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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by DandyPearl(f): 11:03pm On Nov 24, 2015
donkross1:
u don follow me reach dz place again abi undecided
just like a shadow...MTN everywhere you go grin
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Sageez(m): 5:21am On Nov 25, 2015
donkross1:
u don follow me reach dz place again abi undecided
don't mind her, later she'l can me mr mtn
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 2:15pm On Nov 26, 2015
enjoying it, nxt one plz
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 5:52pm On Nov 27, 2015
Bako was at his office doing some paperwork,it had indeed been a long time since he stayed at his office for long,he was always on the road going from one client house to the other,supervising the decorations and refurbishing of the houses,plus adding finishing touches to the work,for the past few months,biusness had been blooming,he wish he could say same for his family,his family was in pain,death and everything evil.The thought of his family suddenly made Bako weary and he dropped his pen,Bako believed in the spiritual,and he knew what his family was going through was beyond physical, he had to do something before it got worse, it was his home and he had to proffer a solution to the ever increasing problems of his family,first his unborn child died,then Chamil,then mama dakars husband,now mama Bintu was in prison,he just couldn't fold his hands anymore and watch his family come to ruins,he stood up and began wearing his suit,he needed to go see his uncles,they would know what to do.
* * * *
"You lesbian woman,What you want here?"
"Well let's say I have come with a buisness proposal,I need one of your girls"
"For what"
"To sleep with my husband and I, you see,that has always been his fantasy,sleeping with me and another girl,today is his birthday and I wanna give him a wonderful surprise
"Oh I see,men and their wahala,na why I say I no go marry,my buisness beta pass o"
"Shey,all men have wahala o,the man don dey disturb me since,na im I say make I do am o,before I hear another story oo"
"Okay,give me a minute ,let me get a special one"
"Wait! ,please get a beauty okay,my husband likes beautiful things,if you know what I mean"Nneka said as she winks at the madam,the woman left to get the girl,and Nneka was left to her devices,she was in a LovePeddler house to get a prostitute,she had buisness to do
"Madam,is this one okay?"
Nneka looked up at the girl and inspected her
"Well,she would do"
"I brought my best"
"Wow,nice then"
"It means more money madam"
"How much"
"200k"
"Cool"Nneka said as she signed a cheque and handed it to the woman
"it is nice doing business with you"Nneka said as she stood up
"I hope I can take her now"Nneka asked
"of course,you have her for the whole day"the madam replied
"let's go then young lady"Nneka addressed the girl and led the way out.
Nneka kept silent as she drove and watched the lady from the corner of her eyes,after a while she found a lonely spot and parked, she knew the lady was restless and afraid
"Don't be afraid"
"I am not afraid"the girl replied
"you are,and you don't need to deny it,it is written all over you,but that's by the way,what's a pretty girl like you doing in this kind of biusness?"
"The country is hard"
"Did you see the cheque I wrote your madam?"
"yes"
"I gave her 200k,you see I have the Money,and wish only to spend it,I want to share it with you,or do you get enough money here?"
"For wia,madam collects all the money and if the man enjoys the sex so much,highest money na 2k him fit dash me"
"I need a favour from you,if you can do it, then 200k would definitely land in your laps"
"What's the favour
"I lied to your madam,about what I needed you for,cos I want this top secret,there is a certain dpo whose soft spot is for any thing under skirts,I want to disgrace him in front of the wife, you see,I and the wife are very good friends,but she never believes me whenever I tell her that her husband is a flirt so I want to show her a proof,"
"Okay,so what exactly am i going to do?"
"Lure him to bed and video it,try and do it today,the earlier the better,I would give you a camera that is easy to fix,just do whatever you have to do and get me videos,are you up to the task"
"Aunty,consider it done,this is my field,my profession,I just need his details"
"Alright then"
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 6:32pm On Nov 27, 2015
Bako was at his family house,waiting for his uncles to come out,he had come several minutes ago,and had told them he had an urgent matter to discuss with them,he had only two uncles living here with their families,others had built houses elsewhere,but these two remained put,the others included the uncles Nneka had chased away,he was happy,they weren't living around the area,even during mama dakars husband burial,he could barely look them in their eyes
"Bako,what is happening,you even left work for this"
Bakos two uncles had entered the sitting room where he was sitting waiting for them
"Uncles,there is fire on the mountain"
" What is it"one of them asked
"I don't understand what is happening to my immediate family,everyone is just dying
"Hmmmmm,we were even discussing it just the other day, and we said we would send for you,blood is indeed stronger than water"
"So what can be done about this uncles"
"We would travel to one of our favourite traditional man in the village and see What can be done about all this"
"Okay,when,we don't need to delay at all"Bako said
"Not at all Bako,this weekend,we leave by Friday to come back on Sunday"
"Thank God,uncles thank you for your wisdom and bringing out time for me"
"You are welcome,"one of them responded
"One more thing Bako "the other one added
"Your wife must not know about this journey"he continued
"But ,,,,......."
"No buts Bako,your wife musnt know about it,okay"
" Okay sirs"
* * * * * *
"Mama Bintu my friend,I heard what happened and rushed down immediately"
"Thank you for coming"
"You seem so quiet,what happened?how did you end up in this kind of place,this cell"
"My very own sister accused me of killing her husband"
"What !mama Dakar,how could she even think it"
"Who else?Nneka of course,she suggested it to her"mama Bintu said as tears rolled down her cheeks
"Tell me my friend,how would I ever think of such thing,how can I ever want to hurt my sister,am I evil,do I look evil to you in anyway or manner"
Mama Bintu asked
"Of course not,its just the devils handwork,don't worry,everything would work out well dear"
"My friend,we planned something earlier before everything scattered ,please let that our plans not die,take Asibi with you and go to that place immediately,Nneka must die,now I can see clearly,she is a witch and must be killed immediately without delay"
"Okay,my friend,it would be done immediately,I am so very sorry about what is happening to you"
"Its okay,we just have to fight, and fight real hard we must"
* * *
* *
Mama Dakar was in her room,ironing her clothes,Nneka and her were going for an occasion,these days,they went everywhere together,Nneka and her had gotten extremely close,yesterday,when Nneka came back from wherever she went,she told her a friend of hers was getting married today and they needed to go for the occasion,she was very happy to oblige,it took her mind away from the pains mama Bintu caused her by killing her husband.
She heard the door open and she looked back towards the door as Asibi rushed in and knelt before her holding her by the waist
"Sister please Please,release mama Bintu"
"Release her? after killing my husband?tell me,would it bring my husband back from the grave ehnn?"
"Sister,don't you know your sister anymore,she would never kill your husband,how could you even believe a strangers voice to your own very sister,a sister you grew up with"asibi asked with tears streaming down her cheeks
"Get away from me Asibi"mama Dakar said as she pushed Asibi to the floor,"don't you ever come before me again and ask me to release that woman,she has said I would not enjoy my husband,and so she would not enjoy hers"
"You are wicked!!!!!"Asibi screamed
" And you would pay for this"she continued as she fled from the room wailing.
Mama Dakar left what she was ironing and fell to the ground weeping uncontrollably,her world had been turned upside down since the day her husband died,true,he didn't bring money like other husbands,but she would never trade him for any other man on earth,they were truly in love before death snatched him away from her.
