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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by babydecency2(f): 10:22pm On Jun 30, 2016
Hmmmmmm am suspecting dat ellen to be the unknown kings racheal. Am sensing danger o,by the way thanks for d lunch swthrtwink
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Leiykong(m): 1:46am On Jul 01, 2016
Solomon when are you going to release the last part of your werewolf story?
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Tobadein(m): 4:58pm On Jul 01, 2016
Happy New Month Solomonbrown64!..
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 5:41pm On Jul 01, 2016
Oga solo, no make i para for u dis evening oo. Where our updates na. We are waiting oo.
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 6:48pm On Jul 01, 2016
CONTINUED
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RACHEL
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I shivered along with my parents in our little hiding place just behind my bedroom, not because of the cold but due to the agonizing screams of the unfortunate ones who tasted the blood thirsty steel of Nero’s men. The sound of steel cutting through flesh and putting out the lights in such beings made me continue to wrap my hands firmly around my father’s chest. My mother kept on praying to the good spirits but that day; they didn’t heed to her prayers because soon, the evil men came into my room and my father forced my mother to hold her tongue. They searched every place in the room and found nothing but still they refused to leave which made us uneasy.


“I can sense the presence of people in this room, keep on searching. No one must survive this day.” I heard a deep resonant voice say. Apparently, there were not only soldiers but wizards among these men. How long would it take before we were found?


It didn’t take long; the wizard moved along the hidden wall where we hid and stayed for too long. We tried our best to conceal ourselves and even held our breath at some point but that didn’t hide us from the eyes of this wizard. The moment we heard men trying to find the way into the hidden place, we knew it was over. The good spirits must have been unable to hear us due to where we were praying from, or it was because my mother stopped praying and so they turned their eyes from us. They found the seal and pulled the door to reveal us. The smiles on the faces of the men whom were about six showed how much the orders of their king meant to them. They went quickly for my father and both I and my mother held firmly to him but we were no match for these men. They yanked him from us and while we watched, they slit his throat very slowly and bent his head to a particular side to allow his blood pour out like that of a sheep. I didn’t cry the way my mother did and when they were done with my father, they turned to my mother. I thought they would carry out the same treatment on my mother but they had no such thing in mind. While the battle raged outside our house, something else was going on in my little bedroom.


They ripped open my mother’s gown and forced her to go down like a beast. I turned away as I had an idea of what was going to happen next as I was eight then but one of the men held my head and made me watch as the wizard brought out his long c.ock and pushed it into my mother’s c.unt. Her screams from that one move broke my heart and I didn’t know when I broke from the man’s hold and pushed my weight against the man’s moving cock. He fell sideways as he was on his knees when I hit him. My mother held herself but the man couldn’t and his fall made his c.ock go limp and he suddenly started screaming from pains even his men couldn’t comprehend. How could a little push from a little girl cause a wizard so much pain? But their surprise didn’t stay for long because after one of them asked the wizard for the cause of his pains and as the man pointed at me; the rest of the men turned towards me with rage in their eyes. The closest one to me grabbed me by my long red hair and while my mother tried to hold on to me; she received a strong palm to her face that almost separated her head from her body.


That singular action made me mad and I didn’t when I faced the man who held me; I looked into his blue eyes and commanded him from within to kill his fellow men save me and my mother. He nodded and dropped me gently to the floor and pulled his sword from his sheath before running his it through the man closest to him. The move shocked the rest of the men and before the decided if they were going to attack their fellow comrade or not, the man swung his sword and it met the neck of one of them. The remaining three decided that this man was no longer their own and came after him. All this time, the wizard was on the floor screaming in pains. While the men from the south fought themselves; my mother regained herself and took a knife which must have fallen from one of the men and crawled to the foot of the wizard. She used his calf to pull her up to him and before the man could figure out my mother’s intentions, his c.ock had been cut off from his body and my mother held the thing in her hands. The wizard soon bled to death and the bodies of the other men lay on the ground. The man I commanded had finished what I asked him to do. He set his sword on the floor and turned to face as he expected his next orders from me.


My mother watched me in some fascination as I beckoned for the man to go on his knees and told him to get some food and clothes for us. He nodded and left to get what I asked for. I crawled over to my father’s still body and closed his eyes. I didn’t cry but I vowed within me to get my vengeance that day.


