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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Gabbyraze(m): 9:51pm On Dec 20, 2016
Good story,loved every moment...am i invited to the party? Bibi how I go fit strong my mind to write a little tale about my experience?

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by BlizzydoDo(f): 9:53pm On Dec 20, 2016
D whole read seemed like a movie, glad I didn't miss out.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by enohorglo(f): 10:04pm On Dec 20, 2016
woooow, more wisdom
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by edimahgurl(f): 10:12pm On Dec 20, 2016
merry Christmas friends grin bibi pls dnt forget to mention me in ya nxt story.....tanx alot u're a darling grin
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Jellymusty(f): 12:08am On Dec 21, 2016
I so much love this, thanks to bibi
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by nma4god(f): 2:07am On Dec 21, 2016
bibijay123:
Epilogue

Dupe

I removed the dark glasses I wore and stared at the sky. It is amazing how we take so much for granted, the sky looked so beautiful, the air smelled so fresh and the evening breeze caressed my skin gently. I took a deep breath before getting into the car, Uche looked at me and gave me a wide smile. I smiled too, happy.


Our chauffeur, Annie turned around and beamed at us. I reached out and took her hand in mine. She was more than a friend, she was family now.


“Hey guys, this is your captain speaking. Fasten your seat belts! Its time!” Annie said.


“It’s time to go home Dupe,” Uche said.


“Home” I said. I was finally back home, beside my husband. “Where my heart belonged. “Home is wherever you are Uche,”



“Awwn, that’s sweet.” Annie said, “Oh you guys! You make me want to cry!” And she started bawling.



“Oh Annie,” I said.


She got down from the car and got into the back with us. She pulled Uche and I into her arms, in a big hug.
**************************
Sylvester


“I have enough evidence to put you away forever.” I said. “You won’t go scot free this time around.” I said. “I won’t let you ruin the life of another young boy again.”


He laughed evilly and sneered.” You can’t imprison the wind.”


I laughed too and he started laughing as well until I stopped abruptly. “Two of your boys are also behind bars and they are ready to talk so they can have lesser jail terms. And oh, I have convinced them to lay all the blame on you.”



“My boys are very loyal to me, they will never betray me like you did!” Ognoni76 said, scratching his bald head.



“You mean they won’t talk? They already talked! We also know that you forced them to rape and kill a pregnant woman as a form of initiation into your evil cult”



He looked perplexed for a second. “Who told you that?” he growled.



“They are in special unit. They are being protected.” I said. “They talked, a lot.”



“Why are you doing this?” he asked.



“This is for Nonye.” I said, “And the countless innocent lives you have destroyed.’’


“Who is Nonye?”



“You will find out soon enough” I said and turned to leave.


“Wait! Remember we were once in this together! Remember you made your money through drugs! I had to change tactics when you left me! I was broke and almost homeless and the law was on my heels. I had to find a way to get back to my feet. I delved into Yahoo, something I thought was for little boys, so I recruited Dubem to be in charge of that but he duped me! All I did was to give you lot a meaningful life! See, we can still make it work again!”


“I think you are going senile because I have never met you before. I am a well-known reputable lawyer, what have I got to do with the likes of you?” I quipped.


He laughed and slapped his bulgy stomach. “I have trapped you little boy. The evidence is on your arm, you were once my protégée.” He lifted up his polo to reveal his bull head tattoo. “You have this tattoo too! Let me see how you will explain that to the judge, lawyer boy!”


I opened the buttons on my shirt while he looked on, wondering what was going on. I showed him both of my arms and he gasped. “What tattoo?” I sneered.


“Where…..where….how….” he stuttered. “ You….you…”


“See you in court” I said and sauntered away while he rattled the irons bars holding him prisoner.
*********

During the drive to the Airport, my parents huddled close to each other. They talked, held hands, whispered and giggled like school children in love. When their flight was announced, they both pulled me into their arms at the same time and gave me a fierce hug.


“Are you sure you don’t want us to go with our grandson?” Mama said in Ewe.


“He just became a father, let him enjoy his son for a while.” Dad replied. “Let him visit us as soon as he starts walking.”


I stared at the both of them. It had been ages since I heard them speak Ewe. I couldn’t believe they were speaking the once forbidden language in broad daylight. A dark skinned petite girl in Angelina blouse and short skirt walked by and called out greetings to us in Ewe.


Mama Laughed. “Did you hear that Sylvester?”


“I heard Mama,” I finally replied and they both hugged me close again.


“We love you Sly,” they both chorused. “Don’t forget to bring your son home as often as you can.”


“I promise” I said and pulled them into my arms.

****
“Hey” Annie said, walking into my living room.


“Hey” I replied, pouring her a glass.


“How’s Tom?” She asked.


“I just put him down for his nap and I am still hunting for a nanny.” I said.


“Look no more.” She said. “I will care for him.”


“Umm… Annie…. I was thinking you might be more than that. I want you to be his surrogate mom.”



