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Topher 052... with the astute write up

Man like Abdul... I used to hate this guy, now I just admire him. More grace topher

Nelsonmealo:
Man like Abdul... I used to hate this guy, now I just admire him. More grace topher

Even me too. I couldn't help but admire.well done topher

Wow wow, this is one fine piece of literary work, keep it up OP

Bankygee good evening sir, Topher my friend, I enjoy every bit of the story, please keep it coming.

Hafiz is heartless. Why did he take unconscious Susan to the elders? Does he want her dead?

We will put this on display H.D cinema!!!! It’s going to be EPIC!!!!!!!

Lemme just be reading......

Op... mad oh

Chapter fifty two
Bloodbath

The car drove into a club house with security men dressed in black fully armed and packed at the packing lot. Abdul turned to Hafiz whose nose was stuff with tissue paper.

" get the hell out!".

Hafiz slowly opened the door and stepped out. Abdul killed the engine and motion Hafiz to lead the way. The security men looked at them suspiciously but Hafiz nodded an okay at them, so they remained calm but didn't stop staring.

Hafiz slowly moved towards a small door that led through a hallway into a large hall. Abdul looked at the exquisitely furnished hall with every furniture plated in gold. The bold paintings on the wall and sculptures with large chandelier hanging on the roof in the middle of the hall made Abdul feel as though he was in a palace.

Hafiz pointed at a door in front of him. " lets go". He said to Abdul.

Abdul followed him into another well furnished sitting room where some well fed men sat chatting and laughing with beautiful Arabian girls attending to them.

The men turned to the men as they walked in, Abdul recognized non but confidently walked past Hafiz and stood in front of the puzzled men.

" my name is Abdul. I heard you guys have been looking for me".

The men couldn't contain their shock. One of them turned to Hafiz and stormed. " why did you bring him here!".

Hafiz looked away pitifully.

" l bullied him here". Abdul said to the man. "I'm ready to get your job done, just deliver the girl to me!".

There was a murmuring as the men whispered within themselves. Then another said to Abdul.

" she's safe! Get out of here and do your job!".

Abdul suddenly felt he wasn't taking seriously. He brought out his gun and shot into the ceiling. This drew the men's full attention, they all looked at Abdul suddenly with fear in their faces.

" I'm not to repeat myself. Give the girl to me and I'm out of here!". Abdul said between his teeth.

The door opened abruptly and three armed men ran in. Abdul moved quickly towards a very fat man who sat quietly looking at him at the main seat and pointed the gun to his head.

" do you know who that man is?!". One of the men bellowed angrily.

" hey! Calm! Get the girl!". The fat man said to the security men who were nervously steadying their guns to shoot.

The men looked at him and one of them said in a shaky tone. " chairman, are you sure?!".

" get the girl". The chairman said with a smile.

Abdul turned to the bulky man who is the chairman making the rules was now in his mercy. This made Abdul felt powerful. He watched few other security men come in and two disappeared through a door adjacent the entrance.

Everyone's eyes were fixed on Abdul. Abdul didn't take his eyes off the security men who were ominously wielding their gun towards him.

The door suddenly opened, Susan was in front staggering with her hands on her tummy, limping. Abdul felt his heart sinking into his tummy, his anger for the elders suddenly awaken but he knew it would be wrong to do anything stupid for the sake of Susan.

The men moved away from Susan with their guns pointed at Abdul. Abdul suddenly realised that getting out without an insurance would be a suicide attempt, he knew the elders for no mercy when threatened.

Then Abdul dragged the chairman by his brocade up to his feet pointing the gun on his head. " now drop your guns!". Abdul said to the security men.

" you don't have to do this Abdul. They won't hurt you". The chairman said in a low assuring tone.

Abdul didn't listen to him. He repeated with a yell. " drop your guns!",

The chairman waved the security men to drop their guns. They hesitated. The chairman waved again with a confident smile on his face before the men dropped their guns.

Abdul slowly pushed the chairman towards the door. Then turned to Susan. " come with me!".

Susan has never been so happy to see Abdul before like she felt that moment. She limped to him and followed him closely as they walked out through the door. Abdul immediately shut and bolted it, then pushed the chairman towards the exit.

Outside, a handful of security men were pointing their guns at Abdul. Susan flinched in fear and held on to Abdul's shirt.