The soldier from the south became our protector and provider throughout the time of the war. When he had served his use, I allowed him back to his town. That was the first time I used my special kind of gift. I joined the house of the king when I turned ten as one of the few with the gift in the kingdom. The great wizard Melfisius who was rumoured to have been one of the men to have killed the wind of evil – Nero became my teacher. He took special interest in me and taught me on how to use my gift in even more unique ways. I shared in the deep hatred for the North and soon I became one of the few the king held in high esteem. One night, just after I turned twenty years of age, the king sent for me.


“Do you desire justice for what was taken from you?” The king asked after he asked me to be on my feet from my former position of greeting.


“Yes, my lord. It’s the one desire I have nurtured within since childhood.”


“Good, then you will do what I want to be done.” I nodded and he continued.


“You will go with one of the guardians who will be coming in the three days to take a few of you lots to the forgotten lands. I want you there because the old wizard has seen in the stars that a man who will destroy the works of the mad king will make that place his home for a while. I want you there to watch him when he comes and report back to me. That man will be the beginning of our restoration to glory. Will you do this?” The king asked.


I answered his question with a smile and returned to get my things ready. Melfisius taught me the spell of the demon’s walk which has been what I and king have used in speaking to ourselves. Just as he said, the guardian came and she was a very beautiful one.


“You are Rachel, are you not?” The fair woman asked.


“Yes I am, I am honored to have been selected to come with you.” She smiled and said,

"I am Ellen Marcus, call me Ellen. Alright, we will be leaving as soon as the sun is out. Go and say your farewells to your families as you won’t be seeing them for a long time.” She said to the three of us. That day was the beginning of what I was about to finish now; the restoration of the glory of my kingdom and the unleashing of the true sword of vengeance. The prophecy was about to be fulfilled as I headed for the hunter’s room.

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..... Alright, did I hear someone say I have not been descriptive enough in this story, I guess that handsome fellow might wanna rewrite that statement.. Lol... I see you Elprokez,
... Happy new month folks, Tobadein, I hail oh..
.... EbonyQueen001, na one eye I dey take look you.
... Where is slimsue?
... Babydecency2, it's like your theory aint correct oh......
.... Oladim001... Abeg, no Para for me... I don behave myself.
.. Leiykong... I don't have a specific date in mind but I will release the book before the year runs out, that's a certainty.
.... Enjoy this update....
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 8:16pm On Jul 01, 2016
Now av gotten a little confused here. So is Solomonbrown trying to say that both Ellen and Rachel are working for the other king. I thought Ellen was reporting back to Anna. I'd love it if you can explain that. Am not angry anymore as you long as you continue 'doing the needful'
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 9:05pm On Jul 01, 2016
Oladim001:
Now av gotten a little confused here. So is Solomonbrown trying to say that both Ellen and Rachel are working for the other king. I thought Ellen was reporting back to Anna. I'd love it if you can explain that. Am not angry anymore as you long as you continue 'doing the needful'
....... Oh common, don't tell me you didn't see the part of Rachel having unique gifts and the previous updates where I wrote that Kieran found out that someone was watching him through Ellen but he couldn't tell who....
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 9:19pm On Jul 01, 2016
solomonbrown64:
....... Oh common, don't tell me you didn't see the part of Rachel having unique gifts and the previous updates where I wrote that Kieran found out that someone was watching him through Ellen but he couldn't tell who....
I thought it was Anna not the unknown king na.
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 9:25pm On Jul 01, 2016
Oladim001:
I thought it was Anna not the unknown king na.
.. .... Lol...you still don't get it,... Not to worry though, tomorrow's update will clear everything....
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 9:42pm On Jul 01, 2016
solomonbrown64:
.. .... Lol...you still don't get it,... Not to worry though, tomorrow's update will clear everything....
Alright can't wait.
solomonbrown64:
.. [b].... Lol...you still don't get it,... Not to worry though, tomorrow's update will clear everything....
Alright can't wait.[/b]
solomonbrown64:
.. .... Lol...you still don't get it,... Not to worry though, tomorrow's update will clear everything....
Alright can't wait.
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by EbonyQueen001(f): 9:44pm On Jul 01, 2016
solomonbrown64:
... Happy new month folks
.... EbonyQueen001, na one eye I dey take look you.

