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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 4:31pm On Dec 07, 2014
kingphilip:

some days r like dat

never hear what some losers tell u about the lose o
thanks jawe
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 4:42pm On Dec 07, 2014
That is y judging is wrong. Sandra! Ngozi u have such a commited fiance. Don get his own boss. Vicky da tigeress. Rahmon! New terror. Kelvun will sooon bring clothing for Ngozi. He is gentle o and had feelings for Ngozi. Pls o let not the closeness between Dolapo and Clement lead to something else o.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by classicuju: 4:43pm On Dec 07, 2014
Why am i addicted to this story? D9ty7 this story worth to b a seasonal movie
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by creamy1990(f): 4:52pm On Dec 07, 2014
Ok am in,all for our wonderful writer 07036254295
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 5:00pm On Dec 07, 2014
janet must not die ooooo......bcus janet and frank love story never start na. Secondly i believe she did it bcus she wanted revenge against benson so sandra must know d whole truth....oga d9ty7 abeg make dis story real any human being wil spil d beans at d moment she mearnt with sandra so dat sandra would have an atom of pity for her tank u......gud job well done
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Omololamide(f): 5:02pm On Dec 07, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:05pm On Dec 07, 2014
CHAPTER TWENTY
Sandra drove into her compound and pulled up into the driveway. She alighted and walked into the house looking sad and heartbroken.
"Welcome madam." Sabur, the gateman said.
She ignored his greeting and pushed the door open.
"Wetin dey do this girl sef? Shey no rich person dey after her ni?" He said angrily as he walked back to his post, then a knock sounded on the gate.
"Who be you?" Sabur asked as he walked towards the gate.
He looked through the peep hole and saw two men standing outside. Their faces were strange and unknown, but they looked gentlemanly.
He pushed the gate open a bit and squezeed himself between the opening.
"I am Sergeant Mike, from the police headquarter." Mike said.
"You are welcome. But I guess you are in a wrong house. Maybe the next compound is your destination." He replied trying to close the gate but Mike quickly stopped him.
"We want to see your madam. The one who just drove in now." Mike said.
"My madam thief government money?" He asked.
"No o. We just want to ask her some questions." Mike the orator replied smiling.
"Come in." He said opening the gate wider for the two men to enter.
Mike led the way into the beautiful compound which has a striking resemblance to the pictorial representation of the biblical Garden of Eden in primary school bible knowledge textbooks. The only difference was that, there was no Adam or Eve in the compound, neither are there animals or rivers, instead of short grasses on the ground, the compound was made with concrete and tiles. But the similarity between the compound and the garden was the beauty. There was no car in the garden of Eden too.
"Wait here o." Sabur said to them and quickly rushed into the house.
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Sandra sat down on one of the chairs in the dinning room sipping her favourite fruit juice. Her thought drifted to her recent decision to kill Janet. She remembered how she had employed the girl a few years ago and grew to become an integral part of her life that she couldn't do without. A minute without Janet in the house was like a lifetime without Joy.
She picked up her phone and dialled Don's phone.
"Hello Don, please tell your guys to hold on. Nothing must happen to that girl, I will come and pick her up tomorrow." She said to Don unknown to her, he was a few meters away from her house.
The doorbell sounded. Who could be at the door except Sabur? Maybe Kelvin, but he didn't tell her he'd be visiting today.
"Come in." she said to whoever was at the door.
Sabur came into view.
"Yes? Sabur, what do you want?" She asked rudely.
"Madam, I just come ask sey what is the matter, because the madam wey me know doesn't do like this. You are friendly and playful with us."
"Sabur, please go straight to the point. If that's why you are here, get out." She said loosing her temper.
Could she be on the verge of loosing her mind? Why was she over-reacting to people who did nothing wrong to her. She could remember how she screamed at other motorists on her way back home. No doubt, Janet's action really broke her heart.
"You have a visitor." He said.
"Which stupid visitor, tell them to get out. I don't want to see anybody." She screamed grabbing her handbag and marching towards her room.
"They said they are policemen." He said.
"Sabur, I pay you and its your duty to harken to instructions given. Read my lips, I don't want to see anybody." She disappeared into the hallway.
"You asked me to read your lips and you walked away. You should at least stay and let me read it." He said walking out of the living room.
Sabur succeeded in pushing Mike and his partner out of the compound.
"My madam is not happy. She is in a very bad mood. I think you should leave." He said.
"Its very important that we see her today." Detective two spoke for the first time.
"Will you cater for me and my family in our village? Abeg get out." Sabur violently pushed the two men out of the compound and locked the gate.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 5:13pm On Dec 07, 2014
Vibra:
thanks jawe
thanks dear

