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Jazmiynne:


Christianity does not put anyone into any form of complication. It is people who chose to close their eyes to the Bible's truth.

Even God allows a partner to choose Divorce as an option on the grounds of adultery. In this case, Micheal has committed "Adulteries". I can't find the complication anywhere.

It is the kind of thinking that some females have been propagating on this thread that makes women suffer in silence.
Honestly, PamelB if Claire and Michael come back together for any reason, your story loses it's substance because it would thus become very artificial, an obviously forced attempt to ensure a fairy tale ending. Please do the needful. More ink to your pen and data to your Phone.

REMEMBER IT'S HER STORY AND NOT YOURS SO SHE WILL DECIDE TO END IT THE WAY IT DEEMS FIT FOR HER OR THE WAY SHE WANTS AND NOT THE WAY YOU WANT IT. GOT THAT HONEY. @BOLDED.

kerenjay:
thanks.....nah, keren is not my name.. i juz adopted it

Oh ok

preciousuweh:
Now my own Penny of opinion concerning the story so far.
If you guys observe right from when this story started, I haven't said anything or try to give an opinion concerning Michael and Claire marriage ( i.e whether they should divorce or not, who is at fault and what Claire and Micheal should or shouldn't have done ) because I know whatever i will say will be nothing but a LIE. I will only be giving my judgement base on what I think is right not base on what I feel and know is right out of experience because I'm not in the marriage and I don't pray to be in such marriage. shey who no like better thing.

Most of us if not all of us saying Claire shouldn't have divorced Micheal are saying so because they aren't the one in such situation or marriage for clarity sake because I know that if they are the one (i.e some of those nairalanders saying Claire shouldn't have divorced Micheal), they for done run four forty comot from that marriage since day one and vice versa.
I really wish infact I want Micheal and my sweetheart Claire to be back together but that should be after Micheal has undergone through a serious deliverance at MFM because that thing wey dey do am for body no be ordinary.

As the title of the story says UNITED IN BETRAYAL, from the look of things the story is gonna have two major parts or theme. the BETRAYAL and the UNITY. so let us buckle up and watch as PamelB twist and turn our mind, soul and spirit even our head self through the BETRAYAL and the UNITY.

My dear forget that betrayal and unity stuff, to my understanding what I believe it meant is that; people she trusted, took as her own United and betrayed her!
Shikena

He was dressed in his corporate attire. He would go to the hospital with Amara, after registration and the necessary form filling, he would go to work. He needed to move on and that's what he will do. He thanked God that he was his own boss.

He was about settling on a sofa when the door bell sang.
Ebere walked past him and went to answer the door. He wasn't expecting anyone though but seeing Ebere already caused him goose bumps. Her perfect shape was beginning to come out. Her melons looked bigger and he imagined sucking on them later.

Michael relaxed into the sofa immediately he saw the object of his fantasy walk into the sitting room. He smiled in his head. Women. She must have heard that Claire was no longer in the house so she came to collect the national cake. Women.

"Good morning Mr Njama." She greeted, standing directly in front of him.

But she wasn't smiling. Yes, that's how they always appear, innocent and with good intentions but once you dig them, they keep coming for more.
He ran his eyes over her. Her curves weren't the exact type he likes but he'll make do with her, if not for anything, she was pretty and her melons weren't small. It would fill his hands.

"Morning uhm......"

"Chantel."

"Forgive me. Please sit."

She retreated and sat on an adjacent sofa.

"So, to what do I owe this August visit Chantel?"

"I'm sorry if I'm disturbing because you appear to be going out."

"Yes."

"You see, I want to know if I can get Claire's new address from you. I've been calling her and her line has been off. I........"

"Should I be honest?"

She nodded.

"I don't know her new location. We're divorced remember?"

"Yes, I know but......"

"Chantel, I would love to help you with her address because I like you. You're the perfect model everyone wants to see in magazine covers y'know."

"Thanks Mr Njama."

"Call me Michael. What can I offer you?"


**********

From the corner of her eye, she saw Amara resting on a railing upstairs. Hatred and disgust filled her throat. She was surprised that Claire couldn't treat this trash case but willingly left her home for her sister without dealing them blows.
Just as she did the first time on twitter, she would also repeat it now but this time, Amara would watch it live in 3D.
She had seen the way Michael looked at her and knew that he was lusting after her. She would play along, just to show Amara that whatever she did to her own sister, Karma would surely hit back but for now, she was Karma.

