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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by KpagoGIN(m): 1:35pm On Dec 29, 2016
Creeza:
can I use your sentence in my story ? smiley
you are welcome.

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by pelumee15(f): 2:00pm On Dec 29, 2016
Thanks for d mention creeza

Please write some sense into dz gab's head o grin

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Winters22: 2:31pm On Dec 29, 2016
Creeza:
sharp bae, abeg come join me enjoy the moet. . . wink

Winters22 thanks dear, welcome to "WLD" .
thanks!

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 2:56pm On Dec 29, 2016
pelumee15:
Thanks for d mention creeza

Please write some sense into dz gab's head o grin
dnt worry, he will cry grin

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Pureheart91(m): 3:56pm On Dec 29, 2016
The yultide is still ongoing......

Hows urs going creez?

@ the meantime lemme sit back relax and read ur literary work.

Stay blessed man.

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Tuhndhay(m): 6:11pm On Dec 29, 2016
Following

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by chijioke17(m): 6:12pm On Dec 29, 2016
Wow, been a while,creeza merry xmas in arrears, how've you been, been really busy. Thanks for the mention

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Nobody: 9:35pm On Dec 29, 2016
Following
Keep inCREEZing

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by YINKS89(m): 11:32pm On Dec 29, 2016
if u re goin to b away den do d needful nd lets ruminate abt dat b4 u kom bck.

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by rachealfst(f): 12:01am On Dec 30, 2016
Seriousness is far from this Gabriel.Thanks for the mention. More wisdom......

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 1:23am On Dec 30, 2016
Pureheart91:
The yultide is still ongoing......

Hows urs going creez?

@ the meantime lemme sit back relax and read ur literary work.

Stay blessed man.
Im fine pureheart, smiley thanks for reading.
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 1:25am On Dec 30, 2016
rachealfst:
Seriousness is far from this Gabriel.Thanks for the mention. More wisdom......
lol grin

THANKS RACH
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 10:24am On Dec 30, 2016
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*continues.



Katherine




The airconditioned atmosphere heightened my suspense and tension, I practically boiled deep down with anger. I had been praying for a day like this to come, for me to unleash the hatred and pain in my heart. No Jupiter would stop me from doing what I had up my sleeves. Ol' boy!! Karma is a b!tch.




" Are you sure its her ? " Mimi said " Wait!" she pulled me back " What if you are wrong?




" I know its her. I am certain of it" I replied.



I tried to move, Mimi blocked my path and held me tightly , her hands cluthed onto my shoulders and she pushed me back a little. She knew what I had in mind, and tried to avoid a disaster from taking place.we had to be sure.




"Take it easy Kate " She sighed then turned round " at least, lets be sure ,before we act"



I had heard enough . I couldn't get my anger constrained anymore



" Its her, I'm very sure of the face. I can't easily forget it."

I wanted to confront them immediately .I knew the little girl was Funmi. There was no doubt to it and the thought drove nanobots of anger down my spine.






" So what are you going to do? Mimi asked
" interrogate the child ? Like " Hello , I'm Kate,I've seen you somewhere before, are you really my husband's daughter /With another lady? " She scoffed " C'mon Kate, let me do this like a prof"


Elisha drew me back to seat. Mimi went forward and convinced the ladies and child (Funmi) after a short chat, to take group pictures . I could not hear anything from their discussion due to distance between us.




Mimi came back shortly and smiled.

" that was easy" she said and showed me the pictures " Recognize anybody? "she asked.








" Oh God, No----- no. no" I said " this is not happening, I should have known. She was a fake doctor all along."






" Fake doctor? Mimi and Eli chorused.


I clutched my fist and pushed the seat backwards , I walked straight to their table and before the lady could say "jack", I already landed two heavy slaps on the her cheeks. she barely recovered from that when darkness engulfed her again - a hot slap to the left eye.






" You harlot, you have no shame. How dare you ? You are such a devil. " I barked my lungs out.

The second lady ( there were two of them) was shocked and confused , she nearly jumped out of her skin. Then she touched her friend and said







" Damilola ?.. Are you OK? "






" oh that's the name! " I hit her again " say something ,you devil. Are you dumb?






Mimi had followed me and waited for any slight opportunity to damage "somebody" . I couldn't believe that the lady standing before me ,had dressed up as a doctor the first time we met,when Gabriel was hospitalized.



" Doctor huh? you remember me , don't you?" I smiled and I pulled her shirt " everything about you is fake and cheap"



She tried to say something ,"Kate listen, we are in the public, you are humiliat-"




" Shut up!!!" I cut in " You had the guts to seduce my husband and even reproduce a child with him " I pointed at Funmi " that girl is the result of your cheap lovepeddlling huh? She is even as ugly as you are " I hissed . " And I'm warning you. stay off my man if you know what's best for you."






