your lunch",

"won't that be too stressful for you I mean I can just eat outside"

"I think we have already talked about this I really dont support the idea of you eating in outside don't bother about the stress I will go through am happy to do it"

"alright you win "

"just go and take your shower while I go prepare your breakfast"

"alright "he quickly slipped out of his pyjamas and tied a towel around his waist and went into the bathroom after some minutes he came out and got dressed before going to the sitting room he found her setting the table he quickly joined her in the setting before she served him breakfast
after the breakfast he stood up he was now ready to go
he drew her close and kissed her

"Happy birthday to you sweetheart "

"thank you " he carried his briefcase and headed out of the house.. TBC

Missmossy:
Such a fascinating story, keep it coming. Thumbs up marvel15!!

thanks so much sweetheart

Jentle244:
marvel I must say u are really marvellous. more grease to your elbow. don't know if u like criticism. I would love to point out one or two errors. but all the same ride on

please do point out the errors I will very much Appreciate it