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Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 12:29pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
Okay, Once again it's Your boy Juzt Courage. I recorded this Yesterday and as usual, I uploaded it for Every one of You to Download and Listen and Criticize and Rate. Pls, i would like Y'all to tell me what u feel it Good about the Song as well as what's BAD about it. Pls don't Mince words, Remember the essence of this thread is to help me IMPROVE! Thanks. This is the link http://www.4shared.com/audio/eMwiVP9u/Better_Day_feat_Edtunez.html and this for mobile users http://mp3skull.com/mp3/better_day_edtunez.html Thanks! |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by eldee(m): 1:02pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
Hehehe . . . 'those hating on me are dropouts. . . no class' Juzt_Courage is a crazing thing. . . brb, still listening. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by djsean(m): 1:51pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
hommie, it's ya boy holdin' ish down for you, @djaysean |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by rapjunkie(m): 2:25pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
its cool. check your flow on the rhyming scheme on 3rd verse which ends something like ' only u can break it through' i think you should use these types of changes in the inflection in your voice on a more regular basis in your rhymes. Up and down in places to add more emphasis in parts and also to break it up to make it sound more interesting for repeatability value. my 50 kobo |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by eldee(m): 2:29pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
rapjunkie: I am El and I co-sign this message. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 2:41pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
dj sean:I see You bros. . . . Like Intensive Care Unit rapjunkie:Thanks Bros. . . Points Noted! eldee:I was kinda hoping for an eldee's review sha. . . . Especially one filled with Negativity. . It's all Good tho. How come Nobody is say anything bout the hook. . (My homey @Edtunez did the hook) and the Beat. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 2:41pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
dj sean:I see You bros. . . . Like Intensive Care Unit rapjunkie:Thanks Bros. . . Points Noted! eldee:I was kinda hoping for an eldee's review sha. . . . Especially one filled with Negativity. . It's all Good tho. How come Nobody is say anything bout the hook. . (My homey @Edtunez did the hook) and the Beat. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by ElRazur: 2:46pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
DaWhiz I think this is better (your flow and recording) than the last one you posted. It can be better though, and with practice you go get better. The audio recording was clear this time and what not. You know say I no like autotune so I no go pass comment for the chorus and what not. PS I am tempted to pack the Workstation if I dey come naija just for the sake of meeting some of you people and we can all vibe together. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by Mobinga: 2:59pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
Flier than the rest of them. . . |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by Mobinga: 4:58pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
WOW that MP3skULL website is the shiot!! |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by semid4lyfe(m): 5:20pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
Question - Shey na (your) true life story? Justcourage: I love these opening lines. . . .very smooth flow, properly arranged sequence of the story/plot and it set a direction for the song early on. As in person go know sey na grass to grace story sharp sharp Good story telling, Brilliant and thumbs up! All in all, the rapping was better than okay, it had a good rhyming sequence, decent play on words woven around some concepts [(i.e relating the street to the company and how you're Micheal Scoffield fighting against all odds to get scylla and survive (make it)], well crafted story, chorus blended, in sync and was in line with the rap lyrics. I have problems with the production though. . .it could have been better. Still it's your best effort IMO and definitely flyer than the rest of 'em. I'll put my remaining comments in the scorecard - 7.5/10 |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by tosinaded(m): 7:05pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
semid4lyfe: gay alert eldee: |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 7:07pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
semid4lyfe: Semid4life. . . . U'll definitely get a shout out in my mixtape! Thanks mahn. . . 'preciate ur analysis. And 4 the question U ask, Yes 0, it's a true life story 0. . . My true life Story! |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 7:15pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
tosinaded@:Hahahahaha Tosin u are mahd! Btw, i don't want no problem with Rapjunkie 0. . . Hehehe |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by tosinaded(m): 7:17pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
da-whizkid: i got ur back jor |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by Mobinga: 11:46pm On Jan 08, 2011 |
semid4lyfe: That part na craze Funny Line so haaaaarrrrrrd |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by bjmighty(m): 2:42am On Jan 09, 2011 |
That was a good track. Great chorus and nice message! |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by djsean(m): 9:47am On Jan 09, 2011 |
mp3skull sure is the ish, courage, do tell 'em, better than 4shared to an extent , though they are affiliated but at least, i ain't gotta wait for the flimpsy 320 seconds, tscheeew, |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by Mobinga: 10:55am On Jan 09, 2011 |
dj sean:Yeah. 320 seconds is shit. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by jamez3d(m): 11:10am On Jan 09, 2011 |
I gbadun the track sha! Nice stuff. . I love the way you crafted the story sha. . Make sense, this one and won beri freestyle are my best two. . Keep it up |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 12:06pm On Jan 09, 2011 |
jamez3d:No let semid4life hear you o, Thanks mehn. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by semid4lyfe(m): 2:47pm On Jan 09, 2011 |
I don hear and I go talk. . . won beri has got nothing on flyer than the rest |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 6:58pm On Jan 09, 2011 |
Where d eff is o4ka? Where u dey bros? |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by Ibime(m): 11:18pm On Jan 09, 2011 |
^^^Sup bros. I woke up with serious flu this morning so I've been lying in bed all day. I just reach living room to listen to the track now now and I think its the best so far. I wasn't a great fan of the previous ones na im make I been comment my reserve. Altogether the track was good, the lyrics were clear, you didn't stretch the intonation like the previous ones, and nuccas could relate to the introspective nature of the lyrics. . .and nice chorus as well from your friend. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by semid4lyfe(m): 12:34am On Jan 10, 2011 |
ibime: Perhaps, you should wait till you're fully recovered from your flu before posting an opinion and review Sorrry ehn, get well soon |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by 04kaa: 9:50am On Jan 10, 2011 |
da-whizkid: i am here my blood, i went to bahamas this weekend for my honeymoon with ileke idi, i am back now and i am downloading. i will be back wit my comments, observations and criticisms. keep it going fam. ! start working on the next track immediately , u know i will keep pushing u until u blow up big time.! thats what ebora is about ., success and eventual blow up! |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 10:36am On Jan 10, 2011 |
Ibime:Get well Soon bros. . . . Thanks 4 checking out on the Joint. 04kaa:I 'preci8 Bros! Waiting for ur criticism bros! |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 2:21pm On Jan 10, 2011 |
Incase You like the Chorus. . . Download/Listen to edtunez joint, your boi also did a coupla bars in it 2. It's a cover of Nicki Minaj's Your love. U can also Criticize and Give opinion on how he can Improve himself. He's viewing the Thread. Thanks Y'all. This is the link to the Song! http://mp3skull.com/mp3/edtunez_ur_luv.html Note: The joint was his first recording Ever! |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by 04kaa: 4:32pm On Jan 10, 2011 |
ok whizz, am looking for something to criticise i cant even criticise, the whole shit was crystal clear, clear vocals, great concept, intense voice. this is by far the best production so far. am looking forward to the next one, go harder fam. we got ur back like a spinal cord. |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by DBR: 6:18pm On Jan 10, 2011 |
Courage da-whizkid, clap for urself. .weldone! *in M.i"s voice* Keep grindin' boii. .u can only get better. Good lookin' oNe |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by dawhizkid1(m): 7:56am On Jan 12, 2011 |
DBR:Yaaay, i wan go climb nepa pole go dance disco. Lol . . . Thanks 4 Checking it out, bros. I really 'preciate. oNe |
Re: Da-whizkid's First Freestyle Of The Year; Whats Your Take? by kkizzel: 8:34am On Jan 12, 2011 |
its ur boy k kizzel frm kd ,we feelin u die ,keep em comming |
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