* * *
Nneka parked her car in front of the police station mama Bintu was kept in,it was time to finish the bitch,the bitchs death was not supposed to come now but another of her family member,but since Nneka tasted the forbidden fruit of the womans husband, plans had been changed immediately and mama bintus death had been shifted forward so she could have ample time exploring mama Bintus husband body,plus she didn't want to be giving so much gap between the death,she walked in and insisted that she be led to the dpo at once,the policemen after assessing her with their eyes,concluded she must be among the upper class and quickly led her in,Nigeria and corruption. she was led into the highly furnished room and there her man,who would do her bidding was sitted
"Good afternoon sir"
She said in a very polite voice
"Good afternoon,please sit"he replied,and she quickly sat and noticed that he gave a sign to the police man that escorted her in,which made him leave quickly
" So,what's the reason for the visit madam?"
"There is a woman in your cell,she is the reason I came"
"To plead on her behalf"
"No sir,in fact,i have come to do quite the opposite,that woman has caused a lot of pain,hunger and panic for my family"Nneka stated as her crocodile tears started spilling out
"What happened"the dpo asked
"She snatched my husband from me,he has been living with her for the past six years"
"That's horrible ,is that why she is here?"he asked her
"No oooo,I heard she poisoned somebody's husband and killed him"
"She must indeed be a terrible woman"
"Yes she is,and even as she is here,my husband is still spell bounded by her spell,he doesn't care about me or the children"
"Its okay woman,stop crying,what do you want from me then,why did you come to me?"
"I want her dead,made out to be like a suicide"
"Christ!,woman,we don't do that here"
"But she is a murderer sir,please sir,save my family"
"It doesn't matter,the court would determine her faith"
"Sir please help me"
"No way woman,it is not possible"
"I would offer you any amount you want sir,please help me,"
"Get out of my office woman,I would not be lured by money,what do you take me for?"the dpo asked and Nneka maintained silence for two minutes.
" Then we move to plan b sir"
"Pardon?"
Nneka threw to the table one of the copies of the pictures and the videos the prostitute had given her,indeed the lady had done a beautiful job
"There in that envelope is something you wouldn't want your wife to see,I can bet anything on that,I have tried begging you ,no way,money ,no way,so you left me no choice than to resort to this,i would give you till the end of tomorrow,and if it is not done,your wife would see this,I have made real researches on you and you and I know the kind of wife you have,she is a no nonsense woman,hahahaha,oh look at his face,just like a baby,the fear of ones wife is the beginning of wisdom"
"Are you blackmailing me?"the dpo asked
"Yes I am"she answered
"Don't bother to tell your boys to hold me down, plenty people know I am doing this, and if they look for me you are in hot soup,so you best do what I asked you to do to safe your marriage,goodbye dpo"Nneka said as she stood to go,on getting to the door,she turned back
"My dearest dpo,please do remember,you have till the end of tomorrow to do justice to our discussion,or you know na,no need to talk too much"Nneka said as she blew him a kiss.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 4:08pm On Nov 28, 2015
nyc one jare, nxt episode
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Missmossy(f): 8:11pm On Nov 30, 2015
Nneka is the devil's incarnate!!!

Keep it coming.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by donkross1(m): 8:29pm On Nov 30, 2015
Missmossy:
Nneka is the devil's incarnate!!!


Keep it coming.

Missymossy undecided. Are you the one stalking me or am I the one stalking you undecided
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 12:35pm On Dec 09, 2015
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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by omosassy(f): 3:04pm On Dec 09, 2015
waiting.....smiley
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 6:51am On Dec 15, 2015
She was at the hospital,all smiles and looking radiant,she had earlier fixed an appointment with the doctor ,because of a slight pain she always felt in her tummy ,recently it had gotten real painful and she had undergone series of scan but nothing of any usefulness was found to be the origin of the problem ,now she was at the lounge waiting for her turn with the doctor to reach,her female friend of a day was sitting by her side tapping her leg impatiently at the floor,they just met that day and already a strong bond of friendship had been formed ,her friend was just a young girl like herself and experiencing her first pregnancy,recently married also,she was there for antenatal
"Grace you best stop tapping your leg like that,that is a very bad habit"
"You think so?"
"I know so"
"But I am nervous,am waiting to hear my status so its really frightening"
" Why should it frighten you?do you bed another man apart from your hubby
"I don't,but what about my hubby?I dont know If he keeps to the marriage vow to be faithful to me"
"Oh!come off it dear,don't worry,you are negative"
"Like that's any comfort,are you a doctor abi aids dey show for face?"
"I am not,but I know you are free,so relax,oops my phone is ringing"she looks for her phone in her bag
"Where is that phone,oh!here it is, Wow,my husband,excuse me girlfriend,lemme talk to him,"
"Go on dear"Grace replied
"Hello baby........,am fine,you?........at the hospital..............yea,what news?......what! Baby that's a lie......OK,lemme be on my way,please be calm dear am coming now.
"Hope no problem"Grace asked her newly found friend Nneka
"Uhhhm,there is o,my husband's sister ,my own very best friend is dead"
"Oh!,am sorry"
"Its okay Grace,lemme be on my way,can I have your number please?let's keep in touch"
"Alright dear,its 04133680500
"Alright,thanks friend,Nneka replied as she rushed out of the hospital into her car,she drove very fast and got to her house within a short period of time,all the while playing a loud music in her car,singing along with it and smiling all the way,her dpo hadn't disappointed her after all,Bako had told her mama Bintu committed suicide,splendid,it was indeed a job well done.On getting to her compound,she quickly parked her car and practically flew upstairs,and as usual as with other news of death,everyone was in the sitting room looking gloomy,she went and sat beside Bako,but made sure their bodies weren't touching
"Welcome my wife"Bako began to speak"we have been waiting for you,I was in the office when I got a call from the dpo ,he said mama Bintu had committed suicide,truly I don't know what to make of all this, but I am indeed truly tired,and i have decided to take a different approach on matters,no other person save us would hear about this death for now,and she would remain at the mortuary for now,for two chief reasons,no money for burial,I have exhausted all I have on burials and I want this top secret,we don't know who our enemy is,this deaths Is definitely spiritual and its high time we tackle it"Bako concluded
"Brother Bako,I am indeed scared,I don't know who would be next,we really need to tackle this issue"Asibi stated
"Well said ,we would definitely,do that soonest,but not now"Bako replied
" Not now?"Nneka asked "please let's do what we need to do immediately,is it when another person dies that we would look for a solution?,no way Bako" Nneka continued and Asibi stared at her with mockery and hatred all over her face
"We will Nneka,we will Bako replied
* * * * * *
"Mama Bintu is dead,mama Dakar,i hope you are happy now" Asibi asked standing at the door of mama dakars room,mama Dakar on the other hand was folding her recently washed and dried clothes, tying to put up a brave front but the news of her sisters death was wearing her down and now Asibi was making it worse by tormenting her.
"Mama Dakar,keep pretending Like you are not hearing me,but I want to congratulate you for killing your sister"Asibi continued
" Okay I have heard,you are welcome,"mama Dakar replied
"I begged you,I pleaded with you,just so you would allow your sister to go free,but you didn't" Asibi said as she cried
"I would gave given you anything you asked including my life so you would forgive her and let her go,but you didn't, YOU LET HER ROT SISTER,YOU DID"Asibi continued crying helplessly
"GET OUT"mama Dakar shrieked
"I am going somewhere on Saturday,to get something to kill Nneka with,she is behind our misfortune,you can join me if you care to join"Asibi said before marching out,leaving mama Dakar all alone who couldn't help but to cry helplessly and vehemently, she never wanted her sister to end like this,it just did.
