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Awesome piece... Nice one. Try push it to wale adenuga production (WAP). U shd be paid for this

make sense story...best I have read read nairaland...but we know say part 2 dey "the return of mr tunji" abeg op when e dey come out?

Nice story.. Keep it up boyo

Olaide59:
Thumbs up. Pls continue

I can feel the way you are feeling the story.

I must confess that I have never read or follow a write up in NL like this. kudos man. patiently following.

hmm.can't help but comment. nice story,made my evening

Am sure Nigeria film industry will soon turn ur story to film coming soon dem no dey carry last

This story distracted me at work yesterday ooo, you did not go beating around scanty bushes , just straight to the point and you nailed it . More stories pls,,,,,

Interesting

CuteChiluv:
This story distracted me at work yesterday ooo, you did not go beating around scanty bushes , just straight to the point and you nailed it . More stories pls,,,,,

lolz.i'm sorry

CuteChiluv:
This story distracted me at work yesterday ooo, you did not go beating around scanty bushes , just straight to the point and you nailed it . More stories pls,,,,,

lolz.i'm sorry

Interesting

Nice write up bruh keep it up the sky is ur starting point

This is super-story.

Finish the story na, Am enjoying it

I can't remember when last I read a story from beginning to the end. This story is an award winning one. Nice one boyo123

nice story , finally enjoying it

A movie in writing.. Nice story

God!!! boyo!! you are good!!!!!! dove my hat for you

nice one but very short. if i were tunji i wont give up easily cos ope never informed me.

nice story but the storyline had no suspense...and the way it ended, was bad...it was as if you were tired of writing so you just wrote the ending part in a haste...please work on that also on your spellings, punctuations, and paragraphs...

babyface224:
nice story but the storyline had no suspense...and the way it ended, was bad...it was as if you were tired of writing so you just wrote the ending part in a haste...please work on that also on your spellings, punctuations, and paragraphs...

CuteChiluv:
This story distracted me at work yesterday ooo, you did not go beating around scanty bushes , just straight to the point and you nailed it . More stories pls,,,,,

ginagold01:
hmm.can't help but comment. nice story,made my evening

achiabel:
I must confess that I have never read or follow a write up in NL like this. kudos man. patiently following.

nasiodamus:
make sense story...best I have read read nairaland...but we know say part 2 dey "the return of mr tunji" abeg op when e dey come out?

shankie:
u really tried with dis story, good write up, bt tried to check ur spellings and grammer for error, in the next one u are to compose, well done

laurel500:
I really enjoyed your work bro... Keep it up and the sky will be ur starting point. Cheers

kossyablaze:
think same too. How u bn

adaoshi:
I was late for work today when I started reading your story

ernesterioo:
Abeg make we use dis story shoot film,

Boyoski09:
this boyo123 deserves a Nobel.... tho I observed a constant usage of "greatful" maybe was an oversight...should be "grateful"....all in all u made my day... hope to meet u someday

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boyo123:
I left my office and went straight to the office were she was .i stopped at the door hesitated a while before knocking “come in” she called out. I walked into the office not knowing how to address her. A part of me said I should say” good morning ma “ but the other part said “for wetin na, no be this same Ope wey I bleep that time” as a guy now I went for my second thought , I just stood there waiting for her to say something then she said Mr olatunji cole a report just got me that you came to work  at 10:12am today what time are you meant to resume work, 8.30am ma I said so how come you came 1hour 42minutes late. It occurs to me that you haven’t been taking your job seriously. I just stood there with one hand in my pocket and the other one is rested on the chair that’s in front of her table, then she continued “ due to the negligence of your work I will have to ask you to join the other guys downstairs , as from now on you are no longer the personal assistant to my husband .it was as if something hit me in the face I stood there not knowing if to beg for my job back or just accept the new position,at this time she was staring  back into the files in her front.few seconds later she looked up at me and said you can go that’s just all I wanted to say.i don’t know what happened to me just know that I couldn’t alter a word I just turned my back and left the office .i dnt even go to my boss office to tell him what happened because he as already told me he can’t do anything about it, I got back into my office ,started packing my things.before evening I was already downstairs .

u use the word 'as' in place of 'has',.'our' in place of hour..dnt b In a hurry,try to vet atleast..nice work..puntuations r important too.

