In Jamaican's voice..... Mi haffi big up bibi294 fi being a great writa. Rispeck

I finally caught up. I must commend your efforts and patience. You are a great writer and i know God has plans for you. You are a blessing to us on nairaland.

I don't know what pushed me to check nairaland and luckily for me, i stumbled on this great thread. I checked the OP name and i know bibi294 no dey disappoint. Thumbs up sis. Keep it coming

My lovely in-law, queenitee so you are here and you can't summon me at once. No problemo

levi2:


You sure seem to know a lord directly and closely...and he shared way more than the usual to you... surprised..love your story..know something similar and also true like this..and same colours of cos. Nice one...dear..just some little corrections needed..but in all, good job

Just obsessed with stories like this.... Lol

dimssy:
Bibi294, I've been every where looking for you...
Thank yah for the update ooo

lol... I just dey my one corner o....

Mtbail..no more exile

Nice story, I had to read from the very first page to this end and I wish you had finished it, cos it is so captivating and engrossing.

Though some little miss up here and there, but I must confess Bibi, you have a story right here and it worth the whole time I spent on it.

I shall be following up to know when you shall drop your next line.

Keep it up and I wish you good health and fresh inspiration as you deliver your next episode. Keep ridding.

The sky is opened for you.

Interesting story! I like this. Please waiting for the update.

Bibi294:

Just obsessed with stories like this.... Lol

Kinda weird though, but I find it fascinating. Good story all the same. Wish I was close to where u writing from. Really great you are putting in so much effort to keeping everyone entertained and suspended at the same time. Great job dear. Hope you will take care of the new phone?
Take care.

So when should we expect an update now?

Bibi294:
lol... I just dey my one corner o....

Mtbail..no more exile

Bibi294 more mercy to your reader and wisdom to you.

We dey expect 3 lengthy updates oo bibi294
No keep us waiting

Hadampson:
We dey expect 3 lengthy updates oo bibi294
No keep us waiting

Tah! Which one bi 3 lengthy update?,no provoke me o.
Ehen bibi294 darling you no as e dey go na, just 5 lengthy episodes go do

iamehmakute:

Tah! Which one bi 3 lengthy update?,no provoke me o.
Ehen bibi294 darling you no as e dey go na, just 5 lengthy episodes go do

Lol... isn't that too much considering her tight schedule � �

Bibi294, come and do the needful abeg

Hadampson:
In Jamaican's voice..... Mi haffi big up bibi294 fi being a great writa. Rispeck

I finally caught up. I must commend your efforts and patience. You are a great writer and i know God has plans for you. You are a blessing to us on nairaland.

I don't know what pushed me to check nairaland and luckily for me, i stumbled on this great thread. I checked the OP name and i know bibi294 no dey disappoint. Thumbs up sis. Keep it coming

My lovely in-law, queenitee so you are here and you can't summon me at once. No problemo

I'm sorry Jare, but I'm not your in-law seh

queenitee:

I'm sorry Jare, but I'm not your in-law seh

And i said you are my in-law.. whether you like it or not.

Abeg call bibi make she con update na

maam bibi when are you updating us.how can we be reading a story for a year

We're waiting for ur next update.
Kudos to u Bibi

Interesting [color=#990000][/color]

"Mia, what do you want from me?" Ashi asked confusingly, there was something about Mia that he could not fathom, at first, she had come into his home without an address, then, she found her way into his bed and now, it was the mysterious parcel from her.

"Take na..." Mia instructed, she had been talking to Ashi since but his mind was somewhere else.

"What?" Ashi heart almost popped out as he was too scared to see what she was holding.

"Ashi, why are you like this? Are you not happy I brought this phone? I'm sure you won't want to know what I went through... I'm very very sure." She said as she punched the phone's power button.

"Uhm... I know this girl na..." She commented referring to the phone's display picture.

"Oh! Is this your girlfriend? ERM... Busayo or whatever?" Ashi quickly grabbed the phone, he inspected it and he was sure it was his phone.

"How come? Prof. is not an easy person to deal with." He asked.

