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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 9:43pm On Jan 11, 2015
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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 9:45pm On Jan 11, 2015
[b]Repetition is when the writer or speaker knowingly repeats a word or group of words for effect. This is a strong rhetorical technique that can also be used to build a theme in a speech or poem. It is important to note that it is not considered using repetition when a writer or speaker repeats essential articles, prepositions, pronouns, or conjunctions that are frequently used unintentionally as the mechanics of language dictate.

Nobody, oh nobody can make it out here alone.
Free at last! Free at last! Thank God Almighty, we are free at last!
Love is a red, red rose.


In the first example, only one word in the sentence is repeating: nobody. Nonetheless, this is still considered repetition. A poet, writer, or speaker may also repeat more than one word to have a greater impact or to highlight the importance of an idea, such as in the second example. In the second example a whole group of words repeats: Free at last. Each method of repetition can effectively embolden a message.[/b]
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 9:46pm On Jan 11, 2015
Rhyme is when the end or final sound of two or more words are identical. If the end sounds are not identical, then the speaker or writer is using consonance or assonance instead. Rhymes can also occur internally or on the inside of words or lines of poetry. A rhyme may also be monosyllabic (a one syllable rhyme) or polysyllabic (rhyme two or more syllables), such as in the following examples:

[i[I left my punch card on the lunch yard.
I drove a race car to the space bar.
We saw a butter fly flutter by.[/i]

This is the technique that students most often associate with poetry, but I encourage my students to try writing free or blank verse, as it takes much poetic skill to freely maneuver within the confines of a rhyme scheme.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 9:47pm On Jan 11, 2015
Rhythm is when the arrangement of words creates an audible pattern or beat when read out loud. A good way to check to see if a passage of text is using rhythm is to just hum the sounds that the words make rather than clearly pronouncing them. If you can hear a song or identify a form in the sounds, then the text is rhythmic.
There once was a guy from Chicago / Who drank away all of his problems.
I know it is wet and the sun is not sunny / but we can have lots of good fun that is funny.
Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?


Instead of just reading these examples, trying humming them. Do you hear how they sort of bounce? This is a rhythm.

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 9:48pm On Jan 11, 2015
Simile is a comparison using like or as. It usually compares two unlike objects.
Example: His feet are as big as boats. Feet and boats are being compared.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 9:49pm On Jan 11, 2015
Metaphor states that one thing is something else. It is a comparison, but does NOT use like or as to make the comparison.
Example: Her hair is silk. Hair and silk are being compared.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 9:51pm On Jan 11, 2015
Personification is giving human qualities, feelings, actions, or characteristics to inanimate (not living) objects.
Example: The house stared at me with looming eyes. The verb, stared, is a human action. A house is a non-living object. Therefore, we have a good example of personification.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 9:53pm On Jan 11, 2015
Understatement is the purposeful use of language that downplays a situation, as in Mark Twain's statement, "The reports of my death are greatly exaggerated." A familiar example in poetry occurs at the end of Frost's "Fire and Ice": "…if it had to perish twice,/I think I know enough of hate/To say that for destruction ice/Is also great/And would suffice." When Mercutio is dying in Romeo and Juliet, he uses understatement in speaking of his mortal wound: "… ‘tis not so deep as
a well, nor so wide as a church door, but ‘tis enough, ‘twill serve."

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 9:54pm On Jan 11, 2015
Here's a little test:

Directions:
1. Highlight the objects being compared or the object being personified in each sentence.
2. Then, choose the answer that correctly identifies the figurative language used in the sentence.

1. His life was an open book.
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

2. “My love is like a red, red rose . . . “ (Robert Burns)
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

3. The dry leaves gathered in groups, chattering happily.
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

4. “I wandered lonely as a cloud . . .” (William Wordsworth)
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification


5. The train pulled itself up the mountain and screamed once it reached the top.
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

6. The blank page stared up at me, daring me to sit down and write something.
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification


7. The herd of approaching elephants sounded like rolling thunder
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

8. Her temper was as explosive as a bomb.
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

9. Your smile is sunshine to me.
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

10. Mom! The T.V. begged me to watch it!
a. Simile
b. Metaphor
c. Personification

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 9:56pm On Jan 11, 2015
Or...

Create your own (Make sure there is a clear comparison. Adding detail after the example can help prove the comparison. Example: He is a pig, because he never cleans his room!)

Or find them in poems you know.


Simile:

Metaphor:

Personification:
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 9:59pm On Jan 11, 2015
I want thank Buggui for saving my behind. I had an emergency right in the middle of class. He stepped up and took over.

Buggui=Superhero!!