" tell them to drop their guns!". Abdul commanded the chairman.

" you are going too far man. Get the hell out of here with your lady and I won't hurt you!". The chairman said in a soothing tone.

" tell them now!". Abdul bellowed.

The chairman smiled and waved the men down but they refused. He tried again but the men moved even closer to them.

" these guys won't listen, they don't ever listen". The chairman said causally.

Abdul pushed Susan behind him with a hand and pointed the gun hard into the chairman's head. "drop your weapons, or I kill him!". Abdul said to the men in a stern tone.

The men stopped circumspectly, but their guns were steadily aimed to fire.

Abdul turned to Susan and was going to say something to her when the chairman brought out Taser from his brocade side pocket and drug it into Abdul's rib. Abdul felt like every vain in his body was passed through live wire of 5000 volts. He shook and fell on a knee. Susan held him by the arm to support him from falling. The chairman moved away from Abdul immediately and shouted at his men. " get him!"

The men moved forward towards Abdul, but Abdul quickly shook off his weakness, though his body felt paralyzed yet he managed to shoot and killed one of the men, sprang up and grabbed the chairman to shield himself with Susan behind him.

The chairman was surprised, he couldn't believe Abdul withstood the Taser. Though Abdul was shaky, yet he held on to the chairman with a gun in the chairman's head.

" I'm Abdul, I unkillable, uncatchable, I'm Abdul the sleek!". Abdul whispered into the chairman's ear in an unsteady tone and pushed him forward with his eyes on the men.

They approached the car, he opened the front passengers door for Susan to go in. He was about shutting the door when a gunshot hit him in the back pushing him hard against the car. He simultaneously returned the fire killing two men in the spot and dragged the chairman closer in front of him with his hand around the chairman's neck facing about twenty armed men now circling him. He turned to Susan and said in a shaky voice. " bury yourself!".

Susan immediately laid on her tummy.

The men circled Abdul while he held on to the chairman. Abdul did not bother of the possibility that he may not survive the attack, but he knew confidently that he cant die. He has met worse situation and escaped.

He was turning towards a man running to his left when a bullet brushed through his head from behind. He bent down abruptly dragging the chairman with him. It was time for him to return tire. He quickly shot and hit one man; and again; he hit another.

The men immediately changed formation and a bullet from Abdul's left hit him in his shoulder while he was trying grasp their move and his hand dropped from the chairman's neck. The chairman in that instant head-butt him with the back of his head and moved away leaving Abdul exposed.

Abdul immediately rolled on the floor towards sculpture of a man carrying a house few distance away from the car at his left with gunshots firing at him and hid behind it. He felt just little pain in his shoulder and his back due to his adrenaline pumping fast.

Three men ran towards Abdul on both his left and right hand sides. They opened fire even before they reached could be spotted, Abdul abruptly fell on his back and shot speedily at both directions, killing the three; one on his right and two on in his left.

The rest men ran towards him shooting boring holes and creating splashes of dust from the sculpture. Abdul tried to retaliate but his gun was out of bullet, he felt like he was being swallowed up. In that dilemma, he rushed towards the closest dead man by his right and grabbed his gun, in the process, a bullet hit him on his right lower rib and he fell, but reached for the gun; returned fire, killing four men. Another shot hit him in his upper left chest and the gun fell from his hand, he immediately picked it up, staggered to his feet and ran to take cover behind the entrance of the clubhouse.

Susan stumbled on a phone on the foot mat In the car. She picked it up and dialed Oscar's number Kate made her to memorize.

" hello". Oscar's voice came through.

" this is Susan! Please help, they're shooting!", Susan cried into the mouthpiece.

" Susan? where are you?!". Oscar asked sounding apprehensive.

" I don't know! Please help!". Susan said hurriedly and peeped if anyone was coming. " please". She cried.

" okay hold on! Just leave the phone on, I'll trace the GPRS. Hang on, I'll be there soon!".

Where Abdul stood he was shaking in an excruciating pain from the bullet wounds, he could barely hold the gun steady as blood oozed out from different parts of his body.

One of the men heard Susan's voice and slowly moved towards the car. He saw her and called on the remaining 11 men, two moved towards him, one opened the car door and dragged Susan out.

Thanks for the update, Topher. You too much.

How much I love you, Abdul. Your action drives me gaga!