* * * * *
Bako was the sitting room with his wife watching the tv on Thursday evening,a day After the news of mama Bintu death reached them,everyone was staying on his or her own,there was no lovey dovey happening in the house,no one was in the mood,few minutes after the couple settled to feast their eyes on the TV,Asibi joined them and also joined in watching the TV without uttering a word for few minutes
" Brother,I would be travelling on Saturday to see a close friend of mine " Asibi told Bako
"Oh, really!,and do I know this friend?"Bako asked
"You don't but I and her are very close"
" Hmmmm,that's two days from now,isn't it?Bako asked
"Yes!"
"What a coincidence, I am travelling tomorrow"Bako stated and Nneka turned her head sharply to stare at him
"Travelling?"
"Yea dear,I forgot to tell you,I recently had a buisness arrangement and it is urgent" Bako replied
" And when was this travelling decided?"Nneka asked
"Early this week"
"And you didn't deem it fit to inform me?"Nneka asked
"I was going to tell you"
"You mean, telling me a night before you travel?"
"Please don't be offended,since we heard the news of my sisters death,I have been distraught and haven't been myself"
"News that we just heard yesterday?"
"Nneka let's just leave the topic as it is"
"No we wouldn't"
"Please Nneka"
"I said no,you want trouble,and I would give it to you full time,imagine,I am of no value go you anymore,you didn't even tell me of your travelling,you told Asibi,anyway you are nit going anywhere and that's that"she stood up and left them angrily.
Bako didn't even try to stop her,he knew he must travel,by hook or by crook,he must travel and nothing it no one could stop him.
* * * *
Later that night Bako could be seen,packing his clothes into a very small suitcase,and Nneka his wife lying on the bed and staring at him as he packed
"So you are still going?"she asked
"Yes I am"
"Where are you going?"
"To the next town,we are going on a buisness trip"
"Hmmmm,very surprising"
"What is?"
"The fact that ,since I married you,such a thing has never happened,you travelling for a buisness trip"
"Oh really?"
"Yes "she replied
" But I just got a big buisness deal,you should ve happy for me Nneka"
"Ehen?"
"Yes dear ,you should"he said as he hurriedly closed his suitcase and joined his wife on the bed and trying to silence his wife by cuddling her
"Hey,stop that ,do you think you can bribe me"
"Am I bribing you,am just teasing my wife,anything wrong with that?"
"You want me to shut up,don't you?"
"No love,I want to show you that I love you very much" Bako said as he teased her continually at her ears, Nneka willingly allowed him and let the issue die down,she knew Bako travelling meant there was something going on,but she just couldn't pinpoint it,anyway,she was glad the two siblings were travelling,ample time to dispose mama dakar.


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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 7:16am On Dec 15, 2015
"What are you doing all alone here Mr Toke ,when you should be keeping me company upstairs"
Nneka asked mama Bintu husband,she had come down to look for him in his bedroom, her husband had just travelled and she wanted Mr Toke Badly,for two main reasons,to satisfy her and to put her next death plan into action,it was just 5:00pm,so there was enough time for everything.
" My wife just died Nneka,I am not in the mood ,moreover,don't you think that u need to mourn her?
"Oh sir,don't be archaic,don't you know that I miss her as well,come love,let's mourn her together."
"Nneka ,leave ma alone ,please"
"Common baby,cone and make me happy love"Nneka said as she approached him raising her skirts very high and exposing her thighs.
" Please Mr Toke ,let me help you ease your grief,come to my bed chambers and make be your woman"
"Nneka please stop"Mr Toke Replied,but his voice had weakened and Nneka had succeeded in making him want her.
"Let's make love here Nneka"
"No love,I would be going upstairs, I want you there in a matter of minutes" she replied, bending and caressing him on his chest
"Come quickly love" Nneka said walking to the door
"Nneka,Asibi and mama Dakar are around"
"Don't worry love,we would lick the doors"she said and turned back to smoke seductively at him.
Nneka went straight from mama Bintus husband room to meet mama Dakar in the kitchen,where she was preparing the dinner
"Something smells nice here"Nneka said
"Yea,it should,I am cooking stew with a lot of condiments"
"Hmmmmm,so I guess,it would be delicious"
"I hope so"
"It surely will,I came to tell you that I am feeling a little bit under the weather, you know,with the stress of loosing your sister"
"Oh!sorry,have you taken any drugs?"
"I want to go to my room now to take it"
"Okay,please do that okay"
"Okay dear,thanks for caring,I also came to tell you that I would not have the strength to come down for dinner,could you please,please,please bring it to my room"Nneka pleaded
"For sure,I will dear"mama Dakar replies her only friend.
"Thanks dear,lemme go take it now"
"Okay"
Nneka smiled as she left mama Dakar in the kitchen,one person was about to die tonight,and the thought of it alone thrilled her beyond reasoning.
* * *
"Gush!,Nneka,I am so famished"Mr Toke Exclaimed as he got off Nneka.
"Don't be love"Nneka turned to face him, on the bed and touch him on his chest,she drew very close to him and laid her head on his chest,they were both naked and Nneka wanted it to remain that way
" I want plenty round's this evening plus throughout the night"Nneka said
"You don't mean that do you?"
"I mean every word""you mean I would be sleeping here tonight?"
"Yea,my hubby ain't home"
"But it aint right Nneka, I just lost my wife and I am here sleeping with you"
"That ain't bad,we are helping each other, mourn her better,or don't you think so?"
"I loved my wife"
"I know,I know,I liked her too"Nneka said touching him all over his body,kissing him and she positioned herself atop him
"I want you again my dea........"
Nneka was interrupted by the sound of the door being opened and she quickly got down from Mr toke And took the bed cover to cover herself,and there she was facing mama Dakar who was carrying food and looking shocked like she just saw a ghost,everyone was still till mama Dakar turned around and left the room without saying a word.
"Oh goodness!" mama bintu husband exclaimed as he flew down from the bed ,quickly wearing his jeans and looking pensive,Nneka on the other hand was feigning looking distraught but still on the bed
"Nneka!Christ!I thought you locked the door"Mr Toke Asked moving from one end of the room to the other
" what are we going to do now" he asked
"God!my husband would kill me"Nneka said putting her head in her hands
"We are both finished, God!why couldn't we control ourselves"Nneka continued
"We!did you just say we?or you are the one putting us in this mess,God!and my wife just died,how do I explain this,oh God!what do I
Do?"Mr toke Asked sitting down on a sofa in the room looking defeated
"Relax,and let's think of a solution, now is not the time to start pointing fingers"Nneka said
"Solution to what?what could ever solve this problem,this mess?"
"Shhhhh and think" Nneka replied
"Think about what?oh !Nneka has finished me,I warned you but you wouldn't listen,I told you that we shouldn't do anything rash or stupid,but you wouldn't listen,now mama Dakar would tell the whole family and I would be seen as evil,oh God! What do I do........"
"Let's kill her"Nneka suggested
"What!are out out of your mind?are you crazy?kill my sister in law?"Mr Toke asked
"Yes,what's there,stop acting like you have never killed before"Nneka replied
"Me?kill!Never!"
"Oh shut it,I heard about how you and mama Dakar husband raped Renatas twin sister to death"
"What!that's not what happened"
"Common,I am not Renata,I am Nneka,no need to lie to me,I am just stating facts"
"Hmmm,well it was not intentional ,she just died when we were having fun"
"Ohh!"Nneka exclaimed
"Well then,this one should not be a problem,that's just the way out,if we don't do this,we are both doomed"Nneka continued
"Oh God! First adultery,then murder,how are we going to go about it and are you sure she isn't telling Asibi right now?"
"Nah,she isn't,we would do it this night and dispose of her body this same night,as for how we would do it,I would direct you"Nneka said standing up,going over to him and sitting on him
"This is the only way out love"she whispered in his ear and began kissing him.

