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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 8:26pm On May 26, 2015 |
--continuation-- It was now a battle of the best golfers as Jimmy was slugging it out with Mayor while Chief Olukolade and Daniel watched as the two men play. "I am confident of Mayor's ability in the game as I have played against him on a number of occassions, but I think Jimmy would win in the end, he does the long flick more often and his vision when swinging is grade A. He could stand up to Tom Els or Tiger Wood." Chief Olukolade said to a half listening Daniel whose mind was solely on how to get to talk to his son and if possible take him home that night. "Your mind seemed far away son. Is anything the matter?" Chief noticing his son-in-law's drawn face asked. "Nothing. I really hope the Mayor of a guy wins. Jimmy brags a lot and his wings need to be clipped or ripped off if possible." He replied. "Ah ah! I know that look." His father in law laughed. "Something is bothering you and it is bigger and much more important than the two men on the turf. So talk to me." "Nothing really. Its just the stress." Daniel replied. "Come with me." Chief Olukolade placed a hand over his son-in-law's shoulder and off they walked away. "You could take the rest of the week off from office. Just stay at home. The company needs you at your best." "I don't think that's a good idea. Am just going through some hard times. A weekend out like this will make things better." Daniel objected. "I understand you. You think the company will suffer in your absence? No, we can manage and once you are back, we return to how we were. Just take the week off, you need it." The tone of finality was evident in his voice. "The next time I am expecting you in office should be the start of next month." And with this, Chief Olukolade walked away leaving Daniel stunned. Such was the influence and control the Olukolades have over him. "I hope thing would change one day." He thought as he returned to where the others were, this time outside the pitch along the stands, with one sole aim, talking to his son. ----------- "Hey." He said to Chris who was engrossed in watching the duo of Jimmy and Mayor play. He turned reluctantly to see his role model in the business world standing next to him. Even though he had seen Daniel Martin earlier in the evening, the level of closeness between them now made him want to scream in ecstacy, but he was kept in check. "Good evening sir." He replied. "I am Daniel Martin." Daniel said. "I know." Chris said indifferently. "You know?" Daniel asked himself in shock. The only time he got a similar response was when he visited the state governor who wasn't impressed about who he was or what he does. But for a thirteen year old boy to be indifferent about meeting the Managing Director of the largest business empire in West Africa built more fear in him, because, one of the leverages he(Daniel) wished to use his wealth. With the hope of capturing Christopher's heart with his money, but right now as it stands, his money would be a lot useless in this case. "How did you know I am Daniel Martin." "Who doesn't know you? You manage the largest business in West Africa." Chris replied. Daniel smiled. Afterall, the boy acknowledged his position and popularity. Taking a close dare at wanting to know how he(Christopher) felt as meeting him, he asked. "How do you feel meeting me?" "I am happy to have met you in person, but I am indifferent about it, afterall, we meet people everyday and you are one of those I am meeting today." Chris replied. "Who taught you this?" Daniel asked. "My mum." Chris replied. "Christina James?" Daniel asked. Chris turned his attention to the man beside him. "You know her?" He asked. "Baby, lets go for a walk." Adeola announced from where she sat. Daniel weighed his options. If he decided to go on a walk with his wife, he might not get the chance to talk to Chris anymore, meaning, the boy won't know who his father was. If he decides to defy his wife so as to talk to his son, his mother-in-law was somewhere behind them and that could arouse suspicion as it is unheard of. Denying your wife her right in a bid to talk to an unknown little boy. Going for the former seemed the best idea. He stood up calmly and took Adeola's hand in his. "Come with us." He said to Chris. --tbc-- 3 Likes |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by afamjb: 8:29pm On May 26, 2015 |
M.I.B.....land. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 9:15pm On May 26, 2015 |
Viewing this topic: Mrblaze06, drsolob2(m), Farayolas(m), KingzPen(m), RABIUR(m), drizzy4ril(m) and 1 guest(s) oga kingzpen i see u |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by drsolob2(m): 9:22pm On May 26, 2015 |
This is becoming interesting.