“Oh really?” She said, excitedly. “Thank you Shar…Sly.”



“But there’s a tiny problem.”


“What’s the problem?” She asked.


“When he gets older, he will realize his friends have two parents living under the same roof but he only has one and that might traumatize him. So …. Well…”


“Are you asking me to move in?”


“What?” I laughed and looked shocked.” No…. I wouldn’t dare to…”


“Yes” She said. “I have always wanted to be a mother and Tom is such an adorable baby. Henceforth, no more cuss words, late nights, heavy music and we must go to church every Sunday.”


“Why?” I asked.


“We have to be model parents. We will bring him up in the way of the lord.” She replied.


“Oh” I said in surprise. “But you are a Muslim.”


“I converted.”


“When?” I asked.


“Few minutes ago. We have to get books on parenting as well and ….”


“I want to show you something.” I said and opened my shirt. “This” I pointed to my bare arm where the tattoo was.
“Oh” She said, “Well I am glad you removed it. We wouldn’t want our son thinking it’s good to have tattoos” She brought out her phone and started flipping through it.


“Annie what are you doing?” I asked.


“I want to call the movers.” She said. “We have to change some things because right now this place still looks like a bachelor’s house and we have to make it more conducive for our baby. Right?”


“Right?” I agreed.
******
Mabel

“What is the baby’s name?” I asked, looking at the sweet looking thing.


“Annie.” Dupe replied.


“Oh that’s a sweet name.” I said.


“We named her after our own Annie.”


“Yea she’s my name sake” Annie beamed.


Dupe and her Husband, Annie and the lawyer came to see us because Tade would be discharged any moment from now and we would be heading for the Airport immediately.


The doctor walked in. “he can go home now.”


“Thank you” I said happily.


The doctor walked out once again. Annie brought out a camera and waved her hand.


“Photo time.” She cried out, “Who will snap us?”


“I will.” Sylvester said.


“No, no, you get to be in the photographs too. Go get one of those starchy nurses.” Annie replied.


He sighed and walked out of the room.


“Thank you all for coming. This means so much to me” I said. “I can’t believe we are finally going back home.”


“Bell, we are going to the states.” Tade reminded me.


“That is still home. My parents and Serwa are there and they have decorated the whole house in anticipation of our coming.” I said, beaming.



“Well that’s still home.” Annie seconded. “You will be coming back when the trial starts, right?”



“Cecilia’s?” I asked. “Yes. Can I…. can I hold Tom?”


“Yes.” She said gleefully. “He might not let you hold him for long because he’s used to his mommy’s hands already. Isn’t he such a cutie?” She placed him in my arms.


I held him close to my bosoms, looking into his handsome face. He looked neither like Tade nor Funmi. He looked like himself and that pleased me. No questions will trail him later in life, looking at the lawyer and Annie you wouldn’t know he wasn’t theirs biologically.


Sylvester walked in with a young pretty nurse tucked into the crook of his arms, it was obvious he had charmed her as the poor thing was blushing and giggling.



“Uche, Dubem sent me a text. He has gone back to Malaysia.” Sylvester announced.



“Typical of him.” Uche replied.



“How did he get the money to go back?” Dupe asked and we all stared at him.



“What?” he asked. “Okay, I might have helped him a little.”



We all burst into laughter. Annie gave the camera to the nurse and we clustered around Tade on the bed.


“Say Cheese” The nurse said.


“Cheese we all chorused.”
****

Tade and Mabel headed for the Airport, Annie, Sylvester and their son drove back to their home while Uche and Dupe went house hunting. They wanted a big house with a garden where little Annie and her siblings that are yet to come will play. When Little Annie is six months old, her parents would travel to India to check if there’s a chance for her father to see again. Whether he sees again or not, we all know that Dupe would be his eyes for the rest of their lives.



THE END




Thank you all for making this book a success. Special thanks goes to those awesome readers who have been arguing back and forth over each scene, through your rich points I have been able to develop the plot. I don’t know if I have been able to pass my message (the theme) across effectively, but I do believe we all have been entertained. Thanks once again, compliments of the season to you all! *kisses*

God bless u for this ....kudos

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by SPDAZZY(f): 9:47am On Dec 21, 2016
Thanks Bibi for making everyone happy. The ending is perfect.

IMO Uche regained his sight. I don't know if anyone left Uche blind in their subconscious.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by triplemmm3(f): 10:57am On Dec 21, 2016
nma4god:
God bless u for this ....kudos
Must you quote the whole update because of this?

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by mamindy(f): 11:04am On Dec 21, 2016
A Contended Heart They Say Is A Perpetual Feast. Am Very Glad To Know You Bibijay123. If Its Possible Can You Please List Your Work So That I Will Search And Read Up And Please Tag Me When You Start A New Work. Remain Blessed.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by ogboni76(m): 12:39pm On Dec 21, 2016
thanks for this wonderful ending....do I have bald head? lolzzz......may the good lord continue to bless your understanding, you held me spell bound from the start to the end....merry Christmas to you and Happy new year in advance.....