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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Sageez(m): 8:08am On Dec 15, 2015
welcome back prettysassygirl, missed you so much....
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 9:33am On Dec 15, 2015
Mama Dakar was shocked and speechless as she ran downstairs with the food,was her eyes deceiving her or was she seeing double? Nneka and mama bintus husband having an affair, what insolence! Nnekas husband just travelled few hours back and that stupid mans wife just died and they were already frolicking in bed,bakos matrimonial bed,abomination!,she quickly dropped the food in the kitchen and ran to asibis room,now she could fix the puzzle,no wonder Nneka was pushing her to lock up her sister ,Nneka was indeed evil,she had convinced her to put her sister behind bars so the LovePeddler would be sleeping freely with her sisters husband,only an evil woman would do that.
She paused at Asibis door and knocked, she has had enough surprises for one day
"Come in"Asibi answered
Mama Dakar went in and remained standing
" Asibi,I wanted to talk you that I would go with you tomorrow to that place"
"Hmmmm,that's good,what made you change your mind sister?"
"Nothing much,i just want to go with you now"
"You sure?"
"Yea,very sure,what time would you be leaving?
"By 10:00am at most,its far and we need to get to someone's house first"
"Alright then,I would be ready" mama Dakar replied and left the room.
* * * *
Bako looked around him and shivered,where they were was really eerie and he wondered why he and his uncles had to come in the night to the witches coven place,after all all the Nigerian movies he usually watched,people go in the daylight,but here he was,at midnight, right in the middle of his uncles tying a red wrapper at his waist and waiting for whoever that is going to attend to them to come out,but before he could realise what was going on,his uncles began to incant something he couldn't even decipher and three women appeared directly in front of them.
"Why art thou calling me?"the woman in the middle asked them,she seemed to be their leader and she looked real fierce
"We have a great problem and we have come for a solution" one of his uncles replied
"I know what you seek and I know the answers,I know all and I see all ,young man!"she said looking directly at Bako
" You want your problem solved?"
"Yes I do "Bako answered
"Then you must let go of the love you have for your wife"
"Why?"
"Because your wife is the master minder,she is the reason behind the death,Nneka is the murderess ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha"she and her cohorts laughed uncontrollably
""It can't be"Bako stated
"It is" she replied
" So what can we do now"one of his uncles quickly asked
"How do we kill her?"he continued
"You can't kill her,you shouldn't unless you want more problems,there is only one solution,publicly disgrace her and send her out of four house,then and only then would your problem be solved Bako"
"Your highness,is that all?"the uncle asked
"That us all,but only on one condition,this young man here should never meet with her outside the house,he was her channel to come in and it Is only through him she has the power to hurt any one ,if you don't heed my voice Bako,dire consequences would follow"
"Okay your highness,thank you,what can we offer you in appreciation"
"You know u don't need money,I only take blood"
" Yes your highness,and we have your sacrifice just outside"
"Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ,well dine mortals,now Go! Go! Go!,ha ha ha ha ha ha ha "
Bako scrambled out with his uncles into the forest and they made their way into their car their sleeping abode,they couldn't drive home so late.
"How can Nneka my wife be behind these deaths?"Bako asked aloud
"I suspected as much,we are going straight to the family house first thing tomorrow morning and we are going to gather family members then go straight to your house and send her out of the compound"
"What!please,can't the three of us be the ones to drive her out?"Bako pleaded
"She is to be publicly shamed remember?" The second uncle chipped in.
"Oh God!how do I face my wife and do that to her?"Bako asked
"It must be done"
"How am I sure that thiss is true and my wife is behind the calamities"
"She doesn't lie,moreover don't you trust us?"
"I do,but?"
"No need for buts then except you want your family members to keep dying one by one and don't even think that Mr death wouldn't knock on your door,its coming for all of you one after the other till it is stopped"
* * * *
"You are stepping on me nneka"
"Shhhh, be quiet at once" Nneka whispered
"Do you want to wake everybody up"she asked
"But you stepped on me"
"I know,but I didn't do it on purpose,okay get out of my way,I can open a door silently" Nneka said as she pushed mr Toke away and made her way to mama Dakars door,tiptoeing as she went, she got to the door and tried the lock
"Gush!thank God,it ain't locked,"she whispered under her breath,she pushed the door silently and her and Mr Toke entered in slowly.
"Take that side stool and hit her head hard with it"Nneka commanded Mr Toke whispering it in his ears,she was glad seeing mama Dakar sleeping soundly,this was one of the reasons ,she chose this kind of death for her,mama Dakar was a heavy sleeper and she got to know about it when they got very close. Mr Toke took the side stool and hit the woman hard on head and blood spattered everywhere,mama Dakar was convulsing and shaking uncontrollably
"Strangle her!strangle her!"Nneka commanded and Mr Toke climbed atop her and strangled the woman till she died
"Finally!"he said and got down from her
"How do we dispose of her body now"he asked
"Go get that dustbin thick bag,we would put her in it ,then carry her downstairs into the car,then go to that big river beside the main road ,put a heavy iron in the bag,then throw her with the iron into the river,she would then sink deep of course,everything has been organized,I asked the gardener to take the day off,I parked the car outside the compound,and finally,the iron is in the boot of the car,so hurry up and go get that bag,we need to hurry,so we could come back in time to clear this blood mess up"Nneka replied
* * * *
Mr Toke awoke to someone calling his named repeatedly,he opened his sleep induced eyes and stared at Asibi,she was standing at the head of his bed and looking impatient
"Please ,I have been looking for mama Dakar all over the house,since morning that I woke up,both of us are supposed to go somewhere today by 10 and it is already past 11"
"Oh!you don't say!I don't know where she is ,as you can see I am just waking up,but I think I overheard her yesterday telling Nneka that she would be going to the market this morning"
" Christ!how can this woman do this,when she knows that we have an appointment to keep,I don't think I can wait for her anymore,please when she comes back ,tell her that I have left"
"Okay,I will,but where are you going?"
"To see someone"
"Oh!okay then,I would pass your message across"
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 9:35am On Dec 15, 2015
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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 9:35am On Dec 15, 2015
Sageez:
welcome back prettysassygirl, missed you so much....
am blushing really hard now
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by SwaGUnLimiTeD(m): 7:04pm On Dec 15, 2015
Nice piece xo intriguing
prettysassygirl:

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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by saraphina(f): 7:46am On Dec 16, 2015
nice story..
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Rukkydelta(f): 2:30pm On Dec 18, 2015
I started reading this story and I must say you got a nice piece here
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 7:43pm On Dec 20, 2015
thanks 4 d update
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 10:45am On Dec 25, 2015
Nneka was at her bed sleeping ,it was past 12 in the afternoon,and she had just had her breakfast plus sweet sensational sex from Mr Toke and she slept soundly on her bed,the house was empty save her and Mr Toke ,Asibi had travelled an hour earlier and Mr Toke was at his gates,thinking and pondering how far he had gone with Nneka ,what abominations she had led him to commit,now he was being tormented,wherever he turned,he felt he could see mama dakars face staring at him,that was why he ran to the gates, an open place,there was no possibility of seeing mama dakars face,guilt ate at his soul and sorrow filled his heart,he knew his punishment was coming soonest, he just didn't know how soon.
A knock at the gate some him up from his reverie and he quickly ran to the gates to open it up,opening the gate he saw Bako,Bakos uncles and a lot of their relative he could recognise,some he couldn't recognise too,what a crowd! He wondered the occasion and why everyone was here
"So this is how low Nneka and her husband Bako has reduced you to,eh?Mr Toke,their gateman?"one of the uncles said as he brushed past him into the compound,every other person followed suit till everybody was in the compound.