" Or what ? Damilola suddenly barked , her eyes became bloodshot red " Go on ! Tell all these strangers that your man couldnt resist my charm and that he left you for me. You should have chained your beast of a husband---- if you think he is such a dog-"





" You bastard "
I slapped her so hard ,that my palms became red.


She retaliated with a resounding slap . I flung the table over ,the plates and glasscups shattered to pieces. Broken bottles littered the floor. I pulled her hair and she dragged it back. It nearly went off. People tried to separate us. Fight had already ensued . I wouldn't let her break free. She threw a punch . I hit her on the temple with my elbow. She jerked and struggled.







" Kemi , do something " she cried for help.





Her friend tried to help. Mimi and Elisha pounded her with blows on the back. They pulled her to a corner and gang beat the life out of her.


Damilola grabbed a bottle on the floor. She charged towards me. I dodged. She accidentally hit her own daughter.







" Arhhhhhh!! Mummy , my head o .I'm bleeding " Funmi screamed out in pain.

***






Andrew








I thought it to be an illusion, until I checked the camera footage again. It was really Kemi and she stood helplessly at the gate . I had given her my address but I didn't think she'd stop by so early, we just met .
I pushed a button from the control room to let her in, and went out to the living room. It didn't take long before she came through the front door.






" You look like hell " I said .I noticed her facial expressions.


She looked like whom had been tortured by Adolf Hitler himself and the Nazi's . Whatever her ordeal was, her tormentors did a good job on her. One eye was almost blackened, and bandadges adorned her wrist. I suddenly felt pity for her.





" I got into a fight " She began " A crazy lady and her friends tried to end my life today , fortunately I survived "



I was shocked and grabbed her on the shoulders.





" Come here ,Sit down .Kemi, tell me what happened. "







" It happened so fast, " She began" Damilola and I got outnumbered , three to two. Turned out, the lady and her friends had a personal beef with Lola"





" Damilola? The one you told me---"




" Yes, my friend who is a single mom " She cut in and heaved a sigh.

I gave her a cup of water and sat into the cushion, next to her. I needed to hear more.





" Andy...she was a tiger, her anger was like no other ,in the end, Dami's daughter got hospitalized"




" How? What happened? I asked.



" long story , but what I can say is that things went crazy and out of hand"


I cuddled her into my arms and gently brushed her hair ,but she jerked " ouchh , my arm, be careful"

She had twisted it and I couldn't help but laugh.




" What's so funny" she frowned and hit me on the chest.




"Nothing "

Kemi sat up and drank the water in the glass cup, her face became moody . I couldn't tell what she had in mind, all I knew was that she sought revenge of whatever that happened. How she'd go about it was unclear to me .



" I am so angry right now. I feel like assasinating that witch called Kate" she blurted out in anger.


I moved back a little and looked her in the face..




" Kate ??



" Yea,Kate . You know her?

I had no idea if it was my Kate. It could have been anyone




" Don't worry" I said and embraced her" there are thousands of Kate's out there. It could have been anyone"

" This one is really crazy " She retorted.


Then,she relaxed on my shoulders and the chemistry between us grew even more intense ,This was more than attraction, it was something greater and I could feel it deep down in my bones.


She pulled back and clutched her fist together .


" This so far from over " she said " Its very far--very far from over".

I suddenly felt afraid as shivers went down my spine. whatever this lady had in mind ,it was evil and I would be lucky if she told me about it.


Tbc

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Nobody: 11:04am On Dec 30, 2016
Chai....this is great!

Hahahaha, Dummylola the evil can't even defend herself against a pregnant lady....aaaahhhh.

#OperationAssasinate

Kate my friend, you though grin Kung Fu reloaded.

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by mujybee(f): 11:14am On Dec 30, 2016
cant stop lafin slf

gr8t job creeza

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Gabbyraze(m): 11:28am On Dec 30, 2016
I soo love the fighting scene, grin

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 11:30am On Dec 30, 2016
jagugu88li:
Chai....this is great!

Hahahaha, Dummylola the evil can't even defend herself against a pregnant lady....aaaahhhh.

#OperationAssasinate

Kate my friend, you though grin Kung Fu reloaded.
grin grin

i was laffin so hard when i typed it ...


KATE's pregnancy is still in it early stage. Its not even heavy yet, But that apart

#kungfu reloaded I like that grin

#KateKung

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 11:32am On Dec 30, 2016
mujybee:
cant stop lafin slf


gr8t job creeza
thanks dearie, Im glad I made u laff wink
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by mujybee(f): 11:48am On Dec 30, 2016
Creeza:
thanks dearie, Im glad I made u laff wink

kisses #muah

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 11:54am On Dec 30, 2016
Yorhmienerd pureheart91
kingphillip
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by KpagoGIN(m): 12:01pm On Dec 30, 2016
I never knew kate was a broiler..... check out the smashing Effect!

