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Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 4:23pm On Aug 01, 2017
Chommieblaq:

My dear forget that betrayal and unity stuff, to my understanding what I believe it meant is that; people she trusted, took as her own United and betrayed her!
Shikena grin grin

Exactly my thought. People united come betray her. Not united by betrayal.
Re: United In Betrayal by stephenGee12(m): 4:27pm On Aug 01, 2017
crislyn:

Jeeeeez! Thought u were making sense till i got to your last statement. Next time do the high service for yourself....is she the only mother here or the the only one that was offended? If she's that ancient, then she has no business here on NL with 'pikin' like u.

Crislyn. Seriously must u insult others.
You have written ur mind , y don't I jst ignore the rest.
She didn't call or mention ur name but all because she greeted someone u decided to abuse her and now u are trying to write that u are matured.
My sister these story is just fictional. While it maybe wat happens in the world everything written here happened in the authors pamelB mind.
So please refrain from ur insults and jst comment wat u think abt the story and ignore any bad mentions.
Thank you for listening.
P.s I only mentioned two pple here
That is crislyn and pamelB so please if u quote me in a wrong way. It aint gonna be funny.

Pamelb loving ur stories. Feed me more.
#team phil&claire
#team kevin&getrude

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Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 4:28pm On Aug 01, 2017
Warfibabe:
eyah! I am already feeling sorry for amara! and karma Neva start sef. Ebere oya overthrow!


The cane the husband used in beating the first wife is still available, make the second wife not gloat.
Re: United In Betrayal by Streetmade(m): 5:05pm On Aug 01, 2017
crislyn:

Jeeeeez! Thought u were making sense till i got to your last statement. Next time do the high service for yourself....is she the only mother here or the the only one that was offended? If she's that ancient, then she has no business here on NL with 'pikin' like u.
big time high service

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Re: United In Betrayal by Streetmade(m): 5:09pm On Aug 01, 2017
stephenGee12:


Crislyn. Seriously must u insult others.
You have written ur mind , y don't I jst ignore the rest.
She didn't call or mention ur name but all because she greeted someone u decided to abuse her and now u are trying to write that u are matured.
My sister these story is just fictional. While it maybe wat happens in the world everything written here happened in the authors pamelB mind.
So please refrain from ur insults and jst comment wat u think abt the story and ignore any bad mentions.
Thank you for listening.
P.s I only mentioned two pple here
That is crislyn and pamelB so please if u quote me in a wrong way. It aint gonna be funny.

Pamelb loving ur stories. Feed me more.
#team phil&claire
#team kevin&getrude
snr man,i see no insult in wat crislyn said
Re: United In Betrayal by stephenGee12(m): 5:17pm On Aug 01, 2017
Streetmade:
snr man,i see no insult in wat crislyn said

Check the comment I quoted and read the ancient and quoted 'pikin' like you she wrote and u wud understand.

P.S I am nt insulting anybody ooo.
Before someone wud cum and start cussing and insulting me
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 5:30pm On Aug 01, 2017
stephenGee12:


Crislyn. Seriously must u insult others.
You have written ur mind , y don't I jst ignore the rest.
She didn't call or mention ur name but all because she greeted someone u decided to abuse her and now u are trying to write that u are matured.
My sister these story is just fictional. While it maybe wat happens in the world everything written here happened in the authors pamelB mind.
So please refrain from ur insults and jst comment wat u think abt the story and ignore any bad mentions.
Thank you for listening.
P.s I only mentioned two pple here
That is crislyn and pamelB so please if u quote me in a wrong way. It aint gonna be funny.

Pamelb loving ur stories. Feed me more.
#team phil&claire
#team kevin&getrude
I try my best not to ever insult anyone while airing my opinion on this post even when i was insulted. I see no reason why anyone should pick side with anyone, cuz there r lots of aggrieved readers...if you can't give an unbiased judgement its better you don't say anything that might further make some people feel they r right and make others look bad.

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Re: United In Betrayal by marianneada(f): 5:44pm On Aug 01, 2017
PamelB, i must commend your great work, you're a great writer, i was glued to my phone last night trying to catch up with u guys.

Pls someone should help me wake Claire from this nightmare cos i believe all these na dream, this is just too much to be real.

Thumbs up PamelB, more wisdom to u! smiley

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Re: United In Betrayal by stephenGee12(m): 6:00pm On Aug 01, 2017
crislyn:

I try my best not to ever insult anyone while airing my opinion on this post even when i was insulted. I see no reason why anyone should pick side with anyone, cuz there r lots of aggrieved readers...if you can't give an unbiased judgement its better you don't say anything that might further make some people feel they r right and make others look bad.