"Good afternoon uncles"Mr toke greeted
"Afternoon,where is Nneka?"
" Eh,probably upstairs, I haven't seen her today"
"Okay,everyone wait here"the uncle said
"And you Mr Toke,go and take off that funny uniform and cap you are putting on"he continued as he marched off to go search for Nneka .
Nneka on the other hand was sleeping so soundly,she didn't hear her door open or hear the footsteps approach till he tapped her on the shoulders,Nneka woke up and turned stretching herself,she was surprised to see an uncle of Bako in her room,she had expected it to be Mr Toke,probably wanting another round of sex .She sat up quickly drawing the bed cover to her chest, she quickly turned to check if Mr Toke was still Sleeping beside her and she was relieved to see he wasn't there,she just hoped they hadn't been caught together on the bed.
"What are you doing in my bedroom?" She asked rudely
"What else,waking you up of course"
"Get out!"
"Get out of where?"
"My bedroom,my house,just get out"
"Ha ha ha ha ,your house or Bakos?"
"Anything that belongs to my husband belongs to me,don't you have any sense of decorum Mr man?I am naked and you just stand there,staring at Me,or do you want to rape me ?"
"Don't flatter yourself Nneka,you don't appeal to me,you have visitors downstairs so get dressed,I give you five minutes"
"You have no right to command me and I would only get dressed when I deem it necessary"Nneka replied before relaxing back on the bed
"Moreover,go tell the visitors that I do not wish to see them" Nneka continued
"Don't let me repeat myself,get up and get dressed"bakos uncle commanded and waited a few seconds to watch nnekas reaction, when he saw that she wasn't budging,he went to To where she lay and dragged her by the hair down the bed,Nneka screamed and was struggling with him but he was far more stronger than her,she held the bedsheet tightly around herself as she was dragged down the bed to the floor.
"LET ME BE!"Nneka screamed,and the uncle kept on dragging her till they got to the middle of the room before he let her go
"Now I repeat Nneka,get dressed or else I drag you downstairs dressed like this,I have had enough of your cockiness"
Nneka was astounded as she sat on the floor,no one had treated her like this since she came to bakos house as his wife,she immediately sensed that something was amiss else how can this man have the audacity to treat her in this manner,she quickly composed herself and decided to do his bidding.
"Can you go out and give me ten minutes to dress up then?"
"Alright then,ten minutes it is"Bakos uncle replied before leaving the room
Nneka quickly wore her clothes and then sat on the bed waiting and wondering who the visitors were Bakos uncle had said that the visitors were downstairs,she ran to the window and drew the curtain aside to look down ,her and Bakos room window wasn't exactly facing the gate,but she just looked down to see if she could see anything or perhaps recognise someone's car but the location of the window didn't allow her to see anything or anybody
"Hmmmm,I don't think you can see your visitors from there,this way please"Nneka turned around at the sound of Bakos uncle voice,she was angry now and she just walked briskly past him out of the door and headed downstairs, let her see the so called visitors quickly and head back to her room to rest and sleep,she didn't have much sleep the previous night plus the bouts of sex she had been having with Mr Toke,she just needed to rest so let her make haste and dismiss the visitors quickly.
Nneka got to the compound and halted immediately,there were a lot of people in the compound and she wondered the reason behind their presence,her eyes scanned the Crowd and she was shocked beyond words when her eyes rested on Bako,he was just standing amidst the crowd,his eyes did not meet hers,he was looking at everywhere except where she stood,he didn't come to meet her,no sweet words,no show of love and affection in his eyes and for the first time in a long time,Nneka was scared,something was definitely wrong,she felt someone's hands push her violently forward from the back and she landed on her hands and legs on the floor,she knew it was bakos uncle that had come upstairs to call her that had pushed her that way,she looked up and stared at Bako as tears slid down her cheeks,Nneka immediately knew that her time was up at Bakos house
"Look at her,the witch behind our problems,the one responsible for Bakos siblings death"the uncle jeered and everyone shouted calling her various names,some even demanding that they kill her,she kept on crying and the tears were sincere,and she wasn't crying for the shame but for the sole fact that she wouldnt Finish her job before leaving, she had been found out and her tenure had ended.
"Speak for yourself witch,clear your name and tell us we are wrong in our assumption"Bakos uncle said to her but she kept mute,she just kept on crying
" I said speak or we take your your silence for affirmation"he repeated,but she maintained her stance and kept mute while yet on the floor . The crowd began jeering again and abusing her. Bakos uncle lifted her forcibly from the ground and began leading her to the gate. Nneka could see Bako and Mr toke,as she was led to the gate,this was the heights of disgrace she could ever imagine receiving,she was pushed out of the gate and the gate was kicked shut in her face. Nneka was flabbergasted and began to weep uncontrollably,she was sad and confused,where would she go,who would she go for help,her mother lived far away in the east and she hadn't much friends anymore,she sat dejectedly at one of the edges of the gates looking forlorn and sad,she heard the gates open And looked up to see Bako coming out looking like a rat that got dipped in water
"I came to give you your phone and atm,something to at least help you survive"he said handing her phone and ATM to her,she quickly stretched out her hand and collected what Bako offered and Bako walked in without saying another word to her. She watched him go and wondered how Bako could allow them treat her this way,now how was she going to complete her mission,did this mean that Bako ,Asibi,Mr Toke and the children would escape,God forbid,she must look for another alternative,this thought suddenly jeered her up and she got up and started leaving the street,it was time to have a plan b,thank God Bako had given her her atm,at least she knew she could survive now,she would look for a hotel to stay till she could find accommodation,or probably call up the friend she recently met at the hospital,tell of her plight and ask for directions to her house,whatever be the case,something just had to be done.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 11:12am On Dec 25, 2015
Asibi came back home on Sunday,the day after the disgrace,she was so tired from the journey,mama Bintus friend had taken her to a native doctor who gave them something to pit in nnekas bathing water,the man promised that once she bathes with the water,she would Fall sick,a sickness that would lead to her death.Looking back,Asibi would never believe that she would ever go to this length to get rid of someone,especially someone she liked previously,circumstances could really change someone.
"Why doesn't someone come and open this gate for me?"she asked herself,She had been knocking on the gate for a long period and no one was coming out to open,after some extra few minutes,Mr Toke came out to open the gate
"What were you doing?how come I have been knocking since and no one is opening" Asibi asked
" Sorry,I didn't hear you"he replied
"Indeed"Asibi said,hissing and walking inside
"Everyone just dey do madam and Oga for him room,i just dey here dey knock" she murmured under her breath.
She walked briskly till she got to her room,she just needed to get some rest she told herself as she lay on the bed and slept off.
* * * *
Few hours later,Asibi woke up,she looked at her clock and found out that it was already past 6 in the evening,she must have indeed slept off for a long period,she felt angry with herself immediately and got up quickly,she needed to put the medicine baba gave her into Nneka bathing water that evening, no time to waste,she decided to go look for mama Dakar so she could tell her news from her travelling, then both of them could plan the execution together.
She left the room in a haste and looked around the house,she couldn't find mama Dakar or any other person,it was really strange to Asibi,at least by now Nneka should be at the sitting room and watching tv,the lazy wench. she decided to go meet Mr Toke downstairs and ask what was going on and where Everybody was.
"Mr Toke,I have been looking for mama Dakar,do you know where she is at?"