.... Enjoy this update.... [/b]
Even the one way you no talk finish, I understand. Work stress these past few weeks no dey make me do my job as your personal editor. Not to worry, I still dey your back gallantly.
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by preetypam(f): 10:23pm On Jul 01, 2016
cant pass by witout commenting,, Racheal whoevr u r pls be nice,,thanks solo for d update
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Chigold121(f): 11:39pm On Jul 01, 2016
wow!!! I am loving Racheals gift already, her gift is like that of the mother confessors in LEGEND OF THE SEEKER . Thanks
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 12:06am On Jul 02, 2016
Solomonbrown64 are you the owner of this moniker 'dadrenaline'. And are you the one that wrote 'the lone wolf' and why isnt it completed till today. I decided to reread the first instalment of the last wolf on sexuality section and thats where i came across it. So please answer asap.
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 4:36pm On Jul 02, 2016
CONTINUED
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RACHEL
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I blended in seamlessly among the guardians and it did not take long for me to get used to every corner and bend in the forgotten lands. The quarters were where the more experienced guardians stayed and a few of the wizards. They were few wizards and a handful of witches as sorcery seemed to be the dominant gift among the gifted here. I was told I was a witch the moment Melfisius set eyes on me and the mother guardian confirmed the same thing on the day of our recognition as guardians. I loved my home and harnessing and discovering more depths in my gift was my greatest loss the moment I stepped into this land.


We were told not to show any of our gifts nor what we have been taught over the years in the stone palace of the king but should act like complete novices. We were presumed to be unable to tell what side of the gift we carried within us and the mother witch did the telling for us. We were assigned to different guardians and witches like me had just about two of these teachers. Miss Ellen Marcus was one of the two; which made the plans of what was to come very easy for me. She liked me and cared a lot for me as I was a fellow witch like her and was one of her findings. She taught me the foundations of magic in my first few months there before she moved to the complex ones. Her love for me grew every day and when she kisses me as a way of greeting, I began to wonder why she was so kind. The other teacher wasn’t so kind and didn’t care if I learnt whatever she taught me but she never missed a session despite her uncaring attitude.


I went along with girls of my age and drowned myself in what was common among the young and restless – uncontrollable lust and pleasure. I slept with a different man twice a month but soon I discovered after my second year here that there was no new face to stare into and no new c.ock to walk me on the path of pleasure; I had slept with every man in the town. There was no new discovery to be made. I stayed back in my room and decided to read or watch one of my teachers as I have been instructed to by my king. In all my time fvcking and jumping on one c.ock to another, I never saw even the shadow of the beautiful Ellen at such places. The old, middle-aged and the young had one point in time behaved like I did but not my teacher. Could the rumours about her be true? Does she feel attracted to her kind; after all she kisses me most time like she would a lover. But it had never gone beyond our mouth; she kisses and then goes back to why she was with me in the first place. I haven’t seen the lust or want for my body in her eyes; it was just the look of love a mother would give her child. Something must have happened to her for her to look at men with so much indifference was my conclusion.


I decided to find out what and another time she kissed after she ended one of our classes. I held on to her lips and refused to pull away; my action made her open her eyes and immediately, I entered her soul through them. I saw her pain and bitterness; her tortures at the hands of her uncle and cousins. Her losses and how she lost a dear friend at the hands of the gordands; the loss which brought her here to wait for the same man I was here for and ultimately get the vengeance we both wanted. I fell in love with her that day and whenever we kissed, I tend to linger a little bit hoping she might get my message but she never did.


The man I was sent to watch finally came and what an entrance he made that day; calling forth lightening so powerful, it destroyed the stone floor of the huge compound. I was fascinated by what he did and when I saw from my teacher’s mind he was still yet to understand his gift, my joy knew no bounds. As the weeks passed, I followed very instruction from my king after he told me the man was unique just like I was and I must be careful around him. I made my teacher swallow my saliva one time she kissed and that enabled my eyes follow her wherever she went. She reported to mother about the progress of the man but they were taking the wrong path. The man doesn’t need emotions to call forth his gift; he was just like me and just wills it out whenever he wanted. I twisted the story of the man bestowed to Claudia, another guardian in order for the hunter to have more reasons to kill the mad king and my plan worked. His rage grew steadily but when I discovered he trusted Claudia more than my teacher, I treaded carefully as the man was quietly brilliant.