Pls OP, Abdul shouldn't die

topher052 my main man! this is exclusive, the action is packard!.

BankyGee:

Abdul is the man. I want to be like Abdul when I grow up
Thanks for the update bro.
gly, where art thou?

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bombay03, babysomeone, omobs, tinny898, hitan, please like, share and comment before exiting, ghost-reading is a crime

How old are you?? ,,,,start practicing

Ann2012:
Pls OP, Abdul shouldn't die

From the title of the story, Abdul is very like to die.
Just brace yourself.

op the Master Doing what he knows.best I.Duff my hat for you

Josipov:


From the title of the story, Abdul is very like to die.
Just brace yourself.

OK oooo

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From the title of the story, Abdul is very like to die.
Just brace yourself.
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Abdul will not be the one to pay that price, or do you want my heart to shatter to pieces?

If Kate whose skull was literally blown apart could come back to life, nothing stops my dear Abdul from surviving the bullet wound.

And don't forget that help is already on its way. Remember Susan called Oscar and he's likely going to arrive in the next update.

Dear Topher, please don't take Abdul away from me ooo. Help me beg your ink to cooperate, ok?

WOW! IT SEEMS ABDUL WILL EVENTUALLY DIE FROM THIS BULLETS. HE HAS BEATEN MOR THAN HE CAN CHEW!

THANKS A LOT FOR THE UPDATE!

At last Abdul was d Scarifies, now the police can get to the elders! so much loving this!!!!






wow i commented, that shows you've really done a great job

Blessings on you Topher

Chapter Fifty three
The Sweet Kill

One of the men held Susan by the hair while she sat on the floor struggling with the hand dragging her menancely.

A tall bulky man with huge tummy stepped forward and yelled. "We got your bitch! Come out now or we slice her into little bits".

Abdul was already unsteady, he was loosing too much blood. He peeped and saw them malhandling Susan, his tummy rumbled but he knew we wasn't going to save her dead. He took back his head and thought of a way around the situation; already he was outnumbered and couldn't do much in his present situation.

The voice echoed again "I'll count to five and if you don't come out, we are going to pluck out her eyes first ".

Abdul impulsively wanted to run out and surrender, but he fought back the urge. He tried to lift up the AK47 but couldn't. His clothe was soaked in his own blood creating a little pool around his feet.

" one! ". The man began.

This time, Abdul knew he had to do something urgently.

" two! "

Abdul dropped his gun on the floor, heaved a final sigh of regret and turned to come out.

" where is he? ". The chairman said coming out of the building a block away from Abdul.

Abdul stopped abruptly, he thought of this as his only opportunity, picked up his gun with much difficulty and rushed out pointing the gun behind the chairman.

The men immediately positioned with guns pointing at the chairman. The chairman smiled and said in a calm tone to Abdul without turning. " you cockroach, refusing to die".

Abdul summoned strength biting back pain as he hit the butt of the gun on the chairman's waist, the chairman bent over and slowly stood up.

Abdul said breathing faintly. " let her go and you can have me".

The men made to charge forward but the chairman stopped them and smiled weirdly. " you got me twice today. I hope I don't die in your hands Abdul "

" let her go! ". Abdul repeated and clinched his weight to his right side, the bullet in his back was beginning to paralyze that part of his body.

" let her go! ". The chairman said to the men.

There was tension in the air, everyone was on their toes watching to know if Abdul would shoot the chairman.

The man holding down Susan freed her and she stood up staggering with an unsteady feet to the gate. She turned and looked at Abdul, her heart melted, but Abdul smiled and nodded at her to move on. She felt tears boiling in her heart. She had come to grow a kind of feeling for Abdul. He has sacrificed so much for her. Her heart forced her to run to him and pull him by the hand so both of them can escape together, instead she kept on moving still stealing glances at Abdul with uncontrollable tears running from her eyes until she was out of the gate and continued running without looking behind her.

" now, can you drop the damn gun so we can get you a doctor". The chairman said to Abdul in a comforting tone.

Abdul waited until Susan was out of sight before he dropped the gun and sagged to his knees behind the chairman.

The men immediately rushed to Abdul and one hit the butt of his gun on his face pushing him down.

The chairman turned to the men. " leave him alone. Kill that bitch! ". Looking mockingly at Abdul.