Nice 1. U are really a talent, can't wait 2 read more stories 4rm u

Twinkle004:
Nice 1. U are really a talent, can't wait 2 read more stories 4rm u

thanks dear please check my profile to see more stories by me

Me don show ooo

shiboyrules4u:
Interesting

thanks

boyo123:
On getting to my car , I looked at my wrist watch and I saw that it was  11:52am, with the way am feeling if I don’t see ope today am going to lose my mind , it was then I decided to stay in the car till she’s discharged  . Later that day at around 3:00pm i was listening to a program on the car radio when I heard a tap on the side window of my car and I reduced the volume of the radio simultaneously as I whined down the window,” good afternoon oga  a young security man said to me” good  afternoon  I replied, then he said “ I noticed that you have been sitting here for a while now are you waiting for someone sir? “  yes I replied “and when is the person coming sir because the hospital don’t allow people to stay too long in the premises “  the person am waiting for will be discharged this evening so I have to wait” in that case am sorry sir I will have to search your car sir, that is the order from above” I nodded my head opened the door and came down, the security man searched the whole of my car but it was clean he apologized again then left,

It was 4:20pm when I saw a wheel chair coming out of the hospital building , it was opeyemi that was being pushed by her husband then followed by Mrs. Badmus, as they approach their car I came out from my car and walked towards them, Mrs. Badmus saw me first and immediately she made a sign to me to go back but I refused,” good evening sir I said” I said, my boss looked back at me and said “ what the hell are you doing here, answer me ? What are you doing here?” he ran towards me ,just like I was ready for it  I started running backwards , he  became faster  and I ran faster too until I got to were two of the security men were standing I quickly stood behind one of them, he came running at both of us with me hiding at the man’s  back and peeping occasionally, he threw a punch and surprisingly it landed at the side of my face as I was trying to peep, I felt really hurt and angry then came out from hiding and stood in front of him, I guessed he saw the anger in my face because I noticed that he was less aggressive  then he said, “ tunji am going to show you,” now standing in one spot “ before you will end my marriage I will end your life you bastard” , I just stood there with anger in me patiently waiting for him to make a move for me so that I would beat the hell out of him, when I saw that he wasn’t going to make the move I decided to move towards him, that was when I heard opeyemi’s voice from  my back that says “ you guys should stop this nonsense , am really ashamed of you two, look at the way you guys are behaving like kids.

At that point I notice that he has calmed down so I calmed down too, he moved towards his wife and Mrs. badmus who was standing behind her,he tried moving the wheelchair when I said “ wait ope I want to talk to you”, he tried pushing the wheelchair  again when she said “ please leave the chair alone with a frown on her face”  he left her and I began to talk “ope I want to apologize for all the trouble have caused you in your life,I wish I never met you that night ,I wish I never ran away when you threatened me with the police, I wish I was there to defend you when everyone called you a slut when you were carrying my baby, i know  that in your heart you know that I didn’t do all those things on purpose, I don’t know what else to say than just ask for your forgiveness, have made up my mind ope am leaving your life completely, as from now on I no longer work at the company and I don’t want  to meet  our son anymore” I turned to her husband and said “have always had great respect for you,i never tried to spoil your marriage all I wanted was my child” then to Mrs.badmus “ mummy thank you for everything, but I want you to know that am not a gold digger “  then back to ope “ I only want to ask you for a favor, when ben is old enough to understand everything that happened please don’t tell him that am dead, if he feels like meeting his father he could come find me” I didn’t even realized that I was crying by the time I finished talking, I turned my back on them and left.

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so touching, happen ending but can't help but pity him

Mamrihan:
so touching, happen ending but can't help but pity him

wow thanks dear,its been 2 years since i wrote the story and its still getting views and comment
honestly i really appreciate it,

i wanted to continue from there to make it a part 2 but the motivation wasnt really there,money no dey for nairaland writing lolz

boyo123:
wow thanks dear,its been 2 years since i wrote the story and its still getting views and comment
honestly i really appreciate it,

i wanted to continue from there to make it a part 2 but the motivation wasn't really there,money no dey for nairaland writing lolz

I meant happy ending, u can continue, I bet this is my second comment on nairaland, nice story you've got, if u keep it up, you might make more than you expected soon. Don't give up n don't let profit be your first priority

Mamrihan:
I meant happy ending, u can continue, I bet this is my second comment on nairaland, nice story you've got, if u keep it up, you might make more than you expected soon. Don't give up n don't let profit be your first priority

thanks madam, do check my profile to see other stories written by me