The night he slept with my teacher was the night I realized how much power was in this man. While my teacher searched hard to find out more about the man’s strange gift, he was busy trying hard to find out who was watching him through the beautiful woman he was sleeping with. I fought really hard to keep him from seeing me but he was relentless and if it wasn’t for his release, I would have been caught. I cleaned off the sweat on my face and warned myself to be more careful next time.


My master summoned me a few days later and asked me to do reveal the truth, the truth that would change the tidings of the forthcoming war. I waited till when the sun hid behind the clouds and went into the quarters to find the hunter. He was at the gardens watching the beautiful plants; I got close to him and asked for the whereabouts of my teacher. He turned to me and smiled and the moment he locked eyes with me; I went into his mind. I planted the vision I intended to and walked towards the direction he said I would find her. I walked towards the route and turned back to see if he was still watching me but he wasn’t as he took more interest in the flowers; I had completed my work. It was time to rest as I took a left turn and walked towards town to get my hole filled up again.

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KIERAN
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Claudia kept avoiding me whenever she sees me and during her time of teachings, she would stare at the burning wood and then leave as soon as her session was over. I couldn’t tell what was wrong because I didn’t know what caused her to change her attitude towards me. I ignored her and tried my best to see through the wall in Ellen’s mind but no matter how hard I tried, I was unable to see through. We got closer and our teaching session became more than just practice of magic but of the flesh too. I saw less and less of Vanessa but I knew her eyes were on me. After our practice of flesh magic, I went to the gardens to look at the flowers where I tend to clear my mind. A young woman approached me seeking for Ellen; I pointed to the quarters where she was likely to be. She thanked me and left. She was beautiful with fair skin and unusual dark green eyes; I turned my gaze from her and returned my eyes to the flowers. After some time, I hard this urge to sleep and promptly found my way to my room. I was asleep even before my body hit my bed.


I saw myself back at my cabin; I looked around and saw three women in tight, black, leather cloth. Behind them were two soldiers dressed in the attire of those from the south and in their midst was a tall man in a cloak. The women broke the door into my cabin and brought out my daughter. I saw them drop her roughly on the ground; my wife came out pleading for them to leave the poor child but she got a vicious kick from one of the women which sealed her mouth. The women dragged my wife away from her little daughter and the men came forward and held my shivering daughter in place. The man in the cloak came forward and put his hands on Mellissa’s chest and immediately she started screaming. Her screams tore through my heart and I wished I could help her but I couldn’t. My wife tried to help our daughter but she kept on receiving hits upon hits from the gordands. After a while, her screaming stopped; the man in cloak stood to his full height and motioned for the women to follow him. The soldiers walked up to my wife and pulled her away from her still daughter. One of them held her down while the other ripped open her trouser around her hole and slid his c.ock in. My rage kept rising and rising seeing these men rape destroy my family while I was away hunting. The second soldier took the place of the other and put his dirty c.ock into my wife’s c.unt too. All this time, the man in the cloak watched while the gordands kept laughing and chuckling to the screams of my wife. When the soldiers were done with my wife; they walked to a cart and brought out tar. They poured it all over my cabin and threw my daughter inside. A simple flame from the man in the cloak set the wooden house in flames. My wife crawled with the little strength she had to try and get our daughter but stopped when the house went up in flames. The man in cloak removed his covering and it was no other than Lucien himself.


The soldiers dragged my wife to a tree as they planned to hang her but two of the gordands said they would do it instead. The flames made me see the faces of the people who killed my family but I became weak when I realized that one of the two women who kept my wife beneath a tree was Vanessa. I opened my eyes to discover it was morning already; I was filled with both rage and disgust. I had slept with my wife’s killer; how my wife will hate me now in the underworld. Claudia was right; I should be ashamed of myself. I turned on the bed and faced the wall as I wept uncontrollably.