"How did you come across this babe, Busayo?" She asked not minding he was asking her a question.

"Mia, see, thanks for this phone but how come you know my girlfriend?" He asked.

"Your girlfriend?" She raised her brow.

"Yes now."

"Well, we grew up in the same street." She scuffled.

"Oh really." He did not want to press further.

"Let me see you off... Its getting late already." He stood up as he picked a shirt from the hanger.

************

Her compound was unusually quiet save from the few girls hanging around. Ashi did not go back after he had seen Mia off. At first, he could not stand Sete and secondly, he really needed to make peace with Busayo, their break had been affecting the pair.

"Is Busayo in?" He asked one of the lady outside.

"Yes." He walked into her apartment and knock. The door opened and one of her girls walked out. He met Busayo in her bed as he walked in , she was a shadow of herself.

"Busayo, what's going on? Are you sick?" He asked worriedly as he sat at the edge of her bed. She moved closer and hugged him. She cried as she held him tight.

"Ashiwaju, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hide things from you but you know...." Ashi shushed her with a kiss. At that moment, he did not want anything to come between them. There would be no room for a third party, not anymore. He was no longer interested in whatever business she was into.

"Keep your deals clean and be watchful." He warned as he kissed her more.

*********
The following days we uneventful as Ashi was in his honeymoon. He was camped in Busayo's house. He had gone to see Ken the fateful evening only to meet a mini party at Busayo's Lodge. He found his way into Busayo's room only to meet Sete's presence. He wanted to turn back and leave but it was too late. Sete had seen him.

"Come here,guy!" Sete called as Ashi made to escape.

"How far,guy!" Sete greeted.

"What's up,guy?" Ashi resigned as he sat on the edge of the bed.

"Are you avoiding me?" He asked.

"Avoiding you for what?" He made to protest.

"I know say you... " he looked around to be sure they were the only one in the room.

"... Gbensh that babe na." He smiled. "...but sheybi I gbensh BusBus na... So baba, that one no mean" he was worried enough.

"Sete, Mia is in love with me..." Ashi said.

"Ashi..." Sete Was disappointed, he knew Mia wanted Ashi but he wanted her more.

"Sete, free that babe... Babe plenty for this side. Free Mia... I fit arrange as many girls as you want for u... Trust me." He crossed his heart, Mia walked in, she was dressed in a crop top and jean bum short, she moved closer to Ashi and planted a kiss on his lips.

"Hey baby. What's happening? This one you're dressed like this? Who's party is it?"he wrapped his arms around her waist.

"Honey, it's your party. I threw a mini party for you." She said.

"Mini party? Its not my birthday yet... " He stepped back.

"Is that why Sete is here?"

"Of course. Ken and his friends will be here soon." She announced, swinged her body around him

"I don't understand you o.... What's the occasion now."
. Busayo smiled.

"Close your eyes baby." She said.

"Why?" Ashi asked.

"Close your eyes and you'll see..." Ashi obeyed.

"Now, baby.... You can now open those lovely eyes." Ashi obeyed and was stunned to see a car key dangling to his face.

Hmmmm,


Tank for the update

Good work, Keep it up

Thanks for the update Bibi

It's pretty good for the update. Hope is not gonna take another donkey years before we get see another update.

Is Not easy to write up a story, so be patience. Good Work Bibi Keep it up.

Bibi294:

"Sete, free that babe... Babe plenty for this side. Free Mia... I fit arrange as many girls as you want for u... Trust me." He crossed his heart, Mia walked in, she was dressed in a crop top and jean bum short, she moved closer to Ashi and planted a kiss on his lips.

i think there is a mix up along the line hre , is it not suppose to be busayo ?

This Mia ehn.....

Thanks for the update ma'am

Ann2012

Thanks for d update sis

LightQueen:
Ann2012

Ann2012:

LightQueen:

U self no dey sleep abi?
Another addict

Ann2012:


U self no dey sleep abi?
Another addict

na wetin woman go do

The addict no be for here

Mia take time o. No spoil parol for ashi