but y vibra
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:22pm On Dec 07, 2014
D9ty7 writing otherwise what I predict and making me look funny since 123AD. gringringrin
So Sandra has a heart. Pls o won't they search the house with underground again?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:26pm On Dec 07, 2014
Ogbarmey:
D9ty7 writing otherwise what I predict and making me look funny since 123AD. gringringrin
So Sandra has a heart. Pls o won't they search the house with underground again?
Story never finish na.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:29pm On Dec 07, 2014
D9ty7:

Story never finish na.
Okkkk. Sorry o. Salute u.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 5:35pm On Dec 07, 2014
I knew Sandra had a soft heart right from time but I just hope don hasn't told his men to go ahead with Janet sha

d9ty7 Tnx for da updates please more
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:44pm On Dec 07, 2014
kingphilip:

thanks dear

but y vibra
love quietness such that feelings or atmosphere could be communicated with....I wantd smtn different and vibra is a spanish name for vibes I opted for it
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 5:51pm On Dec 07, 2014
Vibra:
love quietness such that feelings or atmosphere could be communicated with....I wantd smtn different and vibra is a spanish name for vibes I opted for it
k dear
let's not derail just holla me on whatsapp with the number on my siggy
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 6:02pm On Dec 07, 2014
Making decision out of annoyance can dangerous in some point. Hope don's guys hav'nt rape janet to stupour?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 6:05pm On Dec 07, 2014
D9ty7 abeg na u oooooo, I ont want janet to die of raping, mike is too forward, Ngozi is OYO. Keep it cuming bro!!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 6:36pm On Dec 07, 2014
D9ty7 abeg holla me if dm don stat to wire janet ah wnt go colet my share grin grin grin grin











wetin dy do sandra sef

bt those 2 policemen lazy oo na sabur dm no fit withstand *SMH*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:23pm On Dec 07, 2014
They have no right to force their way in. Is Sandra a criminal? No.
Onemansquad:
D9ty7 abeg holla me if dm don stat to wire janet ah wnt go colet my share grin grin grin grin











wetin dy do sandra sef

bt those 2 policemen lazy oo na sabur dm no fit withstand *SMH*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ultraawesome(m): 7:42pm On Dec 07, 2014
Oga D9ty7...where is Sylvester na
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 7:45pm On Dec 07, 2014
more updates Oga D9ty7


