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The daughter of the ambassador sat on the Fans benches at the rugby grounds watching the players in the pitch, her two friends; Ruby and Kanji, “Essy one two weeks to end term you are still the queen of suitors” Kanji shifted her a friends attention from the pitch “still one more to go….Mmmmh talking about the guy with the ball in hand the guy with the ball in hand” (points at the guy with on the pitch) “Oooh! (Sarcastic look) he is talking about Mr. Shem, come on girl forget about that one”, Ruby comments “why does he have a prayer partner or a gf?” Essy asks, “Yeah! Of course his crazy books and the games he is committed to” Kanji comments “come on girl be straight, in short Essy that guy only has time for his books and school activities” Ruby clarifies, “Oooh! What a waste for a handsome guy like that” Essy continues “so how can get to meet him in private alone?” “There is only one way to get his attention….books get questions take it to him then, from there you can juggle your on balls...” “Great idea Kanji, for a bookworm that will work” “Hey Ruh, Essy we have to go it’s getting late” Kanji say as she beckons the girls...
The squad had been practicing for Simba match for a month now, the couch was sure that they are going to retain the junior championship…he stopped from his thought of victory and looked at his wrist it was time (as blew the whistle and beckoned his team out of the ground) “Manze (dude) Maz we are running out of time, you haven’t even made a move” Ton told “patience Ton we are the last laugh is always the best anyway we have a championship to talk about” “Okay if you say so but remember if you don’t even try you will pay me back that cash, I swear as a punishment it will suit you”(frowning) “relax dude I have it under control…so what do you think about our next opponents the Pirates?” “well we have smashed them in several marches since the first year so I don’t think they should be a problem” (shrugs) “Never under estimate your opponents manze (dude)” “okay as you say, but I think the couch can handle that Mr. Shem” (sarcastically) “hey guys we don’t have all afternoon over here kimbia (run)” the couch shouts at the edge of the pitch, the players haste the speed a bit towards him, he looked at the fixtures of the games the K-lions where the first in there pool he frowned; K-lions were the dominating champions over the east they never got to meet them on the pitch and never understood there strategy they had been banned five years ago with other four national clubs during the final matches which were at KRFU national grounds due to the fight after the Championship match, the all teams were threat to the Championship title, dominant in matches hence given the name ‘Big four’ they back and thirst for the title…
“Hey couch what’s up” Maz “aah…aah…Sorry what did u just say?” “Curious…do you think we can win?” “It depends with how we play our cards this time round the matches are tight”, (he takes a deep breath) continues “The Big Four are back...” Ton cuts in “What I thought they were B...) “yes but they are back, we need more practice so tight on you belts, as for now no comments, you are dismissed” (he says as he moves.****
The Essy browsed through her locker thinking on what book to take “finally these will do for today” her s as pulled out mathematics book “Hey girl are you talking to yourself?” David one of her classmates asked (smile) “sure and how is it your business if I may ask? Anyway have you seen Mr. Shem? “Hey slow down girl, so is it him next on your list after toying with me? (Frowns)” “if that is what you will call it am fine with it, if you don’t mind I have some business to handle (she excuse herself and walks away)” “you might resemble Rihanna…trust me he won’t even give you a look” he shouts at her back as she moves away.
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Dolphin sat at the reading table her eyes focused on the algorithms, her twin sister Rita one the bed listening to some music from her Iphone7. The two really resembled they got looks from their mother; in the art of the smoky eyes. Follow they lead and pair it with a nude lips and simple, chic ponytail, looks absolutely stunning with their signature glossy nude pout, bronzed skin and soft wavy hombre locks. “Hey Dolly what you are planning for the next swimming championship it’s in two weeks’ time remember…” Dolphin interrupts “Give me a break Rita I have over 20 pages to cover so that I can start thinking about the tournament” “hey I know but you have been reading for a whole week without even a break, don’t you think it’s poisonous” “come on Rita you are acting as if you don’t know I have we have two weeks to exam” “and so?” “So I have to catch up” “ooh really stop acting like a bookworm we all know that these family is full of genius species except from...” “Don’t even go there Max is your brother…anyway I got a dream to catch, so G-sot (suit yourself)” “really okay… dear bookworm sister” says she covers herself. Dolphin was really brilliant same to her sister however she never sat back because they had natural inheritance from their dad who was a one who was a living genius engineer on earth, though their dad was able to pay for any of prestigious private high schools, still Dolly wanted to go to Cavani one of the best public schools so she kept browsing books like a living professor….
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Hellow this is my first story in Nairaland blog, I like the way you right and enjoy the creativity writers have got in Nairaland. It's story love story that contains;Romance,Passion,Betrayal and etc. it also contains some of our country slangs(Kenya) well explained enjoy an comment will be accepted.

