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This thread is a child of necessity and legitimate offspring of the 'Star Warz' Battle thread.All results,pairings and relevant information shall be pasted here,while d battling itself continues on the original thread.

All complaints,comments and observations may be posted here.

To encourage audience participation,interested members of d public may also post their comments and predictions here.

Signed
Yours Judicially,
Judge Maverik

PANEL REPORT ON BOLAJIBOAK/FLOWSHOW STANDOFF:

It is the recommendation of the panel set up to investigate d allegations of double-identity and Schizophrenia levelled against d above named persons that:

1) Bolajibaok and Flowshow shall battle themselves to prove their innocence.

2)Whoever wins d battle shall be allowed to remain as a lawful contestant on Star Warz.

3)in the event that they refuse to battle themselves,the case against them shall be deemed proved beyond reasonable doubt and they shall both be ex-communicated frm the thread and ignored by other contestants.

I hereby adopt the recommendations of the panel and rule accordingly.

@Bolajibaok & Flowshow

U are hereby paired together to battle .This is to prove u are separate individuals and not d same person. Whoever wins gets to remain in the contest.To arms! Gentlemen!

FROM THE 36TH CHAMBER:

In the wake of my learned brother,Zephyrr's temporary leave of absence from the thread,iam left saddled with the responsibility of presiding over this thread.

I wish to make an appeal to all combatants and well-wishers alike to give me their maximum co-operation in hosting a successful rap tourney. I do not profess to know everything about battling there4 helpful suggestions would be welcome if made in a polite and civilized manner.

Any contestants who feels aggrieved wt d results of my analysis may appeal for a re-trial giving justifiable reasons why his or her case should be re-examined.

All emcees both seasoned veterans and Young bucks alike,are strictly enjoined to treat each other wt d utmost respect and courtesy as deserving of one black man to another.

I wish everyone a successful campaign on 'STAR WARZ'.Nuff Respeck!

MORE RESULTS!

HYBRID-X VS WORDSMITH

HYBRID-X:

Punchlines - 14
Quote:"u wack like flowshow/lyrically over-retarded like Bolaji-broke"
Quote:"throw a couple of bars,damn,wordsmith caught stroke"
Quote:"u's kermet d frog/knew u since u was a tadpole"(I smell Talib Kweli)
Quote:"Word, u ran out of luck,smith"
Quote:"when the X walks thru ur street-alleys/ish becomes d valley of d shadow of death"
Quote:"hybrid's force,u forced 2 reckon wt,u f.cking nitwit"
Quote:"my rhymes on steroids,u cant keep up"

Wordplay - 8
Quote:"ma tongue spits automatics sporadic"
Quote:"lyrically over-retarded like BOLAJI-BROKE"
Quote:"threw a couple of bars,wordsmith caught stroke"
Quote:"X breeds more terror recruitment"

Metaphors - 8
Quote:"my rhymes on steroid,u cant keep up"
Quote:"first blood like Rambo"
Quote:"wack like flowshow/lyrically over-retarded like Bolaji-broke"
Quote:"freeze hart's war like d north pole"

Multies - 4
Quote:"knew u since u was a TADPOLE/im dat rap veteran SLASH PRO"
Quote:"Word CAUGHT STROKE/freeze hart' war like d NORTH POLE"

Creativity - 7
(got depth)

Delivery - 5
(cud be better structured)

Total = 46 pts

WORDSMITH:

Punchlines - 16
Quote:"smith cock guns/d result? U get lost on/a wkend i hover over ur carcass,u's a lost one"
Quote:"I make hybrid dig less/wt his remains on a 1+5 ft deepness"
Quote:"even if dis b.tch gets signed by UEFA/u still not in my league"
Quote:"d hybrid u are/u must hve been born wt a minus rib"
Quote:"just let me find dat tool then let d tool find u/dis chicken's scared/i let d crimson red(blood) blind u"
Quote:"I break bread wt d divine/u's just a mere carnality"
Quote:"B please,u get worn down/like h*es doin a strip tease"
Quote:"what a trans-hybrid/u wanted d best of both of both worlds"

Wordplay - 14
Quote: "I hover(HOVA) over ur carcass/u's a LOST ONE"
Quote:"foretell ur doom whenever i breed illness"
Quote:"(W)rap it up like xmas packages"
Quote:"even if u signed wt UEFA/u still aint in my LEAGUE"
Quote:"Just let ME FIND dat TOOL and let d TOOL FIND YOU"
Quote:my VERSATILITY brings about dat lethal VERBAL FATALITY"
Quote:"I break bread wt d DIVINE/u just a mere CARNALITY"