Okay point taken.
I rest my case and hope everyone just let this case of michael and claire die down and just enjoy the story as it rolls.
To romanticnovella I apologise on behalf of the fool who cursed ur unborn daughter.

Please ooo na only romanticnovella I mention oooo.
#mention at ur own peril
Re: United In Betrayal by muller101(m): 6:58pm On Aug 01, 2017
I pity Amara. Mike will kill u in that house. For Claire na shakara she de do. When she later finds out what Shantel is up to she will be more than heart broken
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 7:03pm On Aug 01, 2017
stephenGee12:



Okay point taken.
I rest my case and hope everyone just let this case of michael and claire die down and just enjoy the story as it rolls.
To romanticnovella I apologise on behalf of the fool who cursed ur unborn daughter.

Please ooo na only romanticnovella I mention oooo.
#mention at ur own peril

Lol it's okay jare,as long as I am serving a living God.. no curse shall touch my unborn children.

I already ignored her like every normal mature person would do... Since it's now a crime to air my views,make I kukuma dey read silently...
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 7:05pm On Aug 01, 2017
Choi I love what is happening to Amara,Michael is venting all his frustrations on her.. The only person that will enjoy Michael's love is Ebere..... He will pamper her a lot.. Amara will regret everything she did!!!


Madam chantel nobody sent you work o..You for talk say you don dey eye the man since..

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Re: United In Betrayal by yewande1234(f): 7:44pm On Aug 01, 2017
crislyn:

Jeeeeez! Thought u were making sense till i got to your last statement. Next time do the high service for yourself....is she the only mother here or the the only one that was offended? If she's that ancient, then she has no business here on NL with 'pikin' like u.
in dis life av learn nt to reply to every words thrown at me. FYI
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 7:46pm On Aug 01, 2017
muller101:
I pity Amara. Mike will kill u in that house. For Claire na shakara she de do. When she later finds out what Shantel is up to she will be more than heart broken

I never trusted shantel from the begining. Her betrayal is gonna be the worst.
Re: United In Betrayal by Oyindawealth(f): 9:35pm On Aug 01, 2017
Skimpledawg:

U dey Kolo? Are u sure you are OK so? undecided

Is it your story?
pls na , no insults on thread pls... Everybody is entitled 2 his/her opinion....... Peace!!!
Re: United In Betrayal by Skimpledawg(m): 9:43pm On Aug 01, 2017
Oyindawealth:
pls na , no insults on thread pls... Everybody is entitled 2 his/her opinion....... Peace!!!
Ma, please quietly read the comment I quoted again and tell me if my response is an insult.

How can someone just barge in and begin to tell the writer what to do. Is it his story? Artificial my bum undecided
Re: United In Betrayal by sweetdude001(m): 10:06pm On Aug 01, 2017
No longer interested in d story e don't lose touch, bt y'all insultin ursefs upandan dats amusing
Re: United In Betrayal by sweetdude001(m): 10:07pm On Aug 01, 2017
No longer interested in d story e don't lose touch, bt y'all insultin ursefs upandan dats amusing
Re: United In Betrayal by Oyindawealth(f): 10:09pm On Aug 01, 2017
Skimpledawg:

Ma, please quietly read the comment I quoted again and tell me if my response is an insult.

How can someone just barge in and begin to tell the writer what to do. Is it his story? Artificial my bum undecided
sorry if the person's comment annoyed u... But it would be the best if Pamelb answer d person herself.. Plsss it's not right to call d person 'mad' or 'crazy'.... Pls let's endeavor 2 thread surfry...... Na beg adey beg ooo..... Peace!!!
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 10:13pm On Aug 01, 2017
okay, continue.
Re: United In Betrayal by Skimpledawg(m): 10:21pm On Aug 01, 2017
Oyindawealth:
sorry if the person's comment annoyed u... But it would be the best if Pamelb answer d person herself.. Plsss it's not right to call d person 'mad' or 'crazy'.... Pls let's endeavor 2 thread surfry...... Na beg adey beg ooo..... Peace!!!
Thanks ma. Well noted.