Chapter 1. IT MIGHT BE YOU

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Okay guys, this chapter is gonna be a bit of half and half, I'm gonna throw in a bit of a guy's point of view along the way. Guess whose...........


There are days when you think the universe is messing with you, like when the weather is clear as when your about to leave the house, and you don't need an umbrella and then the rain starts pouring half way to your destination and you having no way to escape it, or how you wish that ásshole ex of yours gets mysteriously hit by a bus and dies instantly or ends up with someone that ruins their life and they regret hurting you, but no, they get to live perfect lives, having beautiful kids and making sure the whole world knows they're very happy by posting pics on social medias

Okay, I know I'm being bitter and I shouldn't wish death for my ex but I also didn't expect him to corner me, and expect me to listen to him, and is still is gorgeous self. Why is the universe so cruel? How can someone look as though he came out from a fashion magazine without even trying and the rest of us be looking like shít but trying so hard to hide it

I admit, ever since the café incident with Evans, I've been trying so hard to avoid him. I don't think I can face him without trying to rip his face off

Me: Get out of my way Evans

I gritted out

Evans: No, not until you hear me out

I got angered and slapped him across the face but he didn't flinch

Me: you don't get to talk to me, so get out of my way, cause there's many more where that came from

Evans: I guess I deserved, but please ba- Lizzy, I just wanna make things right, just hear me out

Me: Save it for someone who cares, okay? you got want you wanted,didn't you? you took my virginity and lied straight to my face that you loved me, and dumping me through a text? That was low, you could have at least grown some bálls and done it like a man. I'm done here so get out of my way now

He stepped out of the way for me, looking like i touched a nerve. I walked out feeling glad I finally got it out. I gotta admit that felt good, finally spitting it out, but something still bugged me

Me: I gotta ask

I stopped and turned to face him

Me: Was I really that bad? I know you probably didn't love me *I laughed menacingly , but did you ever feel anything for me? Anything........




Evans POV

I stood there looking at her, Gód she still looked beautiful as always.

When I first entered the café weeks ago, and then she came up to me take my order, my heart literally almost burst outta my chest. I never thought I'd ever get to see her again after all I put her through. I thought never getting to see her is the universe's way of punishing me.

I stood there, watching her pour her heart out for all the pain I caused her, and it hurt so bad. Then she walked away and stopped to ask the question that gave me sleepless nights

“Did I ever feel anything for her?”

I wanted to grab, and press her close to me, wanted to make her feel the way my heart's beating cause of her, how my heart feels like it's about to blow cause she's standing in front of me. I wanted to tell her how I never stopped loving her, how it's the only thing that kept me going. But the words never came out

Lizzy: right, and that's I needed to hear

Her lips quivered when she spoke

Lizzy: Thanks, for at least being honest with me.

“ Stay the héll away from me, she said and walked away, her eyes glassy with un shed tears.

“ You stupid idiot” the voice in my head nagged, you saw her and you let her go again without telling her, but I stood rooted to the ground unable to move, unable to grab a hold of her and pull in for a hug and never let her go

I let her walk away again and I regret it more than ever........

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"And also, I insist that you keep the things I gave you, consider the cheque an advance on your salary." He said. He knew she needed the money but am loving the flow my friends would love to go over these...sharing