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by yorhmienerd(m): 12:18pm On Dec 30, 2016
Creeza:
Yorhmien.erd pure.heart91
kingp.hillip
Thanks gee, just laying low. Nice job man, keep the flag flying

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 12:27pm On Dec 30, 2016
KpagoGIN:
I never knew kate was a broiler..... check out the smashing Effect!
laughing hard to this grin
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by KpagoGIN(m): 12:27pm On Dec 30, 2016
from all Chairman Creeza has written so far let me say i have come to the conclusion concerning Gabriel that all his intentions were of purest of hearts concerning his family but his Hopes were just too Naïve regarding his actions. for he who chooses to stare into the abyss so also know that the Abyss will definite stare back....
happy new year in advance Chairman Creeza.

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 1:17pm On Dec 30, 2016
KpagoGIN:
from all Chairman Creeza has written so far let me say i have come to the conclusion concerning Gabriel that all his intentions were of purest of hearts concerning his family but his Hopes were just too Naïve regarding his actions. for he who chooses to stare into the abyss so also know that the Abyss will definite stare back....
happy new year in advance Chairman Creeza.
Three in a row now...thanks bro


Xaviercasmir oya drop comment sharpaly
grin
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Mayorkay1(f): 1:20pm On Dec 30, 2016
Gabe, yes Gaberiel reminds me of a yoruba adage which says " if anyone chases two rats, he'll loose both rats". He wants his family yet he wants Dami's wealth. How selfish. God catch him anyways.
As for Andy, he is a wolf in sheep's clothing. So desperate to have Kate despite all she is to d point of hoping she'll have a miscarriage, how wicked! I op Kemi show him pepper.
Kate, oh sweet Kate. I love the way yhu fought for ur man if nt for anything but for the sake of ur unborn child. Yhu have made sum mistakes too. Understandably, issues hpn that we fall outta love but nt to d extent of getting close to another man, u shd av knwn wat men like Andy wants in d first place. Pls dnt be frnds wt Andy oo, just let him be n face ur family.
Also, yhu were angry right cause yhu tot Funmi is ur husband's daughter, yhu shd av investigated before taking action. Don't make such mistake again oo. I pray nothing hpns 2 ur baby,okay. All will be well.
And Creeza, yhu're doing great job here. Thunbs up man! Pls do mention me in ur subsequent updates. Thanks.

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by triplemmm3(f): 1:21pm On Dec 30, 2016
Creeza:
grin grin

i was laffin so hard when i typed it ...


KATE's pregnancy is still in it early stage. Its not even heavy yet, But that apart

#kungfu reloaded I like that grin

#KateKung
#KateKung indeed

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 1:32pm On Dec 30, 2016
Mayorkay1:
Gabe, yes Gaberiel reminds me of a yoruba adage which says " if anyone chases two rats, he'll loose both rats". He wants his family yet he wants Dami's wealth. How selfish. God catch him anyways.
As for Andy, he is a wolf in sheep's clothing. So desperate to have Kate despite all she is to d point of hoping she'll have a miscarriage, how wicked! I op Kemi show him pepper.
Kate, oh sweet Kate. I love the way yhu fought for ur man if nt for anything but for the sake of ur unborn child. Yhu have made sum mistakes too. Understandably, issues hpn that we fall outta love but nt to d extent of getting close to another man, u shd av knwn wat men like Andy wants in d first place. Pls dnt be frnds wt Andy oo, just let him be n face ur family.
Also, yhu were angry right cause yhu tot Funmi is ur husband's daughter, yhu shd av investigated before taking action. Don't make such mistake again oo. I pray nothing hpns 2 ur baby,okay. All will be well.
And Creeza, yhu're doing great job here. Thunbs up man! Pls do mention me in ur subsequent updates. Thanks.
I love this, thanks for this beautifully constructed review.
smiley

i sure will give u a mention... Welcome To ''WLD"

wink


Yoyostic I see o sha. This avid ghost reader, I pray God touch ur ghostmind
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Yoyostic: 4:37pm On Dec 30, 2016
Creeza:
I love this, thanks for this beautifully constructed review.
smiley

i sure will give u a mention... Welcome To ''WLD"

wink


Yoyostic I see o sha. This avid ghost reader, I pray God touch ur ghostmind
Lol.Trying to catch up,been busy.Hope you are enjoying the yuletide?have fun.

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 5:38pm On Dec 30, 2016
Yoyostic:
Lol.Trying to catch up,been busy.Hope you are enjoying the yuletide?have fun.
thanks and yultide's almost spent. Happy cross over eve.


EEMOSCO
Mzzamiable wink
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by MzzAmiable(f): 5:43pm On Dec 30, 2016
Creeza:
thanks and yultide's almost spent. Happy cross over eve.


EEMOSCO
Mzzamiable wink


You caught me? Yeah

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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Yoyostic: 5:58pm On Dec 30, 2016
Creeza:
thanks and yultide's almost spent. Happy cross over eve.


EEMOSCO
Mzzamiable wink
wish u same dear.Keep updating;enjoyed every bit.

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