IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) - Literature (16) - Nairaland
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| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by oluwatymylehyn(m): 11:04pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
You have showed tremendous improvement in your updates. It's not direct and straightforward as it were before... I love the suspense you added and this makes me to be on my toes for more updates. Thumbs up, there's always room for improvement. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Bishop73(m): 11:38pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Tactically waited the last crow. Loving the master piece any way, keep up glowing dear. You made me come out of my reserved shell. Well done! |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by xamster(m): 1:49am On Nov 02, 2016 |
Well done dear. You've proven yourself as a writer. You doin gr8 pearl. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by chinedumo(m): 8:36am On Nov 02, 2016 |
Is it not supposed to be flash back not fast forward? Angelinassto |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 9:53am On Nov 02, 2016 |
Chai nah so i mistakenly recharge 1k on the sim card i used for bb sub. My airtime is gone and ion have bb. I feel like crying,early in the morning for this recession! |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by hormobolanle: 9:58am On Nov 02, 2016 |
*clapping.....papapaapapa,Angel God bless u
u are really HÄ angel #feeling lonely*$ad |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by hormobolanle: 10:01am On Nov 02, 2016 |
Angelinastto:*smiling... CoNgRaT Bea, it is Gud to help our network providers atymz. a job Weldon #wink |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by girlhaley(f): 10:19am On Nov 02, 2016 |
From page 0 to page 15 This story is WOW such an intriguing story.......I love d suspence Don't keep us waiting for long tho miss angel......(pardon my forgetfulness) Waiting calmly for d next update |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by abefe99: 10:25am On Nov 02, 2016 |
sweetheart just come across dis story yesterday I must comment if not God too go vex u are a genius i can plss more update cos did suspense is three much God bless ur upstairs |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 10:29am On Nov 02, 2016 |
hormobolanle: hormobolanle:haa whats wrong? Feeling lonely when i just throw a cocktail for you? Lol sis nah cry remain o |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 10:31am On Nov 02, 2016 |
girlhaley:awwwwn thanks. Will update immediately am off work today. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 10:31am On Nov 02, 2016 |
girlhaley:awwwwn thanks. Will update immediately am off work today. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 12:21pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
abefe99:Awwwwn. Thanks honey, will update soonest. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 12:22pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
oluwatymylehyn:lol. Thanks babe. Kisses! |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 12:24pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
Bishop73:Wow have been seeing you view this topic for sometime now. Thanks for finally dropping a comment. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 12:26pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
xamster:Its all your work. You save time to comment and make me a better writter. Thanks babe |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 12:28pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
chinedumo:it is fast forward nao. I did not want to talk about what happened during the three weeks she stayed with aunty oyinkan before the weac result was released. Been a long time boss |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by xamster(m): 12:51pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
Angelinastto:it's nothing dear. We should even be paying you for the leisure ![]() |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 2:04pm On Nov 02, 2016*. Modified: 8:00pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
CONTINUATION ################## I followed mi mom closely from behind as she walked to her room. I closed the door behind myself and sat on a couch as mi mom undressed. I was waiting to be scolded and i was sad i might not be able to study the course of my choice or i might end up waiting an extra year before gaining admission. "Have it" aunty oyinkan said as she passed a printed paper to me. I collected the paper from her and i was scared of seeing my failure ones again. I could remember how i felt when i failed jamb and failing Waec as well will make me feel worst. "Open it on time" mi mom's voice brought me out of my thought. I sluggishly opened the paper and read the content. Mathematics A1 English B2 Literature A1 Government C4 Biology C5 Economics B3 C.R.S B3 Yoruba C6 "WTF!! I passed! I passed!" i shouted after reading out the content of my result. Mi Mom was full of smille as i hurriedly hugged her. I breathe a sigh of relief. "I thought i failed again mom" i said as i released myself from mi mom's grip. Mi mom smilled and said " My child you are never a failure and you will never be a failure. You should believe in yourself dear just the way i believe in you. I knew you would pass, you failed jamb because you lacked preparation. Determination is success and success is determinantion. Be determined to never give up no matter how difficult success prove to be" Mi mom ended her speech and i went into her arms again, my happiness knew no bound, not only because of my success but because i had someone to share my success with. I remembered i was yet to share my success with khole, so i hurriedly released myself from the hug and i told mi mom i would love to inform khole of