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donTbone:
To queenValerie...
I gatch you... ALWAYS!

That's because I let you,if I didn't want you to,you wouldn't .

QueenValerie:
That's because I let you,if I didn't want you to,you wouldn't .

QueenValerie:
She said what dude?

donTbone:
Nonetheless... its my pride that i gat a queen to look out for

Haha,okay

donTbone:
Are you seriously reading the story?

QueenValerie:
Yes I've read all the chapters,why,did I miss something?

donTbone:
And what did you think about it?




Will be updating the last...soon!

QueenValerie:
I think it's something that you wrote this.You didn't tell me you where a writer.

donTbone:
Yea! A novice at it though!

QueenValerie:
. You'll grow.

G0ldcircle:
Finish wetin u start o.

Chubbiehills:
Why cant she visit her friend?.. U are a bit over the edge

donTbone:
The friend has no positive impact to her life... i have to make her take precautions.
Is that too much?

Chubbiehills:
i prefer you keep her cause she is cool with you. I am commanding you keep her for worse....

QueenValerie:
Does grabbing you by the shirt really bother you that bad?

donTbone:
Commanding me?



No... command the guy in the story, not me!

donTbone:
Thanks dear...
Yea. was written by me.





You have no idea how much this encouraged me!

donTbone:
Yes, that part of the story is a reality.

Not me though, its the ME in the story

donTbone:
You dey follow?

Oya, share your views!

G0ldcircle:
Y I nor go follow?
I love the story, the suspense actually. But u still have to work on your writing skills.
I dey suspect the girl sef o. She just dey rush anyhow. Hope say d guy carry Goldcircle?

Oh oh oh! I just read the final part of the story. This ur 'me' in dis story needs slap with horse hoof. So she begged and 'me' couldn't forgive? Talk about principles or standards.

That's why I love 'informal' to an extent o. All this formal ppl I dey see dem troway face o. 'Me' nor been like d relationship b dat o.

QueenValerie:
You changed your thread title,you added that this was fiction.
Was it because people(including me)thought this was a autobiography?

funshy87:
U beta tell her the truth b4 i leak ur secret cos dat innocent Michella is tripping for u already

Chubbiehills:
some ladies are funny sha..what you tel them you hate most is what they will do intentionally

donTbone:
Thanks! @ bolded. This is my first fictional post,so will definitely work better on the skills.

ME is a principled man, which his GF knew about it. She knew wat he love most and hates most, but yet chose what he hates most.


Why not blame the agressive lady for not bin patient

G0ldcircle:
You see, am a girl o and I hate seeing girls throwing tantrums or being aggressive. But in this case she doesn't deserve his unforgiving nature. Towards the end of your story I saw two people who were happy together. Then they had issues and that was it.

Would he have acted differently if they still hadn't had sex?

I blame her for not bending a little and also blame 'ME' for not being flexible a tiny bit.

Maybe the relationship wasn't a big deal cos they seem like babies.

donTbone:
Hmmmmmm... You might be right though!

Thats why its a story!