Peace. cool
Re: United In Betrayal by Oyindawealth(f): 10:27pm On Aug 01, 2017
Skimpledawg:
Thanks ma. Well noted.
Peace. cool
Issokay....thanks.
Re: United In Betrayal by Queensiju: 11:16pm On Aug 01, 2017
Chommieblaq:



Haba what would she have done?
She was a loving wife to Michael, and yes I have seen women that don't know they are pregnant till the 4th month.( some people are that naive and still are), not forgetting that she doesn't have a mother figure.
And for her being lazy and not dressing sexy and stuffs, pregnancy comes with different systoms same way menstruation comes with different systoms for different people. Some ladies don't even experience a single cramp, while some are even indisposed.
As a man you noticed that your once hardworking and loving wife is becoming lazy, no longer does things the way and at the pace she's used to doing, then you should know something is wrong. It's not as if she nagged him into cheating.
She was ready to forgive and work things out, but he's just unrepentant. It's better they divorce biko, forever is too long to be unhappy.

Michael is unrepentant, looks for any tiny excuse to cheat. Impregnated her sis, her maid and raped Gertrude and even lusting after Chika. There a limit to what one can take .

And she didn't lead Phil on. The truth is Love is not enough to sustain a marriage or a relationship, what sustains it is commitment! Yes, you will meet ppl that aren't your spouse or boyfriend, and you will have a connection with them, you see the qualities you love in them, the only thing that will stop you from cheating is how strong your commitment is to your partner. Oga Michael is not committed biko

Divorce is better than unhappy marriage
Exactly! Commitment is the key. Well said Dear.
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 11:18pm On Aug 01, 2017
sweetdude001:
No longer interested in d story e don't lose touch, bt y'all insultin ursefs upandan dats amusing
ehe!
Sure you know where the unfollow button is.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Queensiju: 11:55pm On Aug 01, 2017
He he he, Amara better go ask Claire how it is done. Sleeping without preparing dinner..........even if U are pregnant+typhoid+malaria at least bread should be on the table. Hmmmm,She thinks its only pregnancy that makes one a wife. Serves her right. Weldone Pamel dear.
Re: United In Betrayal by Precial419: 11:55pm On Aug 01, 2017
Pamelb Ma I Hail O I So Much Luv Ur Stories. If I Say I Dnt Enjoy D Insults I Am Lying, It Seems To B A Common Theme In Ur Wrk. I Must Say It Shows Hw Controversial Ur Wrk Is. Those Saying Its Only Fiction R Making It Sound Like A Light Matter, Women R Nt Jux Suferin In Silence, Dey R Dying because Of D Society. Am Sure If Ciaire Were To Be D Defaulter Here, Everyone Wld Nt Even Hav 2nd Thoughts Abt A Divorce. Bt Wen D Man Is At Fault Wat Do We See? We Want Her To Forgive. As For Me, A Man Can Cheat But Let His Hand Nt Come Close To Me. Abeg Madam Pamelb No Vex O Pls Dnt Stop Dis Quarell Unless U Tink It Is Seriously Interrupting Ur Wrk. All Dose Using Insult To Tell Odas To Stop Insulting I Hope U Knw Two Wrongs Dnt Make A Right, After Answering Insult Wit Insult U Will Nw Write U R Immature, Let Me Ignore. If U Nor Want Wahala No Start Am.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Queensiju: 11:56pm On Aug 01, 2017
PamelB:
ehe! Sure you know where the unfollow button is.
Re: United In Betrayal by Queensiju: 11:58pm On Aug 01, 2017
PamelB:
ehe! Sure you know where the unfollow button is.
Lol, PamelB, easy easy abeg.
Re: United In Betrayal by kerenjay(f): 1:13am On Aug 02, 2017
Amara u are so done.....
Re: United In Betrayal by mamindy(f): 1:19am On Aug 02, 2017
I dey feel the story
Re: United In Betrayal by sweetdude001(m): 4:33am On Aug 02, 2017
PamelB:
ehe!
Sure you know where the unfollow button is.
Oga o evfribody 4 hia dey para, even madam author, oya no vex o
Re: United In Betrayal by sweetdude001(m): 4:56am On Aug 02, 2017
Those Saying Its Only Fiction R Making It Sound Like A Light Matter, Women R Nt Jux Suferin In Silence, Dey R Dying because Of D Society. Am Sure If Ciaire Were To Be D Defaulter Here, Everyone Wld Nt Even Hav 2nd Thoughts Abt A Divorce. Bt Wen D Man Is At Fault Wat Do We See? We Want Her To Forgive. As For Me, A Man Can Cheat But Let His Hand Nt Come Close To Me.
This is nt a man vs woman matter, its about wat s ryt n wats is rong, in dis case Micheal is evil n we all agree, don't make it look like ladies saints, u claim women die in silence bt men die literally everyday from emotional trauma dey suffer in d hands of their wives, when it comes to emotions women r more powerful. Check most old couples like 7 out of 10 av d mother bt nt d father, 65% of the time its the wife that sends the husband to the grave. #genderequality

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