I hope BROTA survive this with enough manpower to fight back

Sparrow and Bigelow should not ave die na

How sparrow get into the brota aboard is a misery to all the agent including the writer

Hope they survive it all...... Welcome back

Wow ..sparrow finally puff......i'm happy abt it..

sparrow....family, Everyone. infact I don't know wat to say.

What was Rex thinking rushing home like that. He should be shot by 11 so that he would be cautious in his next life

Evold:
What was Rex thinking rushing home like that. He should be shot by 11 so that he would be cautious in his next life

Haaba, u re not soft on Rex at all

But i thought Alli no joy sent Rex a text about them leaving?

BurnaKing21:
Wow ..sparrow finally puff......i'm happy abt it..

Lol, I'll like to know why you're happy about it.

excelmerry:
But i thought Alli no joy sent Rex a text about them leaving?

Jeez lemme go and check. Imagine mixing details in your own story. I'm sure I can write around it tho. Gracias bro

Evold:
What was Rex thinking rushing home like that. He should be shot by 11 so that he would be cautious in his next life

Rex has always been a reactive person he has just been lucky so far but this11 is a bad guy.

Thanks for your comments fam...would definitely run a dedication when the update is ready later tonight. Jah bless.

fabianiweka:
How sparrow get into the brota aboard is a misery to all the agent including the writer

This statement is 100% correct

Well done souloho19. You are a great writer. Wishing you all the best bro. Do you have any other work on okadabooks? If yes please drop the link so we can buy.

souloho19:
Thanks for your comments fam...would definitely run a dedication when the update is ready later tonight. Jah bless.

You didn't later update yesternight

souloho19:

Lol, I'll like to know why you're happy about it.

he is becoming almost invisible, n itz almost unbelievable how he kills

souloho19:


Jeez lemme go and check. Imagine mixing details in your own story. I'm sure I can write around it tho. Gracias bro

This story is sophisticated. Kudos!

but my guy you wickett, how can you be writing a story for more than a year now.
na human being's dey read am na

Thanks For The Update

I don't like biglo dying in this story since he had already lost his brother.

Princevirus:
I don't like biglo dying in this story since he had already lost his brother.

if one play with fire he will surely get burn biglow is an agent a killer above all it was his duty to play with danger
I don't like the good guy to die

Tor. Souloho don start again. Promised us an update and once more failed to deliver

Bigelow, why!!!

God, see suspense.... This is a serious brainy job. Thumbs up souloho19

Liftme:
God, see suspense.... This is a serious brainy job. Thumbs up souloho19

You don't have to quote a full update to comment.

Souloho my man u are really a great writer, keep it up man

I can't see the update

This story is giving me serious tension

Well done OP

Souloho, please try and give us an update before this week runs out. We know you're probably very busy, we'll always wait.
Please don't forget us, so we don't lose the steam of the story.

Please kindly do me a favour, could you end the story without killing any of BROTA's member?

You could get ahold of a member of their family in their stead please

....And I saw SOULOHO19 online, I pray something drops...

Bigelow OMG

Pls oga Souloho dont kill ryan Bigelow already, i think his brother has died in his stead already, somehow i am thinking we need a Bigelow in BROTA, and pls you are really making us emotional with the kind of pain you inflicting on OLIVIA, i also hope dat bullet never kill birdman SPARROW.

its a dope story u have here soul!
i cant get better than this