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Crying for silvst hu....m sobin..... Madam bibi please don't let silvester go astray please..... For his mother sake this story is so touching. I hope funmi wil not disgrace nigerian girls o

Hmm de world is wicked, I'm for mr sly an his family, I pity de wife an young children left behind

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just seeing this neva knew I gat a mention from almighty bibijay. av always been a silent reader. @skarlett, gave me d first recognition. tanks babe. adupe Ooooo. av been following u back to back. u don't no. keep it coming bae. ur source of inspiration will never run dry

[quote author=bibijay123 post=50744347]Dedicated to lumzy.bo, swann miss.universe,do.mance, prince.willa [quote]Thanks for the dedication Bibi. I don't know why but I didn't see it that day. Maybe it's a sign that i should come out of ghost mode


This particular update was really emotional. I really hope Sly turns out alright but I wouldn't blame him if he didn't.

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I have this feeling that sly is Papa Love, but then, fingers crossed.

Annie! take this as a warning. Come any closer to Uche than you already are and pray Lord edits your lifespan.....to very short.

This Dubem one is not even enjoying yet Nonye is dead, all thanks to him. Chai! See life

Still here m'Lady

jagugu88li:
Annie! take this as a warning. Come any closer to Uche than you already are and pray Lord edits your lifespan.....to very short.

This Dubem one is not even enjoying yet Nonye is dead, all thanks to him. Chai! See life

Still here m'Lady

I love your sense of humour, can you pls do the honour of sitting beside the best guy in the world by sitting by my side? I'm sure we would enjoy each other's company while we await another episode from our love host Bibi

This dubem ma fool


Weldne ma'am.

Nice Story my dearest Bibi, forgive me for coming late 2 dis beautiful write up.. Thanks for mentioning.
Am following u like neva b4...

Hello Bibi Jasmine I didn't abscond like Dubem o. I've been following, but very stealthly for some time now. Recession is really affecting my time but I must surely wriggle out of it.


Your work so far is nice and unarguably captivating! Keep moving don't despair for your time to shine has come!

Dedicated to Heemah, Olatex25, room089, Eniqurl, jaguguli88, hottadiva,


Chapter Ten

Funmi


I took Dupe's advice and i vowed within me to prove to Mabel's friends just how unique Nigerian women are. I took my work serious and i even did extra works like taking Serwa to and fro from school. I made her lunch every noon and i read her bed time stories on those nights her mother didn't return home from her outing.Tade kept to himself, other than greeting we barely spoke to each other. Mabel would often leave home very early in the morning and come back drunk or reeking of smoke at the wee hours of midnight.
I over heard her arguing with her husband on a Saturday morning, i took Serwa and we went to the park in the estate.By the time we got back it seemed they had settled their differences as they both welcomed us warmly.

" Funmi," Mabel called

I was making Serwa's lunch of spaghetti with meat balls when she walked into the kitchen.

" Yes,"

" I want to give you a treat. You have been here only a week but i am so impressed. You took good care of Serwa and you also put my house in order. I want you to hang out with my girls and i tonight"


" Thank you, i appreciate but..."


" No buts,it took me the better part of today convincing Tade to sit Serwa tonight. You deserve to let down your hair and enjoy the Ghana night life"

" Alright," i replied reluctantly

" Don't worry! You will absolutely love it, 100% fun is guaranteed " She said excitedly.

*******

I walked back into the stuffy club house feeling naked, Mabel insisted i wore one of her gowns which left little to the imagination. She and her group of friends were at the bar engaging in a battle of the ' fastest to drink their tequila'. The air was heavy with the acrid smell of cigarette, alcohol and sweat, some men and women were dancing and smooching on the dance floor, a young man was trying to get his tongue into the mouth of a very young girl at a corner of the room. I almost retched at these ungodly sights.

" Hey Sweetie, are you alone tonight? " A short balded man asked, flashing the glittering gold rings on his fat fingers.

I bit the inside of my cheek with my teeth in regret. I should have simply told Mabel what i felt about her so called ' Ghana night life'. It was wrong for a child of God to mingle with unbelievers but i didn't want her to think of me as a holier_ than thou. I made to side step him but he took hold of my arm forcefully.

" Let go of me!' I shouted, my eyes searching for Mabel in the crowded room.

" I am just being friendly, " he said," name your price"

" Hey! Let go of her mister" Mabel said, walking towards us" f*uck off"

The pudgy short man gave her a dirty look before walking away.

" Sorry about that, " She said," he probably sensed you are a newbie!"

