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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 8:04pm On Jan 21, 2009
ollulu
now u know the number 1 witch of NL
ive been havin bad dreams lately

be very careful o or else, u'll suck ur way to hell
run and never look back
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 11:20pm On Jan 21, 2009
SECONDS BEFORE HER DEATH
right before her death
i mean karashika
when she lay in blood
with scary scars of fright

her life lay before her
the brutal force
bloody pains
and sully love filled with

sucking of blood
cuddle of bones
ripping of hearts
and the caress of death

i remember right
she mumbled words:
'avenge and revenge'
though they mean same

she used them as opposites
such is the pain of death
even love making seems
to her bloody to rage

olulu sorry for the bloody
hand of love stretched forth
she just mixed the pain of death
and the fantasy of love gravely

and dare not crave for care
she is dead-alive in the hades
wandering back and forth
for a life dreadly lived

just those seconds before
her death she took the tour
of her whole life with death
quivering for her soul to sway

in his cool hands of eternity
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:57am On Jan 22, 2009
oreshade:

SECONDS BEFORE HER DEATH
right before her death
i mean karashika
when she lay in blood
with scary scars of fright

her life lay before her
the brutal force
bloody pains
and sully love filled with

sucking of blood
cuddle of bones
ripping of hearts
and the caress of death

i remember right
she mumbled words:
'avenge and revenge'
though they mean same

she used them as opposites
such is the pain of death
even love making seems
to her bloody to rage


olulu sorry for the bloody
hand of love stretched forth
she just mixed the pain of death
and the fantasy of love gravely

and dare not crave for care
she is dead-alive in the hades
wandering back and forth
for a life dreadly lived


just those seconds before
her death she took the tour
of her whole life with death
quivering for her soul to sway

in his cool hands of eternity
Bravo dude cheesy
you are really catching on, i love those lines in bold wink

but i wonder why i still let your mouth run on wide
dnt take it that i have relapse or converted to the white side
cos when you least expect
i will strike your world
and leave it so dampened with pain and hurt
you aint gonna have the guts to counter-attack angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 12:10pm On Jan 25, 2009
REINCARNATION
right in the hades
where kindred spirits
of evil roam about so suss
in deep abyss of fear stance

bloody walls
crying voices
and slippery floors
of maggoty vomits

slashing whips
tearing skins
gushing pus
and misty mucus

all lay with ease
on all lives
roaming in skin pieces
with stench so nauseous

then came a chance
to live again in this
world of ours
fulfilling all the goods

never done with pace
and never would race
to have done back alive , she is
praising me for my lyrical lines

well well well miss
a good start for this
new life of yours
you've got I'd say, thanks

and never go back to the witches,
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:09am On Jan 26, 2009
no dude,dont push it undecided
am not ever going to the white side
am a witch foreva here, but that doesent mean i shouldnt praise anyone
who has got all the bloody flair for writing with the bloodiness i initially tot of by creating this thread
and dnt take my silence for repentance, grin

cos if there is anyone calling the shots here its me angry
yours coming up soon, i have it now but cant type it just now
so be warned angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 11:46am On Jan 26, 2009
no dude,dont push it
am not ever going to the white side
am a witch foreva here, but that doesent mean i shouldnt praise anyone
who has got all the bloody flair for writing with the bloodiness i initially tot of by creating this thread
and dnt take my silence for repentance,

cos if there is anyone calling the shots here its me
yours coming up soon, i have it now but cant type it just now
so be warned

hell fire will burn ur cute ass
continue being a witch grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:11pm On Jan 26, 2009
heh you cheesy
where have you been,
you know my blood level is on the low,
what do u think u can do abt it wink

and hell and I,
we make good partners
plus how did you know my ass is cute grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 2:58pm On Jan 26, 2009
heh you
where have you been,
you know my blood level is on the low,
what do u think u can do abt it

ive been around na. and u?