"Anything strong Michael. As long as you're drinking with me."

She watched him smile and she returned it. Let the game begin.

***********
"Give me a minute okay?"

She nodded and he stood up. He winked at her and she blew him a kiss.
He took a stroll to the huge bar and took out a bottle of campari and two glasses.

"This used to be Claire's bottle of thoughts. We can down the bottle right?"

"Of course, since she's no longer here."

"Right. I love your kind of girl."

"Hmmm. It's obvious."

Instead of going back to his position, he sat down beside her and poured their drinks.

"Let's toast to a new friendship." Chantel said

"Perfect."

They clinked their glass together and sipped their drinks.

"There's something I've been wanting to do since you walked in."

"What's that?"

He took her glass and dropped it on the side table together with he's.

"You're beautiful. I like you." He breathed into her neck.

"Mmmm. Mike."

He leaned closer and closed his mouth against hers.

**********

This was the height of it. She wiped the tears that were streaming down her face and started her descent down the stairs.
How dare she?
How dare he?
How dare the both of them?

**********

She saw her coming down and her face lit up. She broke away from the kiss and Michael looked at her with lustful eyes.

"You're one of a kind baby." She commented.

"Can we take this party somewhere else? Maybe......."

But Amara was already there, completing his statement with an ear deafening slap.
He held his cheek and stood up angrily, ready to hit her back but Chantel held him.

"Come on darling, it's not in your nature to hit disrespectful women. Let it be."

Michael looked from Chantel to Amara. He tugged at his tie and left the sitting room.

"You? You won't get away with this. I'll make you pay for seducing my man."

"The same way you seduced your sister's man. Oh. I'm sorry. Forgot it's same man we're talking about here."

"Shut up."

"No you shut up. This is between the both of us now and trust me, I'll make you leave this house with nothing. Shameless $lut."

And with that, she left the house without looking back.

Immediately she stepped out of the house, she spat out.

"Forgive me Claire but I want to serve your sister in same cup. She can't destroy your home and expect to live happily."

"Excuse me madam."

Chantel turned around to see one of the employees.

"You scared me. What's the problem?"

"I'm sorry but I heard you asking of my boss's address."

"Yes. Do you have it?"

Ebere gave her a piece of paper where the address was written down.

"Thank you."

Ebere nodded and watched her leave the compound.

*********

She sat on a couch and cried.
How could Michael do that to her? He didn't even respect the fact that she was around and he was busy, flirting and kissing another woman. How could he?

Her thoughts were interrupted by footsteps coming down the stairs.
She watched Michael walk up to her. He dropped a bundle of money on the table and started going out.

"Michael?"

"Hmmm?" He turned around.

"Why? Have I offended you in anyway?"

"Yes. Why will you hit me? Are you nuts? This is my house and I owe no explanations to you for anything that I do. Throughout my marriage with your sister, she never lifted a hand to me. You're lucky that Chantel stopped me becsuse I was ready to teach you manners. Take that money and get yourself to the hospital. And hey, my dinner better be ready by the time I'm back."

He turned his back on her and left the house.

Chommieblaq:

My dear forget that betrayal and unity stuff, to my understanding what I believe it meant is that; people she trusted, took as her own United and betrayed her!
Shikena

That's your opinion sweetheart but PamelB has the final say.

Just like I was thinking what Chantel would do to Mike's advances...but how far would she go? How safe is this her enterprise?

Good job PamelB

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey. who are those that said nemesis or in a lame man language, karma isn't real.

You never chi chumchin @Amara.

Go girl @Chantel.

I'm shouting it again, this man needs to be taken to Mountain Of Fire for deliverance @Micheal.

Hun, I hail oh @PamelB.

Weldone ma, United in Betrayal indeed. So Miss Chan as join the group too. I think just has Kelvin did to the Secretary so Chan is planning same to Amala abi Amara . I hope Claire will understand at the end but in all I never wanted Mic and Cla to get back.

preciousuweh:
Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey. who are those that said nemesis or in a lame man language, karma isn't real.

You never chi chumchin @Amara.

Go girl @Chantel.

I'm shouting it again, this man needs to be taken to Mountain Of Fire for deliverance @Micheal.

Hun, I hail oh @PamelB.

I support it , from MFM to Arakeji.

Great story....More knowledge madam

Jazmiynne:


Christianity does not put anyone into any form of complication. It is people who chose to close their eyes to the Bible's truth.