"Hmmm,Asibi,since you left,a lot has happened"
"I don't understand"she replied
"Really,I do not know what to say or where to start from"
"Mr Toke ,why are you speaking in parables?"
" Mama Dakar has not come back since that day you left"
"What!you kidding right?"Asibi exclaimed
"What do you mean by you haven't seen her since that day,where is my sister?"she asked,holding Mr Toke by his collar with her two hands
"Let me go,what's the meaning of this?,would I know where she is and would not have gone to look for my sister in law,she went out and never came back,I don't know what to think of this,I am so worried and afraid"he answered and tears slid down his cheeks,he was crying sincerely for guilt ate at his soul,he wished he had not killed mama Dakar.
Asibi collapsed and sat on the bare floor,she looked stupefied,she couldn't even think anymore
"Where is Nneka?"she asked mechanically
"Nneka has been sent out of the house by the family"he answered and Asibi looked at him surprised at his statement
"The whole family came here,Asibi you need to see what happened,they called her a witch,they disgraced her and Bako was right here with them,its like they went to somewhere spiritual and they told them that Nneka has been behind our misfortunes,behind the deaths, they told her they never want to see her near this family again"
"Hmmmmmm,I knew it,I guessed it all along,so Bako is back?"
"Yes he is"
"Where is he then?"
"Upstairs ,where else?"
"But I didn't see him"
"Did you check his room?"
"No"
"Check there,he has not been himself since they sent his wife away,he is not eating,he just locked up himself"
" Let me go see him then"
"Alright"
Asibi immediately stood up to go look for her brother,her remaining sibling,she knew it was too early to conclude her sister dead,it was just two days since she had gone missing,but with the problems in her family,she knew it would be Wasted hope to wish her sister would ever come back again .she got to her brothers room and tried to open the door but it was locked,she knocked and knocked and knocked over and over again till Bako came and opened the door for her.
Bako looked like he had been crying,after opening the door he went back to his bed and laid down,Asibi followed him quietly and sat on the bed beside him.
"Bako,mama Dakar is missing "Asibi said and Bako sat up immediately
"What do you mean by that?"
"That is what Mr Toke just told me"
"I don't understand,missing from where?"
"Before I left yesterday morning,I learnt from Mr toke that she and Nneka planned that she would be going to the market that morning,since that day,he has not seen her"
"And what did he do about it,just sit around,did he inform me when I came back?"
"But you locked up yourself ,how do you expect him to inform you when he can't see you"
"That's a very flimsy excuse,couldn't he report to the police station,if he really cared for his Sister in law,he would have done something meaningful,God!God! and this is connected to my wife again"Bako said putting his head in his hands
"Your wife!did you just call that witch your wife? Mr Toke told me what happened,she shouldn't be referred to as your wife anymore"
" Yes I know"bako answered in a weak voice
" I was also told that I should never meet up with her again"he continued
" Very well, I just hope you keep to instruction"
"But Asibi,do you really believe she is a witch,I mean she doesn't disappear and I haven't noticed anything strange about her"
"She is Bako,can't you remember that it was since that day that you married her that trouble started,you know I liked her initially,so for me to concur that she is witch I know what I am saying,now most of our all of our siblings are dead,but thank God she has been exposed and banished ,It is well."

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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 12:07pm On Dec 25, 2015
Nneka was in a small room that she had rented,it had been three weeks since she left bakos mansion ,she had stayed at her friends place for a week before moving to her scantily furnished room,thank God,she had some money in her account,over 700,000 naira,but she had been prudent in her expenses,she had looked for a Room apartment with public toilet to stay for the mean time as she looked for a means to get back to Bakos family,she looked around her room as she sat on the bed,and she remembered the past,it was indeed just as if it was yesterday,when her and her twin sister stayed in this kind of room,they were orphans and she Renata was the dominant of the two,they had run away from the motherless home where they stayed with some little money they were able to steal from their caretaker,they used to money to rent a shabby room like where she stayed now and to start up a small scale business,where they sold provisions,they did this for two years and they survived ,they could feed, Buy clothes and take good care of themselves,they didn't have need for men,or considered them a way out of poverty till she met makur ,she went to market that day to get some foodstuffs for the house when she met makur,he hadn't come to the market of course,but he was driving past it when he saw her, Renata believed in love at first sight because her and makur experienced it,it was as if a stronger force bonded them .makur came into their lives and turned it around for good,he introduced her to his family and even though they didn't like her,they didn't object to the wedding,it was a dream come true,a prince charming had come to save her,her girlfriends envied her success,her and her sister moved into makurs mansion after the wedding and hell began. she tried to please the family, washed their clothes, served them,cooked for them,was at their beck and call,even the children tormented them and makur did nothing to stop his siblings,he loved her but wasn't man enough to stop them. Asibi and Bako were the only two that pitied her ,Bako then was living in makurs house as he gradually built his own mansion,they also showed her little kindness. Renata and her sister bore all,because they were afraid of going back to penury,afraid of being the laugh of the town. The worst day of Renatas life was when she came back home to see the lifeless body of her twin sister dropped carelessly at the balcony,they all told her thieves broke in and raped her to death,she didn't believe the story of course,how could thieves come in the day time and how could thieves just come in and start raping and they were watching ,her doubts were later confirmed months later when Chamil told her the truth,mocking her that her two brother in laws had raped her stupid sister to death and she had been watching them and jeering them on,that revelation killed her spirit and she just walked around the house like a robot. Three months later,her husband died from food poisoning, how had it happened?
Mama Bintu had given her oranges to lick,she had told her she bought the oranges specially for her and she wanted her to be friends with her,Renata hadnt trusted her so she dropped the oranges in her room,waiting for mama Bintu to retire to hers so she could throw the oranges away,but she was sent on an errand and before she could come back,her husband had already returned from work, taken the oranges and lay dead on their bedroom floor. They accused her of killing her husband and the torment increased ,even Asibi and Bako started ignoring her and stopped showing her the little kindness till she was food poisoned ,mama Bintu tried again and this time she ate the food,and as the poison was killing her slowly she ran out of the house and that was when she met Nneka her saving grace,but it was clear now that Nneka couldnt help her anymore,she wanted Bako now,he was her only link to that house and she really hoped she would be able to get him because she must complete her mission.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 2:02pm On Dec 25, 2015
thanks 4 d update pretysassy nd happy xmas
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 2:54pm On Dec 25, 2015
bummybummy:
thanks 4 d update pretysassy nd happy xmas
wishing you same dearie
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 9:48pm On Dec 29, 2015
"You can't continue Like this Bako,just take a good look at yourself,see how unkept you look,you look disgusting Bako,you haven't shaved,you don't go to work,you hardly bathe,what kind of stupid love is this? eh?see how you are killing yourself for a witch that killed your three sisters and your brother in law,please Bako,get a grip of yourself o or I would report you to our uncles" Asibi told her brother Bako
" It has been three weeks Bako,please stop this,you can't survive long if you keep behaving like this"Asibi continued shaking him on the bed,Bako was laying on the bed looking depressed,sad and unhealthy.
