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Dude you need to at least proofread your work before posting. Your stories give a vibe that you copy and paste from somewhere else after just changing names. At least that's the vibe I get reading most of your stories here.

In one of your earlier posts, you mentioned "daddy" was watching TV while momsie cooked supper, then breakfast. Then we hear them break off from their incest as the same daddy drove in and walked into the kitchen. Which is it man?

One more thing - this habit of yours where you get on a flow and then suddenly we see an "update" of a three or five-episodes-ago post turns people away man. You do that alot in your stories.

I hope you are not going to leave this one half-finished.

I no talk am. Ndifreke to me has turned a point where he is unredeemable. First his unhealthy obsession with Maya. Now he's stooped so low as to (spoiler alert) bed her sister, a minor for that matter. The guy fall my hand big time.

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Centino pls explain Ndi. I have followed this thread from day 1 and I know you don't portray anything without some significance and there must be a reason why Ndi is like this. He has essentially turned from a hero to villain who is hurting himself and I want to know why. Joseph is very correct. Irikefe and Castro would have stood up for him but he easily turns his back against them. Again he noticed the strangeness of Maya and Clementina but yet goes ahead to sleep with Clementina (I presume). What is happening to our hero?

I believe Ndifreke has become a victim of circumstances - a victim of 225 Katakata. There are so many people who do not see the "potential"(if any) in themselves and do not see beyond what is in front of them. I believe Ndifreke is that kind of person. He is comfortable in his own bubble and does not want to go beyond it. Elizabeth, though just using him to satiate her konji every now and then, did have his interest at heart and does want him to excel, but his insane and unexplainable attachment to Maya is what no one seems to understand. People say first love, but who love help? Love kill you there. Maya is damaged goods. She is a left over piece of trash whom Jonjo used as a cum bucket, a salad tosser, a s£x toy and cast aside to the dogs after he had had his stomachful. She WILLINGLY went with him. She was not forced. The earlier this fool begins to learn that, the better it will be for him and the easier it will be for him to move on.

I swear Ndifreke neva grow sense at all, and I doubt if he ever will.

Centino, I know this is me just being picky, or it might be an error, but how can Achike be in 2 places at the same time? He's among those discussing where he yabbed Josiah, and at the same time running after Chisco in the hospital parking lot.

Just an observation though.

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I sent a message to said number yesterday but it shows it hasn't delivered till now.

21Vavavoomlane:
If you can get the name of the book and author, so we can limit the search but for now, is this the book?

You're a genius!!! That's the book! I did not remember the name nor the author. All I remembered was the Volkswagen beetle car on the front cover and part of the story. That's why I had to describe it the way I did.

I'm looking for a particular novel. I believe it is part of the African writers series. It was set during the Biafra Era. This guy went on a long journey and left his girlfriend behind. I believe the girl found out she was pregnant and went on a journey to find this guy, but each time she got to a place he was last, he would have left there just a few days earlier.

At the end she eventually found him, but unfortunately he was shot and killed at a roadblock on their way back.

The cover picture of the novel had a lady standing beside a Volkswagen Beetle car.