Multies - 6
Quote:"wherever I BREED ILLNESS/i make hybrid dig less,on a 1+5 FEET DEEPNESS"
Quote:"took u a week 2 come up wt dat WEAK ISH/u get worn down like h*es doin a STRIP TEASE"
Quote:"dnt blush so COLD GURL/what a trans-hybrid,guess u wanted d best of BOTH WORLDS"

Metaphors - 8
Quote:" Word be dat psychic illness"
Quote:"shit so sick,i write verses on toilet paper"
Quote:"(W)rap it up like xmas packages"
Quote:"get worn down like h*es doing a strip tease"

Delivery - 7
(good structure)

Creativity - 8
(nice way wt words)

Total = 57 pts

(it was a pleasure analyzing dis battle.Had 2 take my time.Good fight,fellaz!)

@HYBRID-X

I dnt intend analyzing any battle involving Menike till i am convinced he doesnt harbour any more reservations about my competence and credibility as a Judge on dis thread.I wud rather avoid d controversy it may generate.Overstand?

RESULTS! RESULTS!

SIMMY VS WORDSMITH

SIMMY:

Punchlines - 10
Quote:"nitwit,is dat an apt name 4 wordsmith/go forge words in ur h*e's anal pit"
Quote:"same ol gangsta rap coming out ur ass/pet past dat level fast or ill verbally put u in a cast"
Quote:"ur as fly as sparrow?/no wonder ur b.ch swallows my cock"
Quote:"[yeah,looka me,im frm d mo'fokking dirty south]/gimme a break dog,u guys are so lame"
Quote:"what happnd 2 real hiphop,word,give it a thot/and maybe one day ur lyrics wil be hot"

Wordplay - 6
Quote:"u spit sm tight sh.t/bt d sh.t u spit really stinks to me"
Quote:"dimwit is an apt name 4 a gay.t named wordsmith"
Quote:"i blame d industry coy ur stars are d same/saucekid to P.Diddy,50 to ikesilly(Ikechukwu)

Metaphors - 0

Multies - 0

Delivery - 6
(not bad at all)

Creativity - 4
(needs work)

Total = 26

WORDSMITH:

Punchlines - 10
Quote:"i bring myself so low/well,call dis child abuse"
Quote:"even if i was siamese,i still wudnt think twice/pick a slick knife/then slice dis bitch nice"
Quote:"spank dis brat till he screams 'Abba Father/see me see wahala/bt then u see simmy's cadaver"
Quote:"u aint worth a dime,u's nuthin bt loose change/Cmon smile, u's at d bottom of d food chain"
Quote:"wit my piss and shit as ur diet(errh! Gross!)

Wordplay - 6
Quote:"i bring myself low/well call dis child abuse"
Quote:"spank dis brat till he screams 'Abba Father'
Quote:"offer a 3 plate course plate for Judges reviews/verdict: a steaming carcass wt a savour u cant refuse"

Metaphors - 0

Multies - 8
Quote:"cant help bt SMILE AT U/i bring myself low,call it CHILD ABUSE"
Quote:"offer a 3 plat course for JUDGE REVIEWS/verdict:a savour u CANT REFUSE"
Quote:"u's nuthin bt LOOSE CHANGE/u's at d bottom of d FOOD CHAIN"
Quote:"piss and shit as ur DIET/u CRY BEST/wordsmith remains d FLYEST"

Delivery - 8
(sound structure)

Creativity - 8
(spankin humour)

Total = 40


Coming up shortly,
HYBRID-X VS WORDSMITH!

FROM THE 36TH CHAMBER:

In the light of Zephyrr's Valedictory Speech and temporary leave of absence from d battle thread,Iam left wt no option but to serve as Judge and Jury on this tourney.However i believe dat no man is d sole conservatory of knowledge and i might err in some of my Judgements,there4 any contestant who is aggrieved by any of d results delivered by me is at liberty to appeal to d THE COLONEL.

I solicit d co-operation and understanding of both contestants and well-wishers alike to make dis tourney a successful.Please do not hesitate to profer useful suggestions in helping me run the thread in a polite and civilized manner.I would like to wish all contestants both seasoned vets and young bucks alike a successful hunt! Goodwill hunting,Lady & Gentlemen!

@Mailmalc
Observation noted!

@The Community

I see some nu sh*t be up for stool analysis!