We made our way back to the bar where the other ladies were, Mabel ordered for another round of drinks and a tequila glass was placed in front of me. Alice and Gracey drowned theirs in one gulp and went to the dance floor to dance. A tall dark guy walked up to Mabel, flashed her a smile and invited her to the dance floor. She raised up her left hand, flashing him her wedding ring. The guy walked away without another word.

" Funmi, why are you staring at your drink?" Rose asked, " you shouldn't be here if you know it makes you feel uncomfortable. It's not like you are better than any one of us here"

" Rose!" Mabel admonished, " please don't talk to her like that."

" We paid good money for the drink so it shouldn't be wasted. Or would you rather be served smoothie?" Rose asked sacarstically.

I picked up the glass and swallowed the whole content of it in one fluid motion, i choked and coughed out as tears burned my eyes.Mabel patted me on the back, lighted a cigarette and took a long drag.

" Don't listen to Rose, she's testy because she hasn't been laid for a while now " Mabel said

" Speaking of being laid, i am going man hunting" Rose said, slidding off her stool" It is good i went commando tonight, it will make the job easier"

" What does going Commando mean?" I blurted out, as i felt a dull throbbing ache in my left temple. My eyes was getting misty for no just reason and i felt like singing and crying at the same time. I saw them trade looks before spurting out in laughter.

" Where did you get this girl from?" Rose asked in wonder," even my twelve years old daughter knows what going commando is"

" She meant she had no undies underneath her gown" Mabel explained

I nodded my head in embarrassment, Mabel was saying something but i didn't hear her as her voice seemed to be coming from miles away, my visions blurred and the sound of the music faded away. I felt myself swoon backwards, someone reached out to hold me as the blackness enveloped me.

*********

Uche

" Wow, you are early" Annie said, holding her door open. She was in a work out pant with a crop top. Her hair was clipped to the back of her head." Excuse my looks, i was sweating it out in my gym"

I walked into her beautifully furnished living room. She had a book shelve in her sitting room, a giant plasma TV and a giraffe art work. Canvasses of her was hung on the walls and there was also a huge portrait of her as a young child, she had ice cream smeared on her nose and she was also sporting an ice cream mustache which brought a smile on my lips.

" Even with the ice_ cream mustache you were still cute"

She gave a sultry laugh," Don't flatter me please, what should i offer you? Wine?"

" Wine is perfect"

" Excuse me," She said, she opened the fridge in her dinning area and brought out a chilled bottle of wine. She filled two glasses, handed one to me before sitting down on the opposite couch.


" Good Wine," I said


" Yea, Italian " She sighed." Shark gave it to me"


" Who is Shark?"


" The enigma i need you to help me out with, he's the guy i am going out with. We have been going out for six months but it seems.....well the thing is......Shark is....." She struggled to let out the words.

" Wait Annie, which Shark? the one and only?" I asked, my heart was palpitating in excitement.


" Yes" She sighed loudly.


" Wow! " I exclaimed in surprise," I followed his first trial!"


Shark was a young ruthless lawyer with his own private practice, he was an ideal defender of the poor and the oppressed. He came into limelight at the tender age of twenty when he picked up and won a case rejected by many top lawyers in the country. The case was the virgin Mary and the Elite case. Four Guys who were the sons of prominent political leaders had lured a young innocent girl hawking fruits into their home and they raped her to death. As the sons of prominent leaders they thought they would go Scott free especially since most lawyers washed their hands off the case. The masses protested and cried out for justice,out of nowhere a young man appeared and picked up the case, representing the poor aggrieved parents of the victim.


Nobody knew or heard about him before, nobody knew who his parents were or how he came to amass such wealth of knowledge and confidence. When the case started, everyone thought he would lose but to their outmost surprise he won the case and thus earned himself the name shark. After that case, he reappealed many cases which had seemed hopeless and he always brought the bad guys to book. Twice, an attempt was made on his life but he escaped unscathed on each of those occasions. The other lawyers had a love_ hate feeling towards him, they admired his tenacity, confidence and determination even when all hope seemed lost and at the same time they hated his guts, his fame and how he shredded each one of them to pieces when they find him as an opponent in the court room.

" He's like a wall, nothing moves him. He's sort of strange too but i want to break down his walls and make him love me," Annie said somberly." There's this aura about him which i don't seem to discern"


I sighed heavily," Annie, honestly i don't know what to say but i do know that love can't be forced and if you keep forcing it you might end up hurting yourself. Six months is enough time for him to fall in love with you and if he still doesn't reciprocrate your feelings then i think you might want to consider walking away although it might be painful."

" I can't walk away!" She cried out," he's ......he's not really as tough as the world thinks. He doesn't even....."


" He doesn't what?''