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by ogboni76(m): 12:51pm On Dec 21, 2016
bibijay123:

prison tinz o grin


just neegodu
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by missnazzy(f): 1:30pm On Dec 21, 2016
wow! what a beautiful piece. bibi, you're good. hope you start another story soon. I can't get enough of your stories. thanks a lot.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 3:52pm On Dec 21, 2016
mamindy:
A Contended Heart They Say Is A Perpetual Feast. Am Very Glad To Know You Bibijay123. If Its Possible Can You Please List Your Work So That I Will Search And Read Up And Please Tag Me When You Start A New Work. Remain Blessed.

I am very glad to know you too cheesy
On here I have: Twine, Allen Avenue, The devil has the money and When tears bring yes. I will give u a mention when I start a new one...thank you kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by MozB: 3:52pm On Dec 21, 2016
hmmm. So Tade killed Funmi and walks free.. No wahala.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 3:54pm On Dec 21, 2016
yusufibrahim:
Bibijay always brilliant delivery........ Nice end entertaining educative and lots of morals learnt from the story more grace to u keep going higher the sky is ur stepping stone
#respect
Thank you bro, you are too kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 3:57pm On Dec 21, 2016
dominique:
Awww, why did the story have to end? cry
I enjoyed every single update (except the ones with Nonye and Dupe's mum's death)
Can't wait read another masterpiece from the supertalented Bibijay123. Girl you rock! May God bless the work of your hands.


To every one that commented at one point or the other, you guys are awsome. Thanks for making Literatureland the place to be, it's been fun reading your comments and rubbing minds with you all smiley

Thank you sis, you all made it an interesting ride. Merry Xmas in advance kiss , I have got my phone back. cheesy

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Michelle55: 6:03pm On Dec 21, 2016
wow! Tnx so much 4 dis wonderful story dearie
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by olatex25(m): 6:29pm On Dec 21, 2016
Hmm... All d way frm begining 2 d End, E no easy.. Nice job dearie, u are such a darling.. More grace 2u, greater u i pray... Looking forward 2 anoda interesting story...
Kissess

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by oyindamolaasake(f): 7:32pm On Dec 21, 2016
#ghost mode deactivated#Best story I've ever read on nairaland.kip up d gud work bibijay.More grease 2 ur elbow
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by damsel14(f): 12:16am On Dec 22, 2016
cheesy @last dis epic story has end... Bibijay keep it up.. Wen u wanna write anoda one pls mention me o...


MERRY Christmas

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by DaddySLY(m): 12:49am On Dec 22, 2016
thankyou bibijay123
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Ezinwa25(f): 6:20am On Dec 22, 2016
bibijay123:


Thank you sis, you all made it an interesting ride. Merry Xmas in advance kiss , I have got my phone back. cheesy

Bibi u too much
May God continue to inspire you..
Eheen.... don't forget to mention my name in your next update...
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 7:23am On Dec 22, 2016
damsel14:
cheesy @last dis epic story has end... Bibijay keep it up.. Wen u wanna write anoda one pls mention me o...


MERRY Christmas

Alright.Merry Xmas dear kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 7:24am On Dec 22, 2016
olatex25:
Hmm... All d way frm begining 2 d End, E no easy.. Nice job dearie, u are such a darling.. More grace 2u, greater u i pray... Looking forward 2 anoda interesting story...
Kissess

You're a darling too kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 7:25am On Dec 22, 2016
DaddySLY:
thankyou bibijay123

You are welcome cheesy wink

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 8:04am On Dec 22, 2016
A perfect ending. Thanks Bibi...You're the best! smiley
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:38am On Dec 22, 2016
colik:
A perfect ending.
Thanks Bibi...You're the best! smiley

You are the bestest kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Justicextian(m): 9:53am On Dec 22, 2016
This is a lovely piece, I must confess. Praying that God surrounds me with wise people like Bibijay. You're doing a perfect job dear. More wisdom. Please don't forget to call on me when the next meal is served o. Thanks Bibijay123, Love you....
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Gabbyraze(m): 10:20am On Dec 22, 2016
Bibi Av been trying to start a story here on nairaland but I keep getting an error message after posting both the title and content,pls any idea of how to solve this issue? Anticipating your reply,merry Xmas in advance
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by TobeyTobee: 1:57pm On Dec 22, 2016
Funmi does not deserve dat death. She's just at the receiving end always. Tade is a murderer, her death will always hunt him for the rest of his life. Secrets eventually do get busted. How will Tom feel when he discovered that his father killed his mother. Thump up Bibijay. Nice story. KUDOS

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Twizzy30(m): 2:21pm On Dec 22, 2016
Thank you bibi cool

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by nma4god(f): 3:50pm On Dec 22, 2016
triplemmm3:
Must you quote the whole update because of this?
sorry I had to....don't get offended biko

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