HYBRID-X VS WORDSMITH (Clash of the Titans)

SIMMY VS WORDSMITH (Methinks Somebody got murdered)

Results coming up shortly!

MORE RESULTS!

MAILMALC VS OBEDZ

MAILMALC:

Punchlines - 8
Quote: "stay on u like a disease/dat can never be cured/like a bad habit,Uve been defined 2 be dropped"
Quote:"In clubs we be sippin on dubs/Obedz strippin,he be doin his job"
Quote:"Kick u till ur folks beg me 2 stop/put ma 9's in ur head,ur brains just gat popped"
Quote:"I sure make u Obes (Obesity) wt overdose of ma flows"

Wordplay - 6
Quote:"my multies mixed wt IN RHYMES/d result be ILL LINES"
Quote:"U got d ball in ur court,u still cudnt hit it"
Quote:"Uz a toothless dog,so futile"

Metaphors - 2
Quote:"stay on u like a disease dat can never be cured"

Multies - 0

Delivery - 6
(Good presentation skills)

Creativity - 6
(not bad at all)

Total = 28

OBEDZ:

Punchlines - 8
Quote: "B.G bout to be an O.G,coz dats what ur death warrant say"
Quote:"no rhyme,no style,am a leave u ass wt wounds"
Quote:"drag ur ass round ur hood/wt ur balls tied to ma booth"
Quote:"I light up nigga's house and watch ma grillz shine"

Wordplay - 4
Quote:"B.G bout to be O.G,coz dats wat ur death warrant say"
Quote:"I light up nigga's house and watch ma grillz shine"

Metaphors - 0

Multies - 0

Delivery - 8
(very good structure)

Creativity - 6
(dat line about 'grillz shining' was dope!)

Total = 26

Phew! (mops brow) dat was so close! Gotta go.

@Naijafan

Sori dude,my instructions are to analyze ONLY FRESH CASES! Hola at Zephyrr for further directives.Peace!

RESULTS HEREBY RELEASED:

SAUCEKID VS ALEXPISSU

SAUCEKID:

Punchlines - 4
Quote: "Alexpissu,Uz a worn out tissue/luv 2 disintegrate u/but dat aint d issue" (kinda weak bt i let u get away wt it)
Quote: "Im a don/step into yo hood/see u run 4 d hen coop"

Metaphors - 2
Quote:"I spit flows like a 9' O spas"

Wordplay - 2
Quote : "I do it better than M O Inc"

Multies - 0

Delivery - 4
(cud be better)

Creativity - 2
(needs work)

Total = 14 pts

ALEXPISSU:

Punchlines - 7
Quote:"dis midget saucekid said im a worn out tissue/i laugh coz i destroyed his white blood cells,so wats d issue"(dat was a killer punch!)
Quote:My shadow is the T so ur d error/coz u wan make ur dreamz come true battling ur mentor"
Quote: "Ur verses are crippled coz u wudnt step to make ya rap accomplishment"

Metaphors - 2
Quote:"me without rap is like a monitor wtout d keyboard"

Wordplay - 4
Quote:"my shadow is the T so u the Error"
Quote: "ur verses are crippled coz u wudnt step"

Multies - 0

Delivery - 4
(needs better structuring)

Creativity - 4
(cud be better)

Total = 21 pts

@Naijafan
I stand corrected.
Naijafan Vs Hybrid-X
(waiting 4 Hybrid-x to retaliate)

@Flowshow
(opens case file)
U,Flowshow are being charged wt d offence of d crime of self-reincarnation.Evidence laid b4 me strongly suggest dat U and Bolajiboak was suspended frm dis thread are one and d same person.This is a violation of our code which forbids multiple registration and self-replication by any contestant. If found guilty as charged, u will be excommunicated frm d thread.

Body of Evidence:
1) The testimony oe Mailmalc against U.
2) The observations of other emcees on d thread.
3) Zephyrr's report on d striking similarity btw ur rap style and Bolajibaok's.

However,the law presumes u guilty until proven innocent.Go ahead and battle Afrocynic.I'll analyze d verses.But take note u are still under trial.U can plead d Fifth Amendment if u wish to.

@Saucekid
Im sori directives hve been issued 2 me 2 disregard ur battle wt Flowshow who's currently being investigated 4 double-identification.A shrink has been called in to carry out some psycho-analysis for possible traces of SCHIZOPHRENIA.Pls call another opponent.

Star Warz: Situation Report.