Abdul heard the chairman tried to spring up but his body refused to move. He made to reach for his gun, The chairman slowly picked it up. He watched as the men ran out and he was completely incapacitated.

Hafiz and other elders came out through the door behind the chairman. Hafiz walked up to Abdul and kicked him on the rib. Abdul turned and remembered he had a knife buried in his boot. He struggled to his knees and carefully retrieved the knife, before Hafiz could kick him again, he dug the knife into Hafiz's thigh and used Hafiz's body as support to get on his feet.

The chairman made to turn, Abdul leaped on him and continuously dug the knife into his tummy with his hand around the chairman's neck to support his feeble legs. The chairman dropped the gun sagging on his knees.

Others were still trapped in shock and confusion. Abdul picked up the gun with every strength in him and opened fire at the elders who now made to run back inside. He killed the six of them and turned to Hafiz who was crawling dreadfully, shot him in the back twice, then dropped the gun and staggered to the Car nearby. Opened the door, engaged the engine and zoomed off from the compound.

Susan noticed some men where coming after her fiercely and they were already catching up with her. She tried in vain to run faster. Suddenly she fell and turned behind her, the men were a short distance away and now strolling towards her.

One got his gun ready to fire. She looked in front of her and remembered Andrew. Her heart melted in regret, she thought of her mother and sibblings. Then she muttered under her breath . " not today! " and surprisingly believed it.

The man in front pointed the gun at her, she looked at the hole in the mouth of the gun and said out loud. " not today! ".

The man smiled wickedly and was about to pull the trigger when the engine of a racing car behind them startled them all. They turned and saw a blue Mazda approaching speedily.

" Abdul! ". One of the men shouted.

They turned abruptly and opened fire on the car.

Bullet flew past Abdul, but he was too weak to dodge. He pressed harder on the throttle. The car knocked five men down as he drove past, narrowly missed Susan's leg.

He put the car on reverse and raced after the other men who where now running back. Climbed some who were still on the floor and knocked down two. The remaining four opened fire shooting into the car, The engine cried and the car raced forward and stopped.

The men moved towards it circumspectly ready to shoot. As they came closer the sound of police sireen called their attention. They exchanged glances and took off on different directions.

Susan stood up and staggered to Abdul's car. Abdul's head was on the steering, he was still blinking. She opened the door and went to him, she smiled and blinked at her. She held him crying.

The police car came closer and stopped in front of Abdul's car. Oscar ran out of the car in front with a gun in his hand, he moved towards the car carefully and saw Susan, he pulled Susan aside to see who was on the steering. He recognized Abdul immediately.

" go away from him, he's dangerous! ". Oscar bellowed nervously.

" No! He's not! Let's take him to the hospital please ". Susan cried.

Oscar slowly pulled her away from Abdul for the police men to take over. Susan cried uncontrollably as Oscar struggled to wield her away.




A cold feeling passed through Andrew's face, he slowly opened his eyes. His new German shepherd puppy was licking his face. He pushed the dog aside and realized he had been dreaming. Immediately, he sprang off the bed and raced out of the room to the kitchen.

" baby! ". Andrew called as he opened the kitchen door.

Susan was washing the dishes and she turned to face him. He ran to her and hugged her.

" I'm so happy to see you baby! ". Andrew muttered.

" what? ". She scoffed, surprised at his drama.

" we are not passing through land! Never! ". Andrew spattered.

" passing through where? ". Susan asked bewildered.

She was still trying to understand Andrew when then door bell rang. Andrew went to get it and saw a man backing him. The man turned around and Andrew almost fainted. Abdul was the mail man.

THE END.

Thanks guys. MY MADAM AND I PART2 is going to be tomorrow's update.

Action filled movie....I enjoyed every part of the story....thank you for this wonderful story.Thumbs up

Great story

Wow i would say that u rushed thru the ending part but as it may there was always an ending... Thanks for this piece Topher052

Mention when u start the new one
thanks and God bless

Nice storyline, action filled, I have been a ghost reader, Just had to show my self, you are talented bro.

Op, So you mean all this while it was Andrew's dream that we've been reading?

Chai!!!!!!
A very wonderful story.
God bless you

I must comment Pls. topher u are too good Pls tag me along on your next update

Thank boss
What a great story
Topher052 is the man