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Romance › Re: 10 Reasons You Should Be Like Me Or Suffer [PICTURE] by pabon(m): 2:02am On Aug 19, 2020
iLegendd:
@Pabon
That's a difficult request. I used to love it, but not anymore.

Sorry about that.
No problem. Glad to see you back here.
Romance › Re: 10 Reasons You Should Be Like Me Or Suffer [PICTURE] by pabon(m): 1:48am On Aug 19, 2020
iLegendd:
@Nova1988

Nice "knew" even if you're wrong.
iLegend, I would have loved to pick your brain on something.
Literature › Flash Fiction: Mentally Unstable by pabon(op):
So, I posted this on one of the social media platforms I frequent.
They didn't really know me much as a writer. Lemme see what you think about it.

Writing sprint
Time: ten minutes
Keywords: fly, rain, band

The rain fell while you ran into the market. Your heart panted because you didn't know what to do. The kids were home and the roofs were leaking. You ran like a mad man. You refused to acknowledge that the clouds were getting darker with every heavy pace you took.
You were only concerned about the kids you'd left at home. You could hear their cries already - cries for their mother.
As you past the stores selling the rubber buckets, spoons, bands and all things plastic, you thought to wait a little while. You thought the downpour would cease any moment. Yet, something wasn't right and you could feel it.
Then, you ran faster. You weren't sure how you were going to see the road with the rain pouring down so hard.
You didn't see the car come. In your mind, you already pictured yourself scooping Nėnė from off the floor. You'd comfort her and tell her all the sweet things she liked to hear.
The car driver wasn't at fault. He couldn't see clearly. He was in as much a hurry as you were. He didn't even realize he'd hit you until people came rushing.
You were unconscious. I think your spirit left immediately. You lay there. Not moving and not breathing. Like a fly beaten down suddenly from mama's age - worn broomstick.
Everyone thought they'd lost you.
You came back after ten minutes. However, you couldn't remember your name or why you are now in the ward for lunatics and the mentally unstable.

Sports › Re: Messi Buys Penthouse Apartment In Milan by pabon(m): 9:59am On Aug 12, 2020
obembet:
It's illegal to have Messi,Ronaldo,Zlatan, Lukaku in the same League.

Lalasticlala
As in...My God! What a league it would become.
Sports › Re: Messi Buys Penthouse Apartment In Milan by pabon(m): 9:55am On Aug 12, 2020
Imagine if the two GOATs play in Italy. Italian football will become the most watched league in the world automatically
Education › Re: Basic Mathematics Give Away by 8:00pm Monday 10th August by pabon(m): 8:56pm On Aug 08, 2020
Mrshape:
Question 1. Solve the equation 2x²=18
2x²=18
x² =18/2
x² =9
X =3
Crime › Re: 21-Year-Old Man Arrested For Having Sex With Underage Boys In Anambra (Photo) by pabon(m): 10:31am On Aug 06, 2020
Man continues to depreciate with the passing of every day. Where do we go from here?
With the level of debasement, man being lesser than animals isn't far off.
Sports › Re: Inter Milan Set To Sign Alexis Sanchez Permanently From Manchester United by pabon(m): 8:21am On Aug 06, 2020
Alexis Sanchez is a good player. Things just didn't work out for him at Manchester United. I think he's beginning to find his form again at Inter Milan. This is the same guy that took the Premier league by storm few years ago while he was at Arsenal football club.
Sometimes, the problem with these players are the astronomical wages given to them. It makes some relax too much, while it puts a burden on others to perform which then impacts their psychology and reduces their performance.
Manchester United will be glad they've finally solved this puzzle. Paying over £500k weekly to a player who couldn't even deliver five goals in ones season felt like an embarrassment.
I wonder though if Manchester United paid him off.
Politics › Re: Akin Alabi/NITT Facilitates Training And Empowerment Program in Ibadan by pabon(m): 8:35pm On Aug 05, 2020
Good gesture. He's done what before him have failed to do!
Literature › Re: Nairalanders, How Many Of You Remember These Timeless African Classics? by pabon(m): 3:31pm On Aug 04, 2020
Cleo18:
I read the book titled WHEN A CHILD IS MOTHERLESS by Andrew Okogba when I was in primary school and cried a lot while reading it

Again, I read it while in secondary school and also cried.

No book has ever made me cry like that book did.

I should read it again.
Did any of you read it please?
Do you have the pdf or epub?
Politics › Re: FG Commends Seplat’s Achievements In Nigeria’s Oil & Gas Sector by pabon(m): 2:17pm On Aug 02, 2020
Yeah. They've been doing well
Music/Radio › Re: 5 Proven Formulas To Making A Hit Song by pabon(m): 7:35pm On Jul 29, 2020
Anyone can make it with the right connection. Music these days is just about connection.

Anyway, check out my new book. It's cheap. Link's on my signature.
Politics › Re: PDP Postpones Primaries In Ekiti, Niger, Sokoto & Taraba States by pabon(m): 6:58pm On Jul 29, 2020
The political climate in our country is getting thicker. Anything for a better government and a better representation of the people I supported.

Please check out my new book. Link's in my signature.
Politics › Re: Obaseki signs ₦128.8 Billion Revised 2020 Budget Into Law by pabon(m): 6:53pm On Jul 29, 2020
Whatever works for the Edo people.
Please check out my new book. It's cheap. Link is on my signature.
Literature › Re: The Journey To A Thousand Flash by pabon(m): 6:53pm On Jul 29, 2020
WILLuKPquiet:
Its been a long time, but since I read it, it has helped me in my writing a lot. I can't remember which site.
If you use it and listen to your book read out to you, you will love it.

Then, there is a style I use in editing my books also.
This is for everyone to try. It helps a lot.

Download the app called @voice. Use it to read your story to yourself. Its an audio reader.

Now, open your book in word and follow the reading. It will help you to detect where you have made spelling error, omission error, and punctuation error. This is what I use all the time. You play your book several times and purse to make corrections on the word version at the same time.

Shalom to every writer.
Thanks, although I already know this technique. In what genre do you write?
Literature › Re: The Journey To A Thousand Flash by pabon(m): 10:04am On Jul 29, 2020
WILLuKPquiet:
Lovely!

You are a good story teller and I have fallen in love with your style already.



When you write do not shorten your words except you are quoting someone.

For example;

I told him I don't like going there. I wouldn't do it for a million naira.

It is better written like,

I told him I do not like going there, I would not do it for a million. Or he told him he does not like going there. That, he would not do it for a million naira.

I read this in an article several years back that
It makes your writing more matured and professional.

But you can write it like you've done when quoting someone like,
He looked at him sternly and shouted, "I don't like going there! I wouldn't do it for a million naira,"
I'd love to read that article. I've never seen this advice anywhere and I frequently comb the net for writing advice, especially related to fiction.
Fashion/Clothing Market › Re: Wedding Gown 30k by pabon(m): 3:23pm On Jul 27, 2020
Geminita:
Pabon, you shared my last post because I shared yours grin grin

You're trying to.repay me grin
Not really. grin
Just my way of saying I appreciate the gesture. Hope you don't mind?

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