Even God allows a partner to choose Divorce as an option on the grounds of adultery. In this case, Micheal has committed "Adulteries". I can't find the complication anywhere.

It is the kind of thinking that some females have been propagating on this thread that makes women suffer in silence.
Honestly, PamelB if Claire and Michael come back together for any reason, your story loses it's substance because it would thus become very artificial, an obviously forced attempt to ensure a fairy tale ending. Please do the needful. More ink to your pen and data to your Phone.

You have said it all!

....And some people still wanted her to fight for 'the' marriage.


smh



Which Kain yeye fight hian!



Man wey get two pregnant women for house but jumps at the opportunity of kissing another woman barely hours after divorcing his wife.



Who does that?

I love this update mehn... Amara it's your time to suffer... This is what I have been waiting for... I hope say chantel no go take over oooooo.




Amara no cry yet,this is just the beginning for you!!!!

oh my gosh Chantel swity! go girl!!! hahahahahahaha. revenge is best serve hot

I know this chantel was up to something, she is claiming revenge who send her?
@Claire should be careful with her.
@phil, I still trust him.
@kelvin is still my favourite character.

preciousuweh:
Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey. who are those that said nemesis or in a lame man language, karma isn't real.

You never chi chumchin @Amara.

Go girl @Chantel.

I'm shouting it again, this man needs to be taken to Mountain Of Fire for deliverance @Micheal.

Hun, I hail oh @PamelB.

we go tie am with rope drag go mfm, but after the deliverance claire stil shouldn't get back with him.

orijintv:
Women And Unecessary Quarrels. See As Grown Ass Women Dey Argue On Top Prose Wey Be Full Time Fiction. Everyone Is Entitled To His/Her Opinion Concerning A Character In This Story. If Your Opinion Or Thoughts Doesnt Match With Someone Else, Just Ignore Rather Than Insulting Yourselves Please

The insults are uncalled for.

But people are only entitled to their informed opinion. You are not entitled to pen or express a jaundiced opinion.

Lol

the cane used in flogging the senior wife is somewhere waiting for the junior wife.

as for the analysts in the house, I raise beyonce's hands for all of you. have in mind that it is only but a story filled with lessons.

kudos pamelb.

yeah yeah! Karma is a bitch. Amara, Start dancing to the tune.

Am not in the mood to comment. but one bad deserve another @ Amara

Weldone sister, nice update, more wisdom sister

Ghen Ghen. E haff started happening. Amara i peety you.

iamloyalty:


we go tie am with rope drag go mfm, but after the deliverance claire stil shouldn't get back with him.

YOU SAY @BOLDED.

Am loving evey bit of the outcome of this story.Karma is such a bitch u knw & Amara will get evey bit of that "bitch''.Thumbs up PamelB.

preciousuweh:

YOU SAY @BOLDED.

Yes o, as u see am 9 i talk o.

There is nothing like playing "karma". Nature should always play its course. Why is everybody solving problem with more
problem.

iwakacome:
There is nothing like playing "karma". Nature should always play its course. Why is everybody solving problem with more
problem.

exactly...

Claire was about stepping out when a knock came on her gate. No one knew her house address so who could that be? The new gateman opened the smaller gate and Chantel walked in.
Her face lit up and they both went into each other's arms.

"I'm sorry Claire. I'm sorry."

"It's okay dear. It's my cross o i'll gladly bear it."

"But you did the wrong thing Claire. How can you leave your home for them just like that?"

"Chantel, there are some things we can't fight. I was tired of punishing my sister in that her condition. I know she wronged me but then, Michael will still show her what stuff he's made of."

"Are you listening to yourself? Listen to yourself before you speak. You shouldn't have left your home no matter your excuse. But that's by the way because i'm taking care of it already."

"What.......what do you mean?"

"Are you going out?"

"Yes. Join me. I'm going to my plaza. It's been long i supervised it."

"Alright."

Claire unlocked the car and they got in before driving off.


...............................................

He couldn't concentrate on work. He doesn't even have her contact, what kind of mistake did he make? She was one hell of a kisser so he was yet to understand why he couldn't do something as simple as taking her digit.
He logged into his twitter account and searched for his ex wife's handle,not surprised when he realised she hasn't been online for weeks. He dismissed her as baseless then he started going through her list of followers. He didn't have to search for long because she was just there in the first ten. He quickly followed her and took a mental note to send her a dm later. A thought quickly got to his head. He had not been fair to someone and it was time to right his wrongs, besides, they were in it together so she can't go through it alone.