God bless u for me gidigba

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Abuklaw(m): 7:46pm On Dec 07, 2014
Mike and co should becareful because they are being trailed
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:58pm On Dec 07, 2014
D9ty7:
They have no right to force their way in. Is Sandra a criminal? No.
kk bt no 4gt d 1st statement sha grin grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Xslaze3xd(m): 8:01pm On Dec 07, 2014
Oqa D9ty7 Four update Once.??.... Oboy qive me Ur Number make I send U card 2mao.... Put d network join Oooo.... Kudos E nor Easy.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 8:50pm On Dec 07, 2014
D9ty7 tnx for d update. I no go jst chop clean mouth, waka pass lyk dat witout commenting. Am rily disappointed in Ngozi,she has rily brought down herself to zero with dat act, am not sure the true feelings dat Kelvin had for her will still be there. But wait ooh,..Kelvin na very sharp, badt guy, he shudve respected her feelings knowing fully well dat she was depressed. Serves her right anyway, cos I dont see anything wrong in wot Tobiloba said dat shud make her over react. Pride! As for Mike & co, I just wish them luck and nothing shud happen to them. For Janet? I feel for her
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by labaski(f): 9:15pm On Dec 07, 2014
tecno4life, i havent seen d group chat invitation ooo..wetin happen nah?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by teamplayey: 9:28pm On Dec 07, 2014
Concerning Ngozi . . .
Her past has become significant in her present. Cos obviously, she had a troubled childhood.
Then her job.
She appears to need a 'strong' man -so to speak. Not a 'woman wrapper'.
Right now, she is confused and so acting emotionally.
Sadly, even Tobi sef no dey go church or mosque.
# (I say make I comment)
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Oyinprince(m): 9:39pm On Dec 07, 2014
How that sabur guy take get mind to push two policemen out? shey dem be dunce ni?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by pishon: 10:10pm On Dec 07, 2014
dis stoiry just thet sweet me for body.more power to your elbow
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by rantex1: 10:24pm On Dec 07, 2014
[color=#006600][/color]commenting for the first time this story make sense i no wan be ghost reader.again
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 11:06pm On Dec 07, 2014
mike gaz die
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by labaski(f): 11:14pm On Dec 07, 2014
kocvalour:
mike gaz die
bad belle pple tongue if e no die come kill am..
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:47am On Dec 08, 2014
--continuation--
The time was 6:30pm and Kelvin just returned from wherever he went to. He ignored a sulky Ngozi who lay on the bed sobbing, he removed his shoe and sat down on the bed.
"How are you?" He asked holding her leg.
She snatched her leg off his touch and raised them up against her chin.
"What's the matter?" He asked joining her in bed, he spuatted before her and held her legs.
"Leave me alone." She said.
"Are we quarelling?" He asked.
"Do you think I can ever forgive you for this? You saw me in a depressed state and took advantage of me." She said.
He hissed silently on hearing what she just said.
"I thought something else happened while I was away. I didn't take advantage of you, you wanted it, you said it, you were clamouring for it and I gave it to you." He replied.
She felt degraded and slutty that moment.
"I am leaving." She said.
"To where?" He asked.
"My fiancee's apartment of course."
He had thought she'll spend like a week with him, but now that seemed impossible, but he was not going to give up. He has the upper hand, she can't leave in her nightie, she has no cloth to wear, she has no money on her. He should be able to persuade her into spending another night.
"How do you intend to do that? Are you going in this?" He asked with concern written all over his face.
Her face dropped immediately she realised she had nothing to wear.
"I was thinking maybe you will drop me off." She said.
"Not tonight. I am tired, maybe tomorrow morning." He replied removing his shirt and trouser and walked into the bathroom.
His wallet lay on the bedside table, she walked towards it, picked some naira notes and sneaked out of the room. With the aim of getting to boutique outside the hotel and buying what to wear and get a cab home.
"Madam, we can't just allow you to leave." The lady receptionist said gently.
"What do you mean?" Ngozi asked.
She was lucky that aside the receptionist, there were no other persons in the waiting hall. Therefore, there was no one undressing her with their eyes.
"We don't know the condition in which the man you both came in is in. We need to chack him before we allow you to leave." The lady explained.
"But he went out this morning and no one bothered to check on me." She said angrily.
"That's true ma, he went out but he took us to the room and we saw you sleeping. Therefore, we have to do that now." The lady walked out of the wooden carved table and stood face to face with Ngozi.
"Lead the way." She said.
Ngozi pleaded with her eyes ad she stood rooted to the spot.
"He is in the bathroom taking his bath." She said.
"I'll call the security." The lady threatened.
How she wished she was with her identity card, this would have been an added advantage to her.
"Hey, here you are?" Kelvin asked as he descended the stairs.
Ngozi wanted to die that moment because she knew there was no other option for her.
"You were strolling around I guess." He said grabbing her hand.
Ngozi looked at him in the eyes as tears rolled down her cheeks.
"Lets go." He said as they both walked back into their room.
He shut the door behind them and fastened the lock.
"Kelvin, why are you treating me like this?" She asked as she sat on the bed.
"What is that supposed to mean?" He asked.
"Please, let me go home." She pleaded.
"You will definitely go home, but not today." He replied. "And if you'll please return my money to where to took them." He said pointing to his wallet.
She knew he tempted her with the wallet by putting it in a conspicous place, the bedside table.
"Kelvin is it a crime to feel safe with you? I had issues with my fiancee and I trusted you to make me happy. You took advantage of me and..." Her voice trailed off.
"What are you doing?" She asked alarmed.
He was rolling the hem on her nightie upwards that it was now a few inches away from her mid tighs.
"Kelvin, not again." She said pushing him away.
He ignored her pleas and stuggles as he pushed her unto the bed and had sex with her. By the time he was done, she was feeling sick, her privates was sore and bruised. Aside the fact that, she was in no mood to have s.ex, there was no preintimacy or anything, thereby, no lubrication to ease his member into her.
She was sobbing as he walked out of the room angrily.
"How dare you steal from me?" He asked as he slammed the bathroom door shut.
It was no clear to her. He wasn't in love with her and she was just leading him on all the while. He wanted something from her and he just got it twice within the space of twenty four hours. Only God knows how many times he'll sleep with her before daybreak. That is, if she lived to see the daybreak.
No doubt, she had betrayed Tobiloba and their relationship had crashed, five weeks before their wedding.

--to be continued--

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