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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by d1ever: 1:04pm On Jul 05, 2016
There nairalanders grin plz n plz ep me beg donkross1 to hv mercy on gentle my G. I need d complete write up name ur price.. well done donkross1 aka lord commander
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by ChizzyMaris(f): 8:58pm On Jul 05, 2016
Hmm, see as my heart don dey beat now. donkross , na last warning be this o. Thou shalt not hurt Gentle.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 4:57am On Jul 06, 2016
yorhmienerd:
IgweBUIKE1 aargh, the writer of TARASHA updates every MONDAY, WEDNESDAY AND FRIDAY on coolval22.com.
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donkross1 I swear enhn if i die, my deadbody will disturb u because u ar about to give us high BP with this suspence, OYA AJA 4 GBERA
Lol, I'm the writer of Tarasha not the person who updates on Coolval.


Tarasha is far ahead here of coolval here on nairaland https://www.nairaland.com/2563770/tarasha-action-thriller-story-month and it is several more episodes ahead on my blog www.youngicee.com
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 5:01am On Jul 06, 2016
A New Creation - Chapter 21B

Gentle could see six legs enter into the house. He held his breath as they spread out quietly in different directions, one of them was coming in his direction. He tightened his grip on the knife handle and positioned himself for the person approaching.


Just in front of the sofa, the person stopped and turned back, there was a pause in their movements. Gentle could hear them mumbling some words to each other but he couldn't make out what was being said.


"The guy must be somewhere around, maybe he's gone through the backdoor." An unrecognized voice finally spoke loud. There was quietness for some minutes and their movements began again.


From where Gentle was, he saw someone enter into the corridor between the rooms. He rubbed his eyes with his palms to be sure of what he was seeing. He recognized the back view of the person. "No, it can't be." He argued in his heart.


Then he heard the footsteps approaching his direction again. He was waiting patiently for the person to stop in front of him but he ran out of luck. His phone rang.


~~~


"Stop screaming!" Roy shouted at Angela in a command tone. "I'm the one who has a cultist in his house and not you."


"What if he dies in your house, you'll be in trouble with the school authorities and you may be rusticated." Angela voiced out her fears.


"He can't die in my house," Roy stated, trying as much as possible to look bold.


"But what if he kills somebody in your house?" Angela pestered on.


Roy turned away, backing Angela now as he had no answer to her last question. He was greatly afraid and trembling all over but he still tried to put up a bold face.


"But why do you have to harbour a cultist in your house when you know that it is against the school rules?" Angela asked another question, this time with less pressure in her voice.


Roy turned back and faced her, staring at her face like a confused person who needed help, which was exactly what he was at that moment. "But what was I supposed to do?" He asked in a soft voice. "I couldn't have sent him away or refused to help him, he's like a brother to me. You know, I'm trying to really be born again but when I have people like that around me, I don't think that would be possible soon."


"No, don't talk like that," Angela cautioned him in a calm tone. She placed her left hand on his shoulder, "you could be changed completely and even that person could be changed too."


"Hehe," Roy gave a short unfunny laugh and then looked into Angela's eyes with a doubting smile. "Gentle can never change, not even now that his twin is the leader of the cult and he's like the second in command."


"Are you serious?" Angela widened her eyes in surprise, taking off her hand from his shoulder. "You're actually hosting the second in command of a cult group in your house?"


"What did you expect me to do?" Roy asked and shined his eyes at her before turning away. "I should have refused to help him? Wouldn't that have put me in trouble with his hand m group?" With that Roy began to walk away with slow steps.


"And where are you going to now?" Angela asked with her hands on her waist.


"I'm going home of course," Roy answered with looking back.


"To do what? I thought you said your house was under attack." She began to follow after him.


"Yes, it's my house. I still have to settle whatever is there?"


"But you can't go and face the cultists, what if their fight gets bloody, you'll be injured." Angela with her faster steps overtook him and stopped at his front.


"Angela... Sorry, sister Angela." Roy rubbed his face with his palm. "A man only dies once, let me go and face my challenge."


"No, you can't turn back now that we're close to the church gate. Let's go to church," Angela placed her hands on his shoulder and tried to turn him back.


"No, don't let me cause problems for you and the church." Roy tried to resist.


"No, you can't cause problems for us in church. It's a place of solution," Angela replied and succeeded in turning him back. "I'm sure you can't return home after the meeting, it'll still be dangerous. We'll look for somewhere for you to stay."


~~


"Sh*t!" Slimmy cursed aloud in his car as he continued to push the horn aggressively. He was stuck in a long line of traffic. The return Lane which he had used not too long ago was traffic free.


Slimmy took out his phone in a hurry and dialed Nazaretha phone number. "Where the hell are you?" He shouted into the phone.


"I'm stuck in a crazy traffic jam," Nazaretha replied with the same note of frustration in his voice. "The place is still far from where I am, I should have dropped to walk down."


"F**k! What about Kong?"


"Boss, you sent Kong an errand out of town."


"Yeah, isn't he back yet?"


"I don't know, he didn't take his phone along"


"Okay, just do everything possible to get there quickly." Slimmy cut the call and flung the phone to the passenger's side. He ran his fingers into his hair in frustration, then an idea popped up in his heart. He picked up the phone and dialed OJ's number. It rang for the first thirty seconds and it was unanswered. He tried a second and third time too but it was still not answered.


He pushed the horn in frustration again, other drivers began to stare at him in surprise as he was too impatient when it was obvious there was no movement of cars at all. Slimmy finally killed the car engine and stepped out. He locked the doors and began to jog forward, looking for a bike to snatch.