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.. .Guess, this update has cleared everything but there is something missing in the storyline.... Would like someone to tell me....
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 4:39pm On Jul 02, 2016
EbonyQueen001:
Even the one way you no talk finish, I understand. Work stress these past few weeks no dey make me do my job as your personal editor. Not to worry, I still dey your back gallantly.
... Lol.. I can relate but it's just a few chapters remaining, I hope you are ready.... The emboldened is very refreshing....
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 4:41pm On Jul 02, 2016
preetypam:
cant pass by witout commenting,, Racheal whoevr u r pls be nice,,thanks solo for d update
... ... Thanks for dropping a comment, would like more of those, by the way, I don't think Rachel got your message... Lol....
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 4:42pm On Jul 02, 2016
Chigold121:
wow!!! I am loving Racheals gift already, her gift is like that of the mother confessors in LEGEND OF THE SEEKER . Thanks
.... ... Dear, you Gerrit... But it's slightly different from the confessor's gift....
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op): 4:44pm On Jul 02, 2016
Oladim001:
Solomonbrown64 are you the owner of this moniker 'dadrenaline'. And are you the one that wrote 'the lone wolf' and why isnt it completed till today. I decided to reread the first instalment of the last wolf on sexuality section and thats where i came across it. So please answer asap.
... .... It was a move I made when I wasn't getting enough views in the sexuality section for the first installment... It's basically the same story just a few differences here and there, hence why I stopped... And yes that's my alternate moniker....
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Ultimategeneral: 5:14pm On Jul 02, 2016
thats it bro keep it rolling. Dat guy may end up killing vanessa
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 6:19pm On Jul 02, 2016
Yea that explains a lot. Thanks. I think the thing missing is that you've not said the history of the unknown king and why he is still unknown.
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by jrex(m): 10:53am On Jul 03, 2016
Lovely story.
Please sir, update.
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by slimsue(f): 3:40pm On Jul 03, 2016
solomonbrown64:
CONTINUED
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RACHEL
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I shivered along with my parents in our little hiding place just behind my bedroom, not because of the cold but due to the agonizing screams of the unfortunate ones who tasted the blood thirsty steel of Nero’s men. The sound of steel cutting through flesh and putting out the lights in such beings made me continue to wrap my hands firmly around my father’s chest. My mother kept on praying to the good spirits but that day; they didn’t heed to her prayers because soon, the evil men came into my room and my father forced my mother to hold her tongue. They searched every place in the room and found nothing but still they refused to leave which made us uneasy.


“I can sense the presence of people in this room, keep on searching. No one must survive this day.” I heard a deep resonant voice say. Apparently, there were not only soldiers but wizards among these men. How long would it take before we were found?


It didn’t take long; the wizard moved along the hidden wall where we hid and stayed for too long. We tried our best to conceal ourselves and even held our breath at some point but that didn’t hide us from the eyes of this wizard. The moment we heard men trying to find the way into the hidden place, we knew it was over. The good spirits must have been unable to hear us due to where we were praying from, or it was because my mother stopped praying and so they turned their eyes from us. They found the seal and pulled the door to reveal us. The smiles on the faces of the men whom were about six showed how much the orders of their king meant to them. They went quickly for my father and both I and my mother held firmly to him but we were no match for these men. They yanked him from us and while we watched, they slit his throat very slowly and bent his head to a particular side to allow his blood pour out like that of a sheep. I didn’t cry the way my mother did and when they were done with my father, they turned to my mother. I thought they would carry out the same treatment on my mother but they had no such thing in mind. While the battle raged outside our house, something else was going on in my little bedroom.


They ripped open my mother’s gown and forced her to go down like a beast. I turned away as I had an idea of what was going to happen next as I was eight then but one of the men held my head and made me watch as the wizard brought out his long c.ock and pushed it into my mother’s c.unt. Her screams from that one move broke my heart and I didn’t know when I broke from the man’s hold and pushed my weight against the man’s moving cock. He fell sideways as he was on his knees when I hit him. My mother held herself but the man couldn’t and his fall made his c.ock go limp and he suddenly started screaming from pains even his men couldn’t comprehend. How could a little push from a little girl cause a wizard so much pain? But their surprise didn’t stay for long because after one of them asked the wizard for the cause of his pains and as the man pointed at me; the rest of the men turned towards me with rage in their eyes. The closest one to me grabbed me by my long red hair and while my mother tried to hold on to me; she received a strong palm to her face that almost separated her head from her body.


