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officially on behalf of Olulu i say welcome
and we wait ur poems

I loved the second and third
You also seems to be more intimate with poems with its theme on Africa, very patriotic of you, and the poem on god and goddesses, really got me hyped, thinking how I would love to try my hands on that too, all in all keep it up

my poem

Feeling the pain of the knife slice through the depths of my heart
I felt sweet relief overcome the pathetic life I once had
Oh! How rich I can be
This death has brought to me such honor than ever seen
I don’t have to wait again on you cos you hold wealth like a god
Or being criticized cos am not half of what you want
Oh you tormenter! There’s something beyond your grasp!
It’s the right I forever have
To take my life by the mere swing of the knife
Leading to The slow descend of my soul
With A smile forever on my mouth implant
And a tongue to mock your unholy act
When I die, please have to read on my epitaph
“This here is a soul that took its roots and died to end a miserable life”
Death is the sweetest life can have

roxeey:
why is it death u guyz are talking about,why not something else or do u think u will die soonest

Try to appreciate literature and poems
They are the real bones left in life
Not those silly lovey doveys
When love itself doesent make the world go round

The first poem elicit a nostalgic feeling
The second  . . . . . . . well I dint understand
All in all, tis nice, but try to put a little rhyme to make it have a rhythm
Peace

[quote author=die sonic! link=topic=146433.msg3458061#msg3458061 date=1234393126]this is probably gonna suck SO BE WARNED LMAO

you honestly think that i love you
i absolutely hate you, it's nothing new
why can't you see there's no you and me,
your stupid love is driving me to insanity

i hate the way you act and the way you behave
well least you'll stop when you lie still in your grave
maybe a quick and painful death i think
how about lots of iodine in your drink

but then again you don't deserve to die so nicely
i want you to suffer, that's my thought precisely
maybe i'll cut off all your fingers and toes
then i'll pour petrol all over your clothes

but not too long or you'll get high of the odour
25 years is a small price for your murder
and when i'm in my cell with an evil smile
at least i'll be out in a little while

but you wont have that joy because you will be dead
i hope you regret everything you said
if you had been nice to me maybe you'd be alive
being with you i probably would have sufficed

there lol well thts it i cudnt think of anything about 2 words into it to be honest so it probably wont make a lot of sense [/quote]See those word emboldened
That’s how I want it to be dude
I Love it to the fullest
They make me high to the fullest
Hmm another wizard in the block,
Hope You can deliver and not just talk
Bring in more gory rhymes
Let the witches be proud of a daring wizard
Not like the rest to condemn
So Welcome to the coven
This Is official from Poison Eva
Or simply call me Sheba

Ps. It doesn’t suck, not in the least

Krrush:
Watch your back, Princess . . .

I'm getting a real nasty hard-on seeing you in your real element . .

. . And I mean watch your back, literally . . . Cos I'm thinking . . dreaming . . to take your tearingly from the rare . . .

in my kingdom, i dont watch my back . . . . you should do the watching

i love nasty, i love bloody and am totally in its atmosphere
wrapped in its red lglistening hands
getting all the comfort cos i would rather be nowhere!
simply put am in the fullest of my elements

Now Dreams come true in Hades as far as they aint saintly
whateva you wanna do
how gory it feels
how wonderful it makes you feel
even if it on Queen Sheba . . . . me
i will be waitng, cladded in the deepest crimson red you've seen
a python by my both sides
holding a drink for you in the skull of a man
coo you with the sounds from gnashing of teeth in the outer cell
while my co hots gather around to make you the new fun
i shall help and rescue you but that doesent mean you are susceptible to them
cos watch out you might just be the next

"Make them before they make you"

nice line

_{*walks to the stage with so much tumbling emotions, sadness, gladness, regrets, shrugs and continue*}

Such is life
To loze, win and sometime be an ex
And a priceless one, its better I guess
Knowing I had u once for myself
Makes me adapt with no stress
And No! No! I don’t want 2 come back
You are not even the faithful type
Neither am I, that I say with no hype
So, I think I should fly, spread my wings quite high
Get to know the good and bad
Not stay hook to one guy
That aint even the way I am
Fat accounts too get me all due
Beside what’s the world without its force
Love not on it, is so very rude
Quit fronting and satisfy a lady’s money yearn
And see how she’s gonna be on bed

Yet my friend am still my kind
So very deep and florescence natural
Don’t think I lie when I claim traditional
That’s all I want, anything short is dumb
And I contradict with every force

But what’s a life without fun
Tis to me a wound forever sore
Though am not some wet blanket
Condemned to eternal chastity
Carrying the flag of St. Michael
Neither will I be some shy virgin
Cos on the hour I call heavenly
Right after the white wedding
A touch I give is to the skin fire blazing
And he might think she was just fronting
All the while playing like a meek nanny virgin
But then again who cares, what I believe is more to me
Than any law or principle guiding their point of view
Am me, plain me


_{*walks out feeling appeased*}

i plan on doing just that

where is my Tbk . . . i need the bloody love
and Oreshade . . . long since i had competition

I really feel like tying someone to a barbed wire
feel the blade slice through their flesh
hear the shrilling cries they make
and watch as their last days are covered with blood
form the slave masters rod

epi:
I say when you leave don’t come back
Yet all night you keep pounding on my door rat-a-tat-tat
Say what “You miss me and can’t live without me
“Hello, 911 it’s about to get bloody”
And what’s up with all those phone calls
Abeg stop before[b] I take a knife and cut off your balls[/b]
And when I cut your ass up like minced meat
Here read my confession “Revenge is sweet”

you go girl
cut off his pathetic balls
welcome to the real players
revenge really is sweet

hey you dint link me to this gold mine
and i thought you were my main man
but i got here ontime
so the fun aint bypassed
nice thing going up for you
i like the ebbs and flow
am staying here like glue
to see more of your talents show

ur Diction is rather below average
try maybe to proff read it firstly before posting

I LOVE THE WRITER Isidore Okpewho
and love his books, Victims and last duty
so very exciting