" Never mind. Tell me how do i even get him to let down his guard and trust me?"


" Trust him with your own pains first and with time he might learn to trust you with his. By the way, i want to meet him. I have followed all his trials and i am a big fan of his"


"I will tell him when i see him tonight. We can go on a double date next weekend, me and him, you and your fiancée. How about we go hunting for that engagement ring?" She asked, standing up.


" Cool idea"


TBC

room089:
Hello Bibi Jasmine I didn't abscond like Dubem o. I've been following, but very stealthly for some time now. Recession is really affecting my time but I must surely wriggle out of it.


Your work so far is nice and unarguably captivating! Keep moving don't despair for your time to shine has come!

Lol good to know, thank you

olatex25:
Nice Story my dearest Bibi, forgive me for coming late 2 dis beautiful write up.. Thanks for mentioning.
Am following u like neva b4...

Thank you bro, you are welcome

[quote author=swann post=50776247][/quote]Loool I love your prediction, let's watch n see

Leriebloom:
You really are a born writer.

Thank you dear

yorhmienerd post =50781737:
I love your sense of humour, can you pls do the honour of sitting beside the best guy in the world by sitting by my side? I'm sure we would enjoy each other's company while we await another episode from our love host Bibi

Happy weekend! Consider your couch occupied but, know that I don't go more than 2 hours without raiding the kitchen. Scavenging is a hobby, so be a good host

Thanks for the dedication m'Lady.
3D on Annie is still on. Fumni has passed out? We need prayer warriors in the house abeg.... Okhataraba shata babatakaram

jagugu88li:
Happy weekend! Consider your couch occupied but, know that I don't go more than 2 hours without raiding the kitchen. Scavenging is a hobby, so be a good host

Thanks for the dedication m'Lady.
3D on Annie is still on. Fumni has passed out? We need prayer warriors in the house abeg.... Okhataraba shata babatakaram

You're welcome. LMAO @ the bolded

Hope no guy touched my Funmi o I like the fact that Mabel is faithful despite her lifestyle. I'm relieved there's nothing going on between Annie and Uche. Nice update Bibi

Sylvester ------> Shark?

I just hope Mabel's crazy lifestyle won't start to rub off on Funmi...

Thank God Uche and Annie are just friends [b]for now[\b]…


Now i'm more interested in this statement

[quote]" I can't walk away!" She cried out," he's ......he's not really as tough as the world thinks. He doesn't even...[\quote]

Bibi, I really can't wait for you to throw more light on this..

Nice 1 dearie, pls kip it cuming

dominique:
Sylvester ------> Shark?

If the small sly is shark and funmi still works with tade, serwa still remains a baby, dupe isn't married to uche, my dear, no 2 ways abt it, "juju is involved" cos ow do u explain him being a grown up man and every other person, unchanged"

Imagine the way Bibi pictured Shark; mehn you're the best babe

lumzybo:
If the small sly is shark and funmi still works with tade, serwa still remains a baby, dupe isn't married to uche, my dear, no 2 ways abt it, "juju is involved" cos ow do u explain him being a grown up man and every other person, unchanged"

Lol at juju is involved. Sly's narratives so far have been flashbacks. He's a grown man now

lumzybo:
If the small sly is shark and funmi still works with tade, serwa still remains a baby, dupe isn't married to uche, my dear, no 2 ways abt it, "juju is involved" cos ow do u explain him being a grown up man and every other person, unchanged"

Lol at juju is involved. Sly's narratives so far have been flashbacks. He'sa grown man now

Hmmm.,interesting and nice. Please I like your story and I have a question. HOW WILL I GET MENTIONS, TO MAKE Nairalands Mods push my story to Fp. Its a story about........! Read it and see for yourself. '' WHEN LOVE DIES''

Geez girl you amaze me. You can write gush!!! I think shark is sylvester anyways will kip reading to find out.

nice story

Wow... Tnks for d dedication bibi, mean a lot 2 me...
I feel sorie for funmi, hope she won't end up being a nuisance lyk mabel, dere s dis yoruba saying "a sheep dat mingle wit dog, wil eat faeces as breakfast". She's jst 2 decent 2 b a victim. and i pray veri hard for dupe and uche 2 work out, dupe is jst one of a kind.. A girl dat wil stand by u & nd also believe in u wen u are notin, she deserve givin d World if possible..
In btw, bibi u are jst d best. I envy u sis, more wisdom dear

Nice update, Madam bibi please don't disvirgin funm at the club o p.l.e.a.s.e

Am clapping 4 bibijay123 right now

following religiously nice work sis

bibijay123:
Dedicated to lumzybo, swann, missuniverse,domance, princewilla


TBC