my success. I made to leave and mi mom pulled me back and said "dont you love the suspense i kept you? Lets do the the same for khole and dad. They are both coming home today. We are having a family dinner to celebrate your success. Promise me you wont spoil our package" mi mom made me promise and i left her room hoping i will be able to fulfil my promise. I got into my room and i jumped on my bed. I could not hide the excitement as i started jumping around my room. From my bed, i jumped ontop the couch, then to the table. I could not just hide my excitement. I made a promise to mi mom so i could not call khole, she was like the only person i had, to talk to. If only i still have kelvin's contact, he would have been happy at the news. If only guys like Jordan and nelly are still around, it would have been a more happy situation but they are now in my past where betrayals should be. I had my bath and went to the kitchen to assist mi mom since she was making the special dinner herself. Khole came back with dad at exactly 8:00pm. She picked dad up from the airport on her way from school. I rushed out from the kitchen and knelt to greet mi dad. He helped me up and hugged me,he asked if i was ok and i noded as a reply. I rushed to hug khole and the first thing she asked from me was about my waec result. I was about telling her my real result out of excitement before looking at mi mom. She cleared her throat and frown at me. I quickly changed my happy face to a sad one. On our way to the main building, khole continued to ask about my waec result. I told her i failed and she requested to see the result herself. I did not know what to do so dodged the question and left her. We entered the living room and mi mom welcomed everybody home again, after which mi dad hugged us all again. He looked at me again and said "Nancy i heard you did not really do well in jamb, thats ok my dear. Your aunty also told me that your Waec result is out, did you perform excellently?" i did not know what to say, probably to go on with mi mom plan or tell mi dad the truth. "She did not do well darling, let her show you the result" mi mom said in a bid to bail me out of the trouble. I rushed to my room and got my result, dad was asking khole questions about school when i go back but he stopped immediately i handed the result to him. "Wow! This is brilliant! Sweetheart you were making a joke of me right? I will so deal with you" Dad said. Mi mom smilled and told him it was her pleasure to fool him. We all laughed, then dad looked at me and said "Congratulation my child. I will take you to a senior lecturer in the state university next week. Consider yourself a student of kwasu right away" i rushed to embraced him due to my excitement, he took me into his arm and pat me on the back. "Now am jealous, why is nancy getting all the hug after planning with mom to deceive us?" khole said playfully and mi dad released me from the embrace. Mi dad hugged khole and mi mom joined in the hug. I did not want to feel left out so i joined in the hug as well. We had a group hug full of laughter as a one big happy family! ********************** END OF CHAPTER |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 2:20pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
The last update is not complete. There is an emergency! |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by chinedumo(m): 3:09pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
Angelinastto:okkkaayy o she is calling our aunty her mum now i get it now. Thanks. Sweet stori |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Tbills(m): 3:11pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
Keep it coming dear |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Tbills(m): 3:13pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
chinedumo:You needed an Angel to tell you thhat before ?? . Lol |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by chinedumo(m): 3:17pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
Tbills:it is the waec she failed that hurts |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by oluwatymylehyn(m): 4:05pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
I'm so happy she passed her waec. Khole must be very proud of her when she finally discloses her result. No qualms about the update, you've got our backs. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 4:22pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
Angelinastto:You Berra dont ![]() Well done dear |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Ridwan1821: 6:06pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
At last, I met u guys.. What a great job from Angelinastto, I like d way u construct d story, d way u update and even d way u do keep us in suspense.. I pray u are able to finish d story successfully. The only mistake I noticed was d mistake u make when spelling some words and I can see u have improved greatly. U are doing great ma'am, More ink to ur pen. Meanwhile, am looking 4ward to seeing d remaining part of that last update. |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 7:19pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
chinedumo:yeaaa........... Thats why am using Mi Mom so as not to cause confusion |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 7:20pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 7:21pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
oluwatymylehyn:awwn thanks babe. You know you are the best ion need to tell you! |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 7:22pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
DTOBS:lol. I know you wish thats your waec result dtobs. Thanks dear |
| Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(op): 7:25pm On Nov 02, 2016 |
Ridwan1821:Thanks dear. After this story i will be waiting on yours too! |
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