~~~


The man who entered the corridor finally turned and saw Gentle where he was hiding. The other two enemies also came forward with their guns pointed at Gentle.


Gentle stood up slowly in great awe as he stared at the faces before him. He couldn't believe what his eyes were seeing.
Read Chapter 22A here: http://www.youngicee.com/2016/07/a-new-creation-chapter-22a.html?m=1
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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by kikayboss(m): 6:15am On Jul 06, 2016
lol...na on top nairaland matter i dey overnight.... u no even wake b4 u com dey upload.....oya dab thumbs up
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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by hefelove(m): 7:23am On Jul 06, 2016
ile lo lo tarara ile lo tarara gentle lo le o ile lo lo tarara. Oro nla le da eh eh eh oro nla le da eyin te pa gentle te je o dagba o gbogbo yin ma ku cry
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 8:01am On Jul 06, 2016
hefelove:
ile lo lo tarara ile lo tarara gentle lo le o ile lo lo tarara. Oro nla le da eh eh eh oro nla le da eyin te pa gentle te je o dagba o gbogbo yin ma ku cry
cry cry cry R.I.P Gentle
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by d1ever: 8:13am On Jul 06, 2016
Slimmy mood activated... cmin 4 donkross this means war... u better resurrect gentle like John sno if u no want wahala.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 8:26am On Jul 06, 2016
d1ever:
Slimmy mood activated... cmin 4 donkross this means war... u better resurrect gentle like John sno if u no want wahala.
We no get witch wey dey serve red god here na angry how we wan resurrect am now huh
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by kenecaleb: 8:50am On Jul 06, 2016
Oga donkross, u don do ur mind nah. Just wait 4 mine...98%, R.I.P Gentle.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 9:01am On Jul 06, 2016
A New Creation - Chapter 22A http://www.youngicee.com/2016/07/a-new-creation-chapter-22a.html

Hey Guys! Visit the link above again, we just launched a competition.

We are processing the full copy of A New Creation already and those who are winners in the competition would get the copies free once the answer is revealed
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by emerald18(f): 9:23am On Jul 06, 2016
Ehyaaa...rest in peace gentle @ oga oyin more ink to your pen
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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by hefelove(m): 9:44am On Jul 06, 2016
Oyinprince:
A New Creation - Chapter 22A http://www.youngicee.com/2016/07/a-new-creation-chapter-22a.html

Hey Guys! Visit the link above again, we just launched a competition.