" What do I do now?where do I go for help,God!why can't my brother get a grip of himself ,father Lord, please help him,"Asibi whispered silently,she looked at her brother pitying him,how could someone still love despite hearing evil about his wife,she stood and left his room,let her go and prepare his favourite meal,pounded yam and egusi soup and see if he would eat, If he didn't ,then she would resort to reporting him to their uncles,as elders they would know what to do
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When Bako heard the door close,he knew Asibi had left,he sat up,a solution to his problem just occurred to him,he couldn't keep on living life like this as Asibi had said ,if he continued like this ,he might end up dying,though the thought of dying didn't really scare him,after all,he had no more reason living,life was nothing without Nneka, she was and is the only woman he had ever truly loved,he wondered where she was at the moment,was she safe?was she in the arms of another man?that was a more terrible thought,he shuddered just thinking of it,all his family members had told him not to see her again ,like it was easy,they would never know the torture he was going through,he loved her terribly and he didn't think he could go on the way he was going,they said she was a witch , Why didn't she kill or harm him,if she didn't previously,she never will,he picked up his phone and started dialling her number,thank God he gave her her phone that day, he could remember that when he had run upstairs that day as they were dragging her towards the gate and returned with her phone and atm,his uncles and family members were vehemently against the idea ,but he didn't listen,there was no way on earth he could allow Nneka go out with nothing, now he was happy he hadn't listened to them. The phone rang and rang ,no one was picking,he began to worry,was she dead or something or was she robbed,he hoped it was neither of the two situations,the little hope that had flickered in his heart when he was dialling her number died and he lay back on the bed,what was life without Nneka? she was his muse,the reason he worked very hard,the reason for his rushing home from work daily,he had never been a womanizer all his life,he had had steady relationships as a bachelor, but no lady On earth had stolen his heart the way Nneka had,it wasn't love at first sight,but as days came and went ,his love for her grew and waxed strong. Now she was gone from his house and maybe from his life,could he cope? he doubted it,he tried dialling her line again,and this time,it was picked,he hurriedly put the phone at his ear
"Hello" he said
"Yea,who am I speaking with?" Nneka asked
"Uhmmmmm,its Bako "
"Ohh!Bako!how are you doing?"
"Am fine Nneka,and you?"Bako asked lovingly,hearing her voice was so heavenly for him and he held on to the phone tightly
"Am fine"she replied
"Uhmmm,Nneka I am sorry for what happened that day"
"Oh,really!OK"
"I don't know what came over me or why I allowed them do what they did to you,I am eternally sorry "
"Its okay Bako"
"Now I can't live,I can't sleep,I can't eat,I just can't do anything,even work,Nneka,I am no longer living,its been hell without you,I need you in my life and i am sorry I let you go"
"Hmmmm,OK"
"Where are you?"
"At my house"
"Where?"
"Somewhere"
"Nneka please,tell me where you are,I need to see you please"
"OK,I am at no 7,igbesut street,off danyland main road"
"Okay,thanks,I would be there in a couple of minutes"
"Alright,expecting you,I am at the third room by the left"
"Okay my love"Bako said and dropped the phone, time to go see his wife,he quickly stood up ,went to his drawer and brought out his shaving and barbing tools,the hairs all over his body were in a total mess,and he hurriedly prepared himself,he shaved,brushed,his teeth,took his bath and donned one of his best attire,then he stood in front of the mirror to inspect himself, he Didn't look bad at all,though he had lost a a lot of weight,he could only hope Nneka would still find him attractive,he left the mirror side and went to pick his car keys from the side table, then he left the room ,on his way out,he met Asibi,
"Brother,where are you going?"
"To see a client, I just got a call,let me rush out"
"But I am cooking for you"
"I will be back soon " he replied and quickly left her,he didn't want to wait to start arguing with her,he knew she wasn't going to buy the bullshit he was selling her but that was her problem,he needed to see his wife soonest,he had missed her greatly,even his Johnny had missed her too,he was fully aroused just knowing he was on the way to her house,he entered the car, horned for Mr Toke to open the gate for him,and when the gate was opened,he drove out,he knew the address Nneka gave him,it wasn't too far from his home,just fifteen minutes drive,he drove at a breakneck speed ,if he didn't die today,he was never going to die. He got to the compound and parked his car by the side of the road,then he strode in,it was a very neat compound but shabby,and meant for the poor,what was his Nneka doing here?no one was outside ,so he walked into the corridor ,she had told him,the third room by the left,so he followed her description and knocked on the door,while he was waiting for the door to Be opened,he readjusted his clothes ,he needed to look nice for Nneka,he knocked again,then heard the doors bolt lifted from the inside,after that nothing so he decided opening the door,when he opened and entered, he saw Nneka by the window standing and staring at him,she was looking gorgeous and beautiful,he turned back and rebolted the door then he walked up to her,she hadn't said a word to him and he didn't either,he took her fingers in his hands gently,trying to gauge her reaction,before he caressed her arms up,then bent to kiss her gently on her lips,he had indeed missed her so much,he kept on kissing her and when he realised she was responding,he was alight with desire,soon he was removing her clothes in a hurry and she him,it was obvious they didn't have time for preliminaries,in a matter of seconds,they were both naked and on the bed,bakos hands were everywhere on his wife's body,he wanted to taste her womanliness,his honeycomb,but that would be left for the second round,,right Now,he just wanted his wife,he climbed on her and took her in the missionary style ,this was heaven for Bako,Nneka was moaning and telling him how much she had missed him,Bako kept on thrusting till both attained climax,Bako held on to Nneka and continued kissing her but Nneka pushed him gently off her,got up ,dressed and stood with arms akimbo
"Get out Bako"Bako wasn't surprised at all by her demonstrations,he was still naked,so he sat up on the bed and used the bed cover to cover his laps,
"Nneka I said I was sorry"
" Just get out Bako,nothing you say or do now would make me change my mind"
" What happened that day was a mistake Nneka,please forgive me"Bako pleaded
"Oh it is suddenly a mistake,Bako,eh,do you know what I passed through at the hands of your people,the shame,the disgrace?"
"Am sorry love"
" What do you want with me Bako?,I have been banished from your house,I am no longer your wife,what do you want with me?"Nneka asked crying her usual crocodile tears,Bako stood up
And went to hug her
"Baby,I am really sorry for what happened and let me tell you this,you are still my wife,did we divorce?so why would you say you are no longer my wife?see I can't live without you,that's why I came back,don't worry dear,we would find a way out of this love"
"Okay bu.........."
"Shhhhhhh ,No buts love, I would find a way to rectify this mess"Bako said as he drew his wife and life more closely to him.
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 10:03pm On Dec 29, 2015
"Have you noticed your brothers changed behaviour lately"Mr Toke asked Asibi,they were both in the car,driving home,Mr Toke had driven Asibi to the market to get some supplies for the house
"Yes I have"
"And what do you think"
" I think I am happier,he has finally come to realise that he has to live and no more think of that witch"
"Hmmmmmm,are you that blind Asibi?can't you see that he hasn't let go,for the past one month,he doesn't stay at home during weekends and during weekdays he comes in by 11 or 12 pm,suddenly there is a lot of traffic on the road,someone that previously comes home by 5 or 7"
"What are you trying to say Mr Toke?"
"Well,I am saying that I think he might be meeting up with Nneka "
"Kai! Don't go there again,he wouldn't dare,after all the warning, no no no,my brother wouldn't be that foolish,by the way Mr Toke,have you even considered the possibility that he might be seeing someone new, and not that damned Nneka"Asibi asked
"Ha ha ha ha ha ,Asibi don't be naive,I am a man and I can confidently tell you that Nneka is the only lady in your brothers life"
" I don't believe you jare,instead of you to be happy that everything is moving smoothly,you wan come put sand for my garri,if he is still with her,why hasn't he mistakenly mentioned her name,anyway sha,I go still confront am"
"No tell am say na me suggest am o"
"Am I a kid"Asibi asked
"Hmmmmm,i just say make I tell you my mind o,Ehen Asibi,I saw that bobo that collected your number at the market"
"Ehen,how that one concern you?"
"I don't like him"he replied
"See me o,did I ask for your approval?"