I just hope daniel does not do what am thinking. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 9:24pm On May 26, 2015 |
Onemansquad:na here dem go kidnap chris ooo Adeola dis tin u er doing...dereis God oooo Dee tnx for d update..xpecting more |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 9:49pm On May 26, 2015 |
kwencypresh:They can't kidnap him there jare, Adeola won't be too stupid to try that. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Aztezee(m): 10:46pm On May 26, 2015 |
Nyc 1,dis deola no go run mad cos of chris,nyc 1 bros dee. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 2:13am On May 27, 2015 |
Welldone D9ty7. For providing these updates despite the harsh conditions. Hope you're good? How's studies? The story is getting more interesting. But I have some observations. You rushed some parts (maid part). You could have dedicated a whole update to that. Give a detailed description on it. The errors are kind of increasing. Maybe you don't proof read again. Try to do so. More Intellect! |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by KingzPen(m): 8:51am On May 27, 2015 |
Onemansquad: Loooool... Oga Police, you sabi catch me... |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Mrblaze06: 9:21am On May 27, 2015 |
Onemansquad:make I comment abi?? |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 10:12am On May 27, 2015 |
LogoDWhiz:I don't think any of the updates were rushed. The maid update was meant to be like that... |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 12:05pm On May 27, 2015 |
oga dee thank yhu o |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 12:12pm On May 27, 2015 |
Sir D9ty7, can I have Kitnah's cell number from you? |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 12:14pm On May 27, 2015 |
thronekid:sure. Drop your mail, I will forward it to you in five minutes. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 12:26pm On May 27, 2015 |
D9ty7: Okay! I just felt maybe u should av put more details into it. It would av being interesting! Well, its your story. No problem |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 12:29pm On May 27, 2015 |
LogoDWhiz:This is just to let you(readers) know how Grace came about the househelp back then... We are still coming back to that... A whole chapter takes us back to the War and the coup that led to the seperation in Mark Anthony's family. Happy shildrens day... Hope you took your kids out? Lol |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 12:37pm On May 27, 2015 |
D9ty7:Thanks sir. Here it is- Abdulhakeemthronekido@gmail.com |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 12:55pm On May 27, 2015 |
thronekid:sent |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 1:08pm On May 27, 2015 |
D9ty7:Thanks, sir. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 1:15pm On May 27, 2015 |
D9ty7: Okay! I get your point. Nice! Lol! Not yet a Dad. And u? |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Vyntra(m): 2:16pm On May 28, 2015 |
I will rate dis 8.1/10 this is good |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Vyntra(m): 2:16pm On May 28, 2015 |
this story might just be longer than aiac,bt I prefer dis one it explores the military background of our nation I love military stuff thumbs up Mr Dee |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Melancholy(m): 11:29pm On May 28, 2015 |
Chief olukolade: D9ty7, i dey feel like dangote oh,because u bless me. This story is just too scenic making me put all my attention toward reading it anytime fresh update comes up. What a creative mind you've got. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 2:40pm On May 29, 2015 |
This is getting more interesting. Nice work, Dee 1 Like |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by bigwig97(m): 8:08pm On May 29, 2015 |
Anahn, Dee! U No Give Us Update, Atleast One, To Celebrate To Day-democracy. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by elOnuh(m): 11:34pm On May 31, 2015 |
D9ty7, I greet u sir. HV been a ghost reader of ur piece since last week but just can't help it any longer. Weldone work n tnx for taking me out of boredom. Pls I need a lil favor from u: was reading ur "all in a circle" but stopped at chapter 4 cox I cudnt access some hidden pages and I notice ppl were commenting on every update u post bt I can't access further updates. Thanks. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by princessadeola(f): 4:00am On Jun 01, 2015 |
Happy New Month |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by omotalkie(f): 4:44pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
Wow no update And I was here expecting to see ten straight updates Dee warris happening na Hope all.is well. BTW happy new month to everyone on this thread |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 5:23pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
omotalkie:All is well ma'am. I suspended the updates here to enable me concentrate on finishing The Thomas. And, thank God, I have. Will start updating tomorrow by Jah's grace. 1 Like |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by omotalkie(f): 6:48pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
Ok. Yipee! So i'll finally read d concluding part of the Thomas. Tanx Dee |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Aztezee(m): 7:06pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
Bros techno i sight u o,e don tey wey we don see u nah. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tecno4life(m): 11:52pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
I want to officially apologize to all D9ty7 fans and also to D9ty7 himself for running away for so long like the prodigal son. But now I'm back for good, who missed me D9ty7 you are doing a great job. Reading through what I missed I found a lot of twist and turns I didn't expect keep it up man. Where is Labaski I miss u ooh . Stuff46, Onemansquad, Adeh39, Lilyomi, crystalsaint. |
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