We are processing the full copy of A New Creation already and those who are winners in the competition would get the copies free once the answer is revealed
i don put ma ans if i no get ehnn i go kanye and badoo dis o back to back grin
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by ChizzyMaris(f): 9:56am On Jul 06, 2016
*Wailing loudly* You've done it! You've broken the remaining pieces of my heart. donkross or is it oyinprince . How dare you kill Gentle?.. I warned you o, I warned you.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:04am On Jul 06, 2016
ChizzyMaris:
*Wailing loudly* You've done it! You've broken the remaining pieces of my heart. donkross or is it oyinprince . How dare you kill Gentle?.. I warned you o, I warned you.
Na Oyin ooh, I begged him buh he didn't listen
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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:13am On Jul 06, 2016
ChizzyMaris:
*Wailing loudly* You've done it! You've broken the remaining pieces of my heart. donkross or is it oyinprince . How dare you kill Gentle?.. I warned you o, I warned you.
Babe, I can gum the pieces of your heart if you'll allow me to. Don't mind Kross, He killed Gentle. You know I wouldn't do that, I'm a gentleman
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by ChizzyMaris(f): 10:15am On Jul 06, 2016
donkross1:
Na Oyin ooh, I begged him buh he didn't listen
You should have begged him more. Kai, this is not fair.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:15am On Jul 06, 2016
Oyinprince:
Babe, I can gum the pieces of your heart if you'll allow me to. Don't mind Kross, He killed Gentle. You know I wouldn't do that, I'm a gentleman
Oya swear with your left eye grin
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by ChizzyMaris(f): 10:20am On Jul 06, 2016
Oyinprince:
Babe, I can gum the pieces of your heart if you'll allow me to. Don't mind Kross, He killed Gentle. You know I wouldn't do that, I'm a gentleman
How will you gum it? With super glue or Top bond?
Abeg make I dey mourn my Gentle.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:21am On Jul 06, 2016
donkross1:
Oya swear with your left eye grin
Swear for matter wey no concern me? Abeg, make una check the blog, see the poster's name below.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:21am On Jul 06, 2016
emerald18:
Ehyaaa...rest in peace gentle @ oga oyin more ink to your pen
Thanks, Gentle's Candle Night Procession go hold today
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(op): 10:23am On Jul 06, 2016
emerald18:
Ehyaaa...rest in peace gentle @ oga oyin more ink to your pen
More ink so he can Kill Slimmy, Rofiat, Halimat and Hadijat abi cry
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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 10:29am On Jul 06, 2016
hefelove:
i don put ma ans if i no get ehnn i go kanye and badoo dis o back to back grin
Well-done Bro, I see you've solved the comment issue
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by hefelove(m): 12:30pm On Jul 06, 2016
Oyinprince:
Well-done Bro, I see you've solved the comment issue
i use ma lapi. i wanted to use normal browser bur i remembered that the browser they use straw fab mb
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by slimsue(f): 1:07pm On Jul 06, 2016
Oyin @ Donkross1 for killing my Sweetheart Gentle and making me she'd tears, I I I........ in short I reserve my comment. cry cry cry it's not fair really.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by kikayboss(m): 1:53pm On Jul 06, 2016
Fabio died, i almost cried......
Host died, e pain me small........
now gentle ha.......if to say water never finish for ma eyes i for don cry.....na so oyinprince wake around 5:00 com upload bad news.......ok nau.....


oyinprince and donkross1 you are under arrest for the murder of one gentle.....anything you say will be used against you in the court of mods........

officer!. arrest them.......
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by IgweBUIKE1(m): 2:03pm On Jul 06, 2016
oy in abeg na make sure say gentle no die a beg update tarasha chapter 18part 8
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by hefelove(m): 2:28pm On Jul 06, 2016
kikayboss:
Fabio died, i almost cried......
Host died, e pain me small........
now gentle ha.......if to say water never finish for ma eyes i for don cry.....na so oyinprince wake around 5:00 com upload bad news.......ok nau.....


oyinprince and donkross1 you are under arrest for the murder of one gentle.....anything you say will be used against you in the court of mods........

officer!. arrest them.......
egbon kikayboss i still have water in my eyes am not using incase u want to cry cumman collect it
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by kikayboss(m): 3:52pm On Jul 06, 2016
hefelove:
egbon kikayboss i still have water in my eyes am not using incase u want to cry cumman collect it
..no worry broda hefelove just keep the water....u go need am for the pesin wey kill gentle, because i go soon enter the story go epp slimmy and rough catch them.......

*assassin mode activated*
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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by hefelove(m): 5:07pm On Jul 06, 2016
kikayboss:
..no worry broda hefelove just keep the water....u go need am for the pesin wey kill gentle, because i go soon enter the story go epp slimmy and rough catch them.......

*assassin mode activated*
issokay but epp me collect halimat number sha
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by kikayboss(m): 5:14pm On Jul 06, 2016
hefelove:
issokay but epp me collect halimat number sha
OK nau....i go even epp you snatch hadijat from slimmy......then if i jam roy i fit collect those church girls number come give you.....
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 5:16pm On Jul 06, 2016
Yes! It is conspiracy!!! The writers conspired to kill Gentle sad
No killer shall go unpunished.!!!!! sorry, unkilled I mean.
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