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Wow.
Thanks a whole lot.

Thanks for this Love.
It was an awesome read.

God bless you penshalom

I love this a lot.

If this is Nigeria however, the definition of a person would be considered wrong. Can't say about other countries tho.
Our Law provides that the foetus only becomes a person when it is independent of its Mother. This entails that a Baby is a person only when it is delivered of.

It's your story tho, so you have got the liberty to decide on your definition. I love the vast imagination and your lines of arguments too.

Kudos. You have done great.

Jadedgrace98:
*Yawns* enters thread*
please kindly have your seat, favch where are you, tell these people here that we talk one on one on Facebook yes people, I talk to my readers, am all about feedback hun.
And the Christmas stories am uploading it there like day and night, and people are loving it. We are in the sixth story, i won't spoil it so go check my page...yo!
Lol am in d hip hop mood today, where is pweetyz? Pweetyz where are you?
Love u guys on NL, drop comments oh...

Yippie!!!. There's an update finally ( jumps and dances all over the thread).
Sorry I'm late. Been crazy occupied lately.

Busting my brain as usual.
So want to visit your Facebook page but couldn't find it the last time I checked.
I'll give it another try tho.

Then again. I'm crazy in love with your energy. You seem so full of life and awesomeness.

Thank you plenty for the mention

Way to go girl.

I see Mattkent deactivated tho. Is this his new monicker?

Despirado121:
ALL SENT!! SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY

please send to my gmail. Pweettyz@gmail.com.
Thanks

Jadedgrace98:
POLL QUIZ
anyone reading or has read even though you are not invited or mentioned can take part in it.
Have been wanting to do this.
A) Sophia amaka's story: - we all love free stories, me included and we come here to read them.
Well this is a quiz on sophia's story so I need thirty replies on this questions before I will continuing write and please the thirty copies have been exhausted.
1) what do you think about the introduction?
2) do you like a book with teaser, telling you of what to expect?
3) Sophia is the heroine, can you point out her faults?
4) Dan wants Sophia, are there other ways apart from the ones he took to achieving this?
5) the rejection of Sophia by her father, was a turning point for her, how?
6) we judge others on our own devices, shouldn't we take caution in doing that?
7) write two ways this story can be improved upon.
Lastly share your best moments in the story, I would love to hear from you.

1. Sorry Sweetheart, I read too many stories here. Don't exactly recall the introduction.
I'm certain I loved it tho, cos I loved every part of this story. Except the confused low self esteem Sophia parts tho.

2. Teasers are great but it tends to reduce the excitement and suspense too. Persons like me wouldn't bother much but I know tons of people that will.

3. She thinks too lowly of herself and is usually unnecessarily confused and indecisive.

4. So many ways actually but I'd leave others to talk about this. I'd say he was initially confused as to what he really wanted tho.

5. It certainly was. She would have had difficulty in taking up the contract if she were under his control. Being independent also made her a stronger and more independent individual.

6. We definitely should. The World would be a much happier place if we didn't do that.

7. i. Some parts were rushed. Try to not do that.
ii. Certain important characters were not fully exposed too.

Had plenty great moments and I'd have to read again to make a pick.
The part where Sophia shaded/ talked down on the Tessy Ani Lady would have been Epic, but it was crazy fake for my liking. Her sudden switch to fear was rushed and unrealistic. Can't exactly explain how I feel about it but I certainly wasn't happy with it.

Please do continue this story Honey. I hate typing with my current phone so take this as the summarized version of what I really have to say.
Your stories make me happy I must say.

You do summaries a lot tho. Gets me confused at some points and cuts the flow too. It's mostly cos one moment you're taking me on a steady ride and the next, BOOM. I'm miles away.

I'm a talker. Sorry. I can actually go on and on but I have to stop here. I'm usually a ghost reader too. Damn lazy to send in my comments.

Serial Ghost reader unravelled.
Your energy made me comment Honey. I've read tons of stories here but always too lazy to comment tho I always commend the writers in my heart and tell their stories anyone near me.
You crazily care about your readers and you write wonderfully.

Keep up the good job Honey. Following your hits from back to back.