and hell and I,
we make good partners
plus how did you know my ass is cute

u and hell make good partners? shocked
ure sure lucifers gf. angry
of course i knew about ur cute ass long ago
buzzzz me na
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 4:06pm On Jan 26, 2009
U think it’s easy to be Lucifer gf
Lucifer get eyes na, no be any kind witch him dey pick cheesy
And don’t put too much eye on luccy’s property na
If he hears you wanna chat his gf, he is gonna be so mad
And what happens then, I can’t shout grin


I cant buzz u na, I promise to work things out
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 4:39pm On Jan 26, 2009
putting eyes on Lucis property?
No way!! mmy eyes are fixed only on the heavenly things, not the hellish stuvvs

nyways, we'll talk laterz

where are ur bloody rhymes?
u ran out of steam? tongue
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:11pm On Jan 26, 2009
not in the least dude,
just been kinda busy undecided
l8r wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:27am On Jan 27, 2009
the witches call the last shots if there is any to be called
so oreshade here's for your dogged spirit
and seeming so much power you think you have to convert a witch
never knowing they have a better pain planned out for you angry


Feel the sword plunging thru your heart
Feel the sickening sensation of the sword being turned about
Feel the life abandonment when it moves slitting thru
Down to the base of ur manhood grin

You shall never die
They will never let ur spirit wander to the other side
Yours for life is with hell and all its strife
The new breed shall experiment on you walking carcass
While the masters commend and heartily clap cheesy

This death I tell you is continuous for eternity
You’ve been the thorn that pricks their every path
So much fun it is to see you grope for pity
Your bloodshot eyes being plucked by the vultures
Your strong determined heart weakened by each whip of the slave masters torture
The decayed pool of blood being wrenched out ur heart by the second chamber witches
The pain they would give is the second act in the of your forever misery
Then off you’d go the them on the upper chancery
Oh! The pain that awaits you further
I cannot ponder grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 9:43am On Jan 28, 2009
well well well, nice
just work on your rhymes

good to know your reincarnation have not been to do good but to continue the evil.
my continual job here is to see to the end of that, you know how i do what i do,
just stay hot till i post again
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:39am On Jan 28, 2009
i await your return
beside my blood level is on the low cool
tis good to have a tit for tat once in a while grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 10:00am On Feb 02, 2009
princesa, so unfortunate I have got series of tests lined up in front of me, am a Law student you know, but am sure to get to you when am through, STAY THIRSTY,
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:20pm On Feb 04, 2009
oh!
so you are a lawyer
nice you can write too wink
anyway when you are true with your exams, come tango with me
dont forget the link cos am gonna remain THIRSTY TILL DOOMSDAY grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 10:44am On Feb 05, 2009
hi witch friend
u cool?
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 4:04pm On Feb 05, 2009
cool like hell dont exist
straight like Iroko is some sort of herb
bros where you hide since
dont tell me the witch got to you wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 6:13pm On Feb 05, 2009
nah
was just busy with work.
u still havent got time to talk to moi?

nyways, we'll catch laterz

Note: im the husband of witches
meaning im a wizard maself
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 6:52pm On Feb 06, 2009
hurray i have integrated him
you would do a good job being one too wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by OLAMIND1(m): 9:43pm On Feb 06, 2009
i never knew there are rhyming demons in the house!

more 'ororo' to your head bones!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:17am On Feb 07, 2009
there is a new deer for the witches cheesy
welcome to their humble aclove
we are gonna be seeing how sweet your blodd taste grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Krrush(m): 10:43pm On Feb 07, 2009
In The Stone - composed and sung by Earth, Wind & Fire

   I found that love provides the key
   Unlocks the hearts and souls of you and me
   Love will learn to sing our song
   Love is written in the Stone

   Every man I meet walk in time
   Really wanders past his conscious mind
   Love will come and take you home
   Love is written in the Stone

Chorus:In the Stone you'll find the meaning
          You're not standing tall
          In the Stone the light is shining
          Ever touching all


