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TiffanyJ:
Dorisbest, where are you and why are you negleting this work. Come update na

happy new month.
Thanks for ur consent.
I want to write a good and meaningful story. This one is a failure. Am trying something new. Maybe, I will improve...

NathOlamiposi:
I must commend your effort on putting these piece together, it had been nice story that affect every aspect of human life.

my take on this work is that few errors that had been identified by my co-readers is part of what makes it interesting and l will like you to go over it and make necessary correction to give a nice shape.

may the pool of wisdom deposited you continually flow as the Solomon of our time....... keep the good workup I must commend your effort on putting these piece together, it had been nice story that affect every aspect of human life.

my take on this work is that few errors that had been identified by my co-readers is part of what makes it interesting and l will like you to go over it and make necessary correction to give a nice shape.

may the pool of wisdom deposited you continually flow as the Solomon of our time....... keep the good workup

Amen.
thanks so much Nath. I will try and complete it.
Happy xmas in advance

Hi Heemah

Dorisbest:
Hi Heemah

madam!!! U no try ooo...U just abandon us and no even feed us at all...hop u v been gud?? Me miss u

this amy self where is she coming from.. I fear ...ooo

GBRIGHTG:
this amy self where is she coming from.. I fear ...ooo

thus says the lord: 'fear not for I am with u'

Dorisbest:
ALL RIGHT RESERVED.
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DEDICATED TO GOD FOR HIS INSPIRATION
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Your comment and constructive criticism is highly welcome.
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<<<<<CHAPTER 1>>>>>
They avenue where Ubong-Abasi lives was serene. Residential street were naturally calm at noon because, most inhabitants were away at their different places of work. Student were at schools while children and maids would always remain indoor.
Ubong stepped out of his house and stood at the stairway. He held the hand rail and gazed at the blazing hot sun. He felt reluctant to attend school but he had no choice, since the manager of Destiny Soccer Academy had announced to them that Mikel Obi would came and showcase to them soccer free-styles.
He wearily plodded into the street. As he turned to the street leading to Destiny Soccer Academy, a stranger emerged, looking so weary.
Ubong walked to her.
'Hi girl.' he greeted.
'Hi.' she responded in grief not minding the intruder.
'please sorry for any inconvenience I might be causing you.' Ubong said.
'you are not a problem to me.' she turned and faced him.
At this point, ubong was lost in thought. All he could see was a perfect African woman, a queen in the making. She was dark in complexion, tall and had a beautiful figure eight shape, with round face, a pointed more and a dreadlock. He could see himself with her having fun as paramour. He caressed her brittols and was about snogging her, suddenly, a voiced jolted into his reverie.
'Hello, are you ok?" Amy asked.
'Are you a stranger? He asked sheepishly.
'Not really a stranger. I have been seeing you for a couple of months now.'
'So where are you going?'
'Am running errand for my mother.' she replied
'your face... look sad.' He stuttered. 'will you like to share your problem with me?'
'Hmm...' she sighed. 'It's a long story.'
'If so, my gaff is at that street.' Ubong pointed his finger to the direction leading to his house. 'Come with me.'
'Oh no! Thank you for your consent.' she rebuffed
'Don't worry, I mean no harm to you, I might be of help. Please come with me.' Ubong extended his hand. She held his hand and nodded in agreement.

The part where you said she was dark, "TALL" just turned my interest off.

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Where @thou been @op?
More than a year now, no update kindly come to complete dis story

Nice piece of work doris

Sugarhugs:
The part where you said she was dark, "TALL" just turned my interest off.

please, how does it turn ur interest off?

Sugarhugs:
The part where you said she was dark, "TALL" just turned my interest off.

Shut up, if u don't know wat 2 type.

NikitaNike:
Shut up, if u don't know wat 2 type.

Lol i don suffer can you tell me this irl to my face?

Sugarhugs:
Lol i don suffer can you tell me this irl to my face?

yeah, b/cus u ve no xplanation for d nonesense u posted.

Sugarhugs:
Lol i don suffer can you tell me this irl to my face?

sweet girl

Omoluabi16:
sweet girl

Hi.
Going to bed. Nyt nyt

Sugarhugs:
Hi.
Going to bed. Nyt nyt

alright love..sleep well.