My hero anyway. kiss
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by herald9: 10:01pm On Jan 11, 2015
cheesy
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:02pm On Jan 11, 2015
I hope those who were here and those who drop in later do the homework.


Hope you are all having fun with words. Thanks for attending. smiley

Tex & Buggui
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:03pm On Jan 11, 2015
Anybody got one?

Simile:

Metaphor:

Personification:
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 10:04pm On Jan 11, 2015
#whew
That was really cool.
Teaching sweet ooo
#chai.
#takes a bow#
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Buqqui: 10:06pm On Jan 11, 2015
texanomaly:
Anybody got one?

Simile:

Metaphor:

Personification:

Her embrace is haven to me. : Metaphor
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:08pm On Jan 11, 2015
Simple similes


As bold as brass

As boring as watching paint dry

As busy as a bee

As cheap as dirt

As clean as a whistle

As clear as mud

As clear as crystal

As cold as ice

As cool as a cu
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:08pm On Jan 11, 2015
Buqqui:


Her embrace is haven to me. : Metaphor

Nice!
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:13pm On Jan 11, 2015
Personification:



The Sun Just Had a Nasty Day

The sun just had a nasty day,
refused to smile or shine.
It stayed behind the dark gray clouds,
a mottled, grim design.
But shortly after dinner time
one ray poked though the gray,
a spark of golden yellow warmth
reminding us of day.

If you want to please us, Sun,
(don't take this as a warning)
if you're going to pierce the clouds,
please do it in the morning.

by Denise Rodgers
Copyright© Denise Rodgers

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:14pm On Jan 11, 2015
Buqqui:
#whew
That was really cool.
Teaching sweet ooo
#chai.
#takes a bow#

Thanks partner. Great job!
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Kentrasso(f): 10:49pm On Jan 11, 2015
Great class.
For the test.

1. Metaphor
2. Simile
3. Personification
4. Simile
5. Personification
6. Personification
7. Simile
8. Simile
9. Metaphor
10. Personification

By the way, I'm here as a student cheesy
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 3:37am On Jan 12, 2015
Kentrasso:
Great class.
For the test.

1. Metaphor
2. Simile
3. Personification
4. Simile
5. Personification
6. Personification
7. Simile
8. Simile
9. Metaphor
10. Personification

By the way, I'm here as a student

smiley
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by firestar(f): 3:13pm On Jan 12, 2015
Test: Seeing the colour 9...
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by joseph1832(m): 9:58pm On Jan 12, 2015
firestar:
Test: Seeing the colour 9...
Placing me on cloud nine,
With some much adrenaline
Making me feel like Dr Ninestein
In the midst of my concubine.
Together we shine,
Like suns entwine,
Shining to outshine
All who whine,
In the midst of the divine.

* I bet having Nine lives can be perceive as divine *
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 2:06am On Jan 13, 2015
firestar:
Test: Seeing the colour 9...

?
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nobody: 9:02pm On Jan 14, 2015
Hi class. I and my partner missed the class yesterday. We're lecturing today.

Topic : Haiku

Cc: Samguine, Bhenedhikt, herald9, Ghostlady, Beennkummar, youngcrysta, ROZZAY

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nobody: 9:06pm On Jan 14, 2015
Topic : Haiku

After we have finished the course on the free verse style, we start classes on a more complex style today, which is the haiku.

'Haiku', 'haiku'. The name doesn't sound English, isn't it ? Yes, the haiku did not originate in England, or even in Europe. It originated in Asia, precisely Japan, before it was adopdted by other languages, thereby creating the terms, ancient and modern haiku.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nobody: 9:12pm On Jan 14, 2015
The haiku is much like the just concluded free verse in that, it doesn't have a specified rhyme or rhythm pattern too.

However, the haiku is unique in that, a haiku contains 3 lines in a stanza. The 3 lines come in syllable numbers of 5-7-5.

1st line: 5 syllables
2nd line: 7 syllables
3rd line: 5 syllables

^ and that gives us a poem in haiku.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nobody: 9:17pm On Jan 14, 2015
Since the haiku comes in just 3 lines, it is a style that uses sensory language to capture a feeling or image. They
are often inspired by an element of nature, a
moment of beauty or a poignant experience
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nobody: 9:24pm On Jan 14, 2015
This is an example of a haiku by Richard Wright. You can do a syllable count.

Whitecaps on the bay: - 5 syllables
A broken signboard banging - 7 syllables
In the April wind. - 5 syllables

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nobody: 9:28pm On Jan 14, 2015
In my next class, I will upload a voice note on how to do your syllable count. I will also make updates on the use of sensory language and make more explanations on topics haikus are written on.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by firestar(f): 9:30pm On Jan 14, 2015
Watching the sunrise
Irises of every hue
Be it brown or blue

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