Ratings:

Malthuss - 2 Bars
HYBRID-X - 2 Bars
Wordsmith - 2 Bars
AfroCynic - 2 Bars
Alexpissu - 2 Bars
Mailmalc - 1 Bar
Kress - 0 Bar
Heyo - 0 Bar
Simmy - 0 Bar
Obedz - 0 Bar

Battles:

Naijafan Vs Hybrid (No shots fired yet)

Kress Vs Heyo (No shots fired yet)

Simmy Vs Wordsmith (Wordsmith itching to draw first blood)

Hybrid Vs Wordsmith
(Wordsmith ready to strike back)

Mailmalc Vs Simmy
(Waiting for Simmy's response)

Malthuss Vs Paddy_lo
(Waiting for Paddy's response)

RESULTS PENDING:

Saucekid Vs Alexpissu (Under Process)

Obedz Vs Mailmalc
(Under Process)

@Toyinrayo & Obedz

Well,well,what do we have here? A lovers' tiff right in d middle of a war zone! I guess dis is just d comic relief we need 2 de-fuse all d tension.

Newayz i'll be releasing d situation report shortly.All trigger-happy emcees should keep their chromes on safety while we enjoy dis romantic break from d norm.Go grab some Popcorn,today's Sunday(give it a rest).

In d lite of Zephyrr's prolonged absence,the ball falls on me to preside over the thread.List of pending cases due 4 analysis and fresh pairings to be released shortly.

@Zephyrr

I need u to assign the next cases up for analysis.There's been a lotta cross-firing and multiple battling going on.We need to streamline this thread.Pls let me have the schedule of cases so i can get crackin on em.I'm waiting!

Wow! This is my first visit 2 d Gospel Rap thread and im getting inspired already.Funny,i neva thot gospel rap cud be dis off-da-chain! Yall droppin some ill dopeness in here.Wud have luvd 2 analyze some of ur verses but since its gospel,i guess dat privilege is reserved 4 G.O.D.

@Rapsody
Hybrid done told me about u. U d TRUTH son,aint lying!
If u eva change ur mind about battling,drop smtin on d battlethread.I wud luv 2 analyze ur cyphaz.

@Wordsmith
Alwayz tight,money! U shud take Jduck13's suggestion.Hiphop still has d power 2 feed u(ask Modo).

@Jduck13
Pleased 2 make ur acquaintance.Tight thread u got here.Dont let d fire go out.

(sighs) Such a refreshing change from d verbal assaults going on.(hears shots going off)
They done started again.Gotta go,duty calls.Catch me on the 'Star Warz' thread!

@Saucekid

I apologize 4 keepin u on hold.My instructions are to ignore all posts by Flowshow A.K.A Bolajibaok until d community decides on what to do about him.I suggest u take on another opponent until dis mess is cleared up.Goodwill hunting!

@Mailmalc

Rap battles usually consist of 2 rounds so no contestant gets d unfair advantage.however,considering d peculiar nature of dis battle thread especially in d light of d multiple battling and cross-firing going on at d same time,insisting on a 2-round battle would unnecessarily complicate thangs.
We only insist on 2-round battles in exceptional cases where d winner of d bout is in doubt.If u feel urs falls within exception,pls dnt hesitate to let us know.

But like hinted u b4,throwbacks are risks u must anticipate when spitting first in a battle.
what u need 2 do is protect urself by sealing up loopholes in ur verses so ur adversary doesnt take advantage(like Afrocynic did). I refer u to Eminem's final freestyle battle in d movie "8th Mile".After he was done with his verse,his opponent had nuthin to throw back at em.

However,if u still get hit by a throwback,make sure ur next opponent spits first.

D illest emcees still standing are warring on d battle thead:"Star Warz". The eventual outcome determines the current Top Ten for '07.

@Mailmalc

Afro played a smart one on U.She took advantage of d fact dat u spat first and used ur own lines to hit u! Remember to use dat leverage next time u battle.

There's nuthing more tragic than gettin shot wt ur own ammunition.Dats what we call SELF-ANNIHILATION!

@Zephyrr
Im not a hanging-Judge,so i'll let d other contestants pass sentence on Bolaji themselves!
Next case please?

@Everyone

Pls confirm the guilt or otherwise of Bolajibaok/Flowshow and recommend appropriate sanction.Awaiting ur response,Gentlemen!

Lauryn Hill off d Album 'The Score'
Quote: "So why u wanna imitate an Al capone/ill be Nina Simone/and defeacating on ur microphone!"