"Sorry"
"A beg,mind your buisness joor"
"No vex,go and open the gate let me drive in"
"Can't you stop the car then go and open the gate yourself"Asibi asked
" Oya now,we go sleep for dis car today,shey u wan turn to another Nneka,no wahala na"
"You gat me there ,god forbid,me be likened to Nneka"Asibi replied as she got down from the car to open the gate
* *
* *
Bako came into the house walking tiredly,as he climbed the stairs,he remembered Nneka and smiled,he knew he couldn't keep up what he was doing,he had to look for a way to bring her back to the house soonest. Nneka has been pestering him of late to bring her back to the house,he just wished he could find a way,maybe he would go meet his uncles and plead with them, at this thought,he stopped walking abruptly and stared straight ahead,there at the sitting room were two of his Uncles,was he dreaming?he wiped his eyes with his hands,could thoughts conjure people up,he checked his wristwatch and it was 12 am on the dot,what on earth would his uncles be doing at his house by this time?"
"You are not dreaming Bako,come here"one of his uncles said,Bako went closer and also saw that Asibi and Mr Toke were also seating at the sitting room
"We were told ,we could only see you by this time"an uncle said
"Good morning uncles"Bako greeted and sat down warily,he knew why they were there,Asibi must have fulfilled her promise to him that she made two nights ago to report him to the uncles if he didn't stop visiting Nneka when she had confronted him with the allegation and he didn't deny
"Where are you coming from Bako?"an uncle asked
"From work,where else?"
"By this time Bako?"
"Yes"
"Are you still seeing Nneka?"
"Ehmmmmm"
"Answer immediately Bako,are you still seeing her?"
"Yes i am"
"Bako!Bako!Bako! Why do you want to put this family in trouble,weren't you warned not To see her again,if you are so sex starved,why didn't you tell me ,I would have gotten a clean prostitute for you,Bako,why cant you control yourself,why do you want to bring more doom on this family,you have already brought enough and you are not satisfied,because of you that girl was brought in,because if you,your siblings are dead yet you haven't learnt your lesson"one of the uncles said in anger
"Uncle,my wife is not a witch,and u am tired of living like this,I wanted to come to your houses and even tell you,but thank God,you people are here,I want to bring back my wife'
"You dare not"an uncle replied
"She has cast a spell on him,can't you all see"the other uncle affirmed
"Bako please,please,don't do this"Asibi pleaded and knelt down crying
"Bako,I beg you,whatever we have done to you,please forgive us,please don't bring that witch home"Asibi continued,Mr Toke just sat and watched the drama,he was at a loss for words
"Don't you think I am trying Asibi,but I cant live without her" Bako said to Asibi,he was crying as well
"Uncles,I wouldn't see evil and wish it for my siblings,how could you people even say what you just did,that it is my fault my siblings are dead"Bako asked his uncles
"Isn't it your fault? The issue here is that you have not still learnt your lesson,you still want to to kill Asibi and everyone here,please Bako,just try and withdraw from her,we know it is not easy and we no longer expect you to withdraw immediately from her but you could try gradually,please Bako,for the sake of family please try"one of his uncles pleaded
" I will try"Bako replied,he was touched by what the uncles had said about it being his fault his siblings were dead,heaven knows he loves his siblings and wouldn't ever wish them evil, so he would try and see if he could forget Nneka gradually,they think she is evil,let him try for sake of family ,he just hoped he could do it.

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Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 10:22pm On Dec 29, 2015
prettysassy girl must finish this story before 2016,somebody say amen to this
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by Rukkydelta(f): 11:00pm On Dec 29, 2015
AMEN AND AMEN
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by bummybummy(f): 11:17pm On Dec 29, 2015
Amen oooooooooo
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by prettysassygirl(f): 11:45pm On Dec 29, 2015
Nneka sat on her bed waiting for bako,it has been a month and few weeks since Bako started coming to her,now she was trying to make him take her back ,but he seemed not to be getting the message,plus she had began noticing he was starting to withdraw a little from her,he only came weekends,whereas he was previously always coming even during weekdays,today she was really going to confront him,if her going back wasn't going to work,she had to look for another alternative very fast. She heard a key slide in the key lock and she knew bako had come,she had previously given him a spare key,she smiled and stood to welcome and hug him
"My baby,welcome love"Nneka greeted kissing him on the cheeks and lips
"Thanks honey,how was your day?"Bako asked and took her along with him to the bed
"Very fine love, but you didn't come early enough"Nneka said resting on him as he sat on the bed
I went to the office first"
"Ohh,I remember now love,sometimes you usually go to work on Saturdays and Work half day"
"Yea,but it isn't half day yet Nneka my love,it is just 11 am "he said chuckling
"Ehen,and what is the difference between 11am and 12 pm?"Nneka asked
"Hmmmm,plenty things o"he replied as he Nuzzled her hair and cheeks
"Okay oo my love,I have heard,but baby I am really tired of staying away from you,not sleeping in your arms at night,please love,when are you taking me home" Nneka asked placing her arms around his neck
"Hmmmmm,Nneka,"Bako said removing her arms from his neck and looking away
"I really think that that proposition wouldn't be possible,you see my uncles and family were adamant"Bako said
"But you told me ,you would do something about it,this place I am living,is it right?,is it befitting for a wife of yours?". Nneka asked,tears were already sliding down her cheeks
"Nneka I tried to do something,it didn't work out,what else could i do,I love you,I can't live without you,but circumstances beyond our control doesn't want us to be together,as for the house, I would find somewhere else for you to stay"
"Bako!"Nneka screamed,standing up
"Are you not a man?can't you make your decisions?must they make it for you?"
"My love calm down,please"
"I will not!" Nneka shouted as she ran to where the knife was in the room,took it and came back to where Bako was,she had thought about this throughout the night and she knew,this was the only hope she had,she had done it before,she could do it again,she had no more need for Nneka so she could go on with her plans
"I will kill myself Bako!"she shouted and Bako stood up in blind panic
"Nneka,please,it has not gotten to that my love,please stop this"Bako pleaded
"Can't you see Bako,I can't live without you,soon they would give you another wife,then i would be lost"Nneka said crying
"No love,that is where you are wrong,I would never leave you,I can't love another woman the way I love you"Bako begged and tried to collect the knife,but before he could move closer to her ,she had stabbed herself deep at her tummy.
"Nneka!"Bako shouted as he fell with her to the ground,holding her dying body on his laps,trying to stop the flow of blood from her tummy.
"B...a..k..o I .......lov ......e yo...u" Nneka whispered
"NO! NO! NO! NO! Nneka!please don't leave me, Nneka my love,I can't live without you,okay please,hold on let me get you to the hospital,please just hold on"he said standing and lifting her from the ground, Renata knew this was the time,when her and Nnekas spirit were about leaving the body,she clung to Bako as he lifted her,gathered all the last strength she could muster and bit into his neck,trying desperately to penetrate him like she did Nnekas body.
Bako screamed and tried to push Nnekas body off his, but she held on tightly till she entered him fully,Nnekas body dropped to the ground carelessly and Bako ran round the room like a possessed being screaming,holding his neck and struggling with the strange being within him
Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by kizzykeziah: 11:50pm On Dec 29, 2015
prettysassygirl:
prettysassy girl must finish this story before 2016,somebody say amen to this

Hallo OP, interesting storyline here and you really don't have to hurry writing. As long as it ends as amazing as possible.


You could try spacing up your work. Makes it more clear to read. And endeavor capitalizing necessary words.

And I'm definitely with this. #followingbumpertobumper

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