    Never, never my darling
    Never you be alone . . .
. . . . . .
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:13pm On Feb 09, 2009
Krush!!
are the pins off,
what has that silly word LOVE got to do with blood sad
you need a dose of blood dude wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Gamine(f): 1:21am On Feb 10, 2009
Hi Princesa,

Omo the ryhming has totally gone to the Dark side.

i dont have much dark in me tho
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:23pm On Feb 10, 2009
oh well,
it will naturally come back to you
and i hope you come drop some bloody and i mean deadly rhymes here wink


p.s she is my good pal else i would have added her to the deers for the witches grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Epi: 2:44pm On Feb 11, 2009
I say when you leave don’t come back
Yet all night you keep pounding on my door rat-a-tat-tat
Say what “You miss me and can’t live without me
“Hello, 911 it’s about to get bloody”
And what’s up with all those phone calls
Abeg stop before I take a knife and cut off your balls
And when I cut your ass up like minced meat
Here read my confession “Revenge is sweet”
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:46pm On Feb 11, 2009
epi:

I say when you leave don’t come back
Yet all night you keep pounding on my door rat-a-tat-tat
Say what “You miss me and can’t live without me
“Hello, 911 it’s about to get bloody”
And what’s up with all those phone calls
Abeg stop before[b] I take a knife and cut off your balls[/b]
And when I cut your ass up like minced meat
Here read my confession “Revenge is sweet”

you go girl
cut off his pathetic balls cheesy
welcome to the real players
revenge really is sweet wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:50pm On Feb 11, 2009
where is my Tbk . . . i need the bloody love embarassed
and Oreshade . . . long since i had competition embarassed

I really feel like tying someone to a barbed wire
feel the blade slice through their flesh
hear the shrilling cries they make
and watch as their last days are covered with blood
form the slave masters rod angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Krrush(m): 11:25pm On Feb 11, 2009
Watch your back, Princess . . .

I'm getting a real nasty hard-on seeing you in your real element . .

. . And I mean watch your back, literally . . . Cos I'm thinking . . dreaming . . to take your tearingly from the rare . . .
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by diesonic(m): 11:58pm On Feb 11, 2009
this is probably gonna suck SO BE WARNED LMAO

you honestly think that i love you
i absolutely hate you, it's nothing new
why can't you see there's no you and me,
your stupid love is driving me to insanity

i hate the way you act and the way you behave
well least you'll stop when you lie still in your grave
maybe a quick and painful death i think
how about lots of iodine in your drink

but then again you don't deserve to die so nicely
i want you to suffer, that's my thought precisely
maybe i'll cut off all your fingers and toes
then i'll pour petrol all over your clothes

but not too long or you'll get high of the odour
25 years is a small price for your murder
and when i'm in my cell with an evil smile
at least i'll be out in a little while

but you wont have that joy because you will be dead
i hope you regret everything you said
if you had been nice to me maybe you'd be alive
being with you i probably would have sufficed

there lol well thts it i cudnt think of anything about 2 words into it to be honest so it probably wont make a lot of sense grin cheesy smiley wink lipsrsealed
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 4:25pm On Feb 12, 2009
Krrush:

Watch your back, Princess . . .

I'm getting a real nasty hard-on seeing you in your real element . .

. . And I mean watch your back, literally . . . Cos I'm thinking . . dreaming . . to take your tearingly from the rare . . .
in my kingdom, i dont watch my back . . . . you should do the watching wink

i love nasty, i love bloody and am totally in its atmosphere
wrapped in its red lglistening hands
getting all the comfort cos i would rather be nowhere!
simply put am in the fullest of my elements cool

Now Dreams come true in Hades as far as they aint saintly
whateva you wanna do
how gory it feels
how wonderful it makes you feel
even if it on Queen Sheba . . . . me
i will be waitng, cladded in the deepest crimson red you've seen
a python by my both sides
holding a drink for you in the skull of a man
coo you with the sounds from gnashing of teeth in the outer cell
while my co hots gather around to make you the new fun
i shall help and rescue you but that doesent mean you are susceptible to them
cos watch out you might just be the next wink grin

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