Mailmalc Vs Afrocynic

Mailmalc:

Punchlines - 6
Quote:"Afro aint a cripple bt wud pass 4 lame/bitchslap u in 3D,guess dats ur price of shame"
"rotate u like nintendo Joy-stick/Uz a kid,so i leave u toy-stick"
"Uz a ho-gimmik/unlike Vin,i obliterate ur chronicles/leave em wt no riddick"

Wordplay - 3
Quote: "Afrocynic a typical malfunction wt no source"
"i remain the King why u remain my subject unlike mathematics"
(Cud be better)

Metaphors - 0

Multies - 3
"Uz a HO-GIMMICK/obliterate ur chronicles/leave em wt no RIDDICK"

Delivery - 6
(Good structure,bt cud be better)

Creativity - 3

Total - 21 pts

Afrocynic:

Punchlines - 8
Quote: "25 yrs old,Nigga got no dough,no flow/scared punk gotta lay low"
"He's got 2 balls yet no goals" (ouch!)
"Your rap career's a go-slow" (Damn!)
"U cudnt intoxicate me wt a key of Yayo"

Wordplay - 6
Quote:"dis Nigga wanna battle a corpse/he wantr a b*tch wt no pulse" (Nice retort!)
"U better take a pause/,u shoot a fair on but no metaphors"
"This is a platinum rap Nigga,no gold"

Metaphors - 0

Multies - 6
Quote: "Dis is platinum rap,NO-GOLD/ur rap career's a GO-SLOW"
"Cudnt intoxicate me wt a key of YAYO/now do d sum at my SAY SO"

Delivery - 6
(very orderly presentation)

Creativity - 6
(Afro played it smart.She scored off Mailmalc by building on his disses to her.Dats creativity)

Total - 32

@Flowshow

(wags an admonishing finger at him)
Tsk tsk, Bolajibaok! Uve been a very naughty boy!

@Zephyrr

Mailmalc Vs Afrocynic: Collateral Damage Report coming up shortly.

@Zephyrr
I guess that settles it. Hybrid-X has given back d 1 bar from his battle wt Brandedben/Dyabman.

Let me have d next case files ready 4 diagnosis.

@Nurse
pls get me a stretcher and some chains for patient 420! (points to Hybrid-X).I think he's about to attack some1 (shoves thermometre in patient's mouf).

@Zephyrr

Quote from KRS 1 off d album 'Kristyles':
"immature black behaviour/ is worse than being a traitor"

MUTUAL R-E-S-P-E-C-T is a vital element of d hiphop subculture.It is a necessary ingredient for our continued existence as a movement.Dudes must learn not to violate d code.I concur wt d decision to regulate Brandedben's behaviour.

But as for taking dat bar from Hybrid-X,lets hear what he has to say about dat.

@HYBRID-X

Ur boy Dyabman has been declared persona-non-grata.Do u mind giving d 1 bar u got off em back?

@Zephyrr
Flowshow Vs Saucekid : U expressed my sentiments exactly! Both contestants shud slug it out for anutha round or be content with half a bar 4 d winner.

@Saucekid

aiight son! Lite my fire!

@Hybrid-x

who's Rapsody? Soumds like a tight emcee.

Saucekid Vs Flowshow

Saucekid

Punchlines - 4
Quote:"mic check,i see a hearse approaching/a funeral in d making/flowshow's d victim"
"waiting on u 2 salute d general/u hesitate,believe its gon be a funeral"

Metaphors - 0
(u repeated dat line about 'homemade cole slaw' before,so u get no points)

Wordplay - 3
Quote:"Im d one protagonizing"
"i give u something 2 think on/u dont,got u in sight/missile locked on"

Creativity - 1
(needs work)

Delivery - 2
(poor structure,could be better laid out)

Multies - 0
(upgrade ur rhyme pattern)

Total - 10

Flowshow

Punchlines - 2
Quote: "haters keep hating/u cant stop my rating"

Metaphors - 0
(these lines of urs are 2 weak to be called meta4s:
"i swallow u up like u was a banana"
"i was labelled d master hyena"(weak!)
"ill shower u in ur tub like tellytubbies" (wack!)

Wordplay - 1
Quote: "ur a small kid/who's about 2 get killed"
(kinda lame,but ill let u get away wt it)

Creativity - 0
(needs work)

Delivery - 1
(needs improvement)

Multies - 0

Total - 4

This wasnt no battle,nah! More like a streetfight.Both of u need 2 STEP UP UR GAME!!!