That singular action made me mad and I didn’t when I faced the man who held me; I looked into his blue eyes and commanded him from within to kill his fellow men save me and my mother. He nodded and dropped me gently to the floor and pulled his sword from his sheath before running his it through the man closest to him. The move shocked the rest of the men and before the decided if they were going to attack their fellow comrade or not, the man swung his sword and it met the neck of one of them. The remaining three decided that this man was no longer their own and came after him. All this time, the wizard was on the floor screaming in pains. While the men from the south fought themselves; my mother regained herself and took a knife which must have fallen from one of the men and crawled to the foot of the wizard. She used his calf to pull her up to him and before the man could figure out my mother’s intentions, his c.ock had been cut off from his body and my mother held the thing in her hands. The wizard soon bled to death and the bodies of the other men lay on the ground. The man I commanded had finished what I asked him to do. He set his sword on the floor and turned to face as he expected his next orders from me.


My mother watched me in some fascination as I beckoned for the man to go on his knees and told him to get some food and clothes for us. He nodded and left to get what I asked for. I crawled over to my father’s still body and closed his eyes. I didn’t cry but I vowed within me to get my vengeance that day.


The soldier from the south became our protector and provider throughout the time of the war. When he had served his use, I allowed him back to his town. That was the first time I used my special kind of gift. I joined the house of the king when I turned ten as one of the few with the gift in the kingdom. The great wizard Melfisius who was rumoured to have been one of the men to have killed the wind of evil – Nero became my teacher. He took special interest in me and taught me on how to use my gift in even more unique ways. I shared in the deep hatred for the North and soon I became one of the few the king held in high esteem. One night, just after I turned twenty years of age, the king sent for me.


“Do you desire justice for what was taken from you?” The king asked after he asked me to be on my feet from my former position of greeting.


“Yes, my lord. It’s the one desire I have nurtured within since childhood.”


“Good, then you will do what I want to be done.” I nodded and he continued.


“You will go with one of the guardians who will be coming in the three days to take a few of you lots to the forgotten lands. I want you there because the old wizard has seen in the stars that a man who will destroy the works of the mad king will make that place his home for a while. I want you there to watch him when he comes and report back to me. That man will be the beginning of our restoration to glory. Will you do this?” The king asked.


I answered his question with a smile and returned to get my things ready. Melfisius taught me the spell of the demon’s walk which has been what I and king have used in speaking to ourselves. Just as he said, the guardian came and she was a very beautiful one.


“You are Rachel, are you not?” The fair woman asked.


“Yes I am, I am honored to have been selected to come with you.” She smiled and said,

"I am Ellen Marcus, call me Ellen. Alright, we will be leaving as soon as the sun is out. Go and say your farewells to your families as you won’t be seeing them for a long time.” She said to the three of us. That day was the beginning of what I was about to finish now; the restoration of the glory of my kingdom and the unleashing of the true sword of vengeance. The prophecy was about to be fulfilled as I headed for the hunter’s room.

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..... Alright, did I hear someone say I have not been descriptive enough in this story, I guess that handsome fellow might wanna rewrite that statement.. Lol... I see you Elprokez,
... Happy new month folks, Tobadein, I hail oh..
.... EbonyQueen001, na one eye I dey take look you.
... Where is slimsue?
... Babydecency2, it's like your theory aint correct oh......
.... Oladim001... Abeg, no Para for me... I don behave myself.
.. Leiykong... I don't have a specific date in mind but I will release the book before the year runs out, that's a certainty.
.... Enjoy this update....
I am back, who missed me?
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Ice4jez(m): 4:25pm On Jul 03, 2016
slimsue:
I am back, who missed me?
miss ur dullness since u ve to quote an update to give ur yeye comment. u be mumu write am down
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by prettyJoy22(f): 6:23pm On Jul 03, 2016
nice one!
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 8:21pm On Jul 03, 2016
Solomonbrown64. This is 8:20 pm and you've not updated. You have less than 4 hours to do else... I comment my reserve.
Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Oladim001(m): 6:14am On Jul 04, 2016
@solomonbrown64. Its not fair oo. When you knew you werent gonna update at least you'd have told us before hand. If only you knew how many times i reloaded this page yesterday, yet no updates. I would i've understood if you told us before hand.
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by slimsue(f): 1:43pm On Jul 04, 2016
Ice4jez:
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by Adasun(m): 7:43pm On Jul 04, 2016
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by boladex1: 8:05pm On Jul 04, 2016
Solomonbrown64 hope you were OK. No update yesterday and today.
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by ChizzyMaris(f): 8:14pm On Jul 04, 2016
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Re: A Broken Destiny: The Sword Of Vengeance by solomonbrown64(op):
CONTINUED
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ANNA
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Using both women as my eyes didn’t feel morally right but I had to do what was necessary just to quench the fears I might have of the hunter. He feels closer to Claudia probably because they were together all through their struggles to get here but still she has been unable to give me anything meaningful. She was always complaining about this mask he puts on whenever he was with anyone. She was right in what she said but he acts the way towards me whenever he is with me. I needed to use some other way to get to him and Ellen seemed more interested in the man than she should be. I took notice of the way and manner he looks at her; clearly there was an attraction between the both of them.