..............................................

She sat down on the bed, different thoughts running through her head.
Has Claire bewitched her husband and turned him against her?
Things were not going smoothly for her and worst thing was it isn't up to 24 hours Claire left the house. She was sure Claire has a hand in whatever was happening and she won't sit and do nothing.
She took out her phone and went online, calling Claire names and asking her to loosen her husband from whatever jazz she had tied him up with. Feeling contented, she dropped the phone and decided to lie back and rest a bit. Hospital will wait till tomorrow.

..............................................

"Wow, your plaza is hot. I can't believe i spent my day here without getting bored. People just keep trooping in and out." Chantel commented as they were about leaving the plaza

"I can employ you if you want." Claire replied and they both laughed.

"Thanks for your company today. I needed it."

"You're welcome Claire. I don't want you thinking about anything. It's good as you made the decision to resume work immediately. It will keep you busy so please, don't think anything please."

"I won't, trust me. And thank you very much."

"You're welcome. Please, take me home."

"With all pleasure."

...........................................

He got out of the car and his mood quickly changed. Why did his mood turn sour right now?
He got into the house and went straight upstairs after asking Ebere to serve his dinner. he met her sleeping and he ignored her, changed into a short and basketball singlet before going downstairs to have dinner.

He found Ebere standing in front of the dinning.

"Ahan. When do you intend to start your ante natal?"

His question threw her off guard and she began to stammer.

"Come and sit with me, we need to talk."

"Sir?"

He led her back to the sitting room and they sat down

"I'm sorry about the way i spoke to you the other day, the divorce process got me all worked up. Hope you understand?"

She nodded and he continued.

"I've called the agency and they'll send some helpers over but they won't live here. You'll move to one of the rooms upstairs and tomorrow, i'll take you to any hospital of your choice for registration.

To his surprise, she broke down in tears and went on her knees.

"I'm sorry sir. Forgive me please."

He helped her up and faced her.

"we all make mistakes, we do. i'm also at fault here because i watched my home break and i couldn't do anything to stop it. So, stop crying please. After the baby comes, we can now know what to do. For now, you're no longer an employee in this house hmm?"

"Thank you sir."

"you're welcome and work on the sir thing. you've served my dinner right?" he asked standing up

"No sir, we cooked nothing. The kitc.........'

But he was already racing upstairs.

He got to the room and threw the door open, startling the sleeping beauty. She stirred and slowly stood up, rubbing her eyes. She saw him and a smile spread across her face.

"You're back honey, welcome."

"Where's the dinner i asked you to make before my return?"

Her eyes opened both in shock and confusion.

"Baby, i'm not feeling too good and..........."

He landed a slap on her cheek and she fell back on the bed.

"You'll follow my orders in this house. You want to be a wife so you'll have to do as i say. Today should be the first and last i'll come home and meet the dinning without my dinner on it. Claire did it so you must. You'll make my breakfast, pack my lunch and still serve my dinner once i return. FOOL."

He left the room, throwing orders to Ebere to prepare noodles for him.

yewande1234:
What's all dis we all are mature na,why insult one another untop a story which is jz a fiction haba dats too bad. All because u av data on ur phone and u sit in d comfort of ur room,dat also as nt given u d right to insult nw cos we humans are like rivers we never can tell wer we can see each other so pls lets behave matured
mummy Chumzypinky no mind us na pikin dey do us,cos u are nd we always be our mummy on NL

Jeeeeez! Thought u were making sense till i got to your last statement. Next time do the high service for yourself....is she the only mother here or the the only one that was offended? If she's that ancient, then she has no business here on NL with 'pikin' like u.

eyah! I am already feeling sorry for amara! and karma Neva start sef. Ebere oya overthrow!

Jazmiynne:


Christianity does not put anyone into any form of complication. It is people who chose to close their eyes to the Bible's truth.

Even God allows a partner to choose Divorce as an option on the grounds of adultery. In this case, Micheal has committed "Adulteries". I can't find the complication anywhere.

It is the kind of thinking that some females have been propagating on this thread that makes women suffer in silence.
Honestly, PamelB if Claire and Michael come back together for any reason, your story loses it's substance because it would thus become very artificial, an obviously forced attempt to ensure a fairy tale ending. Please do the needful. More ink to your pen and data to your Phone.

U dey Kolo? Are u sure you are OK so?

Is it your story?