Quote from Lauryn Hill off d "Miseducation" Album:
"Cmon baby,lite my fire!/musik is supposed 2 inspire/then how come we aint getting no higher?"

Flowshow,Saucekid? Pls inspire me!

Flowshow Vs Saucekid
results coming up shortly.

flowshow Vs Saucekid
Im tagging d bodybags while i await d coroner's report.Somebody got murdered!

@zephyr

whats d verdict on Bolajibaok,the penitent sinner? Does he get another chance at salvation?

Quote from Nas off the track 'Star Wars':
"what happens when d shots ring out/they call it Star Wars"

HYBRID-X Vs Simmy

HYBRID-X

Punchlines - 6
Quote: "Simmy u harmless,my nine leave u heartless(slugz tear out lungs)"
"my ish got diff flavors,my slugs push simmy up/end up in ur neighbour's/backyard"

Wordplay - 5
Quote: "my rhymes marvel comics(get it?)/spit comet/save dat comment/knock u out flawless"
"Hybrid d undefeated,hospitalize my clientele wt dat clinical finish/my rhymes infinite,simmy got shock in less than a minute"

Multies - 5
Quote: "my punchline feast/give u a face lift/cant mess wt my outfit/u jus been lyrically ass whipped"

Metaphors - 4
"Piss on Simmy like kells(R kelly)"

Delivery - 5
(cud be better structured)

Creativity - 4
(cud be better)

Total = 29

Simmy:

Punchlines - 4
Quote: "im a rebreed dis hybrid kid and snuff out his life/im a cut off his meta4s wt my lyrical knife"
"im a hex hybrid x wt a curse 2nite/except he sticks wt battling minnows,he knows,aiight?"

Wordplay - 3
Quote: "i pull magic words out of nowhere,hybrid b*ch/ill give u d hybrid itch"

Multies - 0

Metaphors - 0

Delivery - 3
(needs work)

Creativity - 3
(cud do better)

Total = 13

(Quote from Nas off d track 'Star Warz'
"headlines: another rapper got slain/they call it Star Warz!"

HYBRID-X Vs Simmy

Results currently under process,

HYBRID-X  Vs  Dyabman

Dyabman

Punchlines - 0
(wudnt call ur verse a battle verse.)
Wordplay - 2
Quote: "nuthin aint kickin like the big old C"
Metaphors - 2
"like born 2 mack ill cash a check"
Multies - 1
Quote : "im dat rapper known place to place/for d hardest raps wt d hardest bass"
Delivery - 6
Uve got rhythm in ur verses.i cud almost put a beat to it.u cud be a good ghostwriter.

Total = 11

HYBRID-X

Punchlines - 7
Quote:"dat was me in ur 5th and 6th line intro/all of a sudden blow in ur face like nitro"
Wordplay - 6
Quote: "am known/walk b4 me kido,im grown/u just home alone (like Kevin)/little midget 2 short 2 grow/imagine em pages u wrote"
Metaphors - 6
Quote: "u empty(headed) like a used catridge"
"my whole force field causes a stampede and avalanches/ish bury ur whole crew/X brid's advancing"
Delivery - 5
not bad but can be better structured.
Multies - 3
"Brid stay fat like a handsome reward/Dyabman just ended in a hospital ward on life support"
(u tight dude bt dis line was wack:"am fly like Pidgin English".)

Total - 33

@Zephyrr
dat was no battle son! Dat was manslaughter! (Grin).

Having studied the cases assigned 2 me by my learned brotha Zephyrr,i hereby present my lyrikal prognosis:

Heyo Vs Alexpissu

Heyo
Punchlines - 2
Quote "Yo brat Alexpissu/i decompose ur body tissue/heyo gon put a hole in ur forehead wt no pistol"
Wordplay - 2
Metaphors - 1
ur meta4s are average e.g 'pop like popcorn,spit venom like python,sharp like dagger,e.t.c"
Multies - 0
delivery - 3
ur presentation was very orderly.Good job.
creativity - 1
u need 2 be more creative.

Total = 8

Alexpissu

Punchlines - 3
Quote: " "Paunches revolve around ur waistline" (witty)
Wordplay - 3
Quote: "when ur shadow fades,its a miscontest"
Metaphors - 1
too average
Delivery - 2
not very orderly
Multies - 0
(sorry i dont reckon disses on people's mamas.dat aint gangsta)

Total - 9

Next result - HYBRID-X Vs Dyabman