I told her of her new duty of being more than just a teacher and she was more than eager to carry out my instructions. She kept telling me what I already knew about the man but just a few days ago she told what I should known before now. No man of flesh and blood could have both sides of the gift within them anymore after the wizards of old; empowered by the good spirits saw to it that no one would. I should have known that his gift was never unlocked; he was still an ungifted just as those before him. The riddle his little daughter spoke of was the path the good spirits tried to use to tell me. Kieran is possessed by a spirit of one of those gifted wizards of old and the same might be true for Lucien. The riddle of the little can well be interpreted as;
The hand that pulls the string must be referring to the role of the good spirits in all of this of which I am not certain of yet as I do not know all of the persons involved. The arrow that kills the game has to be Kieran and his unusual gift. It can’t be Lucien as he has done more than good with his gift. The mystery is the game that can’t be seen. What is the role of the good spirits and the strange form of the gift in Kieran? What is it they are trying so hard to prevent from happening?


I was still deep in my thoughts when I heard noises from the space in the huge compound and then I saw lightening descend in an unusual manner but returned to the skies from whence it came. What was happening?

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Why would Ellen lie? It was quite unnecessary for her to. I never knew she met Eric and Kieran has no relationship with him, so why use such a person to gain anything? What was it she was trying to do, bring Kieran and me closer or try to bring out something in Kieran? I tried hard to answer these questions but my mind wasn’t really focused on that, it was more interested in why Kieran did what he just did – wash me as my husband or mother would. The past few days I locked myself in has been more of a reflection as I mourned not just for Eric but for everyone who had hope in Kieran being our savior.


The man is despicable; how can he keep doing what he keeps on doing – insulting the memories of his daughter and wife. This is a man whom we have waited for years to deliver us from the tyranny of the mad king and even when this man went against his family, he still doesn’t feel the need to fulfill his destiny. He is more interested in sleeping with every beautiful woman that comes his way. He keeps going after the people he is warned to stay away from. I hated this man but now I don’t what I feel for him exactly after the kind gesture he just showed me. He washed my body and wore me my clothes. He saw my unclothedness; something Eric saw a handful of times before he left me. I should have fought him and prevented him from seeing what only Eric had seen but I couldn’t. I have always felt weak in his presence and when he moved his hands across my skin, deep within me, I wanted it to continue. I thought Kieran was irrational and behaved like a dog but the way and manner he washed and clothed me without getting a stir in his c.ock proved me wrong. He was a man after something and he will do anything to what it is that he is after.


I couldn’t answer his questions on Ellen and he left after he saw I was slowly falling asleep. He carried me and kept me on the bed before covering me with a blanket. He stared at me till I closed my eyes but I wish he could kiss me and he did. He kissed my forehead and whispered for me to dream of my Eric.


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I was forced to wake up after I felt something extremely powerful magic. The strange aura seemed to stop me from breathing, I looked around to see if someone was in my room but there was no one. I heard noises outside and looked through my window to find Kieran arguing furiously with Ellen. He was visibly enraged and I wasn’t surprised the aura was from him. His rage was about to be let loosed but on who? This time, there was an answer to my question. Kieran pushed Ellen away from him and then tried to mount his horse but Ellen wouldn’t let him. Then, I saw Mother run out, something that rarely happens and some other guardians. Kieran was leaving but to where? Vanessa came out of her room too and the moment Kieran saw her; I felt it. I felt the keys break and the cage open. Kieran released himself to his rage; he had finally become one with his gift.
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..... To the question I asked; how was Rachel able to know what happened at the cabin of Kieran which was kingdoms away from where she was?
.....Welcome back Slimsue, I see you; Boladex1, ChizzyMaris, jrex